Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FAY ~ Brian here ! Thanks for your encouraging comments. It took me all my spare time Yesterday ~ so I saved it as DRAFT and posted it in the Morning Slot. The RHYME PATTERN looks complicted BUT ~ When it works it works. We always use some *HALF-RHYME* as *FULL RHYME* is difficlt to mintain in a VILLANELLE as well as preserving the flow - form & function of the Poem. Also bearing in mind the Villanelles are an oral form of Poetry ~ to be remembered & recited ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
July 7th, 2020 04:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FAY ~ Brian here ! Thanks for your encouraging comments. It took me all my spare time Yesterday ~ so I saved it as DRAFT and posted it in the Morning Slot. The RHYME PATTERN looks complicted BUT ~ When it works it works. We always use some *HALF-RHYME* as *FULL RHYME* is difficlt to mintain in a VILLANELLE as well as preserving the flow - form & function of the Poem. Also bearing in mind the Villanelles are an oral form of Poetry ~ to be remembered & recited ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
July 7th, 2020 04:39
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine contribution of classic poetry on which you have obviously worked very hard - the subject of being on planet earth a carers is one I clearly endorse - -- hugs to you both...........
July 7th, 2020 04:10
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine contribution of classic poetry on which you have obviously worked very hard - the subject of being on planet earth a carers is one I clearly endorse - -- hugs to you both...........
July 7th, 2020 04:10
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
Michael Edwards said:
Not an easy form to write as I know only too well and if not careful you can compromise the poetry for the sake of adhering to the form. Anyway it works well here - good write A&B.
July 7th, 2020 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
Not an easy form to write as I know only too well and if not careful you can compromise the poetry for the sake of adhering to the form. Anyway it works well here - good write A&B.
July 7th, 2020 02:55
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Yes, we are the care-takers. I will enjoy the poem when I understand the algebra at the end!
July 7th, 2020 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Yes, we are the care-takers. I will enjoy the poem when I understand the algebra at the end!
July 7th, 2020 01:44
SEIZE THE DAY & REJOICE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
orchidee said:
I told ya, I wasted enough time finding out what carpe Diem meant! Now I gotta Carpe something else - the moment. What problems I have! lol.
All I had to do was ask Fido, who speaks 53 languages!
July 5th, 2020 07:33
orchidee said:
I told ya, I wasted enough time finding out what carpe Diem meant! Now I gotta Carpe something else - the moment. What problems I have! lol.
All I had to do was ask Fido, who speaks 53 languages!
July 5th, 2020 07:33
WE WILL OVERCOME ~ AN ACROSTIC 2 4 8 SONNET
orchidee said:
Do I detect escapism, in \'La La Land\'?
A fine write A&B.
July 4th, 2020 03:32
orchidee said:
Do I detect escapism, in \'La La Land\'?
A fine write A&B.
July 4th, 2020 03:32
LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS
ForeverJesus7 said:
You sound as though you have a fun life. Recently, I haven\'t been doing anything; do to this C-19 thing. After reading your poem, I think I do need to be more active (haha).
Persistence is key
July 3rd, 2020 22:35
ForeverJesus7 said:
You sound as though you have a fun life. Recently, I haven\'t been doing anything; do to this C-19 thing. After reading your poem, I think I do need to be more active (haha).
Persistence is key
July 3rd, 2020 22:35
LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS
orchidee said:
A fine write A&B.
Got any spare oxy-wotsits? I want one! lol. Ohh, ignorance, e.g. of language, is not always bliss.
Bonjour - bit of German there for you.
Fido said \'Woof! Keep taking the tablets - me, that is!\'
July 3rd, 2020 09:10
orchidee said:
A fine write A&B.
Got any spare oxy-wotsits? I want one! lol. Ohh, ignorance, e.g. of language, is not always bliss.
Bonjour - bit of German there for you.
Fido said \'Woof! Keep taking the tablets - me, that is!\'
July 3rd, 2020 09:10
LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (Evening clinic today so Brian has left me to surf MPS while he Gardens with Smokey !)
Yes NEIK SEDAKA an underplayed Singer (Hes on ALEXA !) great pianist & much Pathos in His voice. I heard SOLITAIRE (on ALEXA) and the thought came to me of people like Willy struggling tomorrow and not understanding the brave new World - do any of us ? I felt TANKA S were an ideal genre for vignettes you enjoyed it ! There are still spaces on the Heaven Fusion *BEYOND T HE SUNSET* (Pat Boone) If you have time. I am just commenting on *ABSORBING*
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian & Smokey XXX
July 3rd, 2020 08:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (Evening clinic today so Brian has left me to surf MPS while he Gardens with Smokey !)
Yes NEIK SEDAKA an underplayed Singer (Hes on ALEXA !) great pianist & much Pathos in His voice. I heard SOLITAIRE (on ALEXA) and the thought came to me of people like Willy struggling tomorrow and not understanding the brave new World - do any of us ? I felt TANKA S were an ideal genre for vignettes you enjoyed it ! There are still spaces on the Heaven Fusion *BEYOND T HE SUNSET* (Pat Boone) If you have time. I am just commenting on *ABSORBING*
Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian & Smokey XXX
July 3rd, 2020 08:57
LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - you have chosen a fave. singer for me -- and the number always brings me near tears - fantastic feeling to his voice - re. the verse well it gave me a smile to wipe away the sniffs.................. thank you dear Duo.
July 3rd, 2020 07:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh - you have chosen a fave. singer for me -- and the number always brings me near tears - fantastic feeling to his voice - re. the verse well it gave me a smile to wipe away the sniffs.................. thank you dear Duo.
July 3rd, 2020 07:43
FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET
Suresh said:
All will be well, if everybody grows up and becomes responsible - alas absence of this is humanity\'s Achilles heel.
July 2nd, 2020 21:47
Suresh said:
All will be well, if everybody grows up and becomes responsible - alas absence of this is humanity\'s Achilles heel.
July 2nd, 2020 21:47
FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered and bewildered\" and here\'s hoping the orange will change one of these fine days into GREEN..........
July 2nd, 2020 16:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered and bewildered\" and here\'s hoping the orange will change one of these fine days into GREEN..........
July 2nd, 2020 16:14
FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered and bewildered\" and here\'s hoping the orange will change one of these fine days into GREEN..........
July 2nd, 2020 16:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Certainly lots feel as the song goes - dear Duo - - \"bewitched - bothered and bewildered\" and here\'s hoping the orange will change one of these fine days into GREEN..........
July 2nd, 2020 16:14
FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET
jarcher54 said:
You know if you just printed the colors without the words it would still be a moving work of art. Painfully well conceived... here in Texas its all red and orange, sad to say.
July 2nd, 2020 14:25
jarcher54 said:
You know if you just printed the colors without the words it would still be a moving work of art. Painfully well conceived... here in Texas its all red and orange, sad to say.
July 2nd, 2020 14:25
ANGELA 💛 MY WIFE 💛 A VIGINTI (5 X 4) BALLAD
Nafis Light said:
I respect this piece, and no jealousy whatsoever just because I am single.
Like what I posted in a different site, that I just don\'t focus on romantic relationships...and I am not desperate like many people, including at the workplace.
They kept asking me about it because of myself being 27 years old and still single.
I didn\'t do much explanation to them, because there...opening up about personal matters is not a wise thing to do, because people there like to talk and share things with everyone.
July 2nd, 2020 06:29
Nafis Light said:
I respect this piece, and no jealousy whatsoever just because I am single.
Like what I posted in a different site, that I just don\'t focus on romantic relationships...and I am not desperate like many people, including at the workplace.
They kept asking me about it because of myself being 27 years old and still single.
I didn\'t do much explanation to them, because there...opening up about personal matters is not a wise thing to do, because people there like to talk and share things with everyone.
July 2nd, 2020 06:29
FUTURE IS ORANGE ~ ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET
orchidee said:
I knew Fido would bark when he saw \'frisking\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2020 05:28
orchidee said:
I knew Fido would bark when he saw \'frisking\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2020 05:28
ANGELA 💛 MY WIFE 💛 A VIGINTI (5 X 4) BALLAD
Suresh said:
I know you\'d repeat this poem fifty years down the road.
July 1st, 2020 15:55
Suresh said:
I know you\'d repeat this poem fifty years down the road.
July 1st, 2020 15:55
ANGELA 💛 MY WIFE 💛 A VIGINTI (5 X 4) BALLAD
orchidee said:
Me again - well this is in 8.6.8.6. metre, known as Common Metre, to which may hymn-tunes fit. I may come up with one. Not \'Fight the good fight\' though that\'s a well-known wedding hymn - for me and KP anyway!
July 1st, 2020 02:36
orchidee said:
Me again - well this is in 8.6.8.6. metre, known as Common Metre, to which may hymn-tunes fit. I may come up with one. Not \'Fight the good fight\' though that\'s a well-known wedding hymn - for me and KP anyway!
July 1st, 2020 02:36
ANGELA 💛 MY WIFE 💛 A VIGINTI (5 X 4) BALLAD
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Does Smokey know these Yin and Yang fellas (or gals)?
I don\'t know them. You got two Chinese lodgers there?!
Fido not sure whether to bark to deter you, though he does not think Yin and Yang is too spooky!
July 1st, 2020 02:34
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Does Smokey know these Yin and Yang fellas (or gals)?
I don\'t know them. You got two Chinese lodgers there?!
Fido not sure whether to bark to deter you, though he does not think Yin and Yang is too spooky!
July 1st, 2020 02:34
WANDERLUST ~ AN ACROSTIC
Goldfinch60 said:
I have not been on a \'plane since the 1960\'s.
Andy
June 29th, 2020 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I have not been on a \'plane since the 1960\'s.
Andy
June 29th, 2020 23:58
WANDERLUST ~ AN ACROSTIC
Suresh said:
what was will be again soon, the Love will make sure of that
June 29th, 2020 09:41
Suresh said:
what was will be again soon, the Love will make sure of that
June 29th, 2020 09:41
WANDERLUST ~ AN ACROSTIC
Fay Slimm. said:
The bustle of travel to those is so well versed in this readable acrostic - - - wishing you both a journey soon and an early - Bon Voyage. xx
June 29th, 2020 09:30
Fay Slimm. said:
The bustle of travel to those is so well versed in this readable acrostic - - - wishing you both a journey soon and an early - Bon Voyage. xx
June 29th, 2020 09:30
WANDERLUST ~ AN ACROSTIC
orchidee said:
Oohh, it\'s the Co-op for me (do they do holidays?!) and the over 50\'s trip to Bognor - or over 500\'s! Not with the W.I. though - they are too scary! lol.
June 29th, 2020 05:06
orchidee said:
Oohh, it\'s the Co-op for me (do they do holidays?!) and the over 50\'s trip to Bognor - or over 500\'s! Not with the W.I. though - they are too scary! lol.
June 29th, 2020 05:06
MY HUBBY BRIAN ~ ANGELA ~ A MIRROR NONET
orchidee said:
Oohh, a geyser, not a geezer?! lol.
June 28th, 2020 05:18
orchidee said:
Oohh, a geyser, not a geezer?! lol.
June 28th, 2020 05:18
MY HUBBY BRIAN ~ ANGELA ~ A MIRROR NONET
Fay Slimm. said:
Diamond-bright reasons for loving a man who works well wherever he can............ I agree that Pam Ayers gives a great performance - must listen again to her amazing rhyming.
June 28th, 2020 05:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Diamond-bright reasons for loving a man who works well wherever he can............ I agree that Pam Ayers gives a great performance - must listen again to her amazing rhyming.
June 28th, 2020 05:16
HOPE & COMFORT ~ A PANTOUM
Fay Slimm. said:
A thoroughly inspiring write and read with hope in my heart.
June 27th, 2020 17:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A thoroughly inspiring write and read with hope in my heart.
June 27th, 2020 17:31
HOPE & COMFORT ~ A PANTOUM
Michael Edwards said:
Give thanks - such a shame there are so many idiots who ignore all the advice and put others at risk.
June 27th, 2020 09:07
Michael Edwards said:
Give thanks - such a shame there are so many idiots who ignore all the advice and put others at risk.
June 27th, 2020 09:07
HOPE & COMFORT ~ A PANTOUM
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. I\'ll put me gloves on - in this weather?! lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:54
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. I\'ll put me gloves on - in this weather?! lol.
June 27th, 2020 01:54
HOPE & COMFORT ~ A PANTOUM
Suresh said:
..and then continue on
even when COVID is gone...
June 27th, 2020 01:39
Suresh said:
..and then continue on
even when COVID is gone...
June 27th, 2020 01:39
COFFEE MORNING ~ OPEN ! AN 8 8 4 VIGINTI
Suresh said:
Amidst all, we can still hope.
June 25th, 2020 23:38
Suresh said:
Amidst all, we can still hope.
June 25th, 2020 23:38
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