Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN
OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM
DianeKey6 said:
This reminds me of my parents garden. They spent hours together making it theirs. My flat doesn’t have a garden but I have some window boxes with Tulips in. My mums favourite flowers were tulips. Thank you for reminding me and writing a peaceful bouquet of words. Diane
July 19th, 2020 10:47
DianeKey6 said:
This reminds me of my parents garden. They spent hours together making it theirs. My flat doesn’t have a garden but I have some window boxes with Tulips in. My mums favourite flowers were tulips. Thank you for reminding me and writing a peaceful bouquet of words. Diane
July 19th, 2020 10:47
OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM
orchidee said:
Lovely write and clip A&B.
But - aww, I too sing in the garden. Me neighbours chuck buckets of water over the fence at me! doh!
July 19th, 2020 04:15
orchidee said:
Lovely write and clip A&B.
But - aww, I too sing in the garden. Me neighbours chuck buckets of water over the fence at me! doh!
July 19th, 2020 04:15
OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM
ForeverJesus7 said:
I think it is great the way you wrote this piece. Personally, I definitely think that this is one of your best poems. Tell me. Did you plant this garden? Again, this is an excellent piece.
Walk with Christ in the garden.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key
July 19th, 2020 02:55
ForeverJesus7 said:
I think it is great the way you wrote this piece. Personally, I definitely think that this is one of your best poems. Tell me. Did you plant this garden? Again, this is an excellent piece.
Walk with Christ in the garden.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key
July 19th, 2020 02:55
L O N E L I N E S S ~ ANGELA ~ A MODERN POEM !
orchidee said:
What is \'lonliness\' as in the title?! heehee. Was you going to do an acrostic and leave an \'e\' out? lol.
July 19th, 2020 01:54
orchidee said:
What is \'lonliness\' as in the title?! heehee. Was you going to do an acrostic and leave an \'e\' out? lol.
July 19th, 2020 01:54
L O N E L I N E S S ~ ANGELA ~ A MODERN POEM !
orchidee said:
A sensitive write A&B.
I\'m gonna use verbiage and waffle on. No change there then?! lol.
July 18th, 2020 05:13
orchidee said:
A sensitive write A&B.
I\'m gonna use verbiage and waffle on. No change there then?! lol.
July 18th, 2020 05:13
L O N E L I N E S S ~ ANGELA ~ A MODERN POEM !
L. B. Mek said:
A time capsule of angst, with a strong sense of self-awareness.
Like glimpsing a page from your diary.
Thanks for sharing, glad you found the \'happily ever after\'
we all strive for, in our own way.
Though, I will just like to add that free verse \'Poetry\', is not without structure or rhyme.
Rather, it utilises a Poet\'s highly developed skills to curate a unique and unorthodox interpretation of nuanced form.
July 18th, 2020 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
A time capsule of angst, with a strong sense of self-awareness.
Like glimpsing a page from your diary.
Thanks for sharing, glad you found the \'happily ever after\'
we all strive for, in our own way.
Though, I will just like to add that free verse \'Poetry\', is not without structure or rhyme.
Rather, it utilises a Poet\'s highly developed skills to curate a unique and unorthodox interpretation of nuanced form.
July 18th, 2020 03:54
OVERSEAS HOLIDAYS FROM *ICELAND* ! ~ FRYING WITHOUT FLYING ~ ENJOY !
DianeKey6 said:
whats the poem here. ive read about a cold food store and a list of foreign foods we buy but i think you forgot the poem. Haha. apologies if i have completely missed the point of your post. I am finding mps a little confusing at times. Love Diane
July 17th, 2020 04:19
DianeKey6 said:
whats the poem here. ive read about a cold food store and a list of foreign foods we buy but i think you forgot the poem. Haha. apologies if i have completely missed the point of your post. I am finding mps a little confusing at times. Love Diane
July 17th, 2020 04:19
OVERSEAS HOLIDAYS FROM *ICELAND* ! ~ FRYING WITHOUT FLYING ~ ENJOY !
orchidee said:
Oohh, it\'s the Co-op for me - not! Too expensive. Poundland then!
Waitrose shoppers seem to always be on the gin, going by their free waffly newspaper each week. The articles in there are so spiffing!
July 17th, 2020 01:38
orchidee said:
Oohh, it\'s the Co-op for me - not! Too expensive. Poundland then!
Waitrose shoppers seem to always be on the gin, going by their free waffly newspaper each week. The articles in there are so spiffing!
July 17th, 2020 01:38
MASQUERADE 💛 ANGELA & BRIAN 💛 SIX QUATRAINS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Thanks for your positive comment Jeff ~ it is more fun (and more personal)when you makes your own. Angelas MAMA makes ours for us to order ! I was born (1983) & raised in Liverpool and the Scouse sense of Humour would see the funny side of everything especially MASKS !
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !
July 15th, 2020 07:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Thanks for your positive comment Jeff ~ it is more fun (and more personal)when you makes your own. Angelas MAMA makes ours for us to order ! I was born (1983) & raised in Liverpool and the Scouse sense of Humour would see the funny side of everything especially MASKS !
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !
July 15th, 2020 07:58
MASQUERADE 💛 ANGELA & BRIAN 💛 SIX QUATRAINS
JeffBarnes said:
Very cool! My wife has been making some very stylish masks. This poem really hit home for me! Well done!
July 15th, 2020 07:07
JeffBarnes said:
Very cool! My wife has been making some very stylish masks. This poem really hit home for me! Well done!
July 15th, 2020 07:07
MASQUERADE 💛 ANGELA & BRIAN 💛 SIX QUATRAINS
Michael Edwards said:
I can\'t believe the members of the Tory party who object to wearing masks and have cut up their party membership cards over this. Shallow, self centred and arrogant .
July 15th, 2020 04:58
Michael Edwards said:
I can\'t believe the members of the Tory party who object to wearing masks and have cut up their party membership cards over this. Shallow, self centred and arrogant .
July 15th, 2020 04:58
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
Lutalican said:
A&B!
What a great write! As an environmental science and ecology major I am learning all about mans impacts on the natural world. From global warming to extinctions. As I have read through your poetry, I Have enjoyed the individualism each poem contains. In style, subject, and rhyme. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Lutalican
July 14th, 2020 16:59
Lutalican said:
A&B!
What a great write! As an environmental science and ecology major I am learning all about mans impacts on the natural world. From global warming to extinctions. As I have read through your poetry, I Have enjoyed the individualism each poem contains. In style, subject, and rhyme. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Lutalican
July 14th, 2020 16:59
WISDOM OF MAHATMA GHANDI ~ TEN MANTRAS
Suresh said:
Anger is allowing others to invade our patience, and
Silence, when unadvised, is allowing others to steal our rights
Violence is showing our impatience, when
Non- Violence, is the most potent way to fight
Buddha, Jain, Jesus, Gandhi, MLK
who chose non-violence and left an eternal impression.
July 13th, 2020 15:51
Suresh said:
Anger is allowing others to invade our patience, and
Silence, when unadvised, is allowing others to steal our rights
Violence is showing our impatience, when
Non- Violence, is the most potent way to fight
Buddha, Jain, Jesus, Gandhi, MLK
who chose non-violence and left an eternal impression.
July 13th, 2020 15:51
WISDOM OF MAHATMA GHANDI ~ TEN MANTRAS
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll post one straight away - good write by the way.
July 13th, 2020 03:43
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll post one straight away - good write by the way.
July 13th, 2020 03:43
WISDOM OF MAHATMA GHANDI ~ TEN MANTRAS
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Did he have any spiritual or Christian background?
July 13th, 2020 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. Did he have any spiritual or Christian background?
July 13th, 2020 01:58
A WALK IN THE WOODS ~ AN 8 4 2 FLOW SONNET
DianeKey6 said:
makes me want to walk in the woods barefoot right now
this is lovely
July 11th, 2020 15:18
DianeKey6 said:
makes me want to walk in the woods barefoot right now
this is lovely
July 11th, 2020 15:18
HAIR TODAY & GONE TOMORROW ~ A 7 7 6 VIGINTI
Michael Edwards said:
Went to the barbers to reduce the coverage
the pleasing result: a cut above average.
July 11th, 2020 02:05
Michael Edwards said:
Went to the barbers to reduce the coverage
the pleasing result: a cut above average.
July 11th, 2020 02:05
HAIR TODAY & GONE TOMORROW ~ A 7 7 6 VIGINTI
Goldfinch60 said:
As yu now i m goin bck too the sevnties with mi hare.
I doo strggle in seing the wrds i rite thou.
.ndy
July 11th, 2020 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
As yu now i m goin bck too the sevnties with mi hare.
I doo strggle in seing the wrds i rite thou.
.ndy
July 11th, 2020 02:03
HAIR TODAY & GONE TOMORROW ~ A 7 7 6 VIGINTI
orchidee said:
Thirty pounds is a bit steep. But on one barber\'s window, I read: Everything is £2 surcharge now! I walked past it.
July 11th, 2020 02:02
orchidee said:
Thirty pounds is a bit steep. But on one barber\'s window, I read: Everything is £2 surcharge now! I walked past it.
July 11th, 2020 02:02
KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET !
Michael Edwards said:
Ah etiquette - this was a subject when I was at school and I\'ve never forgotten it. How many place their knife and fork correctly when they have finished? Together with handles towards you anf fork prongs facing DOWN!! Waiter serves over right shoulder and removes over left shoulder - never removes until EVERYONE has finished. When setting out cutlery the knife blade should face inward. Never eat with just fork - always use both knife and fork. And all that cutlery you mention - how many know how to arrange them correctly? Not many.
And so it goes on.
July 9th, 2020 10:56
Michael Edwards said:
Ah etiquette - this was a subject when I was at school and I\'ve never forgotten it. How many place their knife and fork correctly when they have finished? Together with handles towards you anf fork prongs facing DOWN!! Waiter serves over right shoulder and removes over left shoulder - never removes until EVERYONE has finished. When setting out cutlery the knife blade should face inward. Never eat with just fork - always use both knife and fork. And all that cutlery you mention - how many know how to arrange them correctly? Not many.
And so it goes on.
July 9th, 2020 10:56
KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET !
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - love reading this one as cutlery has always meant much to me - - the right tools in the right places and at table not on a tray.......... great write dear duo.
July 9th, 2020 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - love reading this one as cutlery has always meant much to me - - the right tools in the right places and at table not on a tray.......... great write dear duo.
July 9th, 2020 04:49
KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET !
orchidee said:
Ahh, I know now. I been hungry lately. I been using a fork for me soup, you see. I thought something wasn\'t quite right! heehee.
July 9th, 2020 01:36
orchidee said:
Ahh, I know now. I been hungry lately. I been using a fork for me soup, you see. I thought something wasn\'t quite right! heehee.
July 9th, 2020 01:36
KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET !
Goldfinch60 said:
In that house that I wrote about yesterday the cutlery was mainly silver and just put in the drawer in the kitchen with the other cutlery.
July 9th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
In that house that I wrote about yesterday the cutlery was mainly silver and just put in the drawer in the kitchen with the other cutlery.
July 9th, 2020 01:22
A WALK IN THE WOODS ~ AN 8 4 2 FLOW SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:
When I walk through the woods I see Natures Artwork and listen to Natures Symphony.
Andy
July 8th, 2020 23:48
Goldfinch60 said:
When I walk through the woods I see Natures Artwork and listen to Natures Symphony.
Andy
July 8th, 2020 23:48
A WALK IN THE WOODS ~ AN 8 4 2 FLOW SONNET
Michael Edwards said:
Beneath the soughing boughs
a perfect place
to visit and renew our vows.
Fine write A&B.
July 8th, 2020 12:46
Michael Edwards said:
Beneath the soughing boughs
a perfect place
to visit and renew our vows.
Fine write A&B.
July 8th, 2020 12:46
A WALK IN THE WOODS ~ AN 8 4 2 FLOW SONNET
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. I\'m off to the woods then, time and weather permitting!
July 8th, 2020 05:23
orchidee said:
Good write A&B. I\'m off to the woods then, time and weather permitting!
July 8th, 2020 05:23
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
Suresh said:
As a poem, it is very well writ, and enjoyable.
But in reality according to Genisis, God made the Plants first and then the animals and lastly humans. It\'s in the third attempt God gave humans superiority over plants and animals, and you have poeticised that calamity quite well.
July 7th, 2020 23:34
Suresh said:
As a poem, it is very well writ, and enjoyable.
But in reality according to Genisis, God made the Plants first and then the animals and lastly humans. It\'s in the third attempt God gave humans superiority over plants and animals, and you have poeticised that calamity quite well.
July 7th, 2020 23:34
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GREETINGS SISTER ~ Yes most of our Poems are COLLABORATIONS. WE have an idea (singly or together) and then hone it until it is ready to POST. I do most of the posting & commenting because ANGELA is very busy at work as a PHYSIOTHERAPIST and I have been on LOCKDOWN. Back @ work full-time next week. Man @ his best is an ANGEL (Ladies are mostly ANGELS !) Man @ his worst can be worse than an APE ! Pleased you enjoyed our Poem & Elvis !
Peace & Joy & Love to You & Yours
Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !
July 7th, 2020 09:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GREETINGS SISTER ~ Yes most of our Poems are COLLABORATIONS. WE have an idea (singly or together) and then hone it until it is ready to POST. I do most of the posting & commenting because ANGELA is very busy at work as a PHYSIOTHERAPIST and I have been on LOCKDOWN. Back @ work full-time next week. Man @ his best is an ANGEL (Ladies are mostly ANGELS !) Man @ his worst can be worse than an APE ! Pleased you enjoyed our Poem & Elvis !
Peace & Joy & Love to You & Yours
Brian & Angela & Smokey Cat !
July 7th, 2020 09:02
PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a villanelle, yayy!! And I totally agree that man was more angelic than apish. Yes man still has to prove his worth since his material rapacious ways are indeed destroying the planet. I like that refrain and your entire poem is fabulous and inspiring. Kudos . You write as a couple together right?
July 7th, 2020 05:45
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a villanelle, yayy!! And I totally agree that man was more angelic than apish. Yes man still has to prove his worth since his material rapacious ways are indeed destroying the planet. I like that refrain and your entire poem is fabulous and inspiring. Kudos . You write as a couple together right?
July 7th, 2020 05:45
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