Comments received on poems by ANGELA & BRIAN
WINTER IS ? 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A PANTOUM
Michael Edwards said:
Got my winter woolies out and suffering from cold induced urticaria right now - I so hate the cold. Fine wrte A&B
November 21st, 2019 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
Got my winter woolies out and suffering from cold induced urticaria right now - I so hate the cold. Fine wrte A&B
November 21st, 2019 06:13
WINTER IS ? 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A PANTOUM
Goldfinch60 said:
Winter is beautiful but is best on pictures or in music. I often go out and take pictures in the snow, some of them are stunning.
November 21st, 2019 03:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Winter is beautiful but is best on pictures or in music. I often go out and take pictures in the snow, some of them are stunning.
November 21st, 2019 03:58
SATISFACTION OK ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A 12 ~ 2 FREE VERSE SONNET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ HI *D* Thanks for your comments. Brian did in fact start out on this site on his own. He wanted me to have my own site and then we agreed to share. Brian has taught me a lot about ACROSTICS & SONNETS and many of our Poems are collaborations. I drafted this and and Brian helped me to hone it. There are two of us I can assure you ~ OK Thanks for your question. The idea for this Poem came from something I read so this is why it is posted under my name ~ but is a collaboration. Brian & I are very upset about this ongoing altercation and I hope it can be resolved asap.
Peace & Joy ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2019 14:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ HI *D* Thanks for your comments. Brian did in fact start out on this site on his own. He wanted me to have my own site and then we agreed to share. Brian has taught me a lot about ACROSTICS & SONNETS and many of our Poems are collaborations. I drafted this and and Brian helped me to hone it. There are two of us I can assure you ~ OK Thanks for your question. The idea for this Poem came from something I read so this is why it is posted under my name ~ but is a collaboration. Brian & I are very upset about this ongoing altercation and I hope it can be resolved asap.
Peace & Joy ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
November 20th, 2019 14:51
SATISFACTION OK ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A 12 ~ 2 FREE VERSE SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is out there for you A and B and I am sure that the two of you as one will enjoy it even more than you have up to now.
November 20th, 2019 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is out there for you A and B and I am sure that the two of you as one will enjoy it even more than you have up to now.
November 20th, 2019 02:51
SATISFACTION OK ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A 12 ~ 2 FREE VERSE SONNET
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. Why is Fido never satisfied? Well, he is, when he\'s barked at any naughtiness of poems not marked 18+ which should be. He\'s a lad! heehee. Not that it applies here of course. Not now Fido, I say sometimes!
November 20th, 2019 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. Why is Fido never satisfied? Well, he is, when he\'s barked at any naughtiness of poems not marked 18+ which should be. He\'s a lad! heehee. Not that it applies here of course. Not now Fido, I say sometimes!
November 20th, 2019 02:43
MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🎶 BRIAN 💙 A 6 4 4 SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know music is always in my life, as I write these words a sonata for violin and viola, K424, by Mozart is playing on the radio.
Andy.
November 20th, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know music is always in my life, as I write these words a sonata for violin and viola, K424, by Mozart is playing on the radio.
Andy.
November 20th, 2019 01:48
MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🎶 BRIAN 💙 A 6 4 4 SONNET
Suresh said:
when the vibration of the particles that make the ear drums vibrate in unison, which makes the whole body twang - that\'s music
November 19th, 2019 23:24
Suresh said:
when the vibration of the particles that make the ear drums vibrate in unison, which makes the whole body twang - that\'s music
November 19th, 2019 23:24
MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🎶 BRIAN 💙 A 6 4 4 SONNET
Michael Edwards said:
A great verse and how I applaud the line that says don\'t applaud until the end. One of the modern cuses of popular music concerts is the discourteous way audiences applaud not only before the end but also during the couse of a perfomance - for example as soon as they recognise a song. Grrrr
November 19th, 2019 16:02
Michael Edwards said:
A great verse and how I applaud the line that says don\'t applaud until the end. One of the modern cuses of popular music concerts is the discourteous way audiences applaud not only before the end but also during the couse of a perfomance - for example as soon as they recognise a song. Grrrr
November 19th, 2019 16:02
MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🎶 BRIAN 💙 A 6 4 4 SONNET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening *D* BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for your comments. We are endeavouring to write REAL POEMS which express emotions and this is our latest effort ! Thanks for saving it as a fave !
Peace & Joy & Love
Your Friends Angela & Brian
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 19th, 2019 15:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening *D* BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for your comments. We are endeavouring to write REAL POEMS which express emotions and this is our latest effort ! Thanks for saving it as a fave !
Peace & Joy & Love
Your Friends Angela & Brian
🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 19th, 2019 15:56
MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🎶 BRIAN 💙 A 6 4 4 SONNET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE STEVE - Pleased you enjoyed it ~ an answer to your problem is you could always MIME - like a lot of POP STARS do !
Blessings & You & Your CROONING CUR !
Love in the SPIRIT A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 19th, 2019 14:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE STEVE - Pleased you enjoyed it ~ an answer to your problem is you could always MIME - like a lot of POP STARS do !
Blessings & You & Your CROONING CUR !
Love in the SPIRIT A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 19th, 2019 14:30
MUSIC ~ MUSIC ~ MUSIC 🧡 ANGELA 🎶 BRIAN 💙 A 6 4 4 SONNET
orchidee said:
A fine write Angela. But aww, why do I come along and spoil it all, by singing to the music?! Sounding worse than two cats fighting, that is! heehee.
November 19th, 2019 12:32
orchidee said:
A fine write Angela. But aww, why do I come along and spoil it all, by singing to the music?! Sounding worse than two cats fighting, that is! heehee.
November 19th, 2019 12:32
NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET
Poetic Dan said:
U PSET your CRITICS ~ amp-lif-y your Life. Bam what a line, this is a very delicate subject and will forever swing one way then the other.
You did well to stay around the middle but each to the own and I feel we will always need to nurture our nature ;)
Great stuff!
November 19th, 2019 10:10
Poetic Dan said:
U PSET your CRITICS ~ amp-lif-y your Life. Bam what a line, this is a very delicate subject and will forever swing one way then the other.
You did well to stay around the middle but each to the own and I feel we will always need to nurture our nature ;)
Great stuff!
November 19th, 2019 10:10
NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate acrostic dear duo and as for the number -a fave of mine - - what a voice .............. our genes are something we cannot alter.
November 18th, 2019 13:58
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate acrostic dear duo and as for the number -a fave of mine - - what a voice .............. our genes are something we cannot alter.
November 18th, 2019 13:58
NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET
Christina8 said:
Great job on this Angela and Brian! Wonderful. God bless!
November 18th, 2019 11:20
Christina8 said:
Great job on this Angela and Brian! Wonderful. God bless!
November 18th, 2019 11:20
NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET
Michael Edwards said:
Pleased you are ignoring a certain persons unwelcome comments - keep posting.
November 18th, 2019 08:58
Michael Edwards said:
Pleased you are ignoring a certain persons unwelcome comments - keep posting.
November 18th, 2019 08:58
NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - HI UNCLE STEVE ! We*ll all be DEAD sometime - so we have to CARPE DIEM while we have some time left ! I know ELVIS fanatics and also some who make a good living as ELVIS IMPERSONATORS ! There are 1000s of Elvis Impersonators in the WORLD ~ The first one started in 1954 when ELVIS was only 19 ! ELVIS would have been 84 had he lived ! Tony Bennet is 93 and still does about 100 concerts per year in the USA !
Thanks for all your advice !
Blessings to You & Your Dopey Dog !
Love in the SPIRIT A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 18th, 2019 08:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - HI UNCLE STEVE ! We*ll all be DEAD sometime - so we have to CARPE DIEM while we have some time left ! I know ELVIS fanatics and also some who make a good living as ELVIS IMPERSONATORS ! There are 1000s of Elvis Impersonators in the WORLD ~ The first one started in 1954 when ELVIS was only 19 ! ELVIS would have been 84 had he lived ! Tony Bennet is 93 and still does about 100 concerts per year in the USA !
Thanks for all your advice !
Blessings to You & Your Dopey Dog !
Love in the SPIRIT A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 18th, 2019 08:50
NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET
orchidee said:
I\'ll be dead then. Will I do more than now? I might be dead now, in fact. Eh?! Fido says - enough of my talking rubbish! heehee. I know a guy who collects all Elvis stuff. They call him Elvis, but he looks nothing like him. Doh!
November 18th, 2019 08:27
orchidee said:
I\'ll be dead then. Will I do more than now? I might be dead now, in fact. Eh?! Fido says - enough of my talking rubbish! heehee. I know a guy who collects all Elvis stuff. They call him Elvis, but he looks nothing like him. Doh!
November 18th, 2019 08:27
PLANET EARTH ~ OUR HOME 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A PANTOUM
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. I am respectful to you both, even if you may \'go on a bit\' at times\', to put it gently! That shouldn\'t be suppressed, nor your Christian witness here too. You\'re two very intelligent people, maybe telling us too much of your lives (TMI - Too Much Information?). Well, Fido swooned at certain info - heehee!
November 17th, 2019 08:34
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A. I am respectful to you both, even if you may \'go on a bit\' at times\', to put it gently! That shouldn\'t be suppressed, nor your Christian witness here too. You\'re two very intelligent people, maybe telling us too much of your lives (TMI - Too Much Information?). Well, Fido swooned at certain info - heehee!
November 17th, 2019 08:34
THE PLANETS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 EIGHT MONOKU
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A, though we\'re not all as \'scientific mortals\' as you! heehee.
November 17th, 2019 02:55
orchidee said:
A fine write B&A, though we\'re not all as \'scientific mortals\' as you! heehee.
November 17th, 2019 02:55
THE PLANETS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 EIGHT MONOKU
Goldfinch60 said:
Gustav HOLST!! Not Holtz!!
November 17th, 2019 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Gustav HOLST!! Not Holtz!!
November 17th, 2019 01:51
THE PLANETS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 EIGHT MONOKU
Suresh said:
Yet, they are not even a spec, in our own universe, but we still feel invincible
November 16th, 2019 20:09
Suresh said:
Yet, they are not even a spec, in our own universe, but we still feel invincible
November 16th, 2019 20:09
THE PLANETS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 EIGHT MONOKU
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING TITANIUM ~ You are very welcome to MPS ~ we welcome positive CRITIQUE & FEEDBACK ~ which you state you are also prepared to receive ! We look forward to perusing your First Poem and We promise to comment. If you read the entire spectrum of MPS ~ You find some is giberish and some is very erudite (FAY is an EXAMPLE !) some is in between and some is simply Prose ~ OK. Our Poetry covers a vast range. I am 36 & Angela (31) is my Fiance we have our reasons for sharing a site and there are other *couples* who also share ~ OK. I am a CONSERVATIONIST so I do tend to write some Poems on Global Warming & its consequences etc. We both expect to be alive in 2080 so like the CHILD protesters we are concerned. As your daughter should be !
Let me say first of all ~ that we accept all your criticisms and were we can we will rectify our practices ! 1. We intend to continue as a collaborative site ~ hope that doesnt offend. 2. Because you have highlighted it we appreciate that soliciting comments is *rude* (it was to encourage comment because that is a good feature of MPS) but we will from now on ~ CEASE the practice ~ and leave it to the reader ~ OK 3. I acept that primarilly this is an adult site and our Poem & Picture (but not the Video) is rather JUVENILE perhaps (in retrospect) it would have been better to have written eight separate POEMS and explained the nature of each Planet and its suitability or otherwise to support LIFE. The basic point we were tring to make was the uniqueness of EARTH and the need to keep it that way because its all weve got ! There are those who imagine Nature will cope with the costraints (like antrhropogenic CO2 increase) ad infinitum ~ but she wont ! I know these things are now better taught in Schools (even Primary Schools) but there are plenty of adults (21+) who are ignorant of WHY the Earth is so unique and others who imagine we could colonise MARS (for millions) which is SCIENCE FICTION or find an Earthlike Planet 20 light years away to colonise ~ which is also SF. In the light of your comments we will be more careful about the *intellectual level* of our POEMS in future ~ OK. Sorry we embarassed YOU ! We are both adults and used to criticism ~ so we never (in essence) take offence at any constructive criticism ~ indeed we welcome it. We are both commited Christians (as are others on this site) and we do resent blasfamous remarks made about *Christian Poetry* just because it is in fact CHRISTIAN. MPS is open to ALL irrespective of CLASS - COLOR - COUNTRY or CREED so we should all show respect in these areas ~ OK ! We like your name ~ a very important ELEMENT !
Thanks again for ALL your very objective comments !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN.
November 16th, 2019 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING TITANIUM ~ You are very welcome to MPS ~ we welcome positive CRITIQUE & FEEDBACK ~ which you state you are also prepared to receive ! We look forward to perusing your First Poem and We promise to comment. If you read the entire spectrum of MPS ~ You find some is giberish and some is very erudite (FAY is an EXAMPLE !) some is in between and some is simply Prose ~ OK. Our Poetry covers a vast range. I am 36 & Angela (31) is my Fiance we have our reasons for sharing a site and there are other *couples* who also share ~ OK. I am a CONSERVATIONIST so I do tend to write some Poems on Global Warming & its consequences etc. We both expect to be alive in 2080 so like the CHILD protesters we are concerned. As your daughter should be !
Let me say first of all ~ that we accept all your criticisms and were we can we will rectify our practices ! 1. We intend to continue as a collaborative site ~ hope that doesnt offend. 2. Because you have highlighted it we appreciate that soliciting comments is *rude* (it was to encourage comment because that is a good feature of MPS) but we will from now on ~ CEASE the practice ~ and leave it to the reader ~ OK 3. I acept that primarilly this is an adult site and our Poem & Picture (but not the Video) is rather JUVENILE perhaps (in retrospect) it would have been better to have written eight separate POEMS and explained the nature of each Planet and its suitability or otherwise to support LIFE. The basic point we were tring to make was the uniqueness of EARTH and the need to keep it that way because its all weve got ! There are those who imagine Nature will cope with the costraints (like antrhropogenic CO2 increase) ad infinitum ~ but she wont ! I know these things are now better taught in Schools (even Primary Schools) but there are plenty of adults (21+) who are ignorant of WHY the Earth is so unique and others who imagine we could colonise MARS (for millions) which is SCIENCE FICTION or find an Earthlike Planet 20 light years away to colonise ~ which is also SF. In the light of your comments we will be more careful about the *intellectual level* of our POEMS in future ~ OK. Sorry we embarassed YOU ! We are both adults and used to criticism ~ so we never (in essence) take offence at any constructive criticism ~ indeed we welcome it. We are both commited Christians (as are others on this site) and we do resent blasfamous remarks made about *Christian Poetry* just because it is in fact CHRISTIAN. MPS is open to ALL irrespective of CLASS - COLOR - COUNTRY or CREED so we should all show respect in these areas ~ OK ! We like your name ~ a very important ELEMENT !
Thanks again for ALL your very objective comments !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN.
November 16th, 2019 16:39
THE PLANETS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 EIGHT MONOKU
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning *D* still no NEWS of *OUTBACK* ? Maybe Hes gone *WALKABOUT in his 13 acres ~ Hope he comes HOME SOON. Thanks for your Comment. The Earths position in the Solar System (which enables it to be a LIVING PLANET) is dependent on the position of the other 7 Planets, Just wanted to highlight them with a ONE LINER (MONOKU) ! Normal poem tomorow ~ OK !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💜🧡💜🧡
November 16th, 2019 06:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning *D* still no NEWS of *OUTBACK* ? Maybe Hes gone *WALKABOUT in his 13 acres ~ Hope he comes HOME SOON. Thanks for your Comment. The Earths position in the Solar System (which enables it to be a LIVING PLANET) is dependent on the position of the other 7 Planets, Just wanted to highlight them with a ONE LINER (MONOKU) ! Normal poem tomorow ~ OK !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡💜🧡💜🧡
November 16th, 2019 06:46
DOLDRUMS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A RHYMING ACROSTIC
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks Uncle Steve ~ Pleased you got the message ! It was a different GENRE for US but we never refuse a REQUEST !
Blessings to You & Your HOWLING HOUND
Love in the Spirit A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 15th, 2019 07:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks Uncle Steve ~ Pleased you got the message ! It was a different GENRE for US but we never refuse a REQUEST !
Blessings to You & Your HOWLING HOUND
Love in the Spirit A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 15th, 2019 07:54
DOLDRUMS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A RHYMING ACROSTIC
orchidee said:
Ohh I know! My singing plunges folk into the depths of doldrums - will they ever recover!? heehee.
November 15th, 2019 07:21
orchidee said:
Ohh I know! My singing plunges folk into the depths of doldrums - will they ever recover!? heehee.
November 15th, 2019 07:21
MY POETIC SIDE ~ PROS & CON 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A 5 6 3 SONNET
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Personally I feel its the way Jonathan has designed it. The opportunity to comment is very OPEN & EASY leaving one open to NEGATIVE as well as POSITIVE feedback ~ unless one dictates otherwise ! On other sites it is much more difficult or impossible. I have written Poetry since he age of 12 so I am used to critisism also a Serious Scientist since I was 17 ~ working in Industry & then Research & Education. Ones work is always under review ! I am pretty thick skinned so I would never BLOCK anyone and I enjoy a dialogue with *OUT* ! Also the standards of FORM & FUNCTION on MPS are pretty high so that might deter some ! We try to encourage new Members but quite a few get ZERO COMMENTS on later postings so they drop out ! You & I can count on at least FIVE which makes it worthwhile . At the moment it suits ANGELA & I to share a site we may go separate but it suits because of heavy work schedules. If anyone insulted ANGELA in a comment I would block them and she is agreeable to that. A lot of our Poems are collaborations ~ we usually indicate who is commenting ~ OK. Hope that answers your Q. Another reason is that it is STRICTLY Poetry Or Prose and it is not a DATING or PORN site or MARKETTING site ~ OK
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 14th, 2019 14:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Personally I feel its the way Jonathan has designed it. The opportunity to comment is very OPEN & EASY leaving one open to NEGATIVE as well as POSITIVE feedback ~ unless one dictates otherwise ! On other sites it is much more difficult or impossible. I have written Poetry since he age of 12 so I am used to critisism also a Serious Scientist since I was 17 ~ working in Industry & then Research & Education. Ones work is always under review ! I am pretty thick skinned so I would never BLOCK anyone and I enjoy a dialogue with *OUT* ! Also the standards of FORM & FUNCTION on MPS are pretty high so that might deter some ! We try to encourage new Members but quite a few get ZERO COMMENTS on later postings so they drop out ! You & I can count on at least FIVE which makes it worthwhile . At the moment it suits ANGELA & I to share a site we may go separate but it suits because of heavy work schedules. If anyone insulted ANGELA in a comment I would block them and she is agreeable to that. A lot of our Poems are collaborations ~ we usually indicate who is commenting ~ OK. Hope that answers your Q. Another reason is that it is STRICTLY Poetry Or Prose and it is not a DATING or PORN site or MARKETTING site ~ OK
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
November 14th, 2019 14:35
MY POETIC SIDE ~ PROS & CON 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A 5 6 3 SONNET
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great site but why are there so few of us? It seems such a small community.
November 14th, 2019 11:58
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great site but why are there so few of us? It seems such a small community.
November 14th, 2019 11:58
MY POETIC SIDE ~ PROS & CON 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A 5 6 3 SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:
Truly agree the MPS site has such a diversity on offer.
November 14th, 2019 08:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Truly agree the MPS site has such a diversity on offer.
November 14th, 2019 08:27
WE TALK TO THE TREES 💙 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET
Caring dove said:
Trees are lovely and so too is this poem )
November 14th, 2019 08:15
Caring dove said:
Trees are lovely and so too is this poem )
November 14th, 2019 08:15
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