Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Three Cheers To Ann Maria Reeves Jarvis
Bobby O said:
I wrote a piece that speaks to sudden loss and in my case it was my mom. I’m gonna send it now in this reply box cuz it wouldn’t let me inbox you. Hope it’s ok to do so.
SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears
This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge I’m Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss
See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief
Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O
◦
May 11th, 2023 09:56
Bobby O said:
I wrote a piece that speaks to sudden loss and in my case it was my mom. I’m gonna send it now in this reply box cuz it wouldn’t let me inbox you. Hope it’s ok to do so.
SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears
This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge I’m Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss
See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief
Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O
◦
May 11th, 2023 09:56
Glory to thermodynamics in general...
Bobby O said:
Really long. Do you trust the attention spans in this digital age?
April 30th, 2023 16:25
Bobby O said:
Really long. Do you trust the attention spans in this digital age?
April 30th, 2023 16:25
The boss aka Bruce Springsteen and the E Street band
L. B. Mek said:
great ode n dedication
to a stalwart giant
of modernity\'s musical
legacy!
thank you, dear Poet
\'now rightfully claim status of I’m a rocker/
local hero and I’m goin’ down
meeting across the river
if I should fall behind
on the downbound train as living proof
within light of day magic jungleland
policed by highway patrolman i.e. johnny 99
alias johnny bye bye – held up without a gun\'
(have his biography, saving it for my summer reads
if I remember I\'ll try and read your poem after, when
more of your references will be accessible to me)
April 21st, 2023 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
great ode n dedication
to a stalwart giant
of modernity\'s musical
legacy!
thank you, dear Poet
\'now rightfully claim status of I’m a rocker/
local hero and I’m goin’ down
meeting across the river
if I should fall behind
on the downbound train as living proof
within light of day magic jungleland
policed by highway patrolman i.e. johnny 99
alias johnny bye bye – held up without a gun\'
(have his biography, saving it for my summer reads
if I remember I\'ll try and read your poem after, when
more of your references will be accessible to me)
April 21st, 2023 05:40
July first 2023 will celebrate...
Bella Shepard said:
Wishing you a very Happy Anniversary, and many more to come in your beautiful surroundings, albeit stolen from the original inhabitants, not by you, but by greed for land and wealth, and subsidized by unscrupulous govenment. Quite a read my friend, very intrituing.
April 17th, 2023 15:59
Bella Shepard said:
Wishing you a very Happy Anniversary, and many more to come in your beautiful surroundings, albeit stolen from the original inhabitants, not by you, but by greed for land and wealth, and subsidized by unscrupulous govenment. Quite a read my friend, very intrituing.
April 17th, 2023 15:59
Existentialism emancipation proclamation manumission...
jarcher54 said:
Hell of a proclamation! I absolutely adore the line \"clubbing with Mother Mary.\" Witty and yet profound.
April 7th, 2023 19:26
jarcher54 said:
Hell of a proclamation! I absolutely adore the line \"clubbing with Mother Mary.\" Witty and yet profound.
April 7th, 2023 19:26
Wasted verses ushers quirky pathetic oeuvre
MysteryGhost said:
Its long but a great read! Stoatin wirk!
April 6th, 2023 08:25
MysteryGhost said:
Its long but a great read! Stoatin wirk!
April 6th, 2023 08:25
April 5, 2023 – refracted reflections:
Eugene S. said:
Well that was a nice way to say it! Enjoyed the read!!
April 5th, 2023 16:30
Eugene S. said:
Well that was a nice way to say it! Enjoyed the read!!
April 5th, 2023 16:30
Virtual trophies (wife for I)...
L. B. Mek said:
so funny
thank you! for choosing to share, such a talent
March 21st, 2023 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
so funny
thank you! for choosing to share, such a talent
March 21st, 2023 03:20
Back to you Billy, for ways I whiled away herding ennui
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but didn\'t understand a single word.The mystery to me is why you would work so hard to be meaningless
March 11th, 2023 15:34
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but didn\'t understand a single word.The mystery to me is why you would work so hard to be meaningless
March 11th, 2023 15:34
Daylight Savings Time 2023...
Olaf Gatermann said:
Quite a poem! Splintering, shiny words in a rambling symphony of daylight and life itself. How did you do it?
March 11th, 2023 02:23
Olaf Gatermann said:
Quite a poem! Splintering, shiny words in a rambling symphony of daylight and life itself. How did you do it?
March 11th, 2023 02:23
I re: egret forsaking gull friend where, heron eye twitter
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully fun, thank you
March 6th, 2023 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully fun, thank you
March 6th, 2023 04:47
Atomic brinkmanship double edged sword of Damocles
2781 said:
Lots of losers, who are the winners
March 1st, 2023 15:14
2781 said:
Lots of losers, who are the winners
March 1st, 2023 15:14
My ebbing physical prowess and strength
Doggerel Dave said:
Know how you feel...although I doubt I could open up quite like that.
PS: What is your secret? how do you continue to push them out like that?
February 18th, 2023 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Know how you feel...although I doubt I could open up quite like that.
PS: What is your secret? how do you continue to push them out like that?
February 18th, 2023 19:49
Watching upcoming toilet bowl lvii highlight of February 12th, 2023
orchidee said:
Oops, seems TMI (Too Much Info) at the start, and I don\'t mean the length of the poem! lol.
February 12th, 2023 13:50
orchidee said:
Oops, seems TMI (Too Much Info) at the start, and I don\'t mean the length of the poem! lol.
February 12th, 2023 13:50
Preponderance of dimensions perplexes with bliss string fervor
2781 said:
Trippy
February 10th, 2023 21:05
2781 said:
Trippy
February 10th, 2023 21:05
Happy 211th birthday Charles Dickens
jarcher54 said:
This was fun and creative... and a fitting tribute to an author who enriched our lives with memorable stories and characters and places like no one else. I recently read Dombey and Son and laughed and cried quite out loud. Thanks!!
February 7th, 2023 22:57
jarcher54 said:
This was fun and creative... and a fitting tribute to an author who enriched our lives with memorable stories and characters and places like no one else. I recently read Dombey and Son and laughed and cried quite out loud. Thanks!!
February 7th, 2023 22:57
Apple of my eye darling daughter numero deux gifted me...
Ok Waleed said:
Difficult to read
February 4th, 2023 12:01
Ok Waleed said:
Difficult to read
February 4th, 2023 12:01
Rampant and endemic police brutality...
L. B. Mek said:
\'Rather than raucously riot,
I craft emotions courtesy poetry
mine feeble attempt to agitate and protest
sublimated thru scathing poetic indictment\'
no dear cherished Poet, there is nothing lame
in these words, you gift the world
this is enough
we need not all bleed, to affect change
wisdom and insight disseminated
within our society
for generations to heed
can move more boundaries
and open more closed minds
than any act
of violence inducing, prostration or marching...
those days
of Thoreau heralded
and MLK, adopted
\'civil disobedience\'
are quickly becoming as forgotten
as the rest of history\'s, legacy
for heuristic methods of evolving..
modernity, instead
increases societal bottlenecks
of repressed tensions
then lets them spark
(in to shop window broken glass
and the looting
of the very neighbourhoods
being marginalised and neglected)
and then, all that self-righteous
unthinking fury, as energy
simply dissipates, with futility
once in a while, with a timely
news break or two
with imagery and words, angled just right to insure
such an impotent reactionary
blind zeal, to take hold
of embattled minds..
then
its, pseudo social movements
with tax exempt charity status
and clickbait branding hats n shirts
to fraudulently steal millions
from wannabe, money pledging
reactionary
@ # trending fashionably topical
feigning empathisers..
to shovel out of sight
centuries of complex
and regurgitated, subjugation tactics
far away, beneath
their pristine Persian carpets
out of sight
till those volcanoes of strife, once more
threaten to their way of life
and
its back to the old, tried n tested
methods of appeasement
distractions and evermore feigned
insidiously, subtle
subjugating, systemic tactics
(no dear Poet
were we to live in a time
when words could be heard
your sincere words, would have achieved
far more
than any modern day fruitless
march of anarchy and riot...)
you should be Proud
and humbly, I thank you!
for daring, for caring, for sharing
permit me to name you brethren
in this endless fight
for humanity, to not lose
all its ambitions, of humane
oneness
and genuinely empathetic togetherness...
January 27th, 2023 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'Rather than raucously riot,
I craft emotions courtesy poetry
mine feeble attempt to agitate and protest
sublimated thru scathing poetic indictment\'
no dear cherished Poet, there is nothing lame
in these words, you gift the world
this is enough
we need not all bleed, to affect change
wisdom and insight disseminated
within our society
for generations to heed
can move more boundaries
and open more closed minds
than any act
of violence inducing, prostration or marching...
those days
of Thoreau heralded
and MLK, adopted
\'civil disobedience\'
are quickly becoming as forgotten
as the rest of history\'s, legacy
for heuristic methods of evolving..
modernity, instead
increases societal bottlenecks
of repressed tensions
then lets them spark
(in to shop window broken glass
and the looting
of the very neighbourhoods
being marginalised and neglected)
and then, all that self-righteous
unthinking fury, as energy
simply dissipates, with futility
once in a while, with a timely
news break or two
with imagery and words, angled just right to insure
such an impotent reactionary
blind zeal, to take hold
of embattled minds..
then
its, pseudo social movements
with tax exempt charity status
and clickbait branding hats n shirts
to fraudulently steal millions
from wannabe, money pledging
reactionary
@ # trending fashionably topical
feigning empathisers..
to shovel out of sight
centuries of complex
and regurgitated, subjugation tactics
far away, beneath
their pristine Persian carpets
out of sight
till those volcanoes of strife, once more
threaten to their way of life
and
its back to the old, tried n tested
methods of appeasement
distractions and evermore feigned
insidiously, subtle
subjugating, systemic tactics
(no dear Poet
were we to live in a time
when words could be heard
your sincere words, would have achieved
far more
than any modern day fruitless
march of anarchy and riot...)
you should be Proud
and humbly, I thank you!
for daring, for caring, for sharing
permit me to name you brethren
in this endless fight
for humanity, to not lose
all its ambitions, of humane
oneness
and genuinely empathetic togetherness...
January 27th, 2023 05:25
The missus unflagging crocheting efforts as Betsy Ross incarnate
L. B. Mek said:
(well, maybe not pitch perfect
a poetic serenade
still, much better than the usual
jovial ridicule...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope she appreciated it
January 23rd, 2023 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
(well, maybe not pitch perfect
a poetic serenade
still, much better than the usual
jovial ridicule...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope she appreciated it
January 23rd, 2023 04:40
Ephemeral social media rendezvous
L. B. Mek said:
\'fledgling cyber acquaintanceships
dead on the vine, yours truly sighed\'
I read and related, sighing in mutual
lamentation
there are far more poisonous
humans, than
insects or snakes, on our planet
far, far more!
January 20th, 2023 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'fledgling cyber acquaintanceships
dead on the vine, yours truly sighed\'
I read and related, sighing in mutual
lamentation
there are far more poisonous
humans, than
insects or snakes, on our planet
far, far more!
January 20th, 2023 06:08
January 13th, 2023
L. B. Mek said:
\'she madly gesticulated\'
lol
your poor missus
I\'ve never comes across a \'muse\'
lambasted by words
in every possible way imaginable
can\'t imagine how much making-up
it costs you to write anything
great fun!
January 16th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'she madly gesticulated\'
lol
your poor missus
I\'ve never comes across a \'muse\'
lambasted by words
in every possible way imaginable
can\'t imagine how much making-up
it costs you to write anything
great fun!
January 16th, 2023 04:55
Inextricably rooted with hair fixation
L. B. Mek said:
so funny!
an early happy birthday for the 23rd
in case I forget or have miscalculated
they say 60 is the new 40
hope you have a great day and a peaceful
yet rewarding year ahead, dear cherished Poet
here\'s to you and yours
Happy New Year as well
🍾🥂👏
January 9th, 2023 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
so funny!
an early happy birthday for the 23rd
in case I forget or have miscalculated
they say 60 is the new 40
hope you have a great day and a peaceful
yet rewarding year ahead, dear cherished Poet
here\'s to you and yours
Happy New Year as well
🍾🥂👏
January 9th, 2023 05:31
Balmy january fifth two thousand twenty three
L. B. Mek said:
\'pardon moi as I self plagiarize\'
I so relate!
feel exactly the same at the start of every scribble
Happy New Year! dear cherished Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'pardon moi as I self plagiarize\'
I so relate!
feel exactly the same at the start of every scribble
Happy New Year! dear cherished Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:21
CIPROFLOXACIN HCL 500 MG remedied urinary tract infection
BlessedbyGod said:
Been there, countless of times,that medication leaves a bad taste in your mouth
December 25th, 2022 17:25
BlessedbyGod said:
Been there, countless of times,that medication leaves a bad taste in your mouth
December 25th, 2022 17:25
Jinxed jesting jejune junior jobber...
L. B. Mek said:
you absolute genius
I always wanted to attempt something similar
but lacked the staying power
great fun, as-ever
thank you! dear Poet
(hope you and your loved ones have a great festive season)
December 12th, 2022 01:22
L. B. Mek said:
you absolute genius
I always wanted to attempt something similar
but lacked the staying power
great fun, as-ever
thank you! dear Poet
(hope you and your loved ones have a great festive season)
December 12th, 2022 01:22
I relished being hungry for Thanksgiving pop slop gloppy grub
L. B. Mek said:
\'after enjoying repast,
(fit for a tarnished king),
yours truly able, eager, and ready
to soak my ego freezing carcass in a hot tub.
Hmm... on second thought
lemme apprise others
on the verge against starving themselves,\'
\'to deliberate paranoid Machiavellian flub
courtesy the missus attempted to poison me
(courtesy arse cynic
no – not really)
actually
aborted cuz nanobots
loosed upon body
gripped with rigor mortis,
a minor inconvenient truth
with earthling in balance,
cuz odorless and tasteless deadly toxins
rendered me convalescing
from bout with death, an oxymoronic
former slenderman gourmand.\'
\'truth be told, I
only eat one meal per day
all day
from son up to son down, me
a force
tubby reckoned with, who
if he gives way to vice
event chew wooly (mammouth)
experiences remorse.
Hum glad to share
mine reasonably rhyming hook
twenty six letters linkedin amidst
various combinations, formations, permutations,...
allows, enables, and provides a look
into the mindscape of Matthew Scott Harris
doth show himself with steely dangling
nonsense without pride nor prejudice,
nor sense and sensibility he forsook.\'
November 25th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'after enjoying repast,
(fit for a tarnished king),
yours truly able, eager, and ready
to soak my ego freezing carcass in a hot tub.
Hmm... on second thought
lemme apprise others
on the verge against starving themselves,\'
\'to deliberate paranoid Machiavellian flub
courtesy the missus attempted to poison me
(courtesy arse cynic
no – not really)
actually
aborted cuz nanobots
loosed upon body
gripped with rigor mortis,
a minor inconvenient truth
with earthling in balance,
cuz odorless and tasteless deadly toxins
rendered me convalescing
from bout with death, an oxymoronic
former slenderman gourmand.\'
\'truth be told, I
only eat one meal per day
all day
from son up to son down, me
a force
tubby reckoned with, who
if he gives way to vice
event chew wooly (mammouth)
experiences remorse.
Hum glad to share
mine reasonably rhyming hook
twenty six letters linkedin amidst
various combinations, formations, permutations,...
allows, enables, and provides a look
into the mindscape of Matthew Scott Harris
doth show himself with steely dangling
nonsense without pride nor prejudice,
nor sense and sensibility he forsook.\'
November 25th, 2022 04:06
Collisions between yours truly and the missus
L. B. Mek said:
\'I lichen their trail
to how tornado didst mold\'
\'tale\', even
lol
I could read each of your works time n again
and find something new
to tantalise my geeky literary needs..
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
November 18th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'I lichen their trail
to how tornado didst mold\'
\'tale\', even
lol
I could read each of your works time n again
and find something new
to tantalise my geeky literary needs..
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
November 18th, 2022 05:26
Harriet Harris circa November 13th, 1935 - ~ May 4th, 2005
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss
dear Poet
may she rest in peace
November 14th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss
dear Poet
may she rest in peace
November 14th, 2022 04:28
Worry knot chokes out the living daylights
orchidee said:
I tied a knot in a piece of string to remember summat, but then forgot what I was trying to remember. All I remembered was tying a knot in the string. Doh! lol.
November 11th, 2022 15:30
orchidee said:
I tied a knot in a piece of string to remember summat, but then forgot what I was trying to remember. All I remembered was tying a knot in the string. Doh! lol.
November 11th, 2022 15:30
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