Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Gloriously luxuriating in eternal sleep
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
October 26th, 2023 14:34
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
October 26th, 2023 14:34
Encomium for cumulative collection of trash
L. B. Mek said:
ok cherished poet, please
a little less detail
or a lot more warning..
first stanza almost have me vomit
me breaky
what have I ever done to you...!
lmao
thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
ok cherished poet, please
a little less detail
or a lot more warning..
first stanza almost have me vomit
me breaky
what have I ever done to you...!
lmao
thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:10
Dynamic reef flexion within the restless Earth
Daye Writes said:
That\'s geography ♥
September 28th, 2023 10:46
Daye Writes said:
That\'s geography ♥
September 28th, 2023 10:46
Figurative paralysis laid waste body electric of mine
Bobby O said:
It’s so long
September 10th, 2023 09:41
Bobby O said:
It’s so long
September 10th, 2023 09:41
Red hot chili pepper poker face...
Bobby O said:
I got lost it started with a path I could follow but just past halfway I felt unaware.
September 10th, 2023 02:23
Bobby O said:
I got lost it started with a path I could follow but just past halfway I felt unaware.
September 10th, 2023 02:23
MINDFULNESS = PSYCHIC SURVIVAL.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so much fun, thank you
for sharing your genius with us
typing away in our tents
lol
\'noah matter this totally tubular stranger\'
\'perhaps on account oof a cerebral dent
though many respondents rage\'
\'impacting his/her employment
ending result they/them live in a tent.
This poet knows a mew lion
ranges of feline artful dodging cat skills,\'
\'Sanguine at one hundred minus thirty six, or two squared
+ three squared + four squared + five squared + square root of one hundred =
an apt and pithy phrase
to matt\'s matrix labyrinth
best characterized as a twisted maze\'
\'Keep on dreaming cyber buddy, an anonymous reader might think, telepathically\'
\'The vague nebulous barely perceptible kernel
of a fictional account per my own conjured up vision
(as pertains to what might comprise
a companionable buddy to me) could conceivable materialize
into an actual
arch de triumphant revelation\'
\'If hedging bets with yours truly being a reincarnated union soldier of yore,\'
\'I know best to tamp down any precipitous illusions of grandeur, but would let the natural course of familiarity usher the chap a roan of sacredness\'
\'So, now with a zing
or an unexpected
gold plated invitation after yodeling
hoop ye kin be a yang 2 me yin\'
September 8th, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so much fun, thank you
for sharing your genius with us
typing away in our tents
lol
\'noah matter this totally tubular stranger\'
\'perhaps on account oof a cerebral dent
though many respondents rage\'
\'impacting his/her employment
ending result they/them live in a tent.
This poet knows a mew lion
ranges of feline artful dodging cat skills,\'
\'Sanguine at one hundred minus thirty six, or two squared
+ three squared + four squared + five squared + square root of one hundred =
an apt and pithy phrase
to matt\'s matrix labyrinth
best characterized as a twisted maze\'
\'Keep on dreaming cyber buddy, an anonymous reader might think, telepathically\'
\'The vague nebulous barely perceptible kernel
of a fictional account per my own conjured up vision
(as pertains to what might comprise
a companionable buddy to me) could conceivable materialize
into an actual
arch de triumphant revelation\'
\'If hedging bets with yours truly being a reincarnated union soldier of yore,\'
\'I know best to tamp down any precipitous illusions of grandeur, but would let the natural course of familiarity usher the chap a roan of sacredness\'
\'So, now with a zing
or an unexpected
gold plated invitation after yodeling
hoop ye kin be a yang 2 me yin\'
September 8th, 2023 05:35
ARGH! NO MORE MEDICARE!
orchidee said:
Oh no, if I see that funeral advert on TV once more.....!
August 26th, 2023 12:25
orchidee said:
Oh no, if I see that funeral advert on TV once more.....!
August 26th, 2023 12:25
Shame and guilt sabotaged mine healthy growth...
Parisab said:
Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very personal poem reflective of our times of nothing being predictable or stable…
August 19th, 2023 22:02
Parisab said:
Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very personal poem reflective of our times of nothing being predictable or stable…
August 19th, 2023 22:02
Natural soporific narcotic
Bobby O said:
I really like this piece, as soon I felt like it was my MAIDEN VOYAGE I knew I could go for MILES quickly realizing that
IM INTO SOMETHING GOOD!
knew it couldn’t be just a one night stand…slowly entered the
EYE OF THE HURRICANE
August 14th, 2023 13:26
Bobby O said:
I really like this piece, as soon I felt like it was my MAIDEN VOYAGE I knew I could go for MILES quickly realizing that
IM INTO SOMETHING GOOD!
knew it couldn’t be just a one night stand…slowly entered the
EYE OF THE HURRICANE
August 14th, 2023 13:26
Once again besieged by fruit flies
Bobby O said:
I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away
August 13th, 2023 07:49
Bobby O said:
I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away
August 13th, 2023 07:49
The broken piggy bank
Parisab said:
I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting brilliant poem such as yours!
August 10th, 2023 11:24
Parisab said:
I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting brilliant poem such as yours!
August 10th, 2023 11:24
Wordsmith theoretician postulates kooky equation
L. B. Mek said:
Genius!
\'with the plot of Iago
in my version starring
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
as none other than Othello
punch drunk as Judy
falling down laughing,
roistering, yammering hysterically
and rolling with a stoned Rockafellow,
whose role as a convincing fall guy
convincingly contradicted himself
as an above board underfellow.\'
July 21st, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
Genius!
\'with the plot of Iago
in my version starring
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
as none other than Othello
punch drunk as Judy
falling down laughing,
roistering, yammering hysterically
and rolling with a stoned Rockafellow,
whose role as a convincing fall guy
convincingly contradicted himself
as an above board underfellow.\'
July 21st, 2023 04:52
Chicanery grabbed lustfully repeatedly - yup!
2781 said:
Hard to like. These people do themselves no favour.
\"So the last will be first, and the first will be last.\"
July 16th, 2023 09:16
2781 said:
Hard to like. These people do themselves no favour.
\"So the last will be first, and the first will be last.\"
July 16th, 2023 09:16
Overzealousness and assiduousness...
L. B. Mek said:
\'computer viruses, malware, et cetera,\'
the cruel forever targeting the vulnerable
my father is scared to touch a computer
they\'re all putrid maggots
wish we could just go and stomp them all out
July 10th, 2023 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'computer viruses, malware, et cetera,\'
the cruel forever targeting the vulnerable
my father is scared to touch a computer
they\'re all putrid maggots
wish we could just go and stomp them all out
July 10th, 2023 04:48
Chimeric illusions of grandeur
peto said:
I\'ve read a lot from you over time
This is devastating
We are all vulnerable and I\'m sure this will help many
The strength I\'ve seen through your writing will get you through
Admire your bravery to share
An undoubted talent
Respect
July 1st, 2023 12:14
peto said:
I\'ve read a lot from you over time
This is devastating
We are all vulnerable and I\'m sure this will help many
The strength I\'ve seen through your writing will get you through
Admire your bravery to share
An undoubted talent
Respect
July 1st, 2023 12:14
Hierarchical paradigm of the Amish community
Christina8 said:
i think this is a very insightful write about everything amish and how western civilization holds us back. A great piece!
June 20th, 2023 02:32
Christina8 said:
i think this is a very insightful write about everything amish and how western civilization holds us back. A great piece!
June 20th, 2023 02:32
Mythologized sun child persona incarnate
L. B. Mek said:
Genius!
you\'re so talented, dear Poet
so much \'meaningful\' knowledge
thank you for choosing to share
(from Rustum to Samson
we remember the heroes
they waxed lyrical about
forgetting Gilgamesh was a menace
before Enkidu, came to knock
some sense into him..
and thus we too, strive for an ideal
of a perfect, that was myth
even in antiquity\'s heydays
\'Early onset disabling anxiety
undermined joie de vivre!\'
still,
we are but fallible flesh n blood
our stories have yet to be glorified
by that fantasy of inked poetic ideal
a mirage of existential, worth
dreamed into existence by wishful
boy\'s, trapped in old age\'s
wrinkled skin of incessant, woes
\'superseded body, mind, and spirit triage\'
\'potently, pronouncedly exemplified
analogous to declaration of independence;
we learn to study self, just
to assimilate ourselves
within that collective herd
rock n roll, dreams
till life begins its medicine
of debilitating body blows
as cure to our cloud, perspectives
Icarus be damned
most of us fall, before daring to leap
we hurdle minutes, not obstructions
screaming matches with parents
for us lucky enough, to have one
let alone both, alive healthy
and not yet deprived of their sanity
only, an hour later
we seldom remember what had so agitated
irritated, from that first screech of birth
annoyed, intuitively knowing we were safer
in that womb of Plato\'s cave
so now comes, reality
and all its iridescent horrors
\'I surmise to attribute
senescence as the culprit,
hence endless search for
the fountain of youth.\'
a disguise of enlightenment
within a regression to a youth
we forget as being
our life\'s truly erratic era
of caged chaos, salvaged
by those random glimpsed mercies
of kindness, a status
as dependant, on others
we could barely, comprehend
and the we graduate, learn to fit-in
singing
\'Auld Lang Syne tune
easily mistaken androgynous\'
forgetting it was a poem, first
just like that
\'Star spangled banner\'
we put a hand on a wilting heartbeat\'s
chest
and scream out that herd, alliance
as our defiance
our reluctance, to give up
on that mythological tradition
allowing ourselves, that white lie
where posterity or progeny
afford us a hope of eternity...)
June 16th, 2023 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
Genius!
you\'re so talented, dear Poet
so much \'meaningful\' knowledge
thank you for choosing to share
(from Rustum to Samson
we remember the heroes
they waxed lyrical about
forgetting Gilgamesh was a menace
before Enkidu, came to knock
some sense into him..
and thus we too, strive for an ideal
of a perfect, that was myth
even in antiquity\'s heydays
\'Early onset disabling anxiety
undermined joie de vivre!\'
still,
we are but fallible flesh n blood
our stories have yet to be glorified
by that fantasy of inked poetic ideal
a mirage of existential, worth
dreamed into existence by wishful
boy\'s, trapped in old age\'s
wrinkled skin of incessant, woes
\'superseded body, mind, and spirit triage\'
\'potently, pronouncedly exemplified
analogous to declaration of independence;
we learn to study self, just
to assimilate ourselves
within that collective herd
rock n roll, dreams
till life begins its medicine
of debilitating body blows
as cure to our cloud, perspectives
Icarus be damned
most of us fall, before daring to leap
we hurdle minutes, not obstructions
screaming matches with parents
for us lucky enough, to have one
let alone both, alive healthy
and not yet deprived of their sanity
only, an hour later
we seldom remember what had so agitated
irritated, from that first screech of birth
annoyed, intuitively knowing we were safer
in that womb of Plato\'s cave
so now comes, reality
and all its iridescent horrors
\'I surmise to attribute
senescence as the culprit,
hence endless search for
the fountain of youth.\'
a disguise of enlightenment
within a regression to a youth
we forget as being
our life\'s truly erratic era
of caged chaos, salvaged
by those random glimpsed mercies
of kindness, a status
as dependant, on others
we could barely, comprehend
and the we graduate, learn to fit-in
singing
\'Auld Lang Syne tune
easily mistaken androgynous\'
forgetting it was a poem, first
just like that
\'Star spangled banner\'
we put a hand on a wilting heartbeat\'s
chest
and scream out that herd, alliance
as our defiance
our reluctance, to give up
on that mythological tradition
allowing ourselves, that white lie
where posterity or progeny
afford us a hope of eternity...)
June 16th, 2023 03:39
In America June 14th equals flag day
Ok Waleed said:
Poem or short story holy crap
June 14th, 2023 12:27
Ok Waleed said:
Poem or short story holy crap
June 14th, 2023 12:27
Trawl tale of a fictitious seaman told to ye...
Bobby O said:
I was with you the whole while and then , well have this personal bias that here I merely mention and not defend, we’re I to pass if it’s the devils home where I may stay, Lucifer has the ease of torture tried and true that delivers pain and insane to personally me, the noise of pearly jammed and oyster occults in blue hues will suffice to provide me reason to cringe and scream while recklessly disturbed.
But I did like the piece and the creative prose. Props.
June 9th, 2023 22:16
Bobby O said:
I was with you the whole while and then , well have this personal bias that here I merely mention and not defend, we’re I to pass if it’s the devils home where I may stay, Lucifer has the ease of torture tried and true that delivers pain and insane to personally me, the noise of pearly jammed and oyster occults in blue hues will suffice to provide me reason to cringe and scream while recklessly disturbed.
But I did like the piece and the creative prose. Props.
June 9th, 2023 22:16
“Son”...”say goodnight to grandpa”
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'though methinks love\'s labor\'s lost
hunt and peck typing
across qwerty keyboard
and captcha characteristics
unique to house of my boyhood,\'
(what a treasure to greet
your poetically vivid childhood\'s
cherished memories)
thank you!
June 9th, 2023 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'though methinks love\'s labor\'s lost
hunt and peck typing
across qwerty keyboard
and captcha characteristics
unique to house of my boyhood,\'
(what a treasure to greet
your poetically vivid childhood\'s
cherished memories)
thank you!
June 9th, 2023 04:16
Unidentified extraterrestrial(s) willingly abducted me
jarcher54 said:
I am not sure that was a dream... that\'s what they WANT you to think. Seriously, a fascinating little tour de force. I just think it\'s important to note that probably more aliens have been abducted and hidden in dungeons than ever abducted us!
June 7th, 2023 11:47
jarcher54 said:
I am not sure that was a dream... that\'s what they WANT you to think. Seriously, a fascinating little tour de force. I just think it\'s important to note that probably more aliens have been abducted and hidden in dungeons than ever abducted us!
June 7th, 2023 11:47
Mine gerund farming, tilling, and harvesting illogical weltanschauung
Norman Flagtea said:
Dear master of words! This is a great poem = symphony. One could/should use it as a quarry f/own poems...
June 4th, 2023 15:09
Norman Flagtea said:
Dear master of words! This is a great poem = symphony. One could/should use it as a quarry f/own poems...
June 4th, 2023 15:09
I never escaped from maws bing pi eyed piper pauper
2781 said:
What was that about no drugs
June 1st, 2023 09:47
2781 said:
What was that about no drugs
June 1st, 2023 09:47
Memorial Day May 29th, 2023
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poetic intrigue with extraordinary mentions woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 29th, 2023 14:26
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poetic intrigue with extraordinary mentions woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 29th, 2023 14:26
Three Cheers To Ann Maria Reeves Jarvis
Bobby O said:
I wrote a piece that speaks to sudden loss and in my case it was my mom. I’m gonna send it now in this reply box cuz it wouldn’t let me inbox you. Hope it’s ok to do so.
SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears
This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge I’m Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss
See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief
Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O
◦
May 11th, 2023 09:56
Bobby O said:
I wrote a piece that speaks to sudden loss and in my case it was my mom. I’m gonna send it now in this reply box cuz it wouldn’t let me inbox you. Hope it’s ok to do so.
SHAKEN BALANCE
Suddenly My Path Got Jumbled
My Certain Plan Suddenly Was Unclear
Instinct , Find Strength Internal, Instead , I Just Found Fear
Charting a Courageous Course
a Jumbled Plan That Quickly Crumbled
Deep Sadness Lives Here , Now I Just Pray ,This Deep Sadness Disappears
This Jumbled Path Defines a New
Never , Starkly Alone, I Face This Bridge I’m Forced to Cross
I Take no Solace Knowing Billions
Have and Will Be Familiar with This Loss
See, My Mom is Gone
I Was Not Prepared
I Never Imagined the Sharpness of This Grief.
Denial, Anger, Bargain,
Depressed
Imprisoned in the Maze of Disbelief
Raised on Her Wisdom, I Must Trust Her Love. I Must Trust These Tears Will Turn to Smiles,
and That My Memories Turn to Blessings, After a Little While
Her Strength is in Me, Her Mighty Spirit My Inheritance
Her Guidance Leads My Jumbled Journey
My Acceptance Her Deliverance
Bobby O
◦
May 11th, 2023 09:56
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