Comments received on poems by poet2rhyme4tommorrow
I paid no heed to the call of the siren(s)
sorenbarrett said:
So many references to past cliches and to famous bits of the past. A sexual drive all the way to the end.
February 22nd, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
So many references to past cliches and to famous bits of the past. A sexual drive all the way to the end.
February 22nd, 2025 16:03
A trunkful of recyclables patiently awaits,
Poetic Licence said:
That is some write, very entertaining and enjoyable read
February 21st, 2025 17:11
Poetic Licence said:
That is some write, very entertaining and enjoyable read
February 21st, 2025 17:11
Gotcha! Once respectable haute cuisine thief Sue She...,
sorenbarrett said:
Life as it is today. Poem of metaphor and reality and who can tell the difference. One blends into the other and are permanently mixed. Lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Life as it is today. Poem of metaphor and reality and who can tell the difference. One blends into the other and are permanently mixed. Lovely write.
February 18th, 2025 06:21
Turning the maxim familiarity breeds contempt on it\'s head...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story of a developed love on a celebratory day of Valentines. A good read
February 14th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story of a developed love on a celebratory day of Valentines. A good read
February 14th, 2025 10:30
Diagnosed with NON contagious, yet incurable case of logorrhea...,
Cheeky Missy said:
You are a riot. Case settled. Thank you for sharing this charming bit of an example your title fitly warned readers of in opening.
February 13th, 2025 11:51
Cheeky Missy said:
You are a riot. Case settled. Thank you for sharing this charming bit of an example your title fitly warned readers of in opening.
February 13th, 2025 11:51
Once again, yours truly takes poetic license.
sorenbarrett said:
Ah for the good old days. A fun and informative write. Very nicely done with jargon.
February 12th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Ah for the good old days. A fun and informative write. Very nicely done with jargon.
February 12th, 2025 09:27
A (starry eyed) burst of creativity...
sorenbarrett said:
Idiomatic expressions, mixed with cultural references, pop culture, euphamisms many so subtle as to melt into the text. Yes I remember that sitcom (Keeping up appearances) All woven into a patterned fabric nicely tailored.
February 10th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Idiomatic expressions, mixed with cultural references, pop culture, euphamisms many so subtle as to melt into the text. Yes I remember that sitcom (Keeping up appearances) All woven into a patterned fabric nicely tailored.
February 10th, 2025 06:16
Crime busting Houston police smoke out disjointed fur rats house...
Tony36 said:
BRAVO
February 9th, 2025 10:41
Tony36 said:
BRAVO
February 9th, 2025 10:41
Crime busting Houston police smoke out disjointed fur rats house...
Cheeky Missy said:
You do capably give me reason to chuckle, this dramatic exposé delightfully humorous with its tongue-in-cheek rendering of a more lurid reality than I\'d cared to mull ere breakfast, that closing line nearly fit to erase my appetite where my stomach\'s taken to hinting it\'ll growl soon. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 07:27
Cheeky Missy said:
You do capably give me reason to chuckle, this dramatic exposé delightfully humorous with its tongue-in-cheek rendering of a more lurid reality than I\'d cared to mull ere breakfast, that closing line nearly fit to erase my appetite where my stomach\'s taken to hinting it\'ll growl soon. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 07:27
Sic semper evello mortem tyrannis, high bred poiētḗs of mine
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 7th, 2025 20:06
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 7th, 2025 20:06
Shattered dreams of New Canaan
Poetic Licence said:
Wow, that is some piece of writing, full of passion, anger, concern, compassion and truth, will need to read again later to take it all in, Great write
February 6th, 2025 11:45
Poetic Licence said:
Wow, that is some piece of writing, full of passion, anger, concern, compassion and truth, will need to read again later to take it all in, Great write
February 6th, 2025 11:45
Shattered dreams of New Canaan
Cheeky Missy said:
... don\'t you recall that scripture passage going something very like, \"...this is not the way, neither is this the people--\" ? You provoked me to think for half a second, and I opened my mouth,...foolishly? Thank you for sharing.
February 6th, 2025 11:30
Cheeky Missy said:
... don\'t you recall that scripture passage going something very like, \"...this is not the way, neither is this the people--\" ? You provoked me to think for half a second, and I opened my mouth,...foolishly? Thank you for sharing.
February 6th, 2025 11:30
Shayna Punim - You came a long way baby!
sorenbarrett said:
The life of parenthood in this poem. I have done it already and it is quite a journey. You have some marvelous lines in this poem (raging (with ear splitting screams) against the human machine) Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
The life of parenthood in this poem. I have done it already and it is quite a journey. You have some marvelous lines in this poem (raging (with ear splitting screams) against the human machine) Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:41
They got the whole world in their hands
sorenbarrett said:
Probably true but what to do with a populace as stupid and unmotivated as the electorate? A journey of a ride in this poem
February 4th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Probably true but what to do with a populace as stupid and unmotivated as the electorate? A journey of a ride in this poem
February 4th, 2025 04:28
Sunday February 2nd, 2025 Groundhog Day
Cheeky Missy said:
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Waxing eloquent until my poor little noggin is spinning afresh likeas my sibling pulled off during breakfast mere hours ago, thank you so very much for addressing the pressing issue of this particular day long hedged upon. Beautifully rendered with your customary flair and superb imagery, its poignancy daintily poised to erupt, I thank you again very much for sharing, good Sir.
February 2nd, 2025 13:14
Cheeky Missy said:
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Waxing eloquent until my poor little noggin is spinning afresh likeas my sibling pulled off during breakfast mere hours ago, thank you so very much for addressing the pressing issue of this particular day long hedged upon. Beautifully rendered with your customary flair and superb imagery, its poignancy daintily poised to erupt, I thank you again very much for sharing, good Sir.
February 2nd, 2025 13:14
Precedent setting the stage for kerning and tracking piqued my interest
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 1st, 2025 17:28
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
February 1st, 2025 17:28
Adept Anglophone pines to learn Yiddish as a second language
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, very interesting and a veritable pleasure to consume, reminiscent of Moses\' law as the saying goes, and rather weighty in all seriousness. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 28th, 2025 01:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, very interesting and a veritable pleasure to consume, reminiscent of Moses\' law as the saying goes, and rather weighty in all seriousness. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
January 28th, 2025 01:59
Adept Anglophone pines to learn Yiddish as a second language
Tony36 said:
Great write
January 27th, 2025 20:51
Tony36 said:
Great write
January 27th, 2025 20:51
Poet who exhibits panache - meant...
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric puzzle poem an enigma sprinkled with flashes of illumination. Nicely done
January 26th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric puzzle poem an enigma sprinkled with flashes of illumination. Nicely done
January 26th, 2025 06:39
Swath of pristine tractless snow white landscape...
Tony36 said:
Great write
January 20th, 2025 17:41
Tony36 said:
Great write
January 20th, 2025 17:41
Rather than crank up the heat...
Cheeky Missy said:
Rendered in your typical style rambling down the page yet somehow now more readily comprehensible, so beautifully too with excellent imagery and a trembling poignancy, I love it. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 23:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Rendered in your typical style rambling down the page yet somehow now more readily comprehensible, so beautifully too with excellent imagery and a trembling poignancy, I love it. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 23:24
Inauguration Day 2025 - Monday, January 20, 2025, 12:00 PM
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
January 17th, 2025 07:31
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
January 17th, 2025 07:31
Inauguration Day 2025 - Monday, January 20, 2025, 12:00 PM
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write that juxtaposes one timeless leader (Rev. Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.) with a soon-to-be president 2.0 (who I will not name) who embodies the complete opposite of the aforementioned leader. For the poem. 🌹👏 For inauguration day 2025 and beyond. 😬 Indeed, George Washington shudders...at least. Again! A wonderful write!
January 16th, 2025 21:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write that juxtaposes one timeless leader (Rev. Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.) with a soon-to-be president 2.0 (who I will not name) who embodies the complete opposite of the aforementioned leader. For the poem. 🌹👏 For inauguration day 2025 and beyond. 😬 Indeed, George Washington shudders...at least. Again! A wonderful write!
January 16th, 2025 21:56
Dear global leaders - keep on rockin\' in the free world
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
January 13th, 2025 09:54
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
January 13th, 2025 09:54
Filched formerly anatomical slender man - me! Thus I take a pot belly stance!
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
January 4th, 2025 20:38
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
January 4th, 2025 20:38
Oy vey iz mir, one day in the life of a common house broken schmeckle...,
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You certainly threw me for a loop, also tangling me up in your vocabulary until I confess me lost, but intrigued and fascinated. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2025 20:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. You certainly threw me for a loop, also tangling me up in your vocabulary until I confess me lost, but intrigued and fascinated. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2025 20:31
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