Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Bar none, no shortage of soap shampoo, nor detergent
L. B. Mek said:
\'but only tout poetic justice (mine)
to recognize laudable traits
linkedin to orthodox faiths,
albeit rationalistic rubric
that caters to selflessness
for no other reason than allowing, enabling, and promoting
random acts of kindness
without any forthcoming great expectation
downplaying remuneration,\'
December 17th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'but only tout poetic justice (mine)
to recognize laudable traits
linkedin to orthodox faiths,
albeit rationalistic rubric
that caters to selflessness
for no other reason than allowing, enabling, and promoting
random acts of kindness
without any forthcoming great expectation
downplaying remuneration,\'
December 17th, 2021 05:07
Quirky suave Unitarian
L. B. Mek said:
\'I immediately said helloo
to Long lasting fragrance
Suave
essentials Daily Clarifying
Deep cleansing Shampoo,
which permeated mine scalp
facilitating healthy follicles.
More so frothy lather upon noggin
after getting rinsed out
yielded
bounteous, luscious, luxurious,
and marvelous, full bodied tresses
reminiscent
when yours truly an adolescent,\'
December 16th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'I immediately said helloo
to Long lasting fragrance
Suave
essentials Daily Clarifying
Deep cleansing Shampoo,
which permeated mine scalp
facilitating healthy follicles.
More so frothy lather upon noggin
after getting rinsed out
yielded
bounteous, luscious, luxurious,
and marvelous, full bodied tresses
reminiscent
when yours truly an adolescent,\'
December 16th, 2021 05:27
Kombucha trilogy with chia seeds spells molotov cocktail
L. B. Mek said:
\'fortunately satisfied with poem thus far.\'
😄
\'The missus (a plump carnivore
to the bone with plucky constitution)\'
😁
\'thus imperative to jot obit
before that instant I exit
stage door left,
the only occasion witnessing
ala bumbling and fumbling performance\'
🤣
December 7th, 2021 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'fortunately satisfied with poem thus far.\'
😄
\'The missus (a plump carnivore
to the bone with plucky constitution)\'
😁
\'thus imperative to jot obit
before that instant I exit
stage door left,
the only occasion witnessing
ala bumbling and fumbling performance\'
🤣
December 7th, 2021 04:11
While vehicle underwent routine oil change today...
L. B. Mek said:
\'Relentless desecration
of life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
barely restrained by laws
dime a dozen murderous sprees
now rarely witness capital punishment
and offtimes find villain acquitted
even garnering accolades
after exhibiting crocodile tears\'
November 23rd, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Relentless desecration
of life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
barely restrained by laws
dime a dozen murderous sprees
now rarely witness capital punishment
and offtimes find villain acquitted
even garnering accolades
after exhibiting crocodile tears\'
November 23rd, 2021 04:39
Circa October 7th 2020 papa passed away
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
October 1st, 2021 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
October 1st, 2021 03:35
Gonifs and gossips...
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve lived once or twice (thankfully not now), as the result of a rather chequered accommodation history, with groups of mendacious ratbags like that .... unspeakable really, but I\'m glad you did...
September 18th, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve lived once or twice (thankfully not now), as the result of a rather chequered accommodation history, with groups of mendacious ratbags like that .... unspeakable really, but I\'m glad you did...
September 18th, 2021 20:44
Off the beaten track
Doggerel Dave said:
I make it a habit to try to read your poetic contributions here..love the imagery, enjoy the language, but am exhausted by the end.
How do you continue to pump it out with so much imaginative verve? And why?
September 12th, 2021 05:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I make it a habit to try to read your poetic contributions here..love the imagery, enjoy the language, but am exhausted by the end.
How do you continue to pump it out with so much imaginative verve? And why?
September 12th, 2021 05:18
Umpteenth heat wave since onset of summer... sizzles Delaware Valley today August 25th, 2021
dusk arising said:
Will you be supporting measures to reduce and repair global warming at all. Starting with what LOL.
August 27th, 2021 10:48
dusk arising said:
Will you be supporting measures to reduce and repair global warming at all. Starting with what LOL.
August 27th, 2021 10:48
Prolonged offal bout courtesy constipation... redux a worse hellish fate than perdition
Doggerel Dave said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ic3g8Xnf7LI&ab_channel=cojwat
August 20th, 2021 23:43
Doggerel Dave said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ic3g8Xnf7LI&ab_channel=cojwat
August 20th, 2021 23:43
Upon our (yours truly and his missus) exchanging holy matrimony vows
L. B. Mek said:
\'All kibitizing aside, a requited love with zeal
I attest invisible spokes support unseen wheel
when turning sparking genuine care and concern
act as buffer against emotional hemorrhage
and received good housekeeping approval seal\'
a personalised dedication
and a fun read, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'All kibitizing aside, a requited love with zeal
I attest invisible spokes support unseen wheel
when turning sparking genuine care and concern
act as buffer against emotional hemorrhage
and received good housekeeping approval seal\'
a personalised dedication
and a fun read, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:17
August 13th, 2021 – twenty two years since...
Doggerel Dave said:
Bum days like that I term misfortune cascades or should\'a stayed in bed days...Commiserations.
August 13th, 2021 17:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Bum days like that I term misfortune cascades or should\'a stayed in bed days...Commiserations.
August 13th, 2021 17:25
Still reeling (albeit figuratively) after amidst realization... keys to apartment and 2009 Hyundai Sonata went missing
L. B. Mek said:
\'with blitzkrieg of emotional flak
bonafide, doggone fusillade
without rhyme nor reason knick knack
rained down
and thundered paddywhack, futile
against railing training, expert bombardier
\'no matter gunnery\'
(pro inside my head), raining one after another blow
I quickly lost track
impossible mission regarding wrack
con a sense, thus
yak... yak... yak...\'
(genuine lol wit, hidden - in each line!
such a fun poetic treat, in a read)
thank you for sharing
August 12th, 2021 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'with blitzkrieg of emotional flak
bonafide, doggone fusillade
without rhyme nor reason knick knack
rained down
and thundered paddywhack, futile
against railing training, expert bombardier
\'no matter gunnery\'
(pro inside my head), raining one after another blow
I quickly lost track
impossible mission regarding wrack
con a sense, thus
yak... yak... yak...\'
(genuine lol wit, hidden - in each line!
such a fun poetic treat, in a read)
thank you for sharing
August 12th, 2021 03:24
Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945
Doggerel Dave said:
One of the most foul and inhumane acts in modern history.
Well Writ.
August 6th, 2021 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
One of the most foul and inhumane acts in modern history.
Well Writ.
August 6th, 2021 19:32
Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945
Trenz Pruca said:
Unmitigated horror. Good write. Thank you.
August 6th, 2021 14:52
Trenz Pruca said:
Unmitigated horror. Good write. Thank you.
August 6th, 2021 14:52
Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945
orchidee said:
A fine write R. A hell on earth experience.
August 6th, 2021 10:58
orchidee said:
A fine write R. A hell on earth experience.
August 6th, 2021 10:58
Mine reddened pharynx constriction sorely limits ability to yell
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow clever, fantastic how you rhymed in each line. The Abel line yayy. Kudos for this poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow clever, fantastic how you rhymed in each line. The Abel line yayy. Kudos for this poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:53
Across figurative and literal board... mine hardscrabble existential debacle spelled losing game of trouble
L. B. Mek said:
\'cuz yours truly already familiarized
with self isolation
courtesy his social anxiety despair
schizoid personality disorder the diagnosis
nsync with loathsome
body morphology toward self
viz mental health impasse a legitimate malady
impossible mission possibly
since in utero didst impair
minimally abetted courtesy
Buffalo wing and a prayer
wishful thinking only death can relieve
some recently approaching year.)..
I just laud
the unflinching bravery of veracity
in everything you write, dear poet
a part of me that recognises
the raw angst of mental suffering
you eloquently depict, empathises with you;
still, unlike so many who can\'t find an outlet
for their pain
some of us, have been gifted that poetic release
of self-expression\'s - inked, escape...
a humbling experience to read your truth, dear poet
thank you for sharing
(I posted something a while back
that you might find relatable
and somewhat of a comfort to read, I know I often
go back to read it, as a reminder
that we\'re never alone, in our suffering when there are
so many who can share, relate and understand:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-124227 )
July 12th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'cuz yours truly already familiarized
with self isolation
courtesy his social anxiety despair
schizoid personality disorder the diagnosis
nsync with loathsome
body morphology toward self
viz mental health impasse a legitimate malady
impossible mission possibly
since in utero didst impair
minimally abetted courtesy
Buffalo wing and a prayer
wishful thinking only death can relieve
some recently approaching year.)..
I just laud
the unflinching bravery of veracity
in everything you write, dear poet
a part of me that recognises
the raw angst of mental suffering
you eloquently depict, empathises with you;
still, unlike so many who can\'t find an outlet
for their pain
some of us, have been gifted that poetic release
of self-expression\'s - inked, escape...
a humbling experience to read your truth, dear poet
thank you for sharing
(I posted something a while back
that you might find relatable
and somewhat of a comfort to read, I know I often
go back to read it, as a reminder
that we\'re never alone, in our suffering when there are
so many who can share, relate and understand:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-124227 )
July 12th, 2021 04:41
Circa sixty one years ago July 6th, 2001 - birth of dear beloved wife
L. B. Mek said:
what a wide lensed, all-encompassing
and yet beautifully measured dedication!
cheers, dear Poet 🍻
thanks for sharing, hope you had a great day!
\'and presently enjoy spouse as finest companion
no matter testosterone drive went in reverse
meaning to fiendish predilection fornicate moot.
Thee marriage strongly bolstered principally thru
playful dynamics and/or verbal/oral intercourse
resolving regular potential conflicts
sets virtual stage to stave off violent altercations
most likely regarding insignificant issue
summoning forth active/deep listening
a renewable (non toxic) resource.\'
to that gleaned, meaningful simplicity
in our unwavering sincerity
of devoted: loyalty
July 5th, 2021 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
what a wide lensed, all-encompassing
and yet beautifully measured dedication!
cheers, dear Poet 🍻
thanks for sharing, hope you had a great day!
\'and presently enjoy spouse as finest companion
no matter testosterone drive went in reverse
meaning to fiendish predilection fornicate moot.
Thee marriage strongly bolstered principally thru
playful dynamics and/or verbal/oral intercourse
resolving regular potential conflicts
sets virtual stage to stave off violent altercations
most likely regarding insignificant issue
summoning forth active/deep listening
a renewable (non toxic) resource.\'
to that gleaned, meaningful simplicity
in our unwavering sincerity
of devoted: loyalty
July 5th, 2021 06:42
Futile effort to plunger the clogged kitchen sink...
L. B. Mek said:
I read your title and smiled, expectantly
and continued to smile from first word to last
although - wincing, at just how devotedly: vivid
your informative write, decided to incorporate
the more - ehm, unsavoury - details
of your - ehm, gallantry exploits... lol
such a fun read, thank you dear Poet
July 1st, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
I read your title and smiled, expectantly
and continued to smile from first word to last
although - wincing, at just how devotedly: vivid
your informative write, decided to incorporate
the more - ehm, unsavoury - details
of your - ehm, gallantry exploits... lol
such a fun read, thank you dear Poet
July 1st, 2021 04:16
I (accompanied by my shadow)...
Doggerel Dave said:
I could relate to large swathes of that (housing - relations with officialdom - exercise - lockdown), thanks
June 26th, 2021 20:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I could relate to large swathes of that (housing - relations with officialdom - exercise - lockdown), thanks
June 26th, 2021 20:37
Traditional Solitaire potential combinations... that clenched another win (yesterday June 13th, 2021) single handedly
L. B. Mek said:
and this is why
we humans: smartly, created alcohol
way before we learnt to count
or ruminated, over painted card games
life\'s, just too short my friend
let\'s leave the big ponderings
to those gifted with immortality\'s: burdens
ours, is a different cross
we have been intrusted, to bare...
lol
(in summary
since I lacked the IQ ballpark capacity
to comprehend your in-depth musings
I pitifully, chose to make fun of it
and feel a little less intimidated
by your scary big, brainpower prowess
ahem...)
just a little glimpse at how
our defiant psyche\'s operate
in their evolutionarily sharpened
survival mode
June 15th, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
and this is why
we humans: smartly, created alcohol
way before we learnt to count
or ruminated, over painted card games
life\'s, just too short my friend
let\'s leave the big ponderings
to those gifted with immortality\'s: burdens
ours, is a different cross
we have been intrusted, to bare...
lol
(in summary
since I lacked the IQ ballpark capacity
to comprehend your in-depth musings
I pitifully, chose to make fun of it
and feel a little less intimidated
by your scary big, brainpower prowess
ahem...)
just a little glimpse at how
our defiant psyche\'s operate
in their evolutionarily sharpened
survival mode
June 15th, 2021 04:07
Infinitesimal human jetsam flotsam self across webbed wide whirled viz cyber sea
L. B. Mek said:
ignore the cynics, last I checked this website\'s name
was worded: \'Poetic\' for a reason! lol
that rhythmically poetic, hoity toity of argon and carbon
(before oxygen merged to ruin the rhyme
with its necessitude: of dioxide.)
you write, so informedly accessible: how laudable
dear poet..
a write of passion, is poetic
by its innate veracity of worded: Truth
(in my humble opinion)
a great read, I\'ll have to revisit time n again
to truly benefit from
(oh and, here\'s some e.e. cummings
for some poetic \'flotsam and jetsam\' fun)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-6966
June 14th, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
ignore the cynics, last I checked this website\'s name
was worded: \'Poetic\' for a reason! lol
that rhythmically poetic, hoity toity of argon and carbon
(before oxygen merged to ruin the rhyme
with its necessitude: of dioxide.)
you write, so informedly accessible: how laudable
dear poet..
a write of passion, is poetic
by its innate veracity of worded: Truth
(in my humble opinion)
a great read, I\'ll have to revisit time n again
to truly benefit from
(oh and, here\'s some e.e. cummings
for some poetic \'flotsam and jetsam\' fun)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-6966
June 14th, 2021 05:50
Infinitesimal human jetsam flotsam self across webbed wide whirled viz cyber sea
Doggerel Dave said:
Amazing and educational.
How long did it take you to put it together?
Will You return to poetry?
June 13th, 2021 23:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Amazing and educational.
How long did it take you to put it together?
Will You return to poetry?
June 13th, 2021 23:09
Violent deadly crime spree shoots upward
L. B. Mek said:
\'it is not the weapon: that pulls trigger\'s
it is the corrupted mind, that\'s forgotten
the value of A life...!\'
\'First: we must accept
it is our society, that weaponizes those serial killers;
it is our votes: that dictates how corruptive power\'s
distort our reality of \'Self\', when We choose to be herded;
and it is with us, where accountability, must begin
and shirking responsibility: must End!\'
(A truly, insightful write, dear poet)
\'concomitantly excite, purported in accordance
with first amendment, relish
yet proliferation
allowing, free ranging banshee dervish
sans weapons of mass destruction
(mainly innocent lives)
inures citizens to appear off fish
U.S., and self-important
becoming comfortably numb
at regular headlines detailing
some lone a bit mish
hug ha, an automatic killer
methodically unloading with a swish
multitudinous cartridges attempt
to evening the score\'...
May 31st, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'it is not the weapon: that pulls trigger\'s
it is the corrupted mind, that\'s forgotten
the value of A life...!\'
\'First: we must accept
it is our society, that weaponizes those serial killers;
it is our votes: that dictates how corruptive power\'s
distort our reality of \'Self\', when We choose to be herded;
and it is with us, where accountability, must begin
and shirking responsibility: must End!\'
(A truly, insightful write, dear poet)
\'concomitantly excite, purported in accordance
with first amendment, relish
yet proliferation
allowing, free ranging banshee dervish
sans weapons of mass destruction
(mainly innocent lives)
inures citizens to appear off fish
U.S., and self-important
becoming comfortably numb
at regular headlines detailing
some lone a bit mish
hug ha, an automatic killer
methodically unloading with a swish
multitudinous cartridges attempt
to evening the score\'...
May 31st, 2021 06:08
Violent deadly crime spree shoots upward
Doggerel Dave said:
Hear hear: What can you say about the second amendment other than - today It is bull shit. A nation state which cannot resolve this will ultimately fail......
May 31st, 2021 01:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Hear hear: What can you say about the second amendment other than - today It is bull shit. A nation state which cannot resolve this will ultimately fail......
May 31st, 2021 01:30
Mine slovenly unkempt appearance spells embarrassment
L. B. Mek said:
\'(earlier in her fitbit livingsocial years)
non verbally communicated disgust
(insync with audible sigh)\'
\'she loosed loathing against
grungy looking son (guess who)
futilely escaped wrath of Harriet Khan\'..
a cousin of Genghis eh? that bad...
this had me LOL!
thanks for sharing, and I still adamantly believe
you should be scripting Hollywood\'s comedy
May 28th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'(earlier in her fitbit livingsocial years)
non verbally communicated disgust
(insync with audible sigh)\'
\'she loosed loathing against
grungy looking son (guess who)
futilely escaped wrath of Harriet Khan\'..
a cousin of Genghis eh? that bad...
this had me LOL!
thanks for sharing, and I still adamantly believe
you should be scripting Hollywood\'s comedy
May 28th, 2021 04:39
I ham quill tee for gobbledygook... and ruffling tail feathers!
L. B. Mek said:
this is so awesome, I think the pertinent question for you would be
what book: haven\'t, you read - at this point... lol
\'whether art thou still
game
to reed my adore
hub bull poetry
understandable if ye deplore
such atrocious, egregious, opprobrious...,
violating ethical core
puss regarding straying, against dietary herbivore
rudimentary
eel lamb ants
(chocolate covered
my dear Watson)\'
May 24th, 2021 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
this is so awesome, I think the pertinent question for you would be
what book: haven\'t, you read - at this point... lol
\'whether art thou still
game
to reed my adore
hub bull poetry
understandable if ye deplore
such atrocious, egregious, opprobrious...,
violating ethical core
puss regarding straying, against dietary herbivore
rudimentary
eel lamb ants
(chocolate covered
my dear Watson)\'
May 24th, 2021 06:34
So Dog Gone Tired Today... May 20th, 2021
L. B. Mek said:
\'nonetheless, no alarmist worry,
nor \"worst case scenarios\" betray
my ordinarily mellow emotional state,
thus any task I must delay
thoughts unstoppably captivated
by snoozing upon
a bed of freshly mown hay,
and then hours later
diminishing fatigue in catchy rye
ming verse aye re: lay
relishing being awake,
the mine true valued self I kin portray
best to surrender whereby
unfettered invisible manacle doth yoke
mine body electric unresponsive, yet woke\'..
an awesome write and pic, dear poet
its funny how inspiration cares little
for our energy levels
when it visits and revives us
with that untameable creative spirit...
May 21st, 2021 03:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'nonetheless, no alarmist worry,
nor \"worst case scenarios\" betray
my ordinarily mellow emotional state,
thus any task I must delay
thoughts unstoppably captivated
by snoozing upon
a bed of freshly mown hay,
and then hours later
diminishing fatigue in catchy rye
ming verse aye re: lay
relishing being awake,
the mine true valued self I kin portray
best to surrender whereby
unfettered invisible manacle doth yoke
mine body electric unresponsive, yet woke\'..
an awesome write and pic, dear poet
its funny how inspiration cares little
for our energy levels
when it visits and revives us
with that untameable creative spirit...
May 21st, 2021 03:17
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