Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Donald Trump must be permanently lambasted...
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was something. Preach though! I had to read this with my dictionary by my side 🧐. Good job though. Trump is something from another universe.
February 10th, 2022 10:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was something. Preach though! I had to read this with my dictionary by my side 🧐. Good job though. Trump is something from another universe.
February 10th, 2022 10:16
Inferiority complex as a kid, adolescent and emerging adult
L. B. Mek said:
\'existed about joie de vivre,
and considerations about mortality irrelevant,
where soothsayers promised
our family staying alive for eternity
few and far between instances found me
acting, exhibiting, illustrating brazenly bold
behavior, said rare spontaneity\'
February 10th, 2022 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'existed about joie de vivre,
and considerations about mortality irrelevant,
where soothsayers promised
our family staying alive for eternity
few and far between instances found me
acting, exhibiting, illustrating brazenly bold
behavior, said rare spontaneity\'
February 10th, 2022 04:02
Lulled to sleep courtesy white noise of the fan
Buzz Bray said:
This is the kind of poetry best read in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village with a jazz trio backing you up. Jack Kerouac would love this. I did.
January 16th, 2022 16:47
Buzz Bray said:
This is the kind of poetry best read in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village with a jazz trio backing you up. Jack Kerouac would love this. I did.
January 16th, 2022 16:47
Deimos perplexing state of Martian crash test dummy
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! You should be reciting this to an audience in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village backed up by a jazz trio. I like it!
January 14th, 2022 19:47
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! You should be reciting this to an audience in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village backed up by a jazz trio. I like it!
January 14th, 2022 19:47
The Antics Of A Yoyo Thief
sophin said:
fantastic prose here. i love the tone that just jumps out here.
January 12th, 2022 14:55
sophin said:
fantastic prose here. i love the tone that just jumps out here.
January 12th, 2022 14:55
Wordsmith\'s worst nightmare
fruityfemme420 said:
wow i absolutely love your writing style, the flow is impeccable
January 10th, 2022 16:20
fruityfemme420 said:
wow i absolutely love your writing style, the flow is impeccable
January 10th, 2022 16:20
Nine lives removed from feline groovy and royal
L. B. Mek said:
Happy New Year!
dear Mad Hatter Poet, lol
\'whose body heat could
easily melt an igloo,
whereby
Eskimos accepted charity
from Korean philanthropists
named Joo\'
January 6th, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
Happy New Year!
dear Mad Hatter Poet, lol
\'whose body heat could
easily melt an igloo,
whereby
Eskimos accepted charity
from Korean philanthropists
named Joo\'
January 6th, 2022 04:00
MALEVOLENT MENTAL MAELSTROM
L. B. Mek said:
\'toady, an amphibious December 19th\'
genius!
December 20th, 2021 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'toady, an amphibious December 19th\'
genius!
December 20th, 2021 05:05
Bar none, no shortage of soap shampoo, nor detergent
L. B. Mek said:
\'but only tout poetic justice (mine)
to recognize laudable traits
linkedin to orthodox faiths,
albeit rationalistic rubric
that caters to selflessness
for no other reason than allowing, enabling, and promoting
random acts of kindness
without any forthcoming great expectation
downplaying remuneration,\'
December 17th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'but only tout poetic justice (mine)
to recognize laudable traits
linkedin to orthodox faiths,
albeit rationalistic rubric
that caters to selflessness
for no other reason than allowing, enabling, and promoting
random acts of kindness
without any forthcoming great expectation
downplaying remuneration,\'
December 17th, 2021 05:07
Quirky suave Unitarian
L. B. Mek said:
\'I immediately said helloo
to Long lasting fragrance
Suave
essentials Daily Clarifying
Deep cleansing Shampoo,
which permeated mine scalp
facilitating healthy follicles.
More so frothy lather upon noggin
after getting rinsed out
yielded
bounteous, luscious, luxurious,
and marvelous, full bodied tresses
reminiscent
when yours truly an adolescent,\'
December 16th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'I immediately said helloo
to Long lasting fragrance
Suave
essentials Daily Clarifying
Deep cleansing Shampoo,
which permeated mine scalp
facilitating healthy follicles.
More so frothy lather upon noggin
after getting rinsed out
yielded
bounteous, luscious, luxurious,
and marvelous, full bodied tresses
reminiscent
when yours truly an adolescent,\'
December 16th, 2021 05:27
Kombucha trilogy with chia seeds spells molotov cocktail
L. B. Mek said:
\'fortunately satisfied with poem thus far.\'
😄
\'The missus (a plump carnivore
to the bone with plucky constitution)\'
😁
\'thus imperative to jot obit
before that instant I exit
stage door left,
the only occasion witnessing
ala bumbling and fumbling performance\'
🤣
December 7th, 2021 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'fortunately satisfied with poem thus far.\'
😄
\'The missus (a plump carnivore
to the bone with plucky constitution)\'
😁
\'thus imperative to jot obit
before that instant I exit
stage door left,
the only occasion witnessing
ala bumbling and fumbling performance\'
🤣
December 7th, 2021 04:11
While vehicle underwent routine oil change today...
L. B. Mek said:
\'Relentless desecration
of life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
barely restrained by laws
dime a dozen murderous sprees
now rarely witness capital punishment
and offtimes find villain acquitted
even garnering accolades
after exhibiting crocodile tears\'
November 23rd, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Relentless desecration
of life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
barely restrained by laws
dime a dozen murderous sprees
now rarely witness capital punishment
and offtimes find villain acquitted
even garnering accolades
after exhibiting crocodile tears\'
November 23rd, 2021 04:39
Circa October 7th 2020 papa passed away
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
October 1st, 2021 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
sorry for your loss
may he rest in peace
October 1st, 2021 03:35
Gonifs and gossips...
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve lived once or twice (thankfully not now), as the result of a rather chequered accommodation history, with groups of mendacious ratbags like that .... unspeakable really, but I\'m glad you did...
September 18th, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve lived once or twice (thankfully not now), as the result of a rather chequered accommodation history, with groups of mendacious ratbags like that .... unspeakable really, but I\'m glad you did...
September 18th, 2021 20:44
Off the beaten track
Doggerel Dave said:
I make it a habit to try to read your poetic contributions here..love the imagery, enjoy the language, but am exhausted by the end.
How do you continue to pump it out with so much imaginative verve? And why?
September 12th, 2021 05:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I make it a habit to try to read your poetic contributions here..love the imagery, enjoy the language, but am exhausted by the end.
How do you continue to pump it out with so much imaginative verve? And why?
September 12th, 2021 05:18
Umpteenth heat wave since onset of summer... sizzles Delaware Valley today August 25th, 2021
dusk arising said:
Will you be supporting measures to reduce and repair global warming at all. Starting with what LOL.
August 27th, 2021 10:48
dusk arising said:
Will you be supporting measures to reduce and repair global warming at all. Starting with what LOL.
August 27th, 2021 10:48
Prolonged offal bout courtesy constipation... redux a worse hellish fate than perdition
Doggerel Dave said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ic3g8Xnf7LI&ab_channel=cojwat
August 20th, 2021 23:43
Doggerel Dave said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ic3g8Xnf7LI&ab_channel=cojwat
August 20th, 2021 23:43
Upon our (yours truly and his missus) exchanging holy matrimony vows
L. B. Mek said:
\'All kibitizing aside, a requited love with zeal
I attest invisible spokes support unseen wheel
when turning sparking genuine care and concern
act as buffer against emotional hemorrhage
and received good housekeeping approval seal\'
a personalised dedication
and a fun read, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'All kibitizing aside, a requited love with zeal
I attest invisible spokes support unseen wheel
when turning sparking genuine care and concern
act as buffer against emotional hemorrhage
and received good housekeeping approval seal\'
a personalised dedication
and a fun read, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:17
August 13th, 2021 – twenty two years since...
Doggerel Dave said:
Bum days like that I term misfortune cascades or should\'a stayed in bed days...Commiserations.
August 13th, 2021 17:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Bum days like that I term misfortune cascades or should\'a stayed in bed days...Commiserations.
August 13th, 2021 17:25
Still reeling (albeit figuratively) after amidst realization... keys to apartment and 2009 Hyundai Sonata went missing
L. B. Mek said:
\'with blitzkrieg of emotional flak
bonafide, doggone fusillade
without rhyme nor reason knick knack
rained down
and thundered paddywhack, futile
against railing training, expert bombardier
\'no matter gunnery\'
(pro inside my head), raining one after another blow
I quickly lost track
impossible mission regarding wrack
con a sense, thus
yak... yak... yak...\'
(genuine lol wit, hidden - in each line!
such a fun poetic treat, in a read)
thank you for sharing
August 12th, 2021 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'with blitzkrieg of emotional flak
bonafide, doggone fusillade
without rhyme nor reason knick knack
rained down
and thundered paddywhack, futile
against railing training, expert bombardier
\'no matter gunnery\'
(pro inside my head), raining one after another blow
I quickly lost track
impossible mission regarding wrack
con a sense, thus
yak... yak... yak...\'
(genuine lol wit, hidden - in each line!
such a fun poetic treat, in a read)
thank you for sharing
August 12th, 2021 03:24
Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945
Doggerel Dave said:
One of the most foul and inhumane acts in modern history.
Well Writ.
August 6th, 2021 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
One of the most foul and inhumane acts in modern history.
Well Writ.
August 6th, 2021 19:32
Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945
Trenz Pruca said:
Unmitigated horror. Good write. Thank you.
August 6th, 2021 14:52
Trenz Pruca said:
Unmitigated horror. Good write. Thank you.
August 6th, 2021 14:52
Hiroshima – seventy six years since August 6th, 1945
orchidee said:
A fine write R. A hell on earth experience.
August 6th, 2021 10:58
orchidee said:
A fine write R. A hell on earth experience.
August 6th, 2021 10:58
Mine reddened pharynx constriction sorely limits ability to yell
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow clever, fantastic how you rhymed in each line. The Abel line yayy. Kudos for this poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow clever, fantastic how you rhymed in each line. The Abel line yayy. Kudos for this poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 12:53
Across figurative and literal board... mine hardscrabble existential debacle spelled losing game of trouble
L. B. Mek said:
\'cuz yours truly already familiarized
with self isolation
courtesy his social anxiety despair
schizoid personality disorder the diagnosis
nsync with loathsome
body morphology toward self
viz mental health impasse a legitimate malady
impossible mission possibly
since in utero didst impair
minimally abetted courtesy
Buffalo wing and a prayer
wishful thinking only death can relieve
some recently approaching year.)..
I just laud
the unflinching bravery of veracity
in everything you write, dear poet
a part of me that recognises
the raw angst of mental suffering
you eloquently depict, empathises with you;
still, unlike so many who can\'t find an outlet
for their pain
some of us, have been gifted that poetic release
of self-expression\'s - inked, escape...
a humbling experience to read your truth, dear poet
thank you for sharing
(I posted something a while back
that you might find relatable
and somewhat of a comfort to read, I know I often
go back to read it, as a reminder
that we\'re never alone, in our suffering when there are
so many who can share, relate and understand:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-124227 )
July 12th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'cuz yours truly already familiarized
with self isolation
courtesy his social anxiety despair
schizoid personality disorder the diagnosis
nsync with loathsome
body morphology toward self
viz mental health impasse a legitimate malady
impossible mission possibly
since in utero didst impair
minimally abetted courtesy
Buffalo wing and a prayer
wishful thinking only death can relieve
some recently approaching year.)..
I just laud
the unflinching bravery of veracity
in everything you write, dear poet
a part of me that recognises
the raw angst of mental suffering
you eloquently depict, empathises with you;
still, unlike so many who can\'t find an outlet
for their pain
some of us, have been gifted that poetic release
of self-expression\'s - inked, escape...
a humbling experience to read your truth, dear poet
thank you for sharing
(I posted something a while back
that you might find relatable
and somewhat of a comfort to read, I know I often
go back to read it, as a reminder
that we\'re never alone, in our suffering when there are
so many who can share, relate and understand:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-124227 )
July 12th, 2021 04:41
Circa sixty one years ago July 6th, 2001 - birth of dear beloved wife
L. B. Mek said:
what a wide lensed, all-encompassing
and yet beautifully measured dedication!
cheers, dear Poet 🍻
thanks for sharing, hope you had a great day!
\'and presently enjoy spouse as finest companion
no matter testosterone drive went in reverse
meaning to fiendish predilection fornicate moot.
Thee marriage strongly bolstered principally thru
playful dynamics and/or verbal/oral intercourse
resolving regular potential conflicts
sets virtual stage to stave off violent altercations
most likely regarding insignificant issue
summoning forth active/deep listening
a renewable (non toxic) resource.\'
to that gleaned, meaningful simplicity
in our unwavering sincerity
of devoted: loyalty
July 5th, 2021 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
what a wide lensed, all-encompassing
and yet beautifully measured dedication!
cheers, dear Poet 🍻
thanks for sharing, hope you had a great day!
\'and presently enjoy spouse as finest companion
no matter testosterone drive went in reverse
meaning to fiendish predilection fornicate moot.
Thee marriage strongly bolstered principally thru
playful dynamics and/or verbal/oral intercourse
resolving regular potential conflicts
sets virtual stage to stave off violent altercations
most likely regarding insignificant issue
summoning forth active/deep listening
a renewable (non toxic) resource.\'
to that gleaned, meaningful simplicity
in our unwavering sincerity
of devoted: loyalty
July 5th, 2021 06:42
Futile effort to plunger the clogged kitchen sink...
L. B. Mek said:
I read your title and smiled, expectantly
and continued to smile from first word to last
although - wincing, at just how devotedly: vivid
your informative write, decided to incorporate
the more - ehm, unsavoury - details
of your - ehm, gallantry exploits... lol
such a fun read, thank you dear Poet
July 1st, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
I read your title and smiled, expectantly
and continued to smile from first word to last
although - wincing, at just how devotedly: vivid
your informative write, decided to incorporate
the more - ehm, unsavoury - details
of your - ehm, gallantry exploits... lol
such a fun read, thank you dear Poet
July 1st, 2021 04:16
I (accompanied by my shadow)...
Doggerel Dave said:
I could relate to large swathes of that (housing - relations with officialdom - exercise - lockdown), thanks
June 26th, 2021 20:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I could relate to large swathes of that (housing - relations with officialdom - exercise - lockdown), thanks
June 26th, 2021 20:37
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