Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
I absconded with reader rabbit (Peter), to celebrate Saint Patrick\'s Day
Bella Shepard said:
A fine read, head spinning but in a good way. Erin go bragh!
March 17th, 2022 12:57
Bella Shepard said:
A fine read, head spinning but in a good way. Erin go bragh!
March 17th, 2022 12:57
Argh Daylight Savings Time – March 13th, 2022
orchidee said:
We have to wait two more weeks for it in the UK.
Did you spend that extra second wisely, that we had one year?! lol.
March 11th, 2022 14:11
orchidee said:
We have to wait two more weeks for it in the UK.
Did you spend that extra second wisely, that we had one year?! lol.
March 11th, 2022 14:11
Argh Daylight Savings Time – March 13th, 2022
Bella Shepard said:
Daylight savings time is the bain of my life, and I thank you for so vociferously giving it the critique that it truly deserves.
March 11th, 2022 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
Daylight savings time is the bain of my life, and I thank you for so vociferously giving it the critique that it truly deserves.
March 11th, 2022 13:34
Up up the fly away wig doth go revisited and revised March 10th, 2022...
L. B. Mek said:
🤣
March 11th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
🤣
March 11th, 2022 04:51
National Panic Wednesday March 9th, 2022 actually... every day
L. B. Mek said:
\'Deep sleep for the weary
appeared oh so heavenly,
on par with plate
of powder milk biscuits,
our mandate (analogous to pilgrims
adults and children -
forced to fight in crusades)
forbid cessation, thus to plod
and plow onward
despite overwhelming urge to plotz,
(not the slang definition)\'
March 10th, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Deep sleep for the weary
appeared oh so heavenly,
on par with plate
of powder milk biscuits,
our mandate (analogous to pilgrims
adults and children -
forced to fight in crusades)
forbid cessation, thus to plod
and plow onward
despite overwhelming urge to plotz,
(not the slang definition)\'
March 10th, 2022 04:14
Lyric micro essay masquerades as odd poetic story
L. B. Mek said:
\'into spasms of expiration, which whim far
fetched since the following conjecture
contrived within overactive imagination
of yours truly - such peculiar notions par
for the course sans striving
to become adroit
teasing out ethereal material
analogous to embrace
plasma up holding star
reed cosmic funereal invocation
loosing prognostication silencing war\'
\'unbeknownst to many edified readers
might consider myself brain cells few
explainable from being
chomped on by a carnivorous oldish gnu,
nevertheless unaffecting ability
to sire female progeny
re: guarding biological process\'
\'nonetheless, genetic heritage
comprised predominantly of Jew
genealogy heritage indeed
Ask Jeeves, cuz he knew
with one very late Uncle Lou\'
\'who suffered mad cow disease,
and considered hims
a milch cow and frequently did moo
calf full when bovine brand new
which found me to rue
what comprises reality to be true\'
\'wherein spooky monsters creep
along edge of night,
outer limits of twilight zone
serve as makeshift restraining: bar
21st century alchemist busily massages
a fictional holographic projection\'
\'Mild dystopian cracks open
cobwebbed laden figurative door
to my super charged
subconscious shrouded self -
portal carelessly left ajar
steeped in dark shadows,\'
\'swimming swiftly via viscous hue
biological processes extant
from equator far north
to Inuit housed in igloo\'
\'that all humans originated
from the primate zoo.\'
March 7th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'into spasms of expiration, which whim far
fetched since the following conjecture
contrived within overactive imagination
of yours truly - such peculiar notions par
for the course sans striving
to become adroit
teasing out ethereal material
analogous to embrace
plasma up holding star
reed cosmic funereal invocation
loosing prognostication silencing war\'
\'unbeknownst to many edified readers
might consider myself brain cells few
explainable from being
chomped on by a carnivorous oldish gnu,
nevertheless unaffecting ability
to sire female progeny
re: guarding biological process\'
\'nonetheless, genetic heritage
comprised predominantly of Jew
genealogy heritage indeed
Ask Jeeves, cuz he knew
with one very late Uncle Lou\'
\'who suffered mad cow disease,
and considered hims
a milch cow and frequently did moo
calf full when bovine brand new
which found me to rue
what comprises reality to be true\'
\'wherein spooky monsters creep
along edge of night,
outer limits of twilight zone
serve as makeshift restraining: bar
21st century alchemist busily massages
a fictional holographic projection\'
\'Mild dystopian cracks open
cobwebbed laden figurative door
to my super charged
subconscious shrouded self -
portal carelessly left ajar
steeped in dark shadows,\'
\'swimming swiftly via viscous hue
biological processes extant
from equator far north
to Inuit housed in igloo\'
\'that all humans originated
from the primate zoo.\'
March 7th, 2022 05:58
Putin as Vlad the Impaler reincarnate
Alexander Pope III said:
Best lines written in 2022 by anyone .The whole world should read this masterpiece. WOW WOW
March 5th, 2022 02:03
Alexander Pope III said:
Best lines written in 2022 by anyone .The whole world should read this masterpiece. WOW WOW
March 5th, 2022 02:03
Abhorrent vehement strife hijacking Homo sapiens
L. B. Mek said:
\'Antiestablishmentarian
inherent
malevolent violence
wracks
human species\'
yet again
March 4th, 2022 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Antiestablishmentarian
inherent
malevolent violence
wracks
human species\'
yet again
March 4th, 2022 05:58
Housekeeping not a strong suit with the missus
L. B. Mek said:
so dark, so dry
so funny! lol
March 1st, 2022 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
so dark, so dry
so funny! lol
March 1st, 2022 04:40
Sneezing fit – tests non deviated septum
L. B. Mek said:
\'set in motion
a chain reaction,
whence mine sensitive
proboscis honker (a wheeze hilly
little bridged fine tuned pug
nose aroma sensor),
got unexpectedly in gauged
(in holy matt
trim mo’ knee) to achew,
and eschew pledging troth (in favor
of hanky-panky) found
this chap feeling phlegmatic despite
an endless strings of faux
allergic emanations, which upon
subsiding left me throat
rather raspy and voice
some octaves
deeper, akin to a coterie
of celebrated jumping frogs\'
February 28th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'set in motion
a chain reaction,
whence mine sensitive
proboscis honker (a wheeze hilly
little bridged fine tuned pug
nose aroma sensor),
got unexpectedly in gauged
(in holy matt
trim mo’ knee) to achew,
and eschew pledging troth (in favor
of hanky-panky) found
this chap feeling phlegmatic despite
an endless strings of faux
allergic emanations, which upon
subsiding left me throat
rather raspy and voice
some octaves
deeper, akin to a coterie
of celebrated jumping frogs\'
February 28th, 2022 05:35
The Ujjayi breaths
Bella Shepard said:
I love the playfulness of your words. I attempt to meditate each day, but I also find my solitary dawn walks to be a form of inner peace for me as well. Walking alone with the early morning stars, moon, sunrise. And ending my day in the darkness of night speaking to the universe that holds so many mysteries. I love your poem and all its convolutions.
February 27th, 2022 10:47
Bella Shepard said:
I love the playfulness of your words. I attempt to meditate each day, but I also find my solitary dawn walks to be a form of inner peace for me as well. Walking alone with the early morning stars, moon, sunrise. And ending my day in the darkness of night speaking to the universe that holds so many mysteries. I love your poem and all its convolutions.
February 27th, 2022 10:47
Extra...extra...Trumpasaurus Extinction...
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into extraordinary language the pent up frustrations I\'ve been feeling for the 4 years of Trumpasaurus and his disgusting aftermath. What disgusts me equally are the followers who support him.
February 26th, 2022 12:42
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into extraordinary language the pent up frustrations I\'ve been feeling for the 4 years of Trumpasaurus and his disgusting aftermath. What disgusts me equally are the followers who support him.
February 26th, 2022 12:42
I experience inappetence...
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
How you find so many big words into one poem is a talent my friend. Also, go Ukraine!
February 25th, 2022 10:00
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
How you find so many big words into one poem is a talent my friend. Also, go Ukraine!
February 25th, 2022 10:00
I experience inappetence...
L. B. Mek said:
\'Wanton aggression unleashed
upon defenceless civilians
caught in the crosshairs
of abhorrent, indignant, repugnant...
pillaging, raping, trespassing,
violating, xing sacrosanct boundaries
against humble people.\'
February 25th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Wanton aggression unleashed
upon defenceless civilians
caught in the crosshairs
of abhorrent, indignant, repugnant...
pillaging, raping, trespassing,
violating, xing sacrosanct boundaries
against humble people.\'
February 25th, 2022 05:15
Extra...extra...Trumpasaurus Extinction...
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I know who you voted for
February 24th, 2022 11:50
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
I know who you voted for
February 24th, 2022 11:50
How glue me: On lacking sticktoitiveness
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Whatever I just read, do it again.
February 23rd, 2022 18:59
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Whatever I just read, do it again.
February 23rd, 2022 18:59
Gangly Longfellow walled in Thoreau and thru...
L. B. Mek said:
\'she quickly (albeit groggy), curtly
demanded fair remuneration
and milked infant me
as cash cow profiteer,
her eyes
aglitter signaling, shining, seeing... gold
let whoever sneer
earning money with initial gasp of air\'
February 18th, 2022 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'she quickly (albeit groggy), curtly
demanded fair remuneration
and milked infant me
as cash cow profiteer,
her eyes
aglitter signaling, shining, seeing... gold
let whoever sneer
earning money with initial gasp of air\'
February 18th, 2022 04:52
Existential crisis still encompasses mein kampf Valentine\'s day 2022
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was a mouthful to recite out loud, but in a GOOD way. This was a clever composition. Bravo! 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 11:45
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow! This was a mouthful to recite out loud, but in a GOOD way. This was a clever composition. Bravo! 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 11:45
Donald Trump must be permanently lambasted...
Paul Bell said:
Generally, when a President goes, you don\'t hear of them again, yet Trump just won\'t die, and if anything, the conspiracy theories won\'t go away either. Thank your lucky stars, you don\'t have Boris.
February 10th, 2022 12:37
Paul Bell said:
Generally, when a President goes, you don\'t hear of them again, yet Trump just won\'t die, and if anything, the conspiracy theories won\'t go away either. Thank your lucky stars, you don\'t have Boris.
February 10th, 2022 12:37
Donald Trump must be permanently lambasted...
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was something. Preach though! I had to read this with my dictionary by my side 🧐. Good job though. Trump is something from another universe.
February 10th, 2022 10:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was something. Preach though! I had to read this with my dictionary by my side 🧐. Good job though. Trump is something from another universe.
February 10th, 2022 10:16
Inferiority complex as a kid, adolescent and emerging adult
L. B. Mek said:
\'existed about joie de vivre,
and considerations about mortality irrelevant,
where soothsayers promised
our family staying alive for eternity
few and far between instances found me
acting, exhibiting, illustrating brazenly bold
behavior, said rare spontaneity\'
February 10th, 2022 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'existed about joie de vivre,
and considerations about mortality irrelevant,
where soothsayers promised
our family staying alive for eternity
few and far between instances found me
acting, exhibiting, illustrating brazenly bold
behavior, said rare spontaneity\'
February 10th, 2022 04:02
Lulled to sleep courtesy white noise of the fan
Buzz Bray said:
This is the kind of poetry best read in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village with a jazz trio backing you up. Jack Kerouac would love this. I did.
January 16th, 2022 16:47
Buzz Bray said:
This is the kind of poetry best read in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village with a jazz trio backing you up. Jack Kerouac would love this. I did.
January 16th, 2022 16:47
Deimos perplexing state of Martian crash test dummy
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! You should be reciting this to an audience in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village backed up by a jazz trio. I like it!
January 14th, 2022 19:47
Buzz Bray said:
Wow! You should be reciting this to an audience in a smoky night club in Greenwich Village backed up by a jazz trio. I like it!
January 14th, 2022 19:47
The Antics Of A Yoyo Thief
sophin said:
fantastic prose here. i love the tone that just jumps out here.
January 12th, 2022 14:55
sophin said:
fantastic prose here. i love the tone that just jumps out here.
January 12th, 2022 14:55
Wordsmith\'s worst nightmare
fruityfemme420 said:
wow i absolutely love your writing style, the flow is impeccable
January 10th, 2022 16:20
fruityfemme420 said:
wow i absolutely love your writing style, the flow is impeccable
January 10th, 2022 16:20
Nine lives removed from feline groovy and royal
L. B. Mek said:
Happy New Year!
dear Mad Hatter Poet, lol
\'whose body heat could
easily melt an igloo,
whereby
Eskimos accepted charity
from Korean philanthropists
named Joo\'
January 6th, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
Happy New Year!
dear Mad Hatter Poet, lol
\'whose body heat could
easily melt an igloo,
whereby
Eskimos accepted charity
from Korean philanthropists
named Joo\'
January 6th, 2022 04:00
MALEVOLENT MENTAL MAELSTROM
L. B. Mek said:
\'toady, an amphibious December 19th\'
genius!
December 20th, 2021 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'toady, an amphibious December 19th\'
genius!
December 20th, 2021 05:05
Bar none, no shortage of soap shampoo, nor detergent
L. B. Mek said:
\'but only tout poetic justice (mine)
to recognize laudable traits
linkedin to orthodox faiths,
albeit rationalistic rubric
that caters to selflessness
for no other reason than allowing, enabling, and promoting
random acts of kindness
without any forthcoming great expectation
downplaying remuneration,\'
December 17th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'but only tout poetic justice (mine)
to recognize laudable traits
linkedin to orthodox faiths,
albeit rationalistic rubric
that caters to selflessness
for no other reason than allowing, enabling, and promoting
random acts of kindness
without any forthcoming great expectation
downplaying remuneration,\'
December 17th, 2021 05:07
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