Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Happy 211th birthday Charles Dickens
jarcher54 said:
This was fun and creative... and a fitting tribute to an author who enriched our lives with memorable stories and characters and places like no one else. I recently read Dombey and Son and laughed and cried quite out loud. Thanks!!
February 7th, 2023 22:57
jarcher54 said:
This was fun and creative... and a fitting tribute to an author who enriched our lives with memorable stories and characters and places like no one else. I recently read Dombey and Son and laughed and cried quite out loud. Thanks!!
February 7th, 2023 22:57
Apple of my eye darling daughter numero deux gifted me...
Ok Waleed said:
Difficult to read
February 4th, 2023 12:01
Ok Waleed said:
Difficult to read
February 4th, 2023 12:01
Rampant and endemic police brutality...
L. B. Mek said:
\'Rather than raucously riot,
I craft emotions courtesy poetry
mine feeble attempt to agitate and protest
sublimated thru scathing poetic indictment\'
no dear cherished Poet, there is nothing lame
in these words, you gift the world
this is enough
we need not all bleed, to affect change
wisdom and insight disseminated
within our society
for generations to heed
can move more boundaries
and open more closed minds
than any act
of violence inducing, prostration or marching...
those days
of Thoreau heralded
and MLK, adopted
\'civil disobedience\'
are quickly becoming as forgotten
as the rest of history\'s, legacy
for heuristic methods of evolving..
modernity, instead
increases societal bottlenecks
of repressed tensions
then lets them spark
(in to shop window broken glass
and the looting
of the very neighbourhoods
being marginalised and neglected)
and then, all that self-righteous
unthinking fury, as energy
simply dissipates, with futility
once in a while, with a timely
news break or two
with imagery and words, angled just right to insure
such an impotent reactionary
blind zeal, to take hold
of embattled minds..
then
its, pseudo social movements
with tax exempt charity status
and clickbait branding hats n shirts
to fraudulently steal millions
from wannabe, money pledging
reactionary
@ # trending fashionably topical
feigning empathisers..
to shovel out of sight
centuries of complex
and regurgitated, subjugation tactics
far away, beneath
their pristine Persian carpets
out of sight
till those volcanoes of strife, once more
threaten to their way of life
and
its back to the old, tried n tested
methods of appeasement
distractions and evermore feigned
insidiously, subtle
subjugating, systemic tactics
(no dear Poet
were we to live in a time
when words could be heard
your sincere words, would have achieved
far more
than any modern day fruitless
march of anarchy and riot...)
you should be Proud
and humbly, I thank you!
for daring, for caring, for sharing
permit me to name you brethren
in this endless fight
for humanity, to not lose
all its ambitions, of humane
oneness
and genuinely empathetic togetherness...
January 27th, 2023 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'Rather than raucously riot,
I craft emotions courtesy poetry
mine feeble attempt to agitate and protest
sublimated thru scathing poetic indictment\'
no dear cherished Poet, there is nothing lame
in these words, you gift the world
this is enough
we need not all bleed, to affect change
wisdom and insight disseminated
within our society
for generations to heed
can move more boundaries
and open more closed minds
than any act
of violence inducing, prostration or marching...
those days
of Thoreau heralded
and MLK, adopted
\'civil disobedience\'
are quickly becoming as forgotten
as the rest of history\'s, legacy
for heuristic methods of evolving..
modernity, instead
increases societal bottlenecks
of repressed tensions
then lets them spark
(in to shop window broken glass
and the looting
of the very neighbourhoods
being marginalised and neglected)
and then, all that self-righteous
unthinking fury, as energy
simply dissipates, with futility
once in a while, with a timely
news break or two
with imagery and words, angled just right to insure
such an impotent reactionary
blind zeal, to take hold
of embattled minds..
then
its, pseudo social movements
with tax exempt charity status
and clickbait branding hats n shirts
to fraudulently steal millions
from wannabe, money pledging
reactionary
@ # trending fashionably topical
feigning empathisers..
to shovel out of sight
centuries of complex
and regurgitated, subjugation tactics
far away, beneath
their pristine Persian carpets
out of sight
till those volcanoes of strife, once more
threaten to their way of life
and
its back to the old, tried n tested
methods of appeasement
distractions and evermore feigned
insidiously, subtle
subjugating, systemic tactics
(no dear Poet
were we to live in a time
when words could be heard
your sincere words, would have achieved
far more
than any modern day fruitless
march of anarchy and riot...)
you should be Proud
and humbly, I thank you!
for daring, for caring, for sharing
permit me to name you brethren
in this endless fight
for humanity, to not lose
all its ambitions, of humane
oneness
and genuinely empathetic togetherness...
January 27th, 2023 05:25
The missus unflagging crocheting efforts as Betsy Ross incarnate
L. B. Mek said:
(well, maybe not pitch perfect
a poetic serenade
still, much better than the usual
jovial ridicule...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope she appreciated it
January 23rd, 2023 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
(well, maybe not pitch perfect
a poetic serenade
still, much better than the usual
jovial ridicule...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
hope she appreciated it
January 23rd, 2023 04:40
Ephemeral social media rendezvous
L. B. Mek said:
\'fledgling cyber acquaintanceships
dead on the vine, yours truly sighed\'
I read and related, sighing in mutual
lamentation
there are far more poisonous
humans, than
insects or snakes, on our planet
far, far more!
January 20th, 2023 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'fledgling cyber acquaintanceships
dead on the vine, yours truly sighed\'
I read and related, sighing in mutual
lamentation
there are far more poisonous
humans, than
insects or snakes, on our planet
far, far more!
January 20th, 2023 06:08
January 13th, 2023
L. B. Mek said:
\'she madly gesticulated\'
lol
your poor missus
I\'ve never comes across a \'muse\'
lambasted by words
in every possible way imaginable
can\'t imagine how much making-up
it costs you to write anything
great fun!
January 16th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'she madly gesticulated\'
lol
your poor missus
I\'ve never comes across a \'muse\'
lambasted by words
in every possible way imaginable
can\'t imagine how much making-up
it costs you to write anything
great fun!
January 16th, 2023 04:55
Inextricably rooted with hair fixation
L. B. Mek said:
so funny!
an early happy birthday for the 23rd
in case I forget or have miscalculated
they say 60 is the new 40
hope you have a great day and a peaceful
yet rewarding year ahead, dear cherished Poet
here\'s to you and yours
Happy New Year as well
🍾🥂👏
January 9th, 2023 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
so funny!
an early happy birthday for the 23rd
in case I forget or have miscalculated
they say 60 is the new 40
hope you have a great day and a peaceful
yet rewarding year ahead, dear cherished Poet
here\'s to you and yours
Happy New Year as well
🍾🥂👏
January 9th, 2023 05:31
Balmy january fifth two thousand twenty three
L. B. Mek said:
\'pardon moi as I self plagiarize\'
I so relate!
feel exactly the same at the start of every scribble
Happy New Year! dear cherished Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'pardon moi as I self plagiarize\'
I so relate!
feel exactly the same at the start of every scribble
Happy New Year! dear cherished Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:21
CIPROFLOXACIN HCL 500 MG remedied urinary tract infection
BlessedbyGod said:
Been there, countless of times,that medication leaves a bad taste in your mouth
December 25th, 2022 17:25
BlessedbyGod said:
Been there, countless of times,that medication leaves a bad taste in your mouth
December 25th, 2022 17:25
Jinxed jesting jejune junior jobber...
L. B. Mek said:
you absolute genius
I always wanted to attempt something similar
but lacked the staying power
great fun, as-ever
thank you! dear Poet
(hope you and your loved ones have a great festive season)
December 12th, 2022 01:22
L. B. Mek said:
you absolute genius
I always wanted to attempt something similar
but lacked the staying power
great fun, as-ever
thank you! dear Poet
(hope you and your loved ones have a great festive season)
December 12th, 2022 01:22
I relished being hungry for Thanksgiving pop slop gloppy grub
L. B. Mek said:
\'after enjoying repast,
(fit for a tarnished king),
yours truly able, eager, and ready
to soak my ego freezing carcass in a hot tub.
Hmm... on second thought
lemme apprise others
on the verge against starving themselves,\'
\'to deliberate paranoid Machiavellian flub
courtesy the missus attempted to poison me
(courtesy arse cynic
no – not really)
actually
aborted cuz nanobots
loosed upon body
gripped with rigor mortis,
a minor inconvenient truth
with earthling in balance,
cuz odorless and tasteless deadly toxins
rendered me convalescing
from bout with death, an oxymoronic
former slenderman gourmand.\'
\'truth be told, I
only eat one meal per day
all day
from son up to son down, me
a force
tubby reckoned with, who
if he gives way to vice
event chew wooly (mammouth)
experiences remorse.
Hum glad to share
mine reasonably rhyming hook
twenty six letters linkedin amidst
various combinations, formations, permutations,...
allows, enables, and provides a look
into the mindscape of Matthew Scott Harris
doth show himself with steely dangling
nonsense without pride nor prejudice,
nor sense and sensibility he forsook.\'
November 25th, 2022 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'after enjoying repast,
(fit for a tarnished king),
yours truly able, eager, and ready
to soak my ego freezing carcass in a hot tub.
Hmm... on second thought
lemme apprise others
on the verge against starving themselves,\'
\'to deliberate paranoid Machiavellian flub
courtesy the missus attempted to poison me
(courtesy arse cynic
no – not really)
actually
aborted cuz nanobots
loosed upon body
gripped with rigor mortis,
a minor inconvenient truth
with earthling in balance,
cuz odorless and tasteless deadly toxins
rendered me convalescing
from bout with death, an oxymoronic
former slenderman gourmand.\'
\'truth be told, I
only eat one meal per day
all day
from son up to son down, me
a force
tubby reckoned with, who
if he gives way to vice
event chew wooly (mammouth)
experiences remorse.
Hum glad to share
mine reasonably rhyming hook
twenty six letters linkedin amidst
various combinations, formations, permutations,...
allows, enables, and provides a look
into the mindscape of Matthew Scott Harris
doth show himself with steely dangling
nonsense without pride nor prejudice,
nor sense and sensibility he forsook.\'
November 25th, 2022 04:06
Collisions between yours truly and the missus
L. B. Mek said:
\'I lichen their trail
to how tornado didst mold\'
\'tale\', even
lol
I could read each of your works time n again
and find something new
to tantalise my geeky literary needs..
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
November 18th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'I lichen their trail
to how tornado didst mold\'
\'tale\', even
lol
I could read each of your works time n again
and find something new
to tantalise my geeky literary needs..
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
November 18th, 2022 05:26
Harriet Harris circa November 13th, 1935 - ~ May 4th, 2005
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss
dear Poet
may she rest in peace
November 14th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m sorry for your loss
dear Poet
may she rest in peace
November 14th, 2022 04:28
Worry knot chokes out the living daylights
orchidee said:
I tied a knot in a piece of string to remember summat, but then forgot what I was trying to remember. All I remembered was tying a knot in the string. Doh! lol.
November 11th, 2022 15:30
orchidee said:
I tied a knot in a piece of string to remember summat, but then forgot what I was trying to remember. All I remembered was tying a knot in the string. Doh! lol.
November 11th, 2022 15:30
Doomsday Clock minute hand...
E Naughton said:
Dark! But sad reality, if not the nuclear option climate is coming anyway, enjoy today tomorrow may be dark
November 7th, 2022 16:37
E Naughton said:
Dark! But sad reality, if not the nuclear option climate is coming anyway, enjoy today tomorrow may be dark
November 7th, 2022 16:37
Cybersurfing netizen flounders...
L. B. Mek said:
\'I Yearn analogous to phototropism
for life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
allowed, enabled, and provided
every quintessential organic material
jump/kickstarted on planet earth,
without gofundme seed money\'
I too, yearn
for those lost tethers, dear poet
\'tether\'s to a time when
this gifted experience of existence
wasn\'t filtered:
through pixel screens
mouse clicks, endlessly scrolling screens
and face masks, as our independence
white flags
in relinquished society\'s, removal of unity
from our # vocabulary
this, incarnation of self
as our modernity\'s
newfound
collective identity...
November 7th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'I Yearn analogous to phototropism
for life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
allowed, enabled, and provided
every quintessential organic material
jump/kickstarted on planet earth,
without gofundme seed money\'
I too, yearn
for those lost tethers, dear poet
\'tether\'s to a time when
this gifted experience of existence
wasn\'t filtered:
through pixel screens
mouse clicks, endlessly scrolling screens
and face masks, as our independence
white flags
in relinquished society\'s, removal of unity
from our # vocabulary
this, incarnation of self
as our modernity\'s
newfound
collective identity...
November 7th, 2022 05:23
Cybersurfing netizen flounders...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An awesome intellectual poem, brilliant muse indeed of the way things are. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 7th, 2022 00:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An awesome intellectual poem, brilliant muse indeed of the way things are. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 7th, 2022 00:33
Argh daylight savings time ends – 2:00 AM November 6th 2022
orchidee said:
We had it a week ago in the UK.
We had a few extra days of it being lighter though, as the dates worked out for the year.
November 5th, 2022 03:57
orchidee said:
We had it a week ago in the UK.
We had a few extra days of it being lighter though, as the dates worked out for the year.
November 5th, 2022 03:57
À propos preponderant passion penning poems...
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to differentiate
jagged fine line between
passion and obsession\'
Amen!
November 4th, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to differentiate
jagged fine line between
passion and obsession\'
Amen!
November 4th, 2022 04:12
Coloring smiling faces donned with faux missing teeth,
L. B. Mek said:
reading fable and fantasy is fine
but I too don\'t go out of my way
to verify if there be ghosts n stuff
amongst us
reality, is spooky enough for me..
I just have to be lost in-thought
for a simple hello or tap on the shoulders
have me impersonating
Doc from Back to the Future..
lol
another fun read
October 31st, 2022 08:05
L. B. Mek said:
reading fable and fantasy is fine
but I too don\'t go out of my way
to verify if there be ghosts n stuff
amongst us
reality, is spooky enough for me..
I just have to be lost in-thought
for a simple hello or tap on the shoulders
have me impersonating
Doc from Back to the Future..
lol
another fun read
October 31st, 2022 08:05
Twice told toilet tale – a cheeky execrable gross fable
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
\'That aha i.e.eureka moment
prompted me to utter “holy shit”
when a chain reaction similar
to volcanic rush of air took place
within the planet.\'
(literary critique elitist\'s
could heed
your poetic wisdom\'s excreta
of realism)
thank you! for the fun read dear Poet
October 24th, 2022 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
\'That aha i.e.eureka moment
prompted me to utter “holy shit”
when a chain reaction similar
to volcanic rush of air took place
within the planet.\'
(literary critique elitist\'s
could heed
your poetic wisdom\'s excreta
of realism)
thank you! for the fun read dear Poet
October 24th, 2022 03:57
Twice told toilet tale – a cheeky execrable gross fable
Doggerel Dave said:
Many (all?) of your pieces are possessed of more than a little indelicate sense of the humour to be found in whatever subject you are focused on. None more so than this \'un. A bargain too - one gets at least three chunky sized pieces for the price of one....🙂
October 23rd, 2022 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Many (all?) of your pieces are possessed of more than a little indelicate sense of the humour to be found in whatever subject you are focused on. None more so than this \'un. A bargain too - one gets at least three chunky sized pieces for the price of one....🙂
October 23rd, 2022 17:14
Snaggletooth The Snitch
Doggerel Dave said:
Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always get amusement out of yorr pieces, even if I don\'t always reach quite the end....... How, where do you find the time , energy and imagination?
September 26th, 2022 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always get amusement out of yorr pieces, even if I don\'t always reach quite the end....... How, where do you find the time , energy and imagination?
September 26th, 2022 19:51
Rosh Hashshana 2022
orchidee said:
Happy New Year! i never knew there was so much to it, as expressed here. Well, I know now! lol.
Solemn day soon - Day of Atonement? Do you observe Succoth/Booth/Shelters festival?
September 25th, 2022 13:19
orchidee said:
Happy New Year! i never knew there was so much to it, as expressed here. Well, I know now! lol.
Solemn day soon - Day of Atonement? Do you observe Succoth/Booth/Shelters festival?
September 25th, 2022 13:19
anticipatory anxiety fosters catastrophization...,
Lincoln said:
Wow! I\'m impressed
September 2nd, 2022 16:19
Lincoln said:
Wow! I\'m impressed
September 2nd, 2022 16:19
Whar art thou dame of my dream?
L. B. Mek said:
\'when husband
in delicto flagrante
no matter figment..\'
what a poetic mind you choose to share, dear Poet
thank you!
another wondrous adventure of wordplay
in a read, what a treat
August 9th, 2022 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'when husband
in delicto flagrante
no matter figment..\'
what a poetic mind you choose to share, dear Poet
thank you!
another wondrous adventure of wordplay
in a read, what a treat
August 9th, 2022 02:02
SO DELICIOUS salted caramel cluster made with cashew milk
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wait, have you tasted those \'beyond meat\' range of vegan alternatives
as in that \'beyond burger\'..
kinda scary
I used to be furious at how the the left is trying to kill
agriculture trade, especially meat
(just look at the Euro farmer\'s strikes)
but then, if they\'re gonna make
vegan
taste, so good
well..
erm
I think I will sit on the fence for a bit
with me, erm beans & stuff
burger, in one hand
and lovely grilled traditional cheeseburger, in the other..
lol
August 8th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wait, have you tasted those \'beyond meat\' range of vegan alternatives
as in that \'beyond burger\'..
kinda scary
I used to be furious at how the the left is trying to kill
agriculture trade, especially meat
(just look at the Euro farmer\'s strikes)
but then, if they\'re gonna make
vegan
taste, so good
well..
erm
I think I will sit on the fence for a bit
with me, erm beans & stuff
burger, in one hand
and lovely grilled traditional cheeseburger, in the other..
lol
August 8th, 2022 03:54
Hiroshima – seventy seven years since August 6th, 1945
Jasmine Swift said:
I didn\'t even know this happened! I\'m honestly so in shock by how you wrote this. The words, the painting of the picture, the emotion. I don\'t know what shocks me the most!
August 7th, 2022 20:43
Jasmine Swift said:
I didn\'t even know this happened! I\'m honestly so in shock by how you wrote this. The words, the painting of the picture, the emotion. I don\'t know what shocks me the most!
August 7th, 2022 20:43
Hiroshima – seventy seven years since August 6th, 1945
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the reminder.
Feels as if it\'s moving in that direction again...
August 6th, 2022 20:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the reminder.
Feels as if it\'s moving in that direction again...
August 6th, 2022 20:01
Palm History Awash With Drips
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to defeat
except poe wet tickly\'
ermm defeat poe, say what now?
lol
(an adventure within genius
thoughts and musings
just a privilege to read and get lost
within)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(@ our palm prints of life)
lol
August 5th, 2022 02:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to defeat
except poe wet tickly\'
ermm defeat poe, say what now?
lol
(an adventure within genius
thoughts and musings
just a privilege to read and get lost
within)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(@ our palm prints of life)
lol
August 5th, 2022 02:01
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