Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Good news came my way today February 21, 2021 courtesy late father
L. B. Mek said:
\'divided three ways
bequeathed to yours truly
and my two non-twisted sisters.\'
\'a financial life raft
I will devotedly and blessedly cling.\'
\'Figurative dark shadow ameliorate
I must, cuz unpaid charges create
unnecessary uneasiness and emasculate
like invisible fetters tellingly generate
principal abuzz with interest initiate
tingling goosebumps think back,
when Iraq invaded Kuwait.\'..
congratulations, firstly on having \'non\' twisted sisters: that\'s more unlikely that the windfall you celebrate, or else like most you would\'ve been rhyming about a court case.. (poor Spinoza) lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing enjoy your good \'fortune\'
February 22nd, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'divided three ways
bequeathed to yours truly
and my two non-twisted sisters.\'
\'a financial life raft
I will devotedly and blessedly cling.\'
\'Figurative dark shadow ameliorate
I must, cuz unpaid charges create
unnecessary uneasiness and emasculate
like invisible fetters tellingly generate
principal abuzz with interest initiate
tingling goosebumps think back,
when Iraq invaded Kuwait.\'..
congratulations, firstly on having \'non\' twisted sisters: that\'s more unlikely that the windfall you celebrate, or else like most you would\'ve been rhyming about a court case.. (poor Spinoza) lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing enjoy your good \'fortune\'
February 22nd, 2021 06:16
Anticlimactic mood after February 18th, 2021 snow storm subsided
L. B. Mek said:
\'coaxing poem into existence
unsure how literary endeavor
(mine) will thrive
amidst well suited
panoply of prolific writers,
whose unseen fingers
hop lightly and gracefully
across qwerty computer keyboard
akin to heavy armed soldiers
with fearlessness and deliberation
heading off to war to acquire poetic license.\'
forget mere \'thrive\', you sir: soar unmasking lanes we never knew existed, with that unique style and your insistence to breathe art into life\'s everyday - dreary!
I for one, look forward to your next share dear poet, every time
February 19th, 2021 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'coaxing poem into existence
unsure how literary endeavor
(mine) will thrive
amidst well suited
panoply of prolific writers,
whose unseen fingers
hop lightly and gracefully
across qwerty computer keyboard
akin to heavy armed soldiers
with fearlessness and deliberation
heading off to war to acquire poetic license.\'
forget mere \'thrive\', you sir: soar unmasking lanes we never knew existed, with that unique style and your insistence to breathe art into life\'s everyday - dreary!
I for one, look forward to your next share dear poet, every time
February 19th, 2021 06:24
Late morning today (February 17, 2021)
L. B. Mek said:
you must be such a great conversationalist..
as dry as it can get and yet, a warming depiction of realism
yes, truly - imbued within your words is the art: to living!
thank you for sharing:
\'both of us essentially undertook round trip
to Schwenksville and back
without rhyme nor reason.
Subsequently, an idea dawned\'
behold dear poet:
\'your reason - in rhyme, no less\'...
February 18th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
you must be such a great conversationalist..
as dry as it can get and yet, a warming depiction of realism
yes, truly - imbued within your words is the art: to living!
thank you for sharing:
\'both of us essentially undertook round trip
to Schwenksville and back
without rhyme nor reason.
Subsequently, an idea dawned\'
behold dear poet:
\'your reason - in rhyme, no less\'...
February 18th, 2021 06:16
Valentine\'s Day 2021
L. B. Mek said:
so good, your write\'s never fail to bring back childhood\'s carefree self-indulgent \'all teeth n gums\', foolish grins...
thank you for choosing to share your brilliance dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
so good, your write\'s never fail to bring back childhood\'s carefree self-indulgent \'all teeth n gums\', foolish grins...
thank you for choosing to share your brilliance dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 05:47
Valentine\'s Day 2021
Doggerel Dave said:
:-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
February 14th, 2021 19:04
Doggerel Dave said:
:-) I dunno what else to say - \'cept I enjoyed it...
February 14th, 2021 19:04
How convenient slated to receive second dose... COVID-19 February 13th, 2021
L. B. Mek said:
we need a genius calibre word for witty, cause \'sharp\': just aint gona be enough....:
\'No qualm regarding being vaccinated
though yours truly NOT panic stricken
succumbing to aforementioned disease.
Although gaseous and prone to combust
heed words of caution lest ye turn to dust
on par with thermonuclear explosion gust
no guarantee insured courtesy Healthtrust
will keep ye intact not transformed into krust\'
February 12th, 2021 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
we need a genius calibre word for witty, cause \'sharp\': just aint gona be enough....:
\'No qualm regarding being vaccinated
though yours truly NOT panic stricken
succumbing to aforementioned disease.
Although gaseous and prone to combust
heed words of caution lest ye turn to dust
on par with thermonuclear explosion gust
no guarantee insured courtesy Healthtrust
will keep ye intact not transformed into krust\'
February 12th, 2021 07:01
Watching toilet bowl lv highlight of snowy February 7th, 2021
L. B. Mek said:
that second stanza had me grinning like a fool...
thanks for sharing a very revealing yet witty read, dear Poet
\'Yours truly risk averse
which characteristic,
I declare constitutes curse
thus isolation found me sprawled out
upon wuthering heights
against regular diet of diatribes
delivered carte blanche
with expletive filled verse\'
February 9th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
that second stanza had me grinning like a fool...
thanks for sharing a very revealing yet witty read, dear Poet
\'Yours truly risk averse
which characteristic,
I declare constitutes curse
thus isolation found me sprawled out
upon wuthering heights
against regular diet of diatribes
delivered carte blanche
with expletive filled verse\'
February 9th, 2021 04:45
Watching toilet bowl lv highlight of snowy February 7th, 2021
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing inconvenient about finding a public convenience when we need one!
February 8th, 2021 02:46
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing inconvenient about finding a public convenience when we need one!
February 8th, 2021 02:46
Hanging pictures today February 5th, 2021 with the missus...
FredPeyer said:
Truly enjoyed your poem r42n, made me smile. You do have a way with words! But you kind of wandered off from hanging that picture. Having three grown kids and six grand-kids I am with you on the \'dad role\'. By the way, getting back to that picture, did you ever get it up there, and is it straight?
February 5th, 2021 19:05
FredPeyer said:
Truly enjoyed your poem r42n, made me smile. You do have a way with words! But you kind of wandered off from hanging that picture. Having three grown kids and six grand-kids I am with you on the \'dad role\'. By the way, getting back to that picture, did you ever get it up there, and is it straight?
February 5th, 2021 19:05
February fourth nineteen ninety nine...
L. B. Mek said:
congratulations
to you and your child
at this landmark celebration year
of Twenty Two...
\'Tethered to umbilical cord
analogous to astronaut
linkedin to mother ship
bobbing and weaving
once forced out the womb
thru metaphorical fjord
inconsolable offspring crying,
no matter papa implored
though nonreligious, nevertheless
ofttimes paradoxically invoking lord.\'
you\'re such a talented wordsmith,
thank you for sharing dear Poet
February 5th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
congratulations
to you and your child
at this landmark celebration year
of Twenty Two...
\'Tethered to umbilical cord
analogous to astronaut
linkedin to mother ship
bobbing and weaving
once forced out the womb
thru metaphorical fjord
inconsolable offspring crying,
no matter papa implored
though nonreligious, nevertheless
ofttimes paradoxically invoking lord.\'
you\'re such a talented wordsmith,
thank you for sharing dear Poet
February 5th, 2021 05:44
Hey Mitch McConnell... about all this talk (I hear) about indefatigable (Phila/ Philly-buster)
rew4er2nail said:
wow! just the mere knowledge you perused one or more of my poems (though no commentary left) uplifts my spirits at the notions we became linkedin ro our respective spirits. thus, thank you for merely being alive unwittingly to kickstart momentary euphoric state of consciousness.
January 25th, 2021 12:37
rew4er2nail said:
wow! just the mere knowledge you perused one or more of my poems (though no commentary left) uplifts my spirits at the notions we became linkedin ro our respective spirits. thus, thank you for merely being alive unwittingly to kickstart momentary euphoric state of consciousness.
January 25th, 2021 12:37
Goodbye and good riddance former ersatz trumpeting president
L. B. Mek said:
I like your subtle title,
in this world of fence seating conformity, it reads refreshingly bold and straight-to-the-point: brevity, I think they call it, lol
January 22nd, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
I like your subtle title,
in this world of fence seating conformity, it reads refreshingly bold and straight-to-the-point: brevity, I think they call it, lol
January 22nd, 2021 05:53
Goodbye and good riddance former ersatz trumpeting president
FredPeyer said:
All I can say is good riddance. Not to your poem, I like that one, but to the yellow haired one.
January 21st, 2021 22:22
FredPeyer said:
All I can say is good riddance. Not to your poem, I like that one, but to the yellow haired one.
January 21st, 2021 22:22
Abhorrent vehement strife hijacking Homo sapiens
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve done it again - great stuff!
But how?
Regards
January 20th, 2021 18:12
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve done it again - great stuff!
But how?
Regards
January 20th, 2021 18:12
I thoroughly enjoy dialogue with continuity
L. B. Mek said:
a brilliant roller-coaster ride upon your stream of consciousness, it just needed to start with: \'dear Diary today I...\' lol
you have a brilliant mind and I thank you for sharing your scribbling talents with us mere more mortals dear sir,
\'... heavily shuns engaging in diatribe
loathes bombastic, egotistic,
imperialistic, narcissistic, terroristic...
zealot trumpeting art of the deal
if necessary even coaxing bribe.
I would be up to the task and not averse
to extemporize unless stage fright did curse
ambition to chat up intellectual conversation ...\'
January 19th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
a brilliant roller-coaster ride upon your stream of consciousness, it just needed to start with: \'dear Diary today I...\' lol
you have a brilliant mind and I thank you for sharing your scribbling talents with us mere more mortals dear sir,
\'... heavily shuns engaging in diatribe
loathes bombastic, egotistic,
imperialistic, narcissistic, terroristic...
zealot trumpeting art of the deal
if necessary even coaxing bribe.
I would be up to the task and not averse
to extemporize unless stage fright did curse
ambition to chat up intellectual conversation ...\'
January 19th, 2021 05:20
The revered Reverend Martin Luther King Junior
orchidee said:
A fine write and remembrance R.
January 18th, 2021 03:23
orchidee said:
A fine write and remembrance R.
January 18th, 2021 03:23
Donald Trump must be permanently barred and furloughed from Whitehouse
L. B. Mek said:
\'that and another woman to bareback jump
disseminating gene pool –
Obama null lee birthing
more quackers and additionally doth hump
the mass media as some foolhardy charade
and caricature of a frazzled grump
this arboreal clothed ape
erecting taj mahal phallic symbol\'
this section reads disturbingly like a racist chauvinist tirade Trump may write himself, which would just be pathetic!
hope I\'m mistaken and exemplifying my vocabulary limitations or intellect in general, I hope...
January 11th, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'that and another woman to bareback jump
disseminating gene pool –
Obama null lee birthing
more quackers and additionally doth hump
the mass media as some foolhardy charade
and caricature of a frazzled grump
this arboreal clothed ape
erecting taj mahal phallic symbol\'
this section reads disturbingly like a racist chauvinist tirade Trump may write himself, which would just be pathetic!
hope I\'m mistaken and exemplifying my vocabulary limitations or intellect in general, I hope...
January 11th, 2021 06:14
Premature irrelevance of Donald Trump?
orchidee said:
He\'s got to go. It\'s a last evil attempt by him to get back in power.
January 7th, 2021 03:10
orchidee said:
He\'s got to go. It\'s a last evil attempt by him to get back in power.
January 7th, 2021 03:10
Premature irrelevance of Donald Trump?
dusk arising said:
And not a mention of the cool dignity of the profound speech by your president elect Biden. Showing his mettle as a true believer in democracy.
January 6th, 2021 19:25
dusk arising said:
And not a mention of the cool dignity of the profound speech by your president elect Biden. Showing his mettle as a true believer in democracy.
January 6th, 2021 19:25
“Auld Lang Syne” - the most-sung New Year\'s Eve song
L. B. Mek said:
Burn\'s is one of my all time favourites, contrast between that burly proud Scot with earth under his nails and those tender - empathetic words inked from his fingers,
is what makes Poetry so unique in all of literature to me,
that you can have all the \'culture\' and \'learned\' facts to-hand and go through life without penning a single word of \'meaningful\' poetry and yet, someone who can barely spell their own name: can phonetically weave words of pure life-affirming Poetic insight, is such a unique aspect of life...
(or that\'s my understanding of why Burn\'s \'chose\' to write in his proud Scottish tongue, adding all that \'context\' to insure his write\'s are distinguished and cherished as much today, as they were when he first decided to share them)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686
December 29th, 2020 06:19
L. B. Mek said:
Burn\'s is one of my all time favourites, contrast between that burly proud Scot with earth under his nails and those tender - empathetic words inked from his fingers,
is what makes Poetry so unique in all of literature to me,
that you can have all the \'culture\' and \'learned\' facts to-hand and go through life without penning a single word of \'meaningful\' poetry and yet, someone who can barely spell their own name: can phonetically weave words of pure life-affirming Poetic insight, is such a unique aspect of life...
(or that\'s my understanding of why Burn\'s \'chose\' to write in his proud Scottish tongue, adding all that \'context\' to insure his write\'s are distinguished and cherished as much today, as they were when he first decided to share them)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686
December 29th, 2020 06:19
“Auld Lang Syne” - the most-sung New Year\'s Eve song
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I learned to sing that song (along with others by Robert Burns) from my mother (1906-81), who I think learned it from her mother. Scots have told me that my heavy Scots burr sounds archaic today.
December 28th, 2020 20:01
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I learned to sing that song (along with others by Robert Burns) from my mother (1906-81), who I think learned it from her mother. Scots have told me that my heavy Scots burr sounds archaic today.
December 28th, 2020 20:01
“Auld Lang Syne” - the most-sung New Year\'s Eve song
Jerry Reynolds said:
:-) Happy New Year
December 28th, 2020 17:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
:-) Happy New Year
December 28th, 2020 17:42
No longer hungering for an appetite
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Happy New Year
December 27th, 2020 16:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Happy New Year
December 27th, 2020 16:24
Thursday, December 31, 2020 signals conclusion of latest leap year
Jerry Reynolds said:
This will end. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 13:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
This will end. Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 13:38
I crown the missus \"champ impractical joker\"
L. B. Mek said:
\'these words zealously, randomly, haphazardly
scattered across screen willy nilly I spew
trying to coerce coalescence of continuity
yet additionally trying to weave events
earlier today December 22nd, I review,
whereby yours truly while waiting in a queue\'
while I can\'t grasp all the details you crammed into this \'fun-tabulous\' write, I can testify to its melodically delectable \'lol\' - qualities, what a fun read at this challenging time of all-things serious and dreary,
Happy Holidays and thanks for sharing, my regards to your \'muse\'
December 24th, 2020 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'these words zealously, randomly, haphazardly
scattered across screen willy nilly I spew
trying to coerce coalescence of continuity
yet additionally trying to weave events
earlier today December 22nd, I review,
whereby yours truly while waiting in a queue\'
while I can\'t grasp all the details you crammed into this \'fun-tabulous\' write, I can testify to its melodically delectable \'lol\' - qualities, what a fun read at this challenging time of all-things serious and dreary,
Happy Holidays and thanks for sharing, my regards to your \'muse\'
December 24th, 2020 05:08
Winter solstice 2020 in Northern Hemisphere
L. B. Mek said:
an enthralling read of what is a didactic write,
worth reading a few times to grasp at the complexities woven within its references, sadly I\'m too ignorant of the necessary fundamentals to understand it all:
\'who govern Geico and Nationwide
renown companies insuring property on hillside
made of ticky tack
indirectly, fuelled, impacted, and launched
segregation and next of kin apartheid.\'
but these words of Capitalism\'s universal disregard - to all things: deemed as \'unworthy\', I can relate to easily,
erm is it ok if I wish you \'Happy Holidays\'?
stay safe
December 22nd, 2020 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
an enthralling read of what is a didactic write,
worth reading a few times to grasp at the complexities woven within its references, sadly I\'m too ignorant of the necessary fundamentals to understand it all:
\'who govern Geico and Nationwide
renown companies insuring property on hillside
made of ticky tack
indirectly, fuelled, impacted, and launched
segregation and next of kin apartheid.\'
but these words of Capitalism\'s universal disregard - to all things: deemed as \'unworthy\', I can relate to easily,
erm is it ok if I wish you \'Happy Holidays\'?
stay safe
December 22nd, 2020 06:02
Winter solstice 2020 in Northern Hemisphere
orchidee said:
Doh! One year I missed it. It fell a day earlier on Dec 20th! lol.
I never knew so much happened in a Solstice. Well, I know now!
December 22nd, 2020 02:55
orchidee said:
Doh! One year I missed it. It fell a day earlier on Dec 20th! lol.
I never knew so much happened in a Solstice. Well, I know now!
December 22nd, 2020 02:55
Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity
Doggerel Dave said:
Anyone there in a happy spot? :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 01:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Anyone there in a happy spot? :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 01:02
Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity
jarcher54 said:
Goodness! I forgive you --I think! (-:
December 16th, 2020 22:59
jarcher54 said:
Goodness! I forgive you --I think! (-:
December 16th, 2020 22:59
Throbbing sentimental pangs trigger nostalgic memories of yesteryear
L. B. Mek said:
\'Risk averse demeanor
kept me hermetically sealed
against positive growth experiences
and (bully me)
not sequestered nor singled
out as token scapegoat,
whereby (wherein) psyche
relentlessly, quintessentially,
and painfully assaulted.\'
as bravely revealing and impassioned your work may be, you\'ve still managed to give it an element of fun, like you\'re inviting us to be included in a sarcastically interpreted self-introspection - session, especially your witty guidance (notes),
I just hope you get as much enjoyment from penning such a wonderful write, as you\'ve gifted us by sharing your work,
great read (quick access to a dictionary made compulsory for us mere mortals though, go easy on us) lol
December 15th, 2020 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Risk averse demeanor
kept me hermetically sealed
against positive growth experiences
and (bully me)
not sequestered nor singled
out as token scapegoat,
whereby (wherein) psyche
relentlessly, quintessentially,
and painfully assaulted.\'
as bravely revealing and impassioned your work may be, you\'ve still managed to give it an element of fun, like you\'re inviting us to be included in a sarcastically interpreted self-introspection - session, especially your witty guidance (notes),
I just hope you get as much enjoyment from penning such a wonderful write, as you\'ve gifted us by sharing your work,
great read (quick access to a dictionary made compulsory for us mere mortals though, go easy on us) lol
December 15th, 2020 05:04
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