Comments received on poems by poet2rhyme4tommorrow
Wild goose chase
L. B. Mek said:
\'capacious external Lenovo for myopia\'
just Awesome, to read your genius
thank you!
May 12th, 2022 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'capacious external Lenovo for myopia\'
just Awesome, to read your genius
thank you!
May 12th, 2022 03:28
Farchadat alte kaker here at Highland Manor Apartments
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m just starting the third (yet again)
of James Hariot\'s autobiographical books
first one in the series is titled
\'All creatures great and small\'
if you have a few hours to spare
try it out..
there\'s lots of tv adaptations if your prefer
May 9th, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m just starting the third (yet again)
of James Hariot\'s autobiographical books
first one in the series is titled
\'All creatures great and small\'
if you have a few hours to spare
try it out..
there\'s lots of tv adaptations if your prefer
May 9th, 2022 04:12
ONE ALARM FIRE at Highland Manor Apartments
L. B. Mek said:
\'a feeble embellishment
which poetic effort reflects retread
of tired and worn writing techniques.\'
I bow to anyone who can squeeze
this amount of words
when writing about, a single fire alarm incident
lol
oh and
\'figurative, modus operandi\'
maybe the greatest oxymoron phrasing
I\'ve read yet..
(I can just imagine that conversation:
\'what, how you mean?\'
\'what!\'
\'how you mean, Figurative?\'
\'huh - figurative, you know..\'
\'No!, help me here\'
\'you know, like a figurative
erm - window display..\'
\'like, a figurative
window display.. you say\'
\'yeah, why? what\'
\'If your MO, is merely erm
a figurative, window display
as-in
a non existent, in reality
conceptual, entity
designed to attract, peoples attention
by, erm
being, literally invisible..
Why bother, to have it exist
in Figurative from, at all!\'
\'cos, dude! don\'t you get it?\'
\'NO! Help - me..\'
\'look, see
if its figurative, it exists right
and so technically
I\'m on my way to realising it, into reality, so
if anyone asks, I\'m literally
on it!.. yeah, somi\'n like that\'
\'Dude!?\'
\'Yeah?\'
\'it will still be the same, without
adding the figurative word
an MO in progress of formulation..\'
\'Yeah, but that\'s like so many more words
I prefer a figurative modus operandi..!\'
\'cool, makes sense\'
\'right?\'
\'NO!\'
\'oh,,, wateva, works for me\'
...
lmao!)
April 28th, 2022 03:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'a feeble embellishment
which poetic effort reflects retread
of tired and worn writing techniques.\'
I bow to anyone who can squeeze
this amount of words
when writing about, a single fire alarm incident
lol
oh and
\'figurative, modus operandi\'
maybe the greatest oxymoron phrasing
I\'ve read yet..
(I can just imagine that conversation:
\'what, how you mean?\'
\'what!\'
\'how you mean, Figurative?\'
\'huh - figurative, you know..\'
\'No!, help me here\'
\'you know, like a figurative
erm - window display..\'
\'like, a figurative
window display.. you say\'
\'yeah, why? what\'
\'If your MO, is merely erm
a figurative, window display
as-in
a non existent, in reality
conceptual, entity
designed to attract, peoples attention
by, erm
being, literally invisible..
Why bother, to have it exist
in Figurative from, at all!\'
\'cos, dude! don\'t you get it?\'
\'NO! Help - me..\'
\'look, see
if its figurative, it exists right
and so technically
I\'m on my way to realising it, into reality, so
if anyone asks, I\'m literally
on it!.. yeah, somi\'n like that\'
\'Dude!?\'
\'Yeah?\'
\'it will still be the same, without
adding the figurative word
an MO in progress of formulation..\'
\'Yeah, but that\'s like so many more words
I prefer a figurative modus operandi..!\'
\'cool, makes sense\'
\'right?\'
\'NO!\'
\'oh,,, wateva, works for me\'
...
lmao!)
April 28th, 2022 03:02
Resumption of daily/nightly constitutional
L. B. Mek said:
\'burning ghee (my slang for calories)\'
an entire land mass, sized to continent
proportions
would, so disagree.. lol
as-ever a fun read, good luck
with your constitutions
dear \'Victorian-era at heart\', poet..
(\'The passion to engross intellect
witnessed courtesy immersing\'
\'elusive notions that flit
to and fro hither and yon
(analogous to ping pong ball)
within parameters of
microscopically crenellated
sixty plus shades of gray matter\'
\'attention, concentration, excitation
gratification, intoxication;
knowledge prized more precious
than fine spun gold.\'
\'Likewise crafting (albeit painstakingly)\'
\'also constitutes fervent interest.\')
I so agree!
April 26th, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'burning ghee (my slang for calories)\'
an entire land mass, sized to continent
proportions
would, so disagree.. lol
as-ever a fun read, good luck
with your constitutions
dear \'Victorian-era at heart\', poet..
(\'The passion to engross intellect
witnessed courtesy immersing\'
\'elusive notions that flit
to and fro hither and yon
(analogous to ping pong ball)
within parameters of
microscopically crenellated
sixty plus shades of gray matter\'
\'attention, concentration, excitation
gratification, intoxication;
knowledge prized more precious
than fine spun gold.\'
\'Likewise crafting (albeit painstakingly)\'
\'also constitutes fervent interest.\')
I so agree!
April 26th, 2022 03:53
Resumption of daily/nightly constitutional
orchidee said:
I will microscopically look into this (a line near the end of your poem). It\'ll take me about 5 hours to understand it all! lol.
April 26th, 2022 02:14
orchidee said:
I will microscopically look into this (a line near the end of your poem). It\'ll take me about 5 hours to understand it all! lol.
April 26th, 2022 02:14
Filched Physiognomy – Mine revisited!
orchidee said:
Yes - probably true! See you in about 6 hours, when I\'ve gone through each line of this!
April 21st, 2022 10:39
orchidee said:
Yes - probably true! See you in about 6 hours, when I\'ve gone through each line of this!
April 21st, 2022 10:39
Agonizing contriteness fashions lugubriousness
phalyse phrophyt said:
big words
April 21st, 2022 02:20
phalyse phrophyt said:
big words
April 21st, 2022 02:20
Be not complacent \'bout dire global warming...
dean langmuir said:
Bella said it all,poet on
April 5th, 2022 18:39
dean langmuir said:
Bella said it all,poet on
April 5th, 2022 18:39
Be not complacent \'bout dire global warming...
Bella Shepard said:
Totally agree; conserve, reserve, observe, a plethora of words describing the indescribable damage done by He of little brain. Well penned and well deserved by those who do the damage.
April 5th, 2022 14:42
Bella Shepard said:
Totally agree; conserve, reserve, observe, a plethora of words describing the indescribable damage done by He of little brain. Well penned and well deserved by those who do the damage.
April 5th, 2022 14:42
The first anniversary since being pelted...
L. B. Mek said:
happy anniversary, dear poet
may your marriage\'s, future
be ever blessed
with pistachio, foreplay...
April 4th, 2022 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
happy anniversary, dear poet
may your marriage\'s, future
be ever blessed
with pistachio, foreplay...
April 4th, 2022 03:11
Unsolved criminal mystery...modest prevarication
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
Wow! thank you much for sharing a mindblowing personal anecdote nsync with my doctored incidental poem embellished to draw curious readers like yourself.
As an aside, I chanced to Google my first middle and last name only to learn the following quite eye opening negligible discovery.
Respond how and/or if the spirit moves you.
Would the real “Matthew Scott Harris” please stand up!?
Curiosity got the better part of me as thine fingers typed Matthew Scott Harris into the google search bar lo and behold and much to my chagrin and amusement, others with mine namesake constituted roles in various walks of life car
ring out their whiles and ways sans existence covered the realm from administration of President Dwight David Eisenhower the celebrity circuit, where his claim to fame and fortune as movie Producer (born in Jacksonville, Illinois) for silver screen cinematic debut enterprise finished regal Dimension far off beaten track sans degree (from University of Illinois) in Civil Engineering, After practicing as an engineer for several years, a decision made to open a restaurant in Chicago with nary a harbinger - After operating popular eatery for more than ten years, a whim directed destiny viz hit time to make movies curved renown skyrocketed quest analogous to aligning skill sets into stratospheric isobar, which exertion pitched head stone carvers to acquire vital context where next of kin content with obituary hiz death unexpectedly Tuesday morning, Feb. 24, 2015 of Loudonville),
tomb epitaph incorporated passion as avid outdoorsman, who loved fishing, hunting and canoeing. I aced as supervisor with telly tubby
communication company, Telecom Towers Incorporated, yet by some stroke of premature pronouncement, whence during funeral the coffin lid rose a jar
scaring the s**t out the backsides per mourners, where demise found sights drawn to undertake
a totally tubular career as graphic artist from Buffalo (Educated at RPI), who constantly looks for work today to morrow, out of necessity to pay bills, and as prodigy with numbers attained plaudits as financial solvency whiz, and par
for the course irresistibly tempted forging credentials - with a self crafted faux pas star re: expert as a fraudulent Loan OfficerNMLS # 240801 - but Youngblood’s hired fretful dexterous dude for extra cash tip play git tar, while police got tips from wagging tail, and unfortunately butter field bursar ruse landed rising star into clinker sans Cook County Inmate at age 49
CB NUMBER 19043182, when arrest occurred Tuesday,
January 13, 2015 11:53 AM, and released the next day due to first
time misdemeanor plus absent recidivist incarceration possession
of 5000+ grams of Cannabis, which exposure to magical realism, miracle whip and mystical herb set sites to become a professor
Clinician of pharmacology to help fight the so call \"drug war.\"
April 2nd, 2022 10:48
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
Wow! thank you much for sharing a mindblowing personal anecdote nsync with my doctored incidental poem embellished to draw curious readers like yourself.
As an aside, I chanced to Google my first middle and last name only to learn the following quite eye opening negligible discovery.
Respond how and/or if the spirit moves you.
Would the real “Matthew Scott Harris” please stand up!?
Curiosity got the better part of me as thine fingers typed Matthew Scott Harris into the google search bar lo and behold and much to my chagrin and amusement, others with mine namesake constituted roles in various walks of life car
ring out their whiles and ways sans existence covered the realm from administration of President Dwight David Eisenhower the celebrity circuit, where his claim to fame and fortune as movie Producer (born in Jacksonville, Illinois) for silver screen cinematic debut enterprise finished regal Dimension far off beaten track sans degree (from University of Illinois) in Civil Engineering, After practicing as an engineer for several years, a decision made to open a restaurant in Chicago with nary a harbinger - After operating popular eatery for more than ten years, a whim directed destiny viz hit time to make movies curved renown skyrocketed quest analogous to aligning skill sets into stratospheric isobar, which exertion pitched head stone carvers to acquire vital context where next of kin content with obituary hiz death unexpectedly Tuesday morning, Feb. 24, 2015 of Loudonville),
tomb epitaph incorporated passion as avid outdoorsman, who loved fishing, hunting and canoeing. I aced as supervisor with telly tubby
communication company, Telecom Towers Incorporated, yet by some stroke of premature pronouncement, whence during funeral the coffin lid rose a jar
scaring the s**t out the backsides per mourners, where demise found sights drawn to undertake
a totally tubular career as graphic artist from Buffalo (Educated at RPI), who constantly looks for work today to morrow, out of necessity to pay bills, and as prodigy with numbers attained plaudits as financial solvency whiz, and par
for the course irresistibly tempted forging credentials - with a self crafted faux pas star re: expert as a fraudulent Loan OfficerNMLS # 240801 - but Youngblood’s hired fretful dexterous dude for extra cash tip play git tar, while police got tips from wagging tail, and unfortunately butter field bursar ruse landed rising star into clinker sans Cook County Inmate at age 49
CB NUMBER 19043182, when arrest occurred Tuesday,
January 13, 2015 11:53 AM, and released the next day due to first
time misdemeanor plus absent recidivist incarceration possession
of 5000+ grams of Cannabis, which exposure to magical realism, miracle whip and mystical herb set sites to become a professor
Clinician of pharmacology to help fight the so call \"drug war.\"
April 2nd, 2022 10:48
Unsolved criminal mystery...modest prevarication
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you had quite a traumatic experience, and have presented it most memorably in this poem. Had something a little similar happen 47 years ago. While returning home from grocery shopping our car was pulled over by a police officer. Husband, wife and 2 very small children in the back seat, mystified. We were told a tail light was out. Cop checked my husband\'s ID and radioed in to find that someone with the identical name was wanted for armed robbery and possession of stolen goods. A trip to the station for my husband, while I drove home, 2 crying kids looking out the back window, mystified. After 2 hours of waiting and checking at the station, it was determined that they had the wrong guy, and the officer kindly drove my husband home. A different time, a different place. Hope all is well with you!
April 2nd, 2022 10:29
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you had quite a traumatic experience, and have presented it most memorably in this poem. Had something a little similar happen 47 years ago. While returning home from grocery shopping our car was pulled over by a police officer. Husband, wife and 2 very small children in the back seat, mystified. We were told a tail light was out. Cop checked my husband\'s ID and radioed in to find that someone with the identical name was wanted for armed robbery and possession of stolen goods. A trip to the station for my husband, while I drove home, 2 crying kids looking out the back window, mystified. After 2 hours of waiting and checking at the station, it was determined that they had the wrong guy, and the officer kindly drove my husband home. A different time, a different place. Hope all is well with you!
April 2nd, 2022 10:29
Incomprehensible existential conundrum confronts mine consciousness
Bella Shepard said:
Such a lot to contemplate, but then life is one big question mark. This one I can truly relate to. Answers to unanswerable questions, from whence shall they come?
March 31st, 2022 12:35
Bella Shepard said:
Such a lot to contemplate, but then life is one big question mark. This one I can truly relate to. Answers to unanswerable questions, from whence shall they come?
March 31st, 2022 12:35
Suicidal Ideation March 30th, 2022 linkedin...
orchidee said:
A daft comment - oohh, I don\'t like Sue E. Side much - she\'s dangerous!
March 30th, 2022 12:05
orchidee said:
A daft comment - oohh, I don\'t like Sue E. Side much - she\'s dangerous!
March 30th, 2022 12:05
Suicidal Ideation March 30th, 2022 linkedin...
Bella Shepard said:
I grew up with a father who was bipolar. I can understand what it\'s like to struggle with a sense of helplessness in the face of the suffering of a loved one. I have two granddaughters who have struggled with mental health issues, and I\'ve often wondered if I passed something along genetically. I love them, support them and will always be there for them, but I can\'t cure them. I will always accept them as they are, no matter what. You have expressed very poignantly the condition of living with mental illness. God bless you dear friend.
March 30th, 2022 09:40
Bella Shepard said:
I grew up with a father who was bipolar. I can understand what it\'s like to struggle with a sense of helplessness in the face of the suffering of a loved one. I have two granddaughters who have struggled with mental health issues, and I\'ve often wondered if I passed something along genetically. I love them, support them and will always be there for them, but I can\'t cure them. I will always accept them as they are, no matter what. You have expressed very poignantly the condition of living with mental illness. God bless you dear friend.
March 30th, 2022 09:40
I made a beeline bustle
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hurriedly enroute to her royal majesty
porcelain goddess throne\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
March 29th, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hurriedly enroute to her royal majesty
porcelain goddess throne\'
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
March 29th, 2022 04:13
I made a beeline bustle
Doggerel Dave said:
(In case you missed it when I put it up before):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VQ1GMBr6uPk&t=4s
March 28th, 2022 21:06
Doggerel Dave said:
(In case you missed it when I put it up before):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VQ1GMBr6uPk&t=4s
March 28th, 2022 21:06
I made a beeline bustle
dean langmuir said:
the shite of the golden years,good one.
March 28th, 2022 20:47
dean langmuir said:
the shite of the golden years,good one.
March 28th, 2022 20:47
I made a beeline bustle
Crowns4Christ said:
I know that struggle well,a bit odd,butt,pun intended,it really hit home, thanks for the interesting read,
March 28th, 2022 19:06
Crowns4Christ said:
I know that struggle well,a bit odd,butt,pun intended,it really hit home, thanks for the interesting read,
March 28th, 2022 19:06
I made a beeline bustle
Bella Shepard said:
Your description is beyond words! Who knew that such an anal experience could yield such a poetic gem. Congratulations, hope everything came out OK.
March 28th, 2022 16:07
Bella Shepard said:
Your description is beyond words! Who knew that such an anal experience could yield such a poetic gem. Congratulations, hope everything came out OK.
March 28th, 2022 16:07
Wordsmith\'s Veneration...
Bella Shepard said:
Well dear logophile, Wow! Alliteration, captivation but no abbreviation. I challenged myself to read each section in one breath and had a blast. You are indeed the quintessential wordsmith pictured above, what fun.
March 26th, 2022 15:36
Bella Shepard said:
Well dear logophile, Wow! Alliteration, captivation but no abbreviation. I challenged myself to read each section in one breath and had a blast. You are indeed the quintessential wordsmith pictured above, what fun.
March 26th, 2022 15:36
Mine unending nightmare with crippling generalized anxiety
sophin said:
tragically beautiful...tragically haunting.
March 20th, 2022 15:18
sophin said:
tragically beautiful...tragically haunting.
March 20th, 2022 15:18
Spring (vernal) equinox arrives March 20th, 2022
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to a vernal equinox. Well, I know now!
March 19th, 2022 10:19
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to a vernal equinox. Well, I know now!
March 19th, 2022 10:19
I absconded with reader rabbit (Peter), to celebrate Saint Patrick\'s Day
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
Sometimes, this odd fellow even surprises himself with crafting entertaining poem, but tis ego boosting to receive laudatory comments courtesy an stranger unbeknownst to yours truly, albeit one unpretentious, simplemind (ha), perceptive, nonestablishmentarian, literate, and hymble human.
March 17th, 2022 13:38
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
Sometimes, this odd fellow even surprises himself with crafting entertaining poem, but tis ego boosting to receive laudatory comments courtesy an stranger unbeknownst to yours truly, albeit one unpretentious, simplemind (ha), perceptive, nonestablishmentarian, literate, and hymble human.
March 17th, 2022 13:38
I absconded with reader rabbit (Peter), to celebrate Saint Patrick\'s Day
Bella Shepard said:
A fine read, head spinning but in a good way. Erin go bragh!
March 17th, 2022 12:57
Bella Shepard said:
A fine read, head spinning but in a good way. Erin go bragh!
March 17th, 2022 12:57
Argh Daylight Savings Time – March 13th, 2022
orchidee said:
We have to wait two more weeks for it in the UK.
Did you spend that extra second wisely, that we had one year?! lol.
March 11th, 2022 14:11
orchidee said:
We have to wait two more weeks for it in the UK.
Did you spend that extra second wisely, that we had one year?! lol.
March 11th, 2022 14:11
Argh Daylight Savings Time – March 13th, 2022
Bella Shepard said:
Daylight savings time is the bain of my life, and I thank you for so vociferously giving it the critique that it truly deserves.
March 11th, 2022 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
Daylight savings time is the bain of my life, and I thank you for so vociferously giving it the critique that it truly deserves.
March 11th, 2022 13:34
Up up the fly away wig doth go revisited and revised March 10th, 2022...
L. B. Mek said:
🤣
March 11th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
🤣
March 11th, 2022 04:51
National Panic Wednesday March 9th, 2022 actually... every day
L. B. Mek said:
\'Deep sleep for the weary
appeared oh so heavenly,
on par with plate
of powder milk biscuits,
our mandate (analogous to pilgrims
adults and children -
forced to fight in crusades)
forbid cessation, thus to plod
and plow onward
despite overwhelming urge to plotz,
(not the slang definition)\'
March 10th, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Deep sleep for the weary
appeared oh so heavenly,
on par with plate
of powder milk biscuits,
our mandate (analogous to pilgrims
adults and children -
forced to fight in crusades)
forbid cessation, thus to plod
and plow onward
despite overwhelming urge to plotz,
(not the slang definition)\'
March 10th, 2022 04:14
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