Comments received on poems by poet2rhyme4tommorrow
As an underdog given a short leash on life
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the self description. Now that we got the introduction out of the way we are ready for the story. A most self disclosing and brave beginning. Well done
May 26th, 2025 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the self description. Now that we got the introduction out of the way we are ready for the story. A most self disclosing and brave beginning. Well done
May 26th, 2025 18:25
Sexually explicit meme more real day
sorenbarrett said:
A nearly exhaustive set of metaphors of sensual and sexual expression. Well done
May 25th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
A nearly exhaustive set of metaphors of sensual and sexual expression. Well done
May 25th, 2025 15:31
A senior moment experienced by this drip...
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of the letters REM in spellings and the allusion to dreams. This read did seem dream like. Nice
May 23rd, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of the letters REM in spellings and the allusion to dreams. This read did seem dream like. Nice
May 23rd, 2025 11:51
As an easy pushover and soft touch lamenting my demise
sorenbarrett said:
Humorous but metaphorical as well. Like a dream this poem poses feelings of helplessness and victimization in a bizarre world. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Humorous but metaphorical as well. Like a dream this poem poses feelings of helplessness and victimization in a bizarre world. Nicely written
May 22nd, 2025 08:34
Impossible mission for systematization to be wrung out of entropy
sorenbarrett said:
Daily escapades flow from this poem in a sense a poetic diary of thoughts and actions nicely said
May 21st, 2025 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Daily escapades flow from this poem in a sense a poetic diary of thoughts and actions nicely said
May 21st, 2025 07:41
Excellent marksmen/women set his/her sites...
sorenbarrett said:
Scams and rip offs fill the world now days. Aggravating and upsetting. Well written
May 19th, 2025 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
Scams and rip offs fill the world now days. Aggravating and upsetting. Well written
May 19th, 2025 16:41
endless leisure hours as distorted time stretch before me...
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting series of rambles that takes to the end of a statement by Winston Churchill
May 14th, 2025 18:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting series of rambles that takes to the end of a statement by Winston Churchill
May 14th, 2025 18:34
Irrational exuberance at respite from reading...
sorenbarrett said:
Too many symbols to mention in this ramble through the mind. Entertaining.
May 13th, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Too many symbols to mention in this ramble through the mind. Entertaining.
May 13th, 2025 12:17
Rebellious nonestablishmentarian Pennsylvania Yankee...
sorenbarrett said:
History full of past abominations it is up to us to make sure we don\'t relive those mistakes. Good write
May 10th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
History full of past abominations it is up to us to make sure we don\'t relive those mistakes. Good write
May 10th, 2025 11:44
New marching orders issued from comandante Bergen meister
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dower outlook and sour feeling of the future. A fun read that took the reader on a journey and despite olfactory displeasure left him in good spirits despite the inevitable future of the human race. Fun read
May 8th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
A rather dower outlook and sour feeling of the future. A fun read that took the reader on a journey and despite olfactory displeasure left him in good spirits despite the inevitable future of the human race. Fun read
May 8th, 2025 17:28
No matter I got prescribed Glycopyrrolate 2 mg tablets taken four times a day...,
Cheeky Missy said:
You ARE a regular riot, despite the miseries delineated above, complete with a listing of the plagues on Egypt back in the day. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and eerily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 4th, 2025 16:39
Cheeky Missy said:
You ARE a regular riot, despite the miseries delineated above, complete with a listing of the plagues on Egypt back in the day. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and eerily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 4th, 2025 16:39
No matter I got prescribed Glycopyrrolate 2 mg tablets taken four times a day...,
sorenbarrett said:
Terrifying, sad, tragic, plight of an author plagued with a nonterminal but life altering disease. Well described and vividly imaged. Good write
May 4th, 2025 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
Terrifying, sad, tragic, plight of an author plagued with a nonterminal but life altering disease. Well described and vividly imaged. Good write
May 4th, 2025 14:09
Twenty years elapsed since Harriet Harris, née Kuritsky gave up the ghost ~ May 5th, 2004
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved obituaries. Most interesting. Dead pan humor. Well written
May 3rd, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved obituaries. Most interesting. Dead pan humor. Well written
May 3rd, 2025 17:01
Aol two step verification a boon to my psyche
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tech hacking and tech to fight it. A most interesting write.
May 2nd, 2025 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tech hacking and tech to fight it. A most interesting write.
May 2nd, 2025 16:01
Trying to REM ember the waking stage of an emotionally tormenting dream
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story all too true of may that innocently fall prey to internet and mail fraud theft of identity. Well written
May 1st, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story all too true of may that innocently fall prey to internet and mail fraud theft of identity. Well written
May 1st, 2025 08:16
An unexceptional turning point in our marriage...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the poem. Enjoyed it immensely. A serious write, but written with some tongue-in-cheek levity. This drew me in and kept me reading to the very end. Well done! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the poem. Enjoyed it immensely. A serious write, but written with some tongue-in-cheek levity. This drew me in and kept me reading to the very end. Well done! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 17:38
An unexceptional turning point in our marriage...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale too common to be taken lightly and to funny to be taken seriously a fun read
April 27th, 2025 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale too common to be taken lightly and to funny to be taken seriously a fun read
April 27th, 2025 14:33
And still his death haunts webbed wide world post American Civil War
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of history mixed with other thoughts in this poem. I see a metaphor as well, but then I do in most things. A very nice write
April 14th, 2025 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of history mixed with other thoughts in this poem. I see a metaphor as well, but then I do in most things. A very nice write
April 14th, 2025 16:31
Galore of buzzfeeding, needling and scamming female hustlers...
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale. Scammers I have met a few in the mail, phone, and texts but only once fell victim years ago to a financial fiasco. Taught me a lesson that was more valuable and unless they get far better at their trade will never happen again.
April 13th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the tale. Scammers I have met a few in the mail, phone, and texts but only once fell victim years ago to a financial fiasco. Taught me a lesson that was more valuable and unless they get far better at their trade will never happen again.
April 13th, 2025 04:20
April 9th, 2025 birthday poem for dearly departed papa
Cheeky Missy said:
Ye is plural.
April 9th, 2025 13:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Ye is plural.
April 9th, 2025 13:37
The downplayed hazard of swallowing vitamins a -z
sorenbarrett said:
Wow look what the vitamins have done. Irregular growth poetic spin, a tongue that speaks in metaphor. I wonder if the FDA has approved this poem, oh yea vitamins they don\'t control. What a splendid analogy and the flow of verse is like digestive juices that take it to its end. Loved it
April 7th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wow look what the vitamins have done. Irregular growth poetic spin, a tongue that speaks in metaphor. I wonder if the FDA has approved this poem, oh yea vitamins they don\'t control. What a splendid analogy and the flow of verse is like digestive juices that take it to its end. Loved it
April 7th, 2025 07:02
Fate decreed sexting/texting while married abominable
sorenbarrett said:
The question is where does one draw the line? if one takes it to the limit and says infidelity is any thought impure then we are all guilty and there is no one to judge, if we say anything goes then again the question is mute A fun poem with many ingenious lines of word play.
April 5th, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
The question is where does one draw the line? if one takes it to the limit and says infidelity is any thought impure then we are all guilty and there is no one to judge, if we say anything goes then again the question is mute A fun poem with many ingenious lines of word play.
April 5th, 2025 05:26
Betrayal (guilty as charged)...
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of several disjointed thoughts as they would race through my mind connected with a central theme of questioning life and its meaning. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of several disjointed thoughts as they would race through my mind connected with a central theme of questioning life and its meaning. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 16:06
Bad ass beauty brought bedlam, and begat bastard child...
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
March 31st, 2025 20:26
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
March 31st, 2025 20:26
Bad ass beauty brought bedlam, and begat bastard child...
sorenbarrett said:
When hormones rush emotions gush they say and this poem is full of both. Quaint language pervades in this knights and damsels in distress poem. Fun read
March 31st, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
When hormones rush emotions gush they say and this poem is full of both. Quaint language pervades in this knights and damsels in distress poem. Fun read
March 31st, 2025 10:57
Doing absolute zero endeavors
sorenbarrett said:
An anxious tale of fear for future. Too often such fear pervades our lives now controlled by government agencies and where weather was the primary threat in the past now it is agencies that have the decision to change our lives. A most intricate and involved write as is the process and anxiety. Well done
March 29th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
An anxious tale of fear for future. Too often such fear pervades our lives now controlled by government agencies and where weather was the primary threat in the past now it is agencies that have the decision to change our lives. A most intricate and involved write as is the process and anxiety. Well done
March 29th, 2025 04:22
Scrounging for boogers wrought my damn nostrils nearly to bust
sorenbarrett said:
Humor in its grossest form, a gag that did not get much applause but rather convulsive stomach shakes. A poor retch that has memories of such occurrences causing convulsive gastro contractions leaking boogers less desirable cousin vomit know as puke for short. I don\'t know what else to say and am left speechless.
March 27th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Humor in its grossest form, a gag that did not get much applause but rather convulsive stomach shakes. A poor retch that has memories of such occurrences causing convulsive gastro contractions leaking boogers less desirable cousin vomit know as puke for short. I don\'t know what else to say and am left speechless.
March 27th, 2025 10:48
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