Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
Cybersurfing netizen flounders...
L. B. Mek said:
\'I Yearn analogous to phototropism
for life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
allowed, enabled, and provided
every quintessential organic material
jump/kickstarted on planet earth,
without gofundme seed money\'
I too, yearn
for those lost tethers, dear poet
\'tether\'s to a time when
this gifted experience of existence
wasn\'t filtered:
through pixel screens
mouse clicks, endlessly scrolling screens
and face masks, as our independence
white flags
in relinquished society\'s, removal of unity
from our # vocabulary
this, incarnation of self
as our modernity\'s
newfound
collective identity...
November 7th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'I Yearn analogous to phototropism
for life, liberty and pursuit of happiness
allowed, enabled, and provided
every quintessential organic material
jump/kickstarted on planet earth,
without gofundme seed money\'
I too, yearn
for those lost tethers, dear poet
\'tether\'s to a time when
this gifted experience of existence
wasn\'t filtered:
through pixel screens
mouse clicks, endlessly scrolling screens
and face masks, as our independence
white flags
in relinquished society\'s, removal of unity
from our # vocabulary
this, incarnation of self
as our modernity\'s
newfound
collective identity...
November 7th, 2022 05:23
Cybersurfing netizen flounders...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An awesome intellectual poem, brilliant muse indeed of the way things are. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 7th, 2022 00:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An awesome intellectual poem, brilliant muse indeed of the way things are. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 7th, 2022 00:33
Argh daylight savings time ends – 2:00 AM November 6th 2022
orchidee said:
We had it a week ago in the UK.
We had a few extra days of it being lighter though, as the dates worked out for the year.
November 5th, 2022 03:57
orchidee said:
We had it a week ago in the UK.
We had a few extra days of it being lighter though, as the dates worked out for the year.
November 5th, 2022 03:57
À propos preponderant passion penning poems...
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to differentiate
jagged fine line between
passion and obsession\'
Amen!
November 4th, 2022 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to differentiate
jagged fine line between
passion and obsession\'
Amen!
November 4th, 2022 04:12
Coloring smiling faces donned with faux missing teeth,
L. B. Mek said:
reading fable and fantasy is fine
but I too don\'t go out of my way
to verify if there be ghosts n stuff
amongst us
reality, is spooky enough for me..
I just have to be lost in-thought
for a simple hello or tap on the shoulders
have me impersonating
Doc from Back to the Future..
lol
another fun read
October 31st, 2022 08:05
L. B. Mek said:
reading fable and fantasy is fine
but I too don\'t go out of my way
to verify if there be ghosts n stuff
amongst us
reality, is spooky enough for me..
I just have to be lost in-thought
for a simple hello or tap on the shoulders
have me impersonating
Doc from Back to the Future..
lol
another fun read
October 31st, 2022 08:05
Twice told toilet tale – a cheeky execrable gross fable
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
\'That aha i.e.eureka moment
prompted me to utter “holy shit”
when a chain reaction similar
to volcanic rush of air took place
within the planet.\'
(literary critique elitist\'s
could heed
your poetic wisdom\'s excreta
of realism)
thank you! for the fun read dear Poet
October 24th, 2022 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
lmao!
\'That aha i.e.eureka moment
prompted me to utter “holy shit”
when a chain reaction similar
to volcanic rush of air took place
within the planet.\'
(literary critique elitist\'s
could heed
your poetic wisdom\'s excreta
of realism)
thank you! for the fun read dear Poet
October 24th, 2022 03:57
Twice told toilet tale – a cheeky execrable gross fable
Doggerel Dave said:
Many (all?) of your pieces are possessed of more than a little indelicate sense of the humour to be found in whatever subject you are focused on. None more so than this \'un. A bargain too - one gets at least three chunky sized pieces for the price of one....🙂
October 23rd, 2022 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Many (all?) of your pieces are possessed of more than a little indelicate sense of the humour to be found in whatever subject you are focused on. None more so than this \'un. A bargain too - one gets at least three chunky sized pieces for the price of one....🙂
October 23rd, 2022 17:14
Snaggletooth The Snitch
Doggerel Dave said:
Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always get amusement out of yorr pieces, even if I don\'t always reach quite the end....... How, where do you find the time , energy and imagination?
September 26th, 2022 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Maintaining a roof over one\'s head always involves compromise. I always get amusement out of yorr pieces, even if I don\'t always reach quite the end....... How, where do you find the time , energy and imagination?
September 26th, 2022 19:51
Rosh Hashshana 2022
orchidee said:
Happy New Year! i never knew there was so much to it, as expressed here. Well, I know now! lol.
Solemn day soon - Day of Atonement? Do you observe Succoth/Booth/Shelters festival?
September 25th, 2022 13:19
orchidee said:
Happy New Year! i never knew there was so much to it, as expressed here. Well, I know now! lol.
Solemn day soon - Day of Atonement? Do you observe Succoth/Booth/Shelters festival?
September 25th, 2022 13:19
anticipatory anxiety fosters catastrophization...,
Lincoln said:
Wow! I\'m impressed
September 2nd, 2022 16:19
Lincoln said:
Wow! I\'m impressed
September 2nd, 2022 16:19
Whar art thou dame of my dream?
L. B. Mek said:
\'when husband
in delicto flagrante
no matter figment..\'
what a poetic mind you choose to share, dear Poet
thank you!
another wondrous adventure of wordplay
in a read, what a treat
August 9th, 2022 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'when husband
in delicto flagrante
no matter figment..\'
what a poetic mind you choose to share, dear Poet
thank you!
another wondrous adventure of wordplay
in a read, what a treat
August 9th, 2022 02:02
SO DELICIOUS salted caramel cluster made with cashew milk
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wait, have you tasted those \'beyond meat\' range of vegan alternatives
as in that \'beyond burger\'..
kinda scary
I used to be furious at how the the left is trying to kill
agriculture trade, especially meat
(just look at the Euro farmer\'s strikes)
but then, if they\'re gonna make
vegan
taste, so good
well..
erm
I think I will sit on the fence for a bit
with me, erm beans & stuff
burger, in one hand
and lovely grilled traditional cheeseburger, in the other..
lol
August 8th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
lol
wait, have you tasted those \'beyond meat\' range of vegan alternatives
as in that \'beyond burger\'..
kinda scary
I used to be furious at how the the left is trying to kill
agriculture trade, especially meat
(just look at the Euro farmer\'s strikes)
but then, if they\'re gonna make
vegan
taste, so good
well..
erm
I think I will sit on the fence for a bit
with me, erm beans & stuff
burger, in one hand
and lovely grilled traditional cheeseburger, in the other..
lol
August 8th, 2022 03:54
Hiroshima – seventy seven years since August 6th, 1945
Jasmine Swift said:
I didn\'t even know this happened! I\'m honestly so in shock by how you wrote this. The words, the painting of the picture, the emotion. I don\'t know what shocks me the most!
August 7th, 2022 20:43
Jasmine Swift said:
I didn\'t even know this happened! I\'m honestly so in shock by how you wrote this. The words, the painting of the picture, the emotion. I don\'t know what shocks me the most!
August 7th, 2022 20:43
Hiroshima – seventy seven years since August 6th, 1945
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the reminder.
Feels as if it\'s moving in that direction again...
August 6th, 2022 20:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the reminder.
Feels as if it\'s moving in that direction again...
August 6th, 2022 20:01
Palm History Awash With Drips
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to defeat
except poe wet tickly\'
ermm defeat poe, say what now?
lol
(an adventure within genius
thoughts and musings
just a privilege to read and get lost
within)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(@ our palm prints of life)
lol
August 5th, 2022 02:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'impossible mission to defeat
except poe wet tickly\'
ermm defeat poe, say what now?
lol
(an adventure within genius
thoughts and musings
just a privilege to read and get lost
within)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(@ our palm prints of life)
lol
August 5th, 2022 02:01
Doomsday Clock January 2022...
L. B. Mek said:
I so adore your genius\' freedom, to go from musing this chuckle of a thought:
\'Cosmofunnel favorite fan
Katina Borgersen \"poof\"
our acquaintanceship dissolved
(think - snapped fingers) outright
regardless, whether...
perchance we ever
cross paths long daze
journey into night
met under virtual reality moonlight
ah... the mere awareness
of her existence
metaphorically found modest, mercurial
mellow male within limelight
oy vey admittedly one
rusty Ongepatshket knight
fumbling in the dark with
his unreliable sputtering jacklight\'
to just dropping this immensely deep lines
like they were so irrelevant:
\'to absorb inconvenient truth
great swaths of Gaia
analogous to dead zone,\'
(what a read! thank you dear Poet)
oh and yes, we must! go-on
in the words of Keats
\'life, must be undergone\'...
August 2nd, 2022 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
I so adore your genius\' freedom, to go from musing this chuckle of a thought:
\'Cosmofunnel favorite fan
Katina Borgersen \"poof\"
our acquaintanceship dissolved
(think - snapped fingers) outright
regardless, whether...
perchance we ever
cross paths long daze
journey into night
met under virtual reality moonlight
ah... the mere awareness
of her existence
metaphorically found modest, mercurial
mellow male within limelight
oy vey admittedly one
rusty Ongepatshket knight
fumbling in the dark with
his unreliable sputtering jacklight\'
to just dropping this immensely deep lines
like they were so irrelevant:
\'to absorb inconvenient truth
great swaths of Gaia
analogous to dead zone,\'
(what a read! thank you dear Poet)
oh and yes, we must! go-on
in the words of Keats
\'life, must be undergone\'...
August 2nd, 2022 03:43
Oh Mondseer: the muck cob brie muenster saga...,
L. B. Mek said:
so much fun, lol
July 29th, 2022 02:33
L. B. Mek said:
so much fun, lol
July 29th, 2022 02:33
Replete with Colonial Army spirits
L. B. Mek said:
powerful!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 28th, 2022 01:34
L. B. Mek said:
powerful!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 28th, 2022 01:34
Interpreting mine Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
esoteric or enthusiastic
momentary or everlasting
no need to dwell
on its weight of ink, if
it be offered with sincerity
there is, indeed
a root core of Melpomene\'s
legacy
in all, the chaos we inherit
deity or dateless
our words, evolve
into timeless, worth
not by our choosing
but the investment, our readers
intrust
in our syllables and metaphors..
your job, dear cherished Poet
is to simply
sing loud and proud, on that canvas
of hope
and revel, in poesy\'s gifts
leave all the other concerns
in those callous hands of fate;
humbly, I thank you!
for choosing to share your genius with us..
(ignore the sly hecklers
their jealousy is transparent
and ugly, even more-so
their riotously worded, insincerity
draped in their depraved
meaningless clowning, antics)
you just, do you!
July 22nd, 2022 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
esoteric or enthusiastic
momentary or everlasting
no need to dwell
on its weight of ink, if
it be offered with sincerity
there is, indeed
a root core of Melpomene\'s
legacy
in all, the chaos we inherit
deity or dateless
our words, evolve
into timeless, worth
not by our choosing
but the investment, our readers
intrust
in our syllables and metaphors..
your job, dear cherished Poet
is to simply
sing loud and proud, on that canvas
of hope
and revel, in poesy\'s gifts
leave all the other concerns
in those callous hands of fate;
humbly, I thank you!
for choosing to share your genius with us..
(ignore the sly hecklers
their jealousy is transparent
and ugly, even more-so
their riotously worded, insincerity
draped in their depraved
meaningless clowning, antics)
you just, do you!
July 22nd, 2022 03:58
Interpreting mine Poetry
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to poetry. Well, I know now, mine host.
July 22nd, 2022 02:23
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to poetry. Well, I know now, mine host.
July 22nd, 2022 02:23
One month into summer 2022 elapsed here...
L. B. Mek said:
\'of Mother Nature tempers
trumpeting one donning
guise of cloudy (with chance of) meatballs\'
ahh we even appreciate the same films
lol
July 21st, 2022 01:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'of Mother Nature tempers
trumpeting one donning
guise of cloudy (with chance of) meatballs\'
ahh we even appreciate the same films
lol
July 21st, 2022 01:04
Respite from mortality
Bella Shepard said:
The confluence of words is dizzying, but delightful and rich in tone and timbre. Your love of words knows no bounds, and for one who loves words, I truly appreciate !
July 15th, 2022 12:53
Bella Shepard said:
The confluence of words is dizzying, but delightful and rich in tone and timbre. Your love of words knows no bounds, and for one who loves words, I truly appreciate !
July 15th, 2022 12:53
Espousing irreverent greed
L. B. Mek said:
\'Unlike me wily willy cocked,
limp bizkit primed to hawk kitty\'..
... wily, huh?
lol
July 14th, 2022 00:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'Unlike me wily willy cocked,
limp bizkit primed to hawk kitty\'..
... wily, huh?
lol
July 14th, 2022 00:41
Sham(e) full travesty regarding fourth of July celebration
L. B. Mek said:
\'imposing invisible shackles to deny
purportedly inalienable rights
of life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness.\'
July 4th, 2022 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'imposing invisible shackles to deny
purportedly inalienable rights
of life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness.\'
July 4th, 2022 03:11
Eriobotrya japonica
L. B. Mek said:
\'If ambition to satiate loquat all naught
please scatter cremated ashes,
upon bed of loquat sought
but ne\'er found,
cuz earnestness to secure
coveted desire fraught,\'
just a joy, to get a glimpse
of your brilliantly witty, intellect
you and Oscar Wilde
in conversation, would be
amazing to witness..
lol
thanks for sharing
July 1st, 2022 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'If ambition to satiate loquat all naught
please scatter cremated ashes,
upon bed of loquat sought
but ne\'er found,
cuz earnestness to secure
coveted desire fraught,\'
just a joy, to get a glimpse
of your brilliantly witty, intellect
you and Oscar Wilde
in conversation, would be
amazing to witness..
lol
thanks for sharing
July 1st, 2022 03:14
SCOTUS ruling overturned Roe versus Wade
Blueledge said:
Not so much the rule of law but the rule of men. Or religion. Or both.
Either way. This is quite mad.
June 26th, 2022 01:07
Blueledge said:
Not so much the rule of law but the rule of men. Or religion. Or both.
Either way. This is quite mad.
June 26th, 2022 01:07
Recurrent sneezing fit courtesy freshly mowed grass
orchidee said:
Erm, I feel a bit sick with this mucus-talk! lol.
I thought someone sneezed with an \'Achoo\'. But they meant \'Haiku\'! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:44
orchidee said:
Erm, I feel a bit sick with this mucus-talk! lol.
I thought someone sneezed with an \'Achoo\'. But they meant \'Haiku\'! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:44
The daily star announces Summer Solstice 2022
orchidee said:
I\'m a real pessimist lol - the nights are drawing in again soon, only a couple of days to go! lol.
June 20th, 2022 08:41
orchidee said:
I\'m a real pessimist lol - the nights are drawing in again soon, only a couple of days to go! lol.
June 20th, 2022 08:41
The daily star announces Summer Solstice 2022
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to know of the Summer Solstice. Well, I know now! It\'ll take me the Longest Day to read all this! I will need every minute of daylight to see it.
Sometimes we\'re caught out, and it\'s on June 20 or 22. lol.
June 20th, 2022 08:40
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to know of the Summer Solstice. Well, I know now! It\'ll take me the Longest Day to read all this! I will need every minute of daylight to see it.
Sometimes we\'re caught out, and it\'s on June 20 or 22. lol.
June 20th, 2022 08:40
I laid me body stomach down atop a grassy knoll...
L. B. Mek said:
no shame at all!
sorry for your troubles
also
hope sister is doing, as well
as can be
June 20th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
no shame at all!
sorry for your troubles
also
hope sister is doing, as well
as can be
June 20th, 2022 04:28
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