Comments received on poems by rew4er2nail
An anticlimactic sexual event...
Bobby O said:
You can write and express with style but maybe enlist a trusted friend for advice when choosing the next topic??
December 15th, 2023 20:36
Bobby O said:
You can write and express with style but maybe enlist a trusted friend for advice when choosing the next topic??
December 15th, 2023 20:36
One generic baby boomer, (a garden variety sexagenarian)...
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
December 7th, 2023 18:20
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
December 7th, 2023 18:20
Still smarting from stupid scamming fraudsters...
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work.
November 21st, 2023 18:25
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work.
November 21st, 2023 18:25
Nope! I haint gonna crack\'n on the heat... just yet
Lil said:
I just love it haha🤣
November 20th, 2023 14:38
Lil said:
I just love it haha🤣
November 20th, 2023 14:38
Nope! I haint gonna crack\'n on the heat... just yet
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted.
November 20th, 2023 14:36
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted.
November 20th, 2023 14:36
The bane of a cold sore inside my mouth
Thomas W Case said:
Creative and informative.
November 8th, 2023 20:52
Thomas W Case said:
Creative and informative.
November 8th, 2023 20:52
Richard Mcgeehan Poem
Ma5on said:
Damn I\'ve missed you and your chuckle-vision poetry.
Clever, witty and genius to boot!
You m,ay not be everybody\'s cup of tea, so I\'ll share a coffee with ya instead.
Keep \'em comin\'
regards
M (no idea why I thought it ok to drop the TH & G)
November 6th, 2023 14:38
Ma5on said:
Damn I\'ve missed you and your chuckle-vision poetry.
Clever, witty and genius to boot!
You m,ay not be everybody\'s cup of tea, so I\'ll share a coffee with ya instead.
Keep \'em comin\'
regards
M (no idea why I thought it ok to drop the TH & G)
November 6th, 2023 14:38
Daylight Savings Time Ends – November 5th 2023 means...
orchidee said:
We were dicombobulated, etc, etc a week ago in UK, with that 25 hour day!
November 5th, 2023 04:32
orchidee said:
We were dicombobulated, etc, etc a week ago in UK, with that 25 hour day!
November 5th, 2023 04:32
Gloriously luxuriating in eternal sleep
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
October 26th, 2023 14:34
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
October 26th, 2023 14:34
Encomium for cumulative collection of trash
L. B. Mek said:
ok cherished poet, please
a little less detail
or a lot more warning..
first stanza almost have me vomit
me breaky
what have I ever done to you...!
lmao
thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
ok cherished poet, please
a little less detail
or a lot more warning..
first stanza almost have me vomit
me breaky
what have I ever done to you...!
lmao
thanks for sharing
October 9th, 2023 03:10
Dynamic reef flexion within the restless Earth
Jowi said:
That\'s geography ♥
September 28th, 2023 10:46
Jowi said:
That\'s geography ♥
September 28th, 2023 10:46
Figurative paralysis laid waste body electric of mine
Bobby O said:
It’s so long
September 10th, 2023 09:41
Bobby O said:
It’s so long
September 10th, 2023 09:41
Red hot chili pepper poker face...
Bobby O said:
I got lost it started with a path I could follow but just past halfway I felt unaware.
September 10th, 2023 02:23
Bobby O said:
I got lost it started with a path I could follow but just past halfway I felt unaware.
September 10th, 2023 02:23
MINDFULNESS = PSYCHIC SURVIVAL.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so much fun, thank you
for sharing your genius with us
typing away in our tents
lol
\'noah matter this totally tubular stranger\'
\'perhaps on account oof a cerebral dent
though many respondents rage\'
\'impacting his/her employment
ending result they/them live in a tent.
This poet knows a mew lion
ranges of feline artful dodging cat skills,\'
\'Sanguine at one hundred minus thirty six, or two squared
+ three squared + four squared + five squared + square root of one hundred =
an apt and pithy phrase
to matt\'s matrix labyrinth
best characterized as a twisted maze\'
\'Keep on dreaming cyber buddy, an anonymous reader might think, telepathically\'
\'The vague nebulous barely perceptible kernel
of a fictional account per my own conjured up vision
(as pertains to what might comprise
a companionable buddy to me) could conceivable materialize
into an actual
arch de triumphant revelation\'
\'If hedging bets with yours truly being a reincarnated union soldier of yore,\'
\'I know best to tamp down any precipitous illusions of grandeur, but would let the natural course of familiarity usher the chap a roan of sacredness\'
\'So, now with a zing
or an unexpected
gold plated invitation after yodeling
hoop ye kin be a yang 2 me yin\'
September 8th, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so much fun, thank you
for sharing your genius with us
typing away in our tents
lol
\'noah matter this totally tubular stranger\'
\'perhaps on account oof a cerebral dent
though many respondents rage\'
\'impacting his/her employment
ending result they/them live in a tent.
This poet knows a mew lion
ranges of feline artful dodging cat skills,\'
\'Sanguine at one hundred minus thirty six, or two squared
+ three squared + four squared + five squared + square root of one hundred =
an apt and pithy phrase
to matt\'s matrix labyrinth
best characterized as a twisted maze\'
\'Keep on dreaming cyber buddy, an anonymous reader might think, telepathically\'
\'The vague nebulous barely perceptible kernel
of a fictional account per my own conjured up vision
(as pertains to what might comprise
a companionable buddy to me) could conceivable materialize
into an actual
arch de triumphant revelation\'
\'If hedging bets with yours truly being a reincarnated union soldier of yore,\'
\'I know best to tamp down any precipitous illusions of grandeur, but would let the natural course of familiarity usher the chap a roan of sacredness\'
\'So, now with a zing
or an unexpected
gold plated invitation after yodeling
hoop ye kin be a yang 2 me yin\'
September 8th, 2023 05:35
ARGH! NO MORE MEDICARE!
orchidee said:
Oh no, if I see that funeral advert on TV once more.....!
August 26th, 2023 12:25
orchidee said:
Oh no, if I see that funeral advert on TV once more.....!
August 26th, 2023 12:25
Shame and guilt sabotaged mine healthy growth...
Parisab said:
Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very personal poem reflective of our times of nothing being predictable or stable…
August 19th, 2023 22:02
Parisab said:
Complex in objection and acceptance…Thank you for writing a very personal poem reflective of our times of nothing being predictable or stable…
August 19th, 2023 22:02
Natural soporific narcotic
Bobby O said:
I really like this piece, as soon I felt like it was my MAIDEN VOYAGE I knew I could go for MILES quickly realizing that
IM INTO SOMETHING GOOD!
knew it couldn’t be just a one night stand…slowly entered the
EYE OF THE HURRICANE
August 14th, 2023 13:26
Bobby O said:
I really like this piece, as soon I felt like it was my MAIDEN VOYAGE I knew I could go for MILES quickly realizing that
IM INTO SOMETHING GOOD!
knew it couldn’t be just a one night stand…slowly entered the
EYE OF THE HURRICANE
August 14th, 2023 13:26
Once again besieged by fruit flies
Bobby O said:
I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away
August 13th, 2023 07:49
Bobby O said:
I guess the write is good but the topic chased me away
August 13th, 2023 07:49
The broken piggy bank
Parisab said:
I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting brilliant poem such as yours!
August 10th, 2023 11:24
Parisab said:
I’ve been keeping my piggy bank under my mattress, for the same exacting brilliant poem such as yours!
August 10th, 2023 11:24
Wordsmith theoretician postulates kooky equation
L. B. Mek said:
Genius!
\'with the plot of Iago
in my version starring
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
as none other than Othello
punch drunk as Judy
falling down laughing,
roistering, yammering hysterically
and rolling with a stoned Rockafellow,
whose role as a convincing fall guy
convincingly contradicted himself
as an above board underfellow.\'
July 21st, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
Genius!
\'with the plot of Iago
in my version starring
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
as none other than Othello
punch drunk as Judy
falling down laughing,
roistering, yammering hysterically
and rolling with a stoned Rockafellow,
whose role as a convincing fall guy
convincingly contradicted himself
as an above board underfellow.\'
July 21st, 2023 04:52
Chicanery grabbed lustfully repeatedly - yup!
2781 said:
Hard to like. These people do themselves no favour.
\"So the last will be first, and the first will be last.\"
July 16th, 2023 09:16
2781 said:
Hard to like. These people do themselves no favour.
\"So the last will be first, and the first will be last.\"
July 16th, 2023 09:16
Overzealousness and assiduousness...
L. B. Mek said:
\'computer viruses, malware, et cetera,\'
the cruel forever targeting the vulnerable
my father is scared to touch a computer
they\'re all putrid maggots
wish we could just go and stomp them all out
July 10th, 2023 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'computer viruses, malware, et cetera,\'
the cruel forever targeting the vulnerable
my father is scared to touch a computer
they\'re all putrid maggots
wish we could just go and stomp them all out
July 10th, 2023 04:48
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