Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Finding Paradise.
arqios said:

The goodness of thought, word, and deed appear to be a foreshadowing of Paradise and perhaps by this our appetites are whetted!

October 20th, 2022 01:25

Thoughts In Life.
Jon Nakapalau said:

So true!

October 19th, 2022 21:30

Natures Orchestra.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Well done!

October 19th, 2022 21:29

Strong Love FIBS
Jon Nakapalau said:

Wonderful Andy!

October 19th, 2022 21:29

Strong Love FIBS
John Prophet said:

Nice sentiment. ✍️👍🏼

October 19th, 2022 12:09

Natures Orchestra.
ruthtitus54 said:

love the imagery

October 19th, 2022 11:20

Strong Love FIBS
arqios said:

The song brings me back, wow. And the Fib is oh so nacci! And the love, that is your great blessing and our joy to witness through this poem.

October 19th, 2022 03:29

Strong Love FIBS
Doggerel Dave said:

One twice plus two plus three plus five plus eight,
And then comes thirteen as you hold me there:
Your love expressed with Fibonacci’s great
Sequence, an avowal of your affair.


October 19th, 2022 03:12

Strong Love FIBS
Neville said:



an endearing poem sir but I am unsure what a FIB is within the context of your post today ... I know what it was in my day ... please throw some enlightenment my way ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ta :)

October 19th, 2022 02:44

Strong Love FIBS
Neville said:



an endearing poem sir but I am unsure what a FIB is within the context of your post today ... I know what it was in my day ... please throw some enlightenment my way ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ta :)

October 19th, 2022 02:44

Strong Love FIBS
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
A mini FIBS from Fido:
Woof
Woof
Woof Woof
Woof Woof Woof
Woof Woof
Woof
Woof!

October 19th, 2022 01:48

Natures Orchestra.
arqios said:

Nature\'s Orchestra is in need of our entrance tickets - to be responsible in our cohabitation and symbiotic relationship with all of Creation!

October 18th, 2022 07:35

Natures Orchestra.
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh what a scene of sheer delight
A moment cherished for us all:
Holdfast this image, it is right
To hold it clear before the pall.

Enjoy for as long as you can Andy..... and maybe what is comming won\'t worry either of us.....🙂


October 18th, 2022 02:47

Natures Orchestra.
Fay Slimm. said:

I could hear in my mind those wonderful sounds of Nature\'s own music after reading your verse - - thank you for sharing your walk dear Andy,.

October 18th, 2022 02:30

Natures Orchestra.
orchidee said:

A fine write and a colourful orchestra too this time of year Gold.

October 18th, 2022 01:53

Thoughts In Life.
sorenbarrett said:

A positive view that lifts the spirit and gives hope in a world so full of things to bemoan. I liked the inner dimension, not only looking back forward and the present but inward.

October 17th, 2022 11:13

Thoughts In Life.
Paul Bell said:

Times are tough just now and the world faces difficult times ahead. In years to come, these will be the memories imprinted on the young generation just now. They\'ll get through it, cos that\'s what humans do.

October 17th, 2022 04:30

Thoughts In Life.
arqios said:

Thankfulness brings out new platforms. Thanks Andy.

October 17th, 2022 04:08

Thoughts In Life.
Doggerel Dave said:

Reality is a function of size,
Also limitations of our senses;
But my perception should be no surprise -
Vision must be clear, free of pretences.

Abject apologies, Andy, you cornered me – right now my cognitive apparatus admits of not much hope...... Tho’ I’ll be gone…….. 😃


October 17th, 2022 02:59

Thoughts In Life.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

October 17th, 2022 01:35

Smoke No More.
Neville said:

Congratulations and well done GF60 .. that is no mean feat .. I also gave up nicotine about 20 years ago .. it was one of the hardest things to let go of ..

maybe as a matter of interest, I used to be able to get almost anyone that wanted to get off heroin in about 3 or 4 days by prescribing clean and safe opiate substitutes .. alcohol maybe in around 10 days or so .. but nicotine .. was another matter altogether .................... Neville


October 16th, 2022 05:31

Smoke No More.
Doggerel Dave said:

I’d sit up front on a double decker
And smoke a foul Spanish from my girlfriend;
Man behind said ‘’I feel like a kipper’’
Them were the days, now my cough knows no end.

All true: I gave up in 1987 after twenty years and feel lucky to still be around…..


October 16th, 2022 05:22

Smoke No More.
orchidee said:

I gave it up without starting. Well, I tried me first and last ciggy at about age 11 and it choked me!
It\'s terrible how many are affected by it. On medical progs, they say \'If only I had not smoked....\'
We don\'t see it some much now, except, e.g. staff having fags outside during breaks. I hated it when it was allowed on buses. I think it was only upstairs, but downstairs was often full by the time the bus got to my stop.

October 16th, 2022 02:06

So Very Strange.
John Prophet said:

Revel in your good fortune.
Nice write ✍️

October 15th, 2022 21:59

So Very Strange.
MendedFences27 said:

Enjoy the good life while it lasts. Live, love, and work together. Four hands are better than two but remember you don\'t have to do it all. Certain jobs can be hired out or even eliminated. It\'s time to live life to the fullest. Do what you can, but that\'s all.
Good poem on one of life\'s little changes. - Phil A.

October 15th, 2022 14:45

So Very Strange.
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree with Neville that love should be a shared thing and when it is then it is wonderful - - keep sharing that togetherness dear Andy and life will go on being lovely.

October 15th, 2022 10:28

So Very Strange.
Neville said:



This is not only as it should be, it is lovely too .. Lucky you Andy :)

October 15th, 2022 03:55

So Very Strange.
arqios said:

I have observed that having something done for you isn\'t a sure sign of inability or laziness but could be seen as some other stepping out of their self caring to include you in their day and daily chores, a sign of caring, esteem, dedication, attention, connection... and a slew of other gratifying concepts. Of course we do not always see things that way. But when we do, it is as you have said, \'wonderful!\'

October 15th, 2022 01:55

So Very Strange.
orchidee said:

You done that ironing again?! heehee.

October 15th, 2022 01:54

So Very Strange.
Doggerel Dave said:

I’m not a marriage councillor my friend.
My relationships have not included
Such, which would have driven me round the bend;
Call me rum – This will not be disputed.

Each to their own, Andy, and the very best of good wishes.


October 15th, 2022 01:33



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