Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Smoke No More.
Doggerel Dave said:

I’d sit up front on a double decker
And smoke a foul Spanish from my girlfriend;
Man behind said ‘’I feel like a kipper’’
Them were the days, now my cough knows no end.

All true: I gave up in 1987 after twenty years and feel lucky to still be around…..


October 16th, 2022 05:22

Smoke No More.
orchidee said:

I gave it up without starting. Well, I tried me first and last ciggy at about age 11 and it choked me!
It\'s terrible how many are affected by it. On medical progs, they say \'If only I had not smoked....\'
We don\'t see it some much now, except, e.g. staff having fags outside during breaks. I hated it when it was allowed on buses. I think it was only upstairs, but downstairs was often full by the time the bus got to my stop.

October 16th, 2022 02:06

So Very Strange.
John Prophet said:

Revel in your good fortune.
Nice write ✍️

October 15th, 2022 21:59

So Very Strange.
MendedFences27 said:

Enjoy the good life while it lasts. Live, love, and work together. Four hands are better than two but remember you don\'t have to do it all. Certain jobs can be hired out or even eliminated. It\'s time to live life to the fullest. Do what you can, but that\'s all.
Good poem on one of life\'s little changes. - Phil A.

October 15th, 2022 14:45

So Very Strange.
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree with Neville that love should be a shared thing and when it is then it is wonderful - - keep sharing that togetherness dear Andy and life will go on being lovely.

October 15th, 2022 10:28

So Very Strange.
Neville said:



This is not only as it should be, it is lovely too .. Lucky you Andy :)

October 15th, 2022 03:55

So Very Strange.
arqios said:

I have observed that having something done for you isn\'t a sure sign of inability or laziness but could be seen as some other stepping out of their self caring to include you in their day and daily chores, a sign of caring, esteem, dedication, attention, connection... and a slew of other gratifying concepts. Of course we do not always see things that way. But when we do, it is as you have said, \'wonderful!\'

October 15th, 2022 01:55

So Very Strange.
orchidee said:

You done that ironing again?! heehee.

October 15th, 2022 01:54

So Very Strange.
Doggerel Dave said:

I’m not a marriage councillor my friend.
My relationships have not included
Such, which would have driven me round the bend;
Call me rum – This will not be disputed.

Each to their own, Andy, and the very best of good wishes.


October 15th, 2022 01:33

Ten Sixty Six.
Doggerel Dave said:

Collapse of historical archives will be imminent
Once the truth of your account is verified and revealed:
For those who must care, history has no equivalent
Of witnessed events whose honesty cannot be appealed.

How can we be sure that all those history books will be recycled, rather than go to landfill, Andy?


October 14th, 2022 03:41

Ten Sixty Six.
arqios said:

At ten sixty-six I usually have a mid morn cuppa tea. Of course historical ticbits usually accompany the bikkies.

October 14th, 2022 03:30

Ten Sixty Six.
Neville said:



I neva woulda guessed .. :)

October 14th, 2022 02:57

Ten Sixty Six.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. lol. Boo hoo, they all blame me!

October 14th, 2022 01:55

Ironing Goldiku.
Doggerel Dave said:

I cannot understand this one at all:
Please do clarify this and give a call…
Your clothing doesn’t wick after you smooth;
Cloth should be full - this no more than the truth.

Three weeks after I left home, a very long time ago, I gave up ironing. Don\'t waste your life, Andy.... LOL.....

October 13th, 2022 06:08

Ironing Goldiku.
Paul Bell said:

Do you mean you went pressing mad.

October 13th, 2022 04:33

Ironing Goldiku.
orchidee said:

A fine special occasion Gold!

October 13th, 2022 01:54

Ironing Goldiku.
arqios said:

What filled the basket just before this great feat!?
Rock n Roll!

October 13th, 2022 01:26

Forever Memories.
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Memeories actually outlive us! - Very nice one hey... Kudos

October 12th, 2022 08:05

Brilliance Or Kindness.
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes kind people still do exist -
And found everywhere in our midst.
I fall over and am injured:
Strangers there, assistance rendered.

I have very bad balance.


October 12th, 2022 07:08

Brilliance Or Kindness.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
A heart that listens to all - except me singing! heehee.

October 12th, 2022 02:11

Brilliance Or Kindness.
arqios said:

A heart that listens, now there is a heart that is kind and sought after! Timely reminder Andy!

October 12th, 2022 01:28

Forever Memories.
Fay Slimm. said:

Memories both good and troublesome I am sure last for as long as we do my friend.

October 11th, 2022 12:40

Forever Memories.
Neville said:



One certainly likes to think so Andy .. or at least for a long while :)

October 11th, 2022 10:06

Forever Memories.
Doggerel Dave said:

Sometimes I do,
But not often.
Mostly I rue –
This don’t soften…..
Occasionally something comes in and causes toe curling embarrassment ...so thanks for reminding me, Andy.


October 11th, 2022 03:32

Forever Memories.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

October 11th, 2022 01:57

Bad To Better.
Neville said:



Ah\' yes indeed the trilogy ..

I would argue maybe not choices, as such, but I quite understand where you are coming from and the message contained herein ...

Neville :)

October 11th, 2022 01:16

Bad To Better.
Thekkinkkattil said:

Very true Andy and those who be come stronger are the real winners

October 10th, 2022 09:12

Bad To Better.
Doggerel Dave said:

A self-help book by yourself is needed:
Then ”See page seven four nine of my book”.
But poems here would be superseded
And MPS collapsed – not a good look.

Stay on Andy – don’t go nowhere……


October 10th, 2022 04:12

Bad To Better.
arqios said:

Help us to choose to be strengthened rather than to be defined (caged) or be destroyed by it. Ayaiyai!

October 10th, 2022 02:00

Bad To Better.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

October 10th, 2022 01:50



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