Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Password Day.
sorenbarrett said:
Very good Gold I would have done the same thing. Another fun read.
July 19th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Very good Gold I would have done the same thing. Another fun read.
July 19th, 2025 04:26
Password Day.
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh yes like everyone I too have a thousand passwords 🤣
July 19th, 2025 01:35
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh yes like everyone I too have a thousand passwords 🤣
July 19th, 2025 01:35
Deaf Street?
Poetic Licence said:
To focus on themselves to even be a aware of what\'s around them, nicely expressed
July 18th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
To focus on themselves to even be a aware of what\'s around them, nicely expressed
July 18th, 2025 05:41
Deaf Street?
Teddy.15 said:
Another one of your on point writes, I suspect like where I live people.also get run over as they are in their own little world and cannot even here the traffic. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 04:15
Teddy.15 said:
Another one of your on point writes, I suspect like where I live people.also get run over as they are in their own little world and cannot even here the traffic. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 04:15
Deaf Street?
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Andy we have reached a time when a mobile phone is more necessary than air itself and life is defined by it. People text each other across the table, take selfies as their house burns around them, play games rather than talk to a spouse, watch porn on the job, get their test answers from them, use them as a flash light they are now our chosen companion and most people would choose them over their spouse. Good write Andy
July 18th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Andy we have reached a time when a mobile phone is more necessary than air itself and life is defined by it. People text each other across the table, take selfies as their house burns around them, play games rather than talk to a spouse, watch porn on the job, get their test answers from them, use them as a flash light they are now our chosen companion and most people would choose them over their spouse. Good write Andy
July 18th, 2025 03:56
Respect.
MendedFences27 said:
Amen, Andy! Well-spoken and right on target. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2025 12:12
MendedFences27 said:
Amen, Andy! Well-spoken and right on target. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2025 12:12
Respect.
Priya Tomar said:
Yes , your poetry displays changing values in society. But every generation thinks they are last mannered members of society.
July 17th, 2025 05:05
Priya Tomar said:
Yes , your poetry displays changing values in society. But every generation thinks they are last mannered members of society.
July 17th, 2025 05:05
Respect.
Poetic Licence said:
You can\'t earn respect behind a screen or phone, you have to meet and get to know people for respect to be there, very valid write
July 17th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
You can\'t earn respect behind a screen or phone, you have to meet and get to know people for respect to be there, very valid write
July 17th, 2025 04:33
Respect.
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Andy the world changes and not always for the best. A world of social distancing, fragmentation, frustration, a breakdown in values, resentment of power, where authority is viewed the enemy. A good read Andy
July 17th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Andy the world changes and not always for the best. A world of social distancing, fragmentation, frustration, a breakdown in values, resentment of power, where authority is viewed the enemy. A good read Andy
July 17th, 2025 03:34
Respect.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Yes, not even a thank you or \'ta muchly\' - sometimes just a grunt.
July 17th, 2025 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Yes, not even a thank you or \'ta muchly\' - sometimes just a grunt.
July 17th, 2025 01:55
Respect.
Demar Desu said:
To respect unconditionally is the goal… old or youth… if it is righteous then respect follows… great poem
July 17th, 2025 01:43
Demar Desu said:
To respect unconditionally is the goal… old or youth… if it is righteous then respect follows… great poem
July 17th, 2025 01:43
Respect.
Teddy.15 said:
Because people no longer care as we now live in a non face to face environment, we live in a world behind screens and even young parents of today give new born babies i-pads in their buggies rather than sing a sweet song. I have worked with young children all my life and still do, I see the parenting differences, but that just my personal opinion. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 01:31
Teddy.15 said:
Because people no longer care as we now live in a non face to face environment, we live in a world behind screens and even young parents of today give new born babies i-pads in their buggies rather than sing a sweet song. I have worked with young children all my life and still do, I see the parenting differences, but that just my personal opinion. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 01:31
Ode To An Olive.
Bella Shepard said:
I have to say Andy, this poem is a most sensual delight, your love affair with the olive. When I was a child I was always fascinated by the pimento in the green olive. I didn\'t like them then, but love them now. I can also rememeber putting black olives on my fingertips and eating them one at a time. It make me laugh to see my grandchildren doing the same thing. A great write my friend!
July 16th, 2025 12:50
Bella Shepard said:
I have to say Andy, this poem is a most sensual delight, your love affair with the olive. When I was a child I was always fascinated by the pimento in the green olive. I didn\'t like them then, but love them now. I can also rememeber putting black olives on my fingertips and eating them one at a time. It make me laugh to see my grandchildren doing the same thing. A great write my friend!
July 16th, 2025 12:50
A Sonnet For Your Fiftieth Year.
Priya Tomar said:
Wordsworth - poet of nature.
He worshipped nature.
Tennyson\'s nature is \" red in tooth and claw \"
If your poetry has metaphors , imagery similar to Romantic poets, Really you are a great poet , born poet
Indian poet R K Ramanujan\' s poetry famous for socio- cultural themes.
If your poetry has scent of cultural flowers , your poetry depicts your versatille genius ....
You provided a good ,complete analysis. You highlighted social relationship in the age of social media
Good job
Very well
July 16th, 2025 12:10
Priya Tomar said:
Wordsworth - poet of nature.
He worshipped nature.
Tennyson\'s nature is \" red in tooth and claw \"
If your poetry has metaphors , imagery similar to Romantic poets, Really you are a great poet , born poet
Indian poet R K Ramanujan\' s poetry famous for socio- cultural themes.
If your poetry has scent of cultural flowers , your poetry depicts your versatille genius ....
You provided a good ,complete analysis. You highlighted social relationship in the age of social media
Good job
Very well
July 16th, 2025 12:10
Ode To An Olive.
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write to one of those marmite things, enjoyed the read
July 16th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write to one of those marmite things, enjoyed the read
July 16th, 2025 05:17
Ode To An Olive.
sorenbarrett said:
If I were an olive I would find this poem quite seductive. As it is Gold it enhances my appetite. A fun read nicely done
July 16th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
If I were an olive I would find this poem quite seductive. As it is Gold it enhances my appetite. A fun read nicely done
July 16th, 2025 03:45
Ode To An Olive.
orchidee said:
Never tasted them in all my millions of years. Should I?!
July 16th, 2025 02:20
orchidee said:
Never tasted them in all my millions of years. Should I?!
July 16th, 2025 02:20
Ode To An Olive.
Priya Tomar said:
You caged nature in your words....
Very nice
July 16th, 2025 02:18
Priya Tomar said:
You caged nature in your words....
Very nice
July 16th, 2025 02:18
Ode To An Olive.
Doggerel Dave said:
So you\'ve never busted a tooth on one of their stones? All that salt and your blood pressure...
However you have improved their image here, Andy.
July 16th, 2025 01:38
Doggerel Dave said:
So you\'ve never busted a tooth on one of their stones? All that salt and your blood pressure...
However you have improved their image here, Andy.
July 16th, 2025 01:38
Ode To An Olive.
Bragee said:
The playful poems channel the true nature of the craft when it comes to writing. Good job!!!
July 16th, 2025 01:24
Bragee said:
The playful poems channel the true nature of the craft when it comes to writing. Good job!!!
July 16th, 2025 01:24
Ode To An Olive.
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
I really enjoyed your poem—it\'s playful and full of personality! Olives are my favourite too, so I loved how you captured their taste and charm so perfectly.
July 16th, 2025 00:44
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
I really enjoyed your poem—it\'s playful and full of personality! Olives are my favourite too, so I loved how you captured their taste and charm so perfectly.
July 16th, 2025 00:44
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