Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
To Jail He Went.
Spencer Wilhelm said:
You had me, I was waiting for the solitary confinement, then I got the twist. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 16:38
Spencer Wilhelm said:
You had me, I was waiting for the solitary confinement, then I got the twist. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 16:38
To Jail He Went.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Still laughing, Andy. I think I snorted some coffee.
June 22nd, 2025 06:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
Still laughing, Andy. I think I snorted some coffee.
June 22nd, 2025 06:31
To Jail He Went.
Poetic Licence said:
That had me worried at first, entertaining read
June 22nd, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
That had me worried at first, entertaining read
June 22nd, 2025 05:13
To Jail He Went.
David Wakeling said:
Wow made me smile mi amigo.A fun story of a criminal who did not get to pass go and collect $200.Good fun read
June 22nd, 2025 04:46
David Wakeling said:
Wow made me smile mi amigo.A fun story of a criminal who did not get to pass go and collect $200.Good fun read
June 22nd, 2025 04:46
To Jail He Went.
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise endings are always great whether movies, books or poems. Only in life itself can they be problematic. A fun read Andy
June 22nd, 2025 03:26
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise endings are always great whether movies, books or poems. Only in life itself can they be problematic. A fun read Andy
June 22nd, 2025 03:26
To Jail He Went.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Monopoly\'s got silly now. they have skyscrapers too. if you land on one and have to pay up, that\'s it usually.
Doh! I thought I was playing monopoly, but it was a church asking for more money! Some get greedy.
June 22nd, 2025 02:02
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Monopoly\'s got silly now. they have skyscrapers too. if you land on one and have to pay up, that\'s it usually.
Doh! I thought I was playing monopoly, but it was a church asking for more money! Some get greedy.
June 22nd, 2025 02:02
The Longest Day Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up to your usual standard (v. high) but where I am we are suffering the winter solstice and Antarctica has visited us to celebrate.
Thanks for the memory of summers past, Andy.
June 21st, 2025 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up to your usual standard (v. high) but where I am we are suffering the winter solstice and Antarctica has visited us to celebrate.
Thanks for the memory of summers past, Andy.
June 21st, 2025 17:04
The Longest Day Sonnet.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! Andy. I loved it, a fine read.
June 21st, 2025 06:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! Andy. I loved it, a fine read.
June 21st, 2025 06:08
The Longest Day Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful description of the longest day.From endless hues to evening breezes. Wonderfully written with rhyme.Well done amigo
June 21st, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful description of the longest day.From endless hues to evening breezes. Wonderfully written with rhyme.Well done amigo
June 21st, 2025 04:49
The Longest Day Sonnet.
Poetic Licence said:
And what a cracker weather wise it was, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 04:07
Poetic Licence said:
And what a cracker weather wise it was, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 04:07
The Longest Day Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sonnet Andy that gives images of a warm long summer day that lazily lingers into the night. Loved it
June 21st, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful sonnet Andy that gives images of a warm long summer day that lazily lingers into the night. Loved it
June 21st, 2025 03:51
The Longest Day Sonnet.
arqios said:
And we have our shortest day today! Polar opposites๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:43
arqios said:
And we have our shortest day today! Polar opposites๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:43
The Longest Day.
David Wakeling said:
The longest day sounds wonderful. Peace and Love together.Excellent poem
June 20th, 2025 04:14
David Wakeling said:
The longest day sounds wonderful. Peace and Love together.Excellent poem
June 20th, 2025 04:14
The Longest Day.
sorenbarrett said:
A day to be marked but no holiday offered. A fun and very summery or in the south wintery day and poem. Nicely said Andy
June 20th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A day to be marked but no holiday offered. A fun and very summery or in the south wintery day and poem. Nicely said Andy
June 20th, 2025 03:55
The Longest Day.
arqios said:
A long day is ideal with joy sustaining it throughout its length and breadth and depth! ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 03:13
arqios said:
A long day is ideal with joy sustaining it throughout its length and breadth and depth! ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 03:13
The Longest Day.
Teddy.15 said:
I know the UK is basking in the heat, enjoy as much as you can dear Andy. Happy weekend my dear friend. ๐น
June 20th, 2025 02:49
Teddy.15 said:
I know the UK is basking in the heat, enjoy as much as you can dear Andy. Happy weekend my dear friend. ๐น
June 20th, 2025 02:49
The Longest Day.
orchidee said:
I thought it was tomorrow, 21st? Last year it was 20th, as there was an extra day for leap year.
June 20th, 2025 01:58
orchidee said:
I thought it was tomorrow, 21st? Last year it was 20th, as there was an extra day for leap year.
June 20th, 2025 01:58
Where Does Time Go?
John Prophet said:
Was not familiar with those fellows. Did a little research. Pleasant sound they had. Nice write Andy.
John
June 19th, 2025 18:14
John Prophet said:
Was not familiar with those fellows. Did a little research. Pleasant sound they had. Nice write Andy.
John
June 19th, 2025 18:14
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