Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Live For Today Again.
Cheeky Missy said:
With such irresistible accompaniment, this seems dynamic. Thank you very much for sharing. Excellently rendered with a touch of imagery and with those strains, what a haunting poignancy! Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 03:31
Cheeky Missy said:
With such irresistible accompaniment, this seems dynamic. Thank you very much for sharing. Excellently rendered with a touch of imagery and with those strains, what a haunting poignancy! Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 03:31
Live For Today Again.
orchidee said:
Oh, I\'m living in the yesterday I worried about next year. I\'m a confused laddie. lol.
August 29th, 2025 02:41
orchidee said:
Oh, I\'m living in the yesterday I worried about next year. I\'m a confused laddie. lol.
August 29th, 2025 02:41
Oldies Fault Again.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and some very good points well made. Nice one.
August 28th, 2025 08:41
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write and some very good points well made. Nice one.
August 28th, 2025 08:41
Our Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53
Our Life.
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Gold a good message to all. Nicely done.
August 28th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Gold a good message to all. Nicely done.
August 28th, 2025 03:54
My River Forever.
Poetic Dan said:
As wonderful as ever and I\'ll always feel that special spirit of yours anytime I\'m by the river. Always appreciated
Take care my friend
August 27th, 2025 15:06
Poetic Dan said:
As wonderful as ever and I\'ll always feel that special spirit of yours anytime I\'m by the river. Always appreciated
Take care my friend
August 27th, 2025 15:06
Oldies Fault Again.
Teddy.15 said:
If you live in a council house, it doesn\'t suprise me, the UK is on its knees, I feel the pain in any case because I know how much you love your home and street. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:53
Teddy.15 said:
If you live in a council house, it doesn\'t suprise me, the UK is on its knees, I feel the pain in any case because I know how much you love your home and street. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:53
Oldies Fault Again.
sorenbarrett said:
It felt that way when I was young as well. Difference was the old folks didn\'t move out and we didn\'t move in, we had to find other ways. A good write and I hear this from many.
August 27th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
It felt that way when I was young as well. Difference was the old folks didn\'t move out and we didn\'t move in, we had to find other ways. A good write and I hear this from many.
August 27th, 2025 03:58
Oldies Fault Again.
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t quite work out who is saying what to whom, when, why and to what effect, Andy....
August 27th, 2025 02:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t quite work out who is saying what to whom, when, why and to what effect, Andy....
August 27th, 2025 02:28
Stepping Stones Tanka.
NafisaSB said:
now that\'s the attitude that resonates with me.. bright, right and positive
August 26th, 2025 23:57
NafisaSB said:
now that\'s the attitude that resonates with me.. bright, right and positive
August 26th, 2025 23:57
Hitchhikers Guide.
Doggerel Dave said:
This is well versified fun, Andy. Very much enjoyed. A fave.
PS Hitched often during my days as a poverty stricken youth...
August 26th, 2025 21:38
Doggerel Dave said:
This is well versified fun, Andy. Very much enjoyed. A fave.
PS Hitched often during my days as a poverty stricken youth...
August 26th, 2025 21:38
Hitchhikers Guide.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Andy. I love a good twist with my morning coffee.
August 26th, 2025 05:17
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Andy. I love a good twist with my morning coffee.
August 26th, 2025 05:17
Hitchhikers Guide.
sorenbarrett said:
Andy you got me on this one had me going thinking about the people I give lifts to thumbing. I used to thumb as a kid and in all the rides I go only had one incident where the guy wouldn\'t let me out where I asked and had to walk an extra mile. My wife gives lifts to anyone that asks and even to some that don\'t. Yea bad things happen but to shut off charity for risk is a bad thing. But the humor in the last line left me laughing and that deserves a fave my friend
August 26th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Andy you got me on this one had me going thinking about the people I give lifts to thumbing. I used to thumb as a kid and in all the rides I go only had one incident where the guy wouldn\'t let me out where I asked and had to walk an extra mile. My wife gives lifts to anyone that asks and even to some that don\'t. Yea bad things happen but to shut off charity for risk is a bad thing. But the humor in the last line left me laughing and that deserves a fave my friend
August 26th, 2025 04:49
Hitchhikers Guide.
arqios said:
It’s got that cheeky twist ending that completely reframes the ride you thought you were on. What starts as a wholesome roadside kindness drifts into campfire‑story territory, then flips into pitch‑black humour with the final punchline. The rhymes are simple and jaunty, which makes the sudden macabre reveal land even harder, a bit like a nursery rhyme walking into a crime novel. It’s playful, a little unsettling, and very self‑aware of the tropes it’s poking fun at. Almost like it’s winking from the rear‑view mirror as you realise you’ve been in on the joke the whole time. A pure joy! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 26th, 2025 03:46
arqios said:
It’s got that cheeky twist ending that completely reframes the ride you thought you were on. What starts as a wholesome roadside kindness drifts into campfire‑story territory, then flips into pitch‑black humour with the final punchline. The rhymes are simple and jaunty, which makes the sudden macabre reveal land even harder, a bit like a nursery rhyme walking into a crime novel. It’s playful, a little unsettling, and very self‑aware of the tropes it’s poking fun at. Almost like it’s winking from the rear‑view mirror as you realise you’ve been in on the joke the whole time. A pure joy! 🕊️🙏🏻
August 26th, 2025 03:46
My Hungry Body Satisfied.
Bella Shepard said:
A delightful double entendre in poetic form, had me going right up to the end. Well done!
August 25th, 2025 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
A delightful double entendre in poetic form, had me going right up to the end. Well done!
August 25th, 2025 12:19
My Hungry Body Satisfied.
Neville said:
Sincerely impressed sir .. and that\'s a bloomin understatement .. I never saw that coming but it couldn\'t have been any better ..
August 25th, 2025 10:38
Neville said:
Sincerely impressed sir .. and that\'s a bloomin understatement .. I never saw that coming but it couldn\'t have been any better ..
August 25th, 2025 10:38
My Hungry Body Satisfied.
arqios said:
This poem unfolds like a love letter to music itself: sensual, devotional, and lifelong. It borrows the language of physical intimacy to describe an artistic and emotional connection, turning listening into a full‑body experience. The closing line, leaping from Bach to Pink Floyd, captures the joy of range; how the same soul can be fed by baroque precision one day and psychedelic expanse the next. It’s an ode to versatility, and to the idea that music isn’t just a pastime, but a constant, evolving love affair. It leaves the sense that this “hunger” isn’t meant to be satisfied once and for all but it’s meant to keep pulling you toward the next note, the next discovery.
August 25th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
This poem unfolds like a love letter to music itself: sensual, devotional, and lifelong. It borrows the language of physical intimacy to describe an artistic and emotional connection, turning listening into a full‑body experience. The closing line, leaping from Bach to Pink Floyd, captures the joy of range; how the same soul can be fed by baroque precision one day and psychedelic expanse the next. It’s an ode to versatility, and to the idea that music isn’t just a pastime, but a constant, evolving love affair. It leaves the sense that this “hunger” isn’t meant to be satisfied once and for all but it’s meant to keep pulling you toward the next note, the next discovery.
August 25th, 2025 05:32
My Hungry Body Satisfied.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun turn in this poem Gold where a thought to be person becomes music. Most lovely my friend
August 25th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A fun turn in this poem Gold where a thought to be person becomes music. Most lovely my friend
August 25th, 2025 03:45
My Hungry Body Satisfied.
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is having you
And music, music, music\"
Instant recall, Andy - many thanks. As a bonus I enjoyed the sensuality.
August 25th, 2025 02:36
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is having you
And music, music, music\"
Instant recall, Andy - many thanks. As a bonus I enjoyed the sensuality.
August 25th, 2025 02:36
A Walk To My Willow.
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine walk, Andy. Thanks for taking me.
August 24th, 2025 08:23
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine walk, Andy. Thanks for taking me.
August 24th, 2025 08:23
A Walk To My Willow.
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous sense of happiness and tranquility and I know we have had this conversation before, but I\'ve never seen a Sean in Italy, I miss these beautiful yet simple moments 🌹 🦢
August 24th, 2025 05:52
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous sense of happiness and tranquility and I know we have had this conversation before, but I\'ve never seen a Sean in Italy, I miss these beautiful yet simple moments 🌹 🦢
August 24th, 2025 05:52
A Walk To My Willow.
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely walk indeed. Nothing like a walk in nature to give one health physically and mentally. Very nice Andy
August 24th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely walk indeed. Nothing like a walk in nature to give one health physically and mentally. Very nice Andy
August 24th, 2025 04:18
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