Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Broken Heart Fixed.
Teddy.15 said:
Well just shows what a gentleman you are dear Andy, so grateful for everything. You deserve all the happiness that you receive as you too give so much. π
September 19th, 2023 01:15
Teddy.15 said:
Well just shows what a gentleman you are dear Andy, so grateful for everything. You deserve all the happiness that you receive as you too give so much. π
September 19th, 2023 01:15
The Joy Of Children.
sonal monhyung said:
Thank you ! yo write something about us children . This is really true when somebody scold us for to play and enjoy because we are children and we should focus more on studies instead of enjoy our childhood.
September 18th, 2023 21:20
sonal monhyung said:
Thank you ! yo write something about us children . This is really true when somebody scold us for to play and enjoy because we are children and we should focus more on studies instead of enjoy our childhood.
September 18th, 2023 21:20
The Joy Of Children.
Bella Shepard said:
It is unconsciounable when an adult uses violence against an innocent, defenseless child. I cannot fathom the mind of an individual who is capable of doing such a thing. I can\'t politely say what should be done unto them.
September 18th, 2023 15:13
Bella Shepard said:
It is unconsciounable when an adult uses violence against an innocent, defenseless child. I cannot fathom the mind of an individual who is capable of doing such a thing. I can\'t politely say what should be done unto them.
September 18th, 2023 15:13
The Joy Of Children.
GeekSusie said:
Your heartfelt poem touched me deeply, as it resonates with the emotions that many parents, like myself, experience when confronted with the painful reality of child abuse. The vivid imagery you\'ve painted of innocent children, their laughter, and the moments of pure joy they bring is a beautiful reminder of the preciousness of childhood.
It is indeed perplexing and heart-wrenching to fathom why anyone would cause harm to these young souls, who embody hope, purity, and the promise of a better future. Your words capture the essence of this confusion and the anger that wells up within us when we hear about such injustices.
September 18th, 2023 12:22
GeekSusie said:
Your heartfelt poem touched me deeply, as it resonates with the emotions that many parents, like myself, experience when confronted with the painful reality of child abuse. The vivid imagery you\'ve painted of innocent children, their laughter, and the moments of pure joy they bring is a beautiful reminder of the preciousness of childhood.
It is indeed perplexing and heart-wrenching to fathom why anyone would cause harm to these young souls, who embody hope, purity, and the promise of a better future. Your words capture the essence of this confusion and the anger that wells up within us when we hear about such injustices.
September 18th, 2023 12:22
The Joy Of Children.
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'ve been one of these children and it\'s definitely not easy, and I want to thank u Andy, for this piece in particular, it touched close to home and made me realize the support we have as the abused and the support we need to give to the abused ,
I know where you stand with God,but overcoming this horrible stuff is what drew me closer to Him,
Thank you my friend from the deepest part of my heart and soul, this piece means so much
September 18th, 2023 09:58
BlessedbyGod said:
I\'ve been one of these children and it\'s definitely not easy, and I want to thank u Andy, for this piece in particular, it touched close to home and made me realize the support we have as the abused and the support we need to give to the abused ,
I know where you stand with God,but overcoming this horrible stuff is what drew me closer to Him,
Thank you my friend from the deepest part of my heart and soul, this piece means so much
September 18th, 2023 09:58
The Joy Of Children.
Pop64 said:
It\'s a sad subject, a painful one, when children get hurt in any way. To put words to it, well, I can only agree with the writer of this.
September 18th, 2023 07:08
Pop64 said:
It\'s a sad subject, a painful one, when children get hurt in any way. To put words to it, well, I can only agree with the writer of this.
September 18th, 2023 07:08
The Joy Of Children.
Bobby O said:
Their laughter pulls at me
And then you really opened it up with a rallying cry that calls for the society to wake up. I liked this piece Mr Finch.
September 18th, 2023 06:39
Bobby O said:
Their laughter pulls at me
And then you really opened it up with a rallying cry that calls for the society to wake up. I liked this piece Mr Finch.
September 18th, 2023 06:39
The Joy Of Children.
Bobby O said:
Their laughter pulls at me
And then you really opened it up with a rallying cry that calls for the society to wake up. I liked this piece Mr Finch.
September 18th, 2023 06:38
Bobby O said:
Their laughter pulls at me
And then you really opened it up with a rallying cry that calls for the society to wake up. I liked this piece Mr Finch.
September 18th, 2023 06:38
The Joy Of Children.
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I
... have no words
just a blinding RAGE..
I dare not dwell on such thoughts
but appreciate you writing these
most Needed and Important words
thank you Andy
September 18th, 2023 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I
... have no words
just a blinding RAGE..
I dare not dwell on such thoughts
but appreciate you writing these
most Needed and Important words
thank you Andy
September 18th, 2023 05:48
The Joy Of Children.
orchidee said:
Yes, terrible.
Something about \'Whoever offends little ones, it\'s better for them to have a millstone hung round their necks and cast into the sea\'. Some words of \'gentle Jesus, meek and mild\'!
And your comment on them, which is quite swoony, if it wasn\'t so serious. Hung up by their - swoon!
September 18th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Yes, terrible.
Something about \'Whoever offends little ones, it\'s better for them to have a millstone hung round their necks and cast into the sea\'. Some words of \'gentle Jesus, meek and mild\'!
And your comment on them, which is quite swoony, if it wasn\'t so serious. Hung up by their - swoon!
September 18th, 2023 01:57
Dreams Of Peace.
LIZ said:
True peace is found within. But yes, I wish that too!!! But remember, it starts with US!!! Beautiful!!! π©΅
September 18th, 2023 00:34
LIZ said:
True peace is found within. But yes, I wish that too!!! But remember, it starts with US!!! Beautiful!!! π©΅
September 18th, 2023 00:34
Dreams Of Peace.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Andy, you ask a most difficult question. It is something I think about in the peace of a morning walk, as you do along your river. A mind can be the hardest thing in the world to change. If only we could get everyone to take that walk and reflect, we might get somewhere. Thank you for this beautiful soul searching poem, and as always lovely music.
September 17th, 2023 11:49
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Andy, you ask a most difficult question. It is something I think about in the peace of a morning walk, as you do along your river. A mind can be the hardest thing in the world to change. If only we could get everyone to take that walk and reflect, we might get somewhere. Thank you for this beautiful soul searching poem, and as always lovely music.
September 17th, 2023 11:49
Dreams Of Peace.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
One reason there\'s no peace is cos I keep turning up and singing! heehee.
September 17th, 2023 01:35
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
One reason there\'s no peace is cos I keep turning up and singing! heehee.
September 17th, 2023 01:35
Bouncy Clouds.
orchidee said:
Doh! lol. And - is the moon made of cheese?!
September 16th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
Doh! lol. And - is the moon made of cheese?!
September 16th, 2023 02:03
Bouncy Clouds.
jarcher54 said:
I am not sure it\'s poetry but I am sure you got me! (-:
September 16th, 2023 01:51
jarcher54 said:
I am not sure it\'s poetry but I am sure you got me! (-:
September 16th, 2023 01:51
Four In Eternity.
BlessedbyGod said:
Yes you will Andy,
Joyce and Dave love you and Mary so much they led your hearts together to live a life of love and happiness
They didn\'t want you two to suffer brokenhearts any longer
Beautiful piece my dear friend,
Give Mary my best
Love u guys
September 15th, 2023 08:55
BlessedbyGod said:
Yes you will Andy,
Joyce and Dave love you and Mary so much they led your hearts together to live a life of love and happiness
They didn\'t want you two to suffer brokenhearts any longer
Beautiful piece my dear friend,
Give Mary my best
Love u guys
September 15th, 2023 08:55
Four In Eternity.
L. B. Mek said:
The most Beautiful testimony
to enduring Love, i will ever
Read
What a poet you are my friend
Your very life is a Poetry
few can hope to aspire towards
!Brilliant!
(and I choose to believe for you
all four of you!
stay blessed dear hopeful Poet)
I read and humbly, learn
September 15th, 2023 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
The most Beautiful testimony
to enduring Love, i will ever
Read
What a poet you are my friend
Your very life is a Poetry
few can hope to aspire towards
!Brilliant!
(and I choose to believe for you
all four of you!
stay blessed dear hopeful Poet)
I read and humbly, learn
September 15th, 2023 06:57
Four In Eternity.
Bobby O said:
That is a cathartic outlook that serves the heart and soul. Very wise Mr Finch
September 15th, 2023 02:09
Bobby O said:
That is a cathartic outlook that serves the heart and soul. Very wise Mr Finch
September 15th, 2023 02:09
God\'s Humour.
David Wakeling said:
This is delightful.God doing comedy.I enjoyed this.It is hard to reconcile the fact that there is so much bad news in the world but I guess with a sense of humour we can overcome.Well written compadre
September 14th, 2023 21:40
David Wakeling said:
This is delightful.God doing comedy.I enjoyed this.It is hard to reconcile the fact that there is so much bad news in the world but I guess with a sense of humour we can overcome.Well written compadre
September 14th, 2023 21:40
God\'s Humour.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Steven, you are inspired. I believe you did have a conversation with God, for this exchange is so very believable in every respect. Somehow, you always seem to have a video of music on my playlist, you have remarkable taste.
September 14th, 2023 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Steven, you are inspired. I believe you did have a conversation with God, for this exchange is so very believable in every respect. Somehow, you always seem to have a video of music on my playlist, you have remarkable taste.
September 14th, 2023 15:23
God\'s Humour.
LIZ said:
This is how I talk to God...well....my vocabulary is more.....blunt! He definitely has a sense of humor....putting up with us!!! This is a wonderful piece!! Thank you for sharing!
September 14th, 2023 01:47
LIZ said:
This is how I talk to God...well....my vocabulary is more.....blunt! He definitely has a sense of humor....putting up with us!!! This is a wonderful piece!! Thank you for sharing!
September 14th, 2023 01:47
God\'s Humour.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold.
Any humour in me marrying KP?! lol.
September 14th, 2023 01:30
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write Gold.
Any humour in me marrying KP?! lol.
September 14th, 2023 01:30
That Day Came.
Doggerel Dave said:
Disclosed your old history with Kathleen Ferrier, Andy? π
September 13th, 2023 04:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Disclosed your old history with Kathleen Ferrier, Andy? π
September 13th, 2023 04:37
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