Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Bringing Us Closer Tanka.
Neville said:
splendid aint just any word, it fits perfectly & fittingly here, in this little rectangular comments box ..
Tis after all said & done a darn near perfect Tanka sir ... Neville :)
February 20th, 2022 03:10
Neville said:
splendid aint just any word, it fits perfectly & fittingly here, in this little rectangular comments box ..
Tis after all said & done a darn near perfect Tanka sir ... Neville :)
February 20th, 2022 03:10
Rushing Waters.
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like the beauty of God\'s creations being muddied up by hate,and being pristine by Jesus\'s second coming.very good Andy
February 19th, 2022 17:28
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like the beauty of God\'s creations being muddied up by hate,and being pristine by Jesus\'s second coming.very good Andy
February 19th, 2022 17:28
Rushing Waters.
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I went down to my river the other day,lol it wasn’t flowing so well😂 it’s frozen. Great write Andy. They really are a wonder,always moving,sometimes so calm and serene. Other’s so ferocious and destructive,...hmmm,are we still talking about a river?lol😂 cheers 🍻🕊
February 19th, 2022 12:00
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I went down to my river the other day,lol it wasn’t flowing so well😂 it’s frozen. Great write Andy. They really are a wonder,always moving,sometimes so calm and serene. Other’s so ferocious and destructive,...hmmm,are we still talking about a river?lol😂 cheers 🍻🕊
February 19th, 2022 12:00
Rushing Waters.
spilleronsheet said:
As always beautiful and serene dear Andy
February 19th, 2022 10:33
spilleronsheet said:
As always beautiful and serene dear Andy
February 19th, 2022 10:33
Rushing Waters.
Paul Bell said:
I think that\'s a great place to end up, especially if it\'s brought you joy through the years.
February 19th, 2022 05:48
Paul Bell said:
I think that\'s a great place to end up, especially if it\'s brought you joy through the years.
February 19th, 2022 05:48
Rushing Waters.
orchidee said:
Erm, I didn\'t fancy the River the other day. I might have gone blown into it by the hurricane!
February 19th, 2022 03:02
orchidee said:
Erm, I didn\'t fancy the River the other day. I might have gone blown into it by the hurricane!
February 19th, 2022 03:02
Making It Perfect.
Michael Edwards said:
Revenge comes sweet so never curse
and should the raging winds get worse
Eat baked beans and walk in reverse.
Nice one Andy (sorry I can rarely resist)
February 18th, 2022 10:36
Michael Edwards said:
Revenge comes sweet so never curse
and should the raging winds get worse
Eat baked beans and walk in reverse.
Nice one Andy (sorry I can rarely resist)
February 18th, 2022 10:36
Making It Perfect.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Outlook makes all the difference! - Pitch-perfect!
February 18th, 2022 06:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Outlook makes all the difference! - Pitch-perfect!
February 18th, 2022 06:13
Making It Perfect.
L. B. Mek said:
only those currently aquaplaning through life, on winds
of Eunice and Dudley, in our beloved Blighty
will truly appreciate
the timing and poetic brevity of your words, my friend
a great write!
have a great weekend, Andy
(not one for paragliding, me thinks)
lol
February 18th, 2022 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
only those currently aquaplaning through life, on winds
of Eunice and Dudley, in our beloved Blighty
will truly appreciate
the timing and poetic brevity of your words, my friend
a great write!
have a great weekend, Andy
(not one for paragliding, me thinks)
lol
February 18th, 2022 05:23
Making It Perfect.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Gold !!
Facing the adverse winds, is the thrill of life...So lets face it boldly...!!
Good one !!
February 18th, 2022 04:10
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Gold !!
Facing the adverse winds, is the thrill of life...So lets face it boldly...!!
Good one !!
February 18th, 2022 04:10
Making It Perfect.
orchidee said:
I suppose sometimes we need to, or have to, go the way the wind is blowing, walking into it.
Now it\'s started me off singing: \'The answer my friend is blowin\' in the wind...\'
Woof! It\'s OK, Fido. I don\'t mean baked beans or sprouts! lol.
February 18th, 2022 02:58
orchidee said:
I suppose sometimes we need to, or have to, go the way the wind is blowing, walking into it.
Now it\'s started me off singing: \'The answer my friend is blowin\' in the wind...\'
Woof! It\'s OK, Fido. I don\'t mean baked beans or sprouts! lol.
February 18th, 2022 02:58
Making It Perfect.
spilleronsheet said:
An amazing poetry
Blissful and calm
Spreading positivity and warmth
And the encouragement and desire to win your day
Thanks dear Andy for sharing the same….
February 18th, 2022 02:45
spilleronsheet said:
An amazing poetry
Blissful and calm
Spreading positivity and warmth
And the encouragement and desire to win your day
Thanks dear Andy for sharing the same….
February 18th, 2022 02:45
Making It Perfect.
Theo8176 said:
Amazing Poem! You beautifully capture the undying hope of one day hardship will come to an end. Such an amazing reflection on life.
February 18th, 2022 02:37
Theo8176 said:
Amazing Poem! You beautifully capture the undying hope of one day hardship will come to an end. Such an amazing reflection on life.
February 18th, 2022 02:37
Making It Perfect.
Rozina said:
A beautiful message of staying strong, staying positive and not to give up hope. Thank you.
February 18th, 2022 02:16
Rozina said:
A beautiful message of staying strong, staying positive and not to give up hope. Thank you.
February 18th, 2022 02:16
Filthy Acrostic.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
The usage of foul/filthy language is not my ‘cup of tea’!
Foul
Indelicate
Language
That should
Hold
You accountable
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 18th, 2022 01:12
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
The usage of foul/filthy language is not my ‘cup of tea’!
Foul
Indelicate
Language
That should
Hold
You accountable
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
February 18th, 2022 01:12
Filthy Acrostic.
dusk arising said:
Best to
Observe a
Little
Light
Oneupmanship
Craftily avoiding
Krass language with
Subtlety
February 17th, 2022 05:13
dusk arising said:
Best to
Observe a
Little
Light
Oneupmanship
Craftily avoiding
Krass language with
Subtlety
February 17th, 2022 05:13
Filthy Acrostic.
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the futility of enlightenment...
see, now even the very utility of swear words
is being wiped out..
swearing, was an actual tool
of dealing with life
when thing\'s get f\'ckd up
and your exasperation needed
an outlet, you could swear
and express yourself with that much more, feeling or passion
but now
it\'s all:
\'a fck\'n good morning ain\'t it?\'...?
\'I\'m so sh\'t fc\'d tired!\'...?
\'oh how I luv you, b\'ich\'...?
and on
to the point where
nowadays the more exasperated we become
speaking with eloquent decorum
is our new outlet, for expending
our frustrations and heated feelings...
\'Why Sir
how aggravating it is
to feel your fist, grace
my cheeks\'
lol
February 17th, 2022 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
lol
the futility of enlightenment...
see, now even the very utility of swear words
is being wiped out..
swearing, was an actual tool
of dealing with life
when thing\'s get f\'ckd up
and your exasperation needed
an outlet, you could swear
and express yourself with that much more, feeling or passion
but now
it\'s all:
\'a fck\'n good morning ain\'t it?\'...?
\'I\'m so sh\'t fc\'d tired!\'...?
\'oh how I luv you, b\'ich\'...?
and on
to the point where
nowadays the more exasperated we become
speaking with eloquent decorum
is our new outlet, for expending
our frustrations and heated feelings...
\'Why Sir
how aggravating it is
to feel your fist, grace
my cheeks\'
lol
February 17th, 2022 05:01
Filthy Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
Without swearing I,m afraid most of the so-called modern comedians would be out of a job. Reminds me of one of my Dad\'s sayings on hearing a foul mouthed rant: if every swear word was an inch each sentence would be a yard long.
February 17th, 2022 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
Without swearing I,m afraid most of the so-called modern comedians would be out of a job. Reminds me of one of my Dad\'s sayings on hearing a foul mouthed rant: if every swear word was an inch each sentence would be a yard long.
February 17th, 2022 03:09
Filthy Acrostic.
orchidee said:
My verbal diarrhoea is my singing - so they say! Aww, they are horrible to me, whoever \'they\' are. lol.
February 17th, 2022 03:05
orchidee said:
My verbal diarrhoea is my singing - so they say! Aww, they are horrible to me, whoever \'they\' are. lol.
February 17th, 2022 03:05
Filthy Acrostic.
spilleronsheet said:
The new normal
Speak whatever bullshit you want, without caring a least about others
But this isn’t normal
Being unkind isn’t normal
Being harsh and rude isn’t pride
Cursing others isn’t pride
So tragic
February 17th, 2022 02:33
spilleronsheet said:
The new normal
Speak whatever bullshit you want, without caring a least about others
But this isn’t normal
Being unkind isn’t normal
Being harsh and rude isn’t pride
Cursing others isn’t pride
So tragic
February 17th, 2022 02:33
Test Of Faith.
truman.anderson said:
Haha, this one threw me for a loop. Nice job
February 16th, 2022 21:48
truman.anderson said:
Haha, this one threw me for a loop. Nice job
February 16th, 2022 21:48
Each Day Is Special.
spilleronsheet said:
My boost of positivity
The exact booster dose of optimism that I am lacking
The cure for sad soul
Thanks so much for such endearing lines dear Andy
February 16th, 2022 13:45
spilleronsheet said:
My boost of positivity
The exact booster dose of optimism that I am lacking
The cure for sad soul
Thanks so much for such endearing lines dear Andy
February 16th, 2022 13:45
Each Day Is Special.
Crowns4Christ said:
Very positive uplifting, every day is truly a gift from God, especially if you spend it with the one you love.god bless you Andy
February 16th, 2022 11:20
Crowns4Christ said:
Very positive uplifting, every day is truly a gift from God, especially if you spend it with the one you love.god bless you Andy
February 16th, 2022 11:20
Each Day Is Special.
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the uplifting tone of this poem. Everyday IS a blessing which we should be more grateful for. Thanks for the reminder! 💕👏
February 16th, 2022 09:52
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the uplifting tone of this poem. Everyday IS a blessing which we should be more grateful for. Thanks for the reminder! 💕👏
February 16th, 2022 09:52
Each Day Is Special.
Rozina said:
I agree with this. So uplifting. Always looking forward. Thank you
February 16th, 2022 08:58
Rozina said:
I agree with this. So uplifting. Always looking forward. Thank you
February 16th, 2022 08:58
Each Day Is Special.
dusk arising said:
A lovely sentiment indeed but.... you lucky people.... who among us can compare with you when it comes to the excitement and pure joy a new love can bring to each day. Enjoy life old son... you deserve to and she must be a saintly lady to have captured your heart. Good on you both.
February 16th, 2022 08:26
dusk arising said:
A lovely sentiment indeed but.... you lucky people.... who among us can compare with you when it comes to the excitement and pure joy a new love can bring to each day. Enjoy life old son... you deserve to and she must be a saintly lady to have captured your heart. Good on you both.
February 16th, 2022 08:26
Test Of Faith.
spilleronsheet said:
A mixed emotions spilled inside
One that Kept me smiling
As well as advising
Leap with caution
Not blinded by emotions
Good one dear Andy
February 15th, 2022 15:17
spilleronsheet said:
A mixed emotions spilled inside
One that Kept me smiling
As well as advising
Leap with caution
Not blinded by emotions
Good one dear Andy
February 15th, 2022 15:17
« Return to the profile of Goldfinch60
