Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
A Good Day On The Road
Rozina said:
Waiting for that day! What a lovely day that was for you. Much less stress if this happens more often.
March 5th, 2022 23:25
Rozina said:
Waiting for that day! What a lovely day that was for you. Much less stress if this happens more often.
March 5th, 2022 23:25
A Good Day On The Road
Fay Slimm. said:
I waved from my Bentley but you never saw me - - you were busy noting those better drivers when I flashed past on that road - - ha -- loved your gentle moan and the beautiful music dear Andy - - felt like a go at a fun-answer today - -
March 5th, 2022 11:28
Fay Slimm. said:
I waved from my Bentley but you never saw me - - you were busy noting those better drivers when I flashed past on that road - - ha -- loved your gentle moan and the beautiful music dear Andy - - felt like a go at a fun-answer today - -
March 5th, 2022 11:28
A Good Day On The Road
Dove said:
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
Hurry up, to work I have to drive
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
Everyone was in a hurry don\'t you know
All that noise , how could one survive
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
Funny, then a driver, yelled, \"Need a Tow?\"
I yelled back \"No , please get a life
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
Then a driver suddenly did show
Asked me to pull over, holding a knife
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
I stepped on the gas, I was on the go
Oh yes, I was speeding for my life
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
Now, I never drive fast, nor slow
Just at a pace that feels ever nice
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
March 5th, 2022 07:01
Dove said:
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
Hurry up, to work I have to drive
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
Everyone was in a hurry don\'t you know
All that noise , how could one survive
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
Funny, then a driver, yelled, \"Need a Tow?\"
I yelled back \"No , please get a life
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
Then a driver suddenly did show
Asked me to pull over, holding a knife
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
I stepped on the gas, I was on the go
Oh yes, I was speeding for my life
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
Now, I never drive fast, nor slow
Just at a pace that feels ever nice
Was driving on the road, ever so slow
Honk, honk, the cars behind did blow
March 5th, 2022 07:01
A Good Day On The Road
Neville said:
considering life trickles by at such a slow pace down here generally that is .. South Somerset drivers have got to be some of the most impatient, selfish and foot on the gas felons around ............ and sorry, I dont believe the bit about a BMW driver Andy ... I used to drive one .. and even the tractors sped past me ... :)
March 5th, 2022 03:46
Neville said:
considering life trickles by at such a slow pace down here generally that is .. South Somerset drivers have got to be some of the most impatient, selfish and foot on the gas felons around ............ and sorry, I dont believe the bit about a BMW driver Andy ... I used to drive one .. and even the tractors sped past me ... :)
March 5th, 2022 03:46
A Good Day On The Road
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s nice when it happens, so very true and no one deserves a happy drive more than you...
Glad I didn\'t come along on my bike to spoil it! Lol
March 5th, 2022 03:28
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s nice when it happens, so very true and no one deserves a happy drive more than you...
Glad I didn\'t come along on my bike to spoil it! Lol
March 5th, 2022 03:28
A Good Day On The Road
Michael Edwards said:
Was today yesterday? Not been out yet so hoping it\'s a good here - but I doubt it. 🤔
March 5th, 2022 02:56
Michael Edwards said:
Was today yesterday? Not been out yet so hoping it\'s a good here - but I doubt it. 🤔
March 5th, 2022 02:56
In The Game.
Rocky Lagou said:
EXACTLY! Life is one game of poker! We\'re dealt what we\'re dealt and we can\'t get upset but just learn how to distribute them effectively. Love the optimistic message the last line possesses! ✨
March 4th, 2022 09:35
Rocky Lagou said:
EXACTLY! Life is one game of poker! We\'re dealt what we\'re dealt and we can\'t get upset but just learn how to distribute them effectively. Love the optimistic message the last line possesses! ✨
March 4th, 2022 09:35
In The Game.
L. B. Mek said:
so true
one more Dawn
offers another round
and whether it be
at our life\'s \'Turn\' or \'River\'
we need to survive, to see
if we can make a Royal Flush
out of the crumbs
we\'ve been dealt, in life...
(how well you utilised
your Poetry\'s, anchoring metaphor
a great shorty, Andy
thanks for keeping that flag of hope, evergreen
and raised, firmly High)
March 4th, 2022 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
so true
one more Dawn
offers another round
and whether it be
at our life\'s \'Turn\' or \'River\'
we need to survive, to see
if we can make a Royal Flush
out of the crumbs
we\'ve been dealt, in life...
(how well you utilised
your Poetry\'s, anchoring metaphor
a great shorty, Andy
thanks for keeping that flag of hope, evergreen
and raised, firmly High)
March 4th, 2022 06:23
In The Game.
dusk arising said:
Some are even ON the game.
This deck of cards analogy really does fall in with belief in reincarnation where each hand of cards we are dealt upon rebirth is based upon gaining the wisdom to find the path to Nirvana.
R.I.P. Gary Brooker writer of the timeless \'whiter shade of pale\'
March 4th, 2022 02:26
dusk arising said:
Some are even ON the game.
This deck of cards analogy really does fall in with belief in reincarnation where each hand of cards we are dealt upon rebirth is based upon gaining the wisdom to find the path to Nirvana.
R.I.P. Gary Brooker writer of the timeless \'whiter shade of pale\'
March 4th, 2022 02:26
Second Gift.
Crowns4Christ said:
I already know how you feel about this,but I\'m going to say it anyway, Andy,most people only have one great love,and that\'s if they\'re lucky,but God has blessed you with two beautiful women,and two great loves
Surely your wife is smiling down on you and your new love,and so is the Lord
March 3rd, 2022 20:40
Crowns4Christ said:
I already know how you feel about this,but I\'m going to say it anyway, Andy,most people only have one great love,and that\'s if they\'re lucky,but God has blessed you with two beautiful women,and two great loves
Surely your wife is smiling down on you and your new love,and so is the Lord
March 3rd, 2022 20:40
Second Gift.
Rocky Lagou said:
So lovely! A feeling of reciprocal romance and everlasting joy! A second chance at happiness! Well done! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:25
Rocky Lagou said:
So lovely! A feeling of reciprocal romance and everlasting joy! A second chance at happiness! Well done! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:25
Second Gift.
Thekkinkkattil said:
Loveis always magical..God bless your happiness
March 3rd, 2022 06:37
Thekkinkkattil said:
Loveis always magical..God bless your happiness
March 3rd, 2022 06:37
Second Gift.
L. B. Mek said:
\'A passion that surprises us,
A passion and love that gets stronger,
Gets stronger each time we are together.\'
so happy for you my friend
its always a joy, to share in the happiness
of those around you, that deserve
all the kindness
fate has, to spare...
March 3rd, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'A passion that surprises us,
A passion and love that gets stronger,
Gets stronger each time we are together.\'
so happy for you my friend
its always a joy, to share in the happiness
of those around you, that deserve
all the kindness
fate has, to spare...
March 3rd, 2022 05:37
Second Gift.
Neville said:
Two things automatically spring to mind .. well my mind at least ...
1) that\'s love for ya
2) Because ya both worth it ..
3) I was never any good at math .. :)
March 3rd, 2022 04:59
Neville said:
Two things automatically spring to mind .. well my mind at least ...
1) that\'s love for ya
2) Because ya both worth it ..
3) I was never any good at math .. :)
March 3rd, 2022 04:59
Second Gift.
dusk arising said:
I can remember that feeling you lucky man. I bet you feel young and i hope you are enjoying being silly with it too. It\'s so good of you to share your joy with us.... it brings a light of spring into my doddery old heart.
March 3rd, 2022 04:41
dusk arising said:
I can remember that feeling you lucky man. I bet you feel young and i hope you are enjoying being silly with it too. It\'s so good of you to share your joy with us.... it brings a light of spring into my doddery old heart.
March 3rd, 2022 04:41
Second Gift.
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to understand ? Get on with it and enjoy!
March 3rd, 2022 04:08
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to understand ? Get on with it and enjoy!
March 3rd, 2022 04:08
Second Gift.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Love is in the Air !! Enjoy this great Feeling. Nothing in the world can replace the beautiful feeling of Love and being Loved.
March 3rd, 2022 02:21
Vamsi Sudha said:
Love is in the Air !! Enjoy this great Feeling. Nothing in the world can replace the beautiful feeling of Love and being Loved.
March 3rd, 2022 02:21
Space And Time.
Bella Shepard said:
I love the music that you choose to accompany your poem. It is elegant and haunting, it conveys the beautiful message of your piece. So simple yet powerful, your words and music stir the soul. Thank You!
March 2nd, 2022 17:48
Bella Shepard said:
I love the music that you choose to accompany your poem. It is elegant and haunting, it conveys the beautiful message of your piece. So simple yet powerful, your words and music stir the soul. Thank You!
March 2nd, 2022 17:48
Space And Time.
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Both time and space in our lives need to be decorated. And sometimes we rearrange the furniture.Good write Andy.🌞✌️🕊
March 2nd, 2022 14:21
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Both time and space in our lives need to be decorated. And sometimes we rearrange the furniture.Good write Andy.🌞✌️🕊
March 2nd, 2022 14:21
Space And Time.
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written poetic question and answer here Andy.
Though I also agree with dusk arising, actual love, not fake love, can also comprise both the space and time we have.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
March 2nd, 2022 12:34
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written poetic question and answer here Andy.
Though I also agree with dusk arising, actual love, not fake love, can also comprise both the space and time we have.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
March 2nd, 2022 12:34
Space And Time.
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly time to fill the space grows in short supply the older we get - make the most of everything.
March 2nd, 2022 05:52
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly time to fill the space grows in short supply the older we get - make the most of everything.
March 2nd, 2022 05:52
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