Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Innocence.
Fay Slimm. said:
Good and apt question your last line of delightful poetry raised Andy - - I too love the real and honest curiosity of a small child.
August 31st, 2022 02:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Good and apt question your last line of delightful poetry raised Andy - - I too love the real and honest curiosity of a small child.
August 31st, 2022 02:30
Innocence.
Neville said:
what an absolute treat of an observation, and now, well wrapped for eternity in the safe hug of a poem .. Neville
August 31st, 2022 02:25
Neville said:
what an absolute treat of an observation, and now, well wrapped for eternity in the safe hug of a poem .. Neville
August 31st, 2022 02:25
Indispensable People.
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has such a powerful message. There is no person, no job, that is not important, from the person who cleans the bathrooms at Walmart to the mechanic that works on my car. And those who think that they are above only mock themselves. Thank You!
August 30th, 2022 14:51
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has such a powerful message. There is no person, no job, that is not important, from the person who cleans the bathrooms at Walmart to the mechanic that works on my car. And those who think that they are above only mock themselves. Thank You!
August 30th, 2022 14:51
Peace In Music.
Brycycle said:
I agree with you, Gold. Music heals and soothes my soul, if only more people would share that with each other.
August 30th, 2022 06:50
Brycycle said:
I agree with you, Gold. Music heals and soothes my soul, if only more people would share that with each other.
August 30th, 2022 06:50
Resignation To Life.
SureshG said:
She chose, and in so choosing even cancer could not rob her of her smile. Even what befalls her son, does not rob her of her smile. She resigned to live her remaining days as she chooses.
Thank you for letting us know that we have a choice.
August 30th, 2022 06:14
SureshG said:
She chose, and in so choosing even cancer could not rob her of her smile. Even what befalls her son, does not rob her of her smile. She resigned to live her remaining days as she chooses.
Thank you for letting us know that we have a choice.
August 30th, 2022 06:14
Indispensable People.
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course, it’s Ozymandias springs to mind….
Or Narcissistic personality?
Centre of the universe? Do be kind -
Oblivion is for eternity.
August 30th, 2022 05:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Of course, it’s Ozymandias springs to mind….
Or Narcissistic personality?
Centre of the universe? Do be kind -
Oblivion is for eternity.
August 30th, 2022 05:42
Indispensable People.
Neville said:
as we journey through life, we inevitably meet all sorts .. and I ant talking liquorice .. and like you have already indicated, not one of us is indispensable .. sadly though, not everyone realises until it is too late .. Neville
August 30th, 2022 01:45
Neville said:
as we journey through life, we inevitably meet all sorts .. and I ant talking liquorice .. and like you have already indicated, not one of us is indispensable .. sadly though, not everyone realises until it is too late .. Neville
August 30th, 2022 01:45
Resignation To Life.
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, the bravest of us all are secretive. She felt no need to share her plight with a stranger. An uplifting though sad write Andy. - Phil A.
August 29th, 2022 12:56
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes, the bravest of us all are secretive. She felt no need to share her plight with a stranger. An uplifting though sad write Andy. - Phil A.
August 29th, 2022 12:56
Resignation To Life.
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem, and reinforces the \"Joy\" of each moment of life. How wonderful that you met, and honored, someone who truly appreciates each precious moment. A wonderful write dear friend.
August 29th, 2022 11:42
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem, and reinforces the \"Joy\" of each moment of life. How wonderful that you met, and honored, someone who truly appreciates each precious moment. A wonderful write dear friend.
August 29th, 2022 11:42
Resignation To Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much more to add after dusk got in first.
When I\'m here I\'m here,
When I\'m not I\'m not.
Let’s not live in fear -
Value what I’ve got.
August 29th, 2022 06:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much more to add after dusk got in first.
When I\'m here I\'m here,
When I\'m not I\'m not.
Let’s not live in fear -
Value what I’ve got.
August 29th, 2022 06:55
Resignation To Life.
dusk arising said:
There are only two certainties in existence - birth and death. Might as well come to terms with the fact that we die eventually rather than living in fear of it. Once you\'ve come to terms with it then you can get on with enjoying life.
August 29th, 2022 05:02
dusk arising said:
There are only two certainties in existence - birth and death. Might as well come to terms with the fact that we die eventually rather than living in fear of it. Once you\'ve come to terms with it then you can get on with enjoying life.
August 29th, 2022 05:02
Resignation To Life.
Neville said:
a happy lady and a brave soul in the making ..
August 29th, 2022 03:02
Neville said:
a happy lady and a brave soul in the making ..
August 29th, 2022 03:02
Peace In Music.
MendedFences27 said:
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered music as a powerful force. It can, indeed, bring people together. I believe it would bring peace if countries\' people had the choice and not their authoritarian despots. A well-spoken plea for peace through music. - Phil A.
August 28th, 2022 20:10
MendedFences27 said:
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered music as a powerful force. It can, indeed, bring people together. I believe it would bring peace if countries\' people had the choice and not their authoritarian despots. A well-spoken plea for peace through music. - Phil A.
August 28th, 2022 20:10
Peace In Music.
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, close the door to the world and switch on the music.
August 28th, 2022 04:23
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, close the door to the world and switch on the music.
August 28th, 2022 04:23
Peace In Music.
Doggerel Dave said:
And there you pose the question;
Five easy lines is all it took.
Now then it demands the answer -
And no – it’s not the next Chinook.
I hope this doesn’t depress you too much Andy. Never forget the music.
August 28th, 2022 02:14
Doggerel Dave said:
And there you pose the question;
Five easy lines is all it took.
Now then it demands the answer -
And no – it’s not the next Chinook.
I hope this doesn’t depress you too much Andy. Never forget the music.
August 28th, 2022 02:14
The Final Over.
Bella Shepard said:
A great tribute to love of the game. The excitement, the thrill of victory, sportsmen all around. What a wonderful memory. Great write!
August 27th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
A great tribute to love of the game. The excitement, the thrill of victory, sportsmen all around. What a wonderful memory. Great write!
August 27th, 2022 13:04
The Final Over.
Doggerel Dave said:
Vitaï Lampada and you are the go:
Play up and play the game - and you did.
This cricket feels like your forte you know;
Was your talent for croquet deeply hid?
I’d use ‘epic‘ but have been beaten to the draw; I’ll settle for \'a great piece of narrative\'. Well writ, Sir!
August 27th, 2022 08:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Vitaï Lampada and you are the go:
Play up and play the game - and you did.
This cricket feels like your forte you know;
Was your talent for croquet deeply hid?
I’d use ‘epic‘ but have been beaten to the draw; I’ll settle for \'a great piece of narrative\'. Well writ, Sir!
August 27th, 2022 08:12
The Final Over.
sorenbarrett said:
I know very little of cricket but this poem brought back memories of Casey at the bat by Ernest Thayer.An old favorite poem of mine.
August 27th, 2022 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
I know very little of cricket but this poem brought back memories of Casey at the bat by Ernest Thayer.An old favorite poem of mine.
August 27th, 2022 07:48
The Final Over.
dusk arising said:
Never having been a cricket fan, this surprised me for its pace and intrigue. Nice one - owzat?
August 27th, 2022 04:57
dusk arising said:
Never having been a cricket fan, this surprised me for its pace and intrigue. Nice one - owzat?
August 27th, 2022 04:57
The Final Over.
Neville said:
Owzat .. there are some things one never forgets .. I bet you were bowled over Andy ...... this is epic :)
August 27th, 2022 03:03
Neville said:
Owzat .. there are some things one never forgets .. I bet you were bowled over Andy ...... this is epic :)
August 27th, 2022 03:03
Three Things.
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot – you talking to me?
Just shut up and let it be -
Let the world be a kinder place
Without my contribution in this space.
Should I get your words tattooed to my ……….. as a reminder, Andy? 🙂
August 26th, 2022 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot – you talking to me?
Just shut up and let it be -
Let the world be a kinder place
Without my contribution in this space.
Should I get your words tattooed to my ……….. as a reminder, Andy? 🙂
August 26th, 2022 08:17
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