Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Creating Memories.
MendedFences27 said:
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great memories. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2022 10:29
MendedFences27 said:
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great memories. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2022 10:29
Creating Memories.
Ternic73 said:
Was a lifetime ago life was simple and I loved it. Awesome poem
August 24th, 2022 08:41
Ternic73 said:
Was a lifetime ago life was simple and I loved it. Awesome poem
August 24th, 2022 08:41
Creating Memories.
sorenbarrett said:
We rarely think of the memories that we are creating. But as we look back each brick we put in that wall makes it larger and sets its form.
August 24th, 2022 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
We rarely think of the memories that we are creating. But as we look back each brick we put in that wall makes it larger and sets its form.
August 24th, 2022 07:27
Creating Memories.
Doggerel Dave said:
Echoes from our past -
Hope all can relish.
For some all fun passed
Them by; just hellish.
Apologies Andy – I certainly enjoy good memories of much (if not all) of my childhood. Occasionally I must remind myself that others maybe didn’t. I admire the focus of your reminder though.
August 24th, 2022 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Echoes from our past -
Hope all can relish.
For some all fun passed
Them by; just hellish.
Apologies Andy – I certainly enjoy good memories of much (if not all) of my childhood. Occasionally I must remind myself that others maybe didn’t. I admire the focus of your reminder though.
August 24th, 2022 07:23
Creating Memories.
Aradhya said:
such heartfelt words andy! indeed the moments we spent laughing and playing unburdened, growing up are the most beautiful memories in life that accompanies us through out. loved this piece!
August 24th, 2022 06:30
Aradhya said:
such heartfelt words andy! indeed the moments we spent laughing and playing unburdened, growing up are the most beautiful memories in life that accompanies us through out. loved this piece!
August 24th, 2022 06:30
Creating Memories.
Fay Slimm. said:
Days of play create many memories and thank you for reminding us that those times are so valuable. dear Andy.
August 24th, 2022 05:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Days of play create many memories and thank you for reminding us that those times are so valuable. dear Andy.
August 24th, 2022 05:03
Creating Memories.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold, and fine song going back to 1950 originally I read. A proper song, no garbage!
Any preparations for Hastings yet?
August 24th, 2022 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold, and fine song going back to 1950 originally I read. A proper song, no garbage!
Any preparations for Hastings yet?
August 24th, 2022 02:01
Creating Memories.
arqios said:
That is so spot on! What we see on the other end of a long lived life are the memories that we have \'produced\' simply by being ourselves with those that we surrounded ourselves with.
August 24th, 2022 01:27
arqios said:
That is so spot on! What we see on the other end of a long lived life are the memories that we have \'produced\' simply by being ourselves with those that we surrounded ourselves with.
August 24th, 2022 01:27
Uncaged Birds.
Neville said:
Keeping a bird in a cage, is an outrage
how times do change though .. N :)
August 24th, 2022 01:14
Neville said:
Keeping a bird in a cage, is an outrage
how times do change though .. N :)
August 24th, 2022 01:14
Laughter\'s Healing.
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s nothing like a good old laugh -
Endorphins released give that boost;
Always fun to be had? Not half!
Inhibition is muchly loosed………..
PS: thanks for the Two Ronnies, Andy. Fresh again after all those years - inhibitions released; I\'m going shopping🙂
August 23rd, 2022 19:11
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s nothing like a good old laugh -
Endorphins released give that boost;
Always fun to be had? Not half!
Inhibition is muchly loosed………..
PS: thanks for the Two Ronnies, Andy. Fresh again after all those years - inhibitions released; I\'m going shopping🙂
August 23rd, 2022 19:11
Laughter\'s Healing.
dusk arising said:
It used to be there were bits of me made me laugh at myself, nowdays i realise i\'m just one big joke.
August 23rd, 2022 05:40
dusk arising said:
It used to be there were bits of me made me laugh at myself, nowdays i realise i\'m just one big joke.
August 23rd, 2022 05:40
Uncaged Birds.
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem, devoted to such an extraordinary creature. They fill my morning walks with song. They come to the feeder outside my kitchen window, and I stop to marvel at them every time I pass by. Thank you for bringing this joy to life in your words.
August 22nd, 2022 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem, devoted to such an extraordinary creature. They fill my morning walks with song. They come to the feeder outside my kitchen window, and I stop to marvel at them every time I pass by. Thank you for bringing this joy to life in your words.
August 22nd, 2022 14:32
Uncaged Birds.
Doggerel Dave said:
There are no birds which need to be caged,
Or would be caged if they had any choice.
Feed them good food so their appetite is assuaged;
Your reward will be great as they give voice.
Not advice to you personally, Andy – You are aware of all this already.
August 22nd, 2022 05:02
Doggerel Dave said:
There are no birds which need to be caged,
Or would be caged if they had any choice.
Feed them good food so their appetite is assuaged;
Your reward will be great as they give voice.
Not advice to you personally, Andy – You are aware of all this already.
August 22nd, 2022 05:02
Thai Dining.
spilleronsheet said:
That’s great Andy…spill the menu you had ? Thai curries are extremely tasty…
August 22nd, 2022 03:54
spilleronsheet said:
That’s great Andy…spill the menu you had ? Thai curries are extremely tasty…
August 22nd, 2022 03:54
Uncaged Birds.
orchidee said:
If enough of them chirp loud enough, they will drown out my singing! lol.
August 22nd, 2022 01:38
orchidee said:
If enough of them chirp loud enough, they will drown out my singing! lol.
August 22nd, 2022 01:38
Thai Dining.
Doggerel Dave said:
If you find a good café then stick to it:
When a bad experience does occur
Which means the stomach with bad food gets hit,
Then one’s bowels can violently demur.
You may take it that this advice is borne of experience, Andy.
August 21st, 2022 08:21
Doggerel Dave said:
If you find a good café then stick to it:
When a bad experience does occur
Which means the stomach with bad food gets hit,
Then one’s bowels can violently demur.
You may take it that this advice is borne of experience, Andy.
August 21st, 2022 08:21
Trapped In A Telephone.
Fay Slimm. said:
I have to laugh when I see someone talking it seems to themselves - we used to label such ones insane not too long ago - whaever next Andy I wonder ?.
August 21st, 2022 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
I have to laugh when I see someone talking it seems to themselves - we used to label such ones insane not too long ago - whaever next Andy I wonder ?.
August 21st, 2022 03:35
Thai Dining.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I must have plain foods though.
Why do I take a short cut thorough an arcade of foreign food restaurants, then come out feeling sick? Doh!
It\'s some bean sprouts smell that does it.
August 21st, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I must have plain foods though.
Why do I take a short cut thorough an arcade of foreign food restaurants, then come out feeling sick? Doh!
It\'s some bean sprouts smell that does it.
August 21st, 2022 01:48
Thai Dining.
Thekkinkkattil said:
Happy you had an enjoyable evening with your lover and friends and the restaurant credited.Good write Andy
August 21st, 2022 01:29
Thekkinkkattil said:
Happy you had an enjoyable evening with your lover and friends and the restaurant credited.Good write Andy
August 21st, 2022 01:29
Trapped In A Telephone.
MendedFences27 said:
I think you might be onto something here Andy. Maybe they are prisoners, hypnotized or brain washed through their phones. Soon they will lose all emotional response and just walk about with phone in hand. Maybe, it\'s time for a new Cell Theory. - Phil A.
August 20th, 2022 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
I think you might be onto something here Andy. Maybe they are prisoners, hypnotized or brain washed through their phones. Soon they will lose all emotional response and just walk about with phone in hand. Maybe, it\'s time for a new Cell Theory. - Phil A.
August 20th, 2022 15:14
Trapped In A Telephone.
Bella Shepard said:
You have struck on a question I have asked myself for a number of years. What does the face of a cell phone have that a human face does not? Unfortunately there is no rehab for this addiction. Great write!
August 20th, 2022 10:58
Bella Shepard said:
You have struck on a question I have asked myself for a number of years. What does the face of a cell phone have that a human face does not? Unfortunately there is no rehab for this addiction. Great write!
August 20th, 2022 10:58
Changes In Time.
deepz said:
It is true that time waits for nothing and we don\'t know what waits for us. Beautiful poem.
August 20th, 2022 08:42
deepz said:
It is true that time waits for nothing and we don\'t know what waits for us. Beautiful poem.
August 20th, 2022 08:42
Trapped In A Telephone.
dusk arising said:
Aha! The \'phoney\' generation goldfinch. Picturing u sat in your cafe (or should I call it coffee house in 2022) surrounded by phoneys and writing poetry about them. Gosh, would they know how to react if you spoke to them?
August 20th, 2022 05:38
dusk arising said:
Aha! The \'phoney\' generation goldfinch. Picturing u sat in your cafe (or should I call it coffee house in 2022) surrounded by phoneys and writing poetry about them. Gosh, would they know how to react if you spoke to them?
August 20th, 2022 05:38
Trapped In A Telephone.
orchidee said:
Were we the same millions of years ago? Did we walk around in a telephone box, down the street, in the park, etc, wherever we went?! lol.
August 20th, 2022 01:57
orchidee said:
Were we the same millions of years ago? Did we walk around in a telephone box, down the street, in the park, etc, wherever we went?! lol.
August 20th, 2022 01:57
Trapped In A Telephone.
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very pertinent question. May be we don\'t belong to this generation.I really enjoyed it
August 20th, 2022 01:17
Thekkinkkattil said:
A very pertinent question. May be we don\'t belong to this generation.I really enjoyed it
August 20th, 2022 01:17
Changes In Time.
Doggerel Dave said:
The picture is clear –
When life’s end draws near
There’s nothing to fear
It is today that’s dear.
One day at a time, Andy.
August 19th, 2022 07:29
Doggerel Dave said:
The picture is clear –
When life’s end draws near
There’s nothing to fear
It is today that’s dear.
One day at a time, Andy.
August 19th, 2022 07:29
Changes In Time.
dusk arising said:
I\'m so pleased to read that you still walk alongside your beloved Avon (you\'ll have to tell me how to drive onto Crown Meadow when the gates at the bottom of the ramp are shut yet there are cars on the meadow).
It\'s refreshing to think about times changing and generations moving on. We can try to pass along out wisdom and knowledge as best we can but at the end of the day the thing we pass along mostly is love.
August 19th, 2022 04:22
dusk arising said:
I\'m so pleased to read that you still walk alongside your beloved Avon (you\'ll have to tell me how to drive onto Crown Meadow when the gates at the bottom of the ramp are shut yet there are cars on the meadow).
It\'s refreshing to think about times changing and generations moving on. We can try to pass along out wisdom and knowledge as best we can but at the end of the day the thing we pass along mostly is love.
August 19th, 2022 04:22
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