Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Peace In Music.
MendedFences27 said:
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered music as a powerful force. It can, indeed, bring people together. I believe it would bring peace if countries\' people had the choice and not their authoritarian despots. A well-spoken plea for peace through music. - Phil A.
August 28th, 2022 20:10
MendedFences27 said:
If only the world could make music and not war. I\'ve often considered music as a powerful force. It can, indeed, bring people together. I believe it would bring peace if countries\' people had the choice and not their authoritarian despots. A well-spoken plea for peace through music. - Phil A.
August 28th, 2022 20:10
Peace In Music.
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, close the door to the world and switch on the music.
August 28th, 2022 04:23
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, close the door to the world and switch on the music.
August 28th, 2022 04:23
Peace In Music.
Doggerel Dave said:
And there you pose the question;
Five easy lines is all it took.
Now then it demands the answer -
And no – it’s not the next Chinook.
I hope this doesn’t depress you too much Andy. Never forget the music.
August 28th, 2022 02:14
Doggerel Dave said:
And there you pose the question;
Five easy lines is all it took.
Now then it demands the answer -
And no – it’s not the next Chinook.
I hope this doesn’t depress you too much Andy. Never forget the music.
August 28th, 2022 02:14
The Final Over.
Bella Shepard said:
A great tribute to love of the game. The excitement, the thrill of victory, sportsmen all around. What a wonderful memory. Great write!
August 27th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
A great tribute to love of the game. The excitement, the thrill of victory, sportsmen all around. What a wonderful memory. Great write!
August 27th, 2022 13:04
The Final Over.
Doggerel Dave said:
Vitaï Lampada and you are the go:
Play up and play the game - and you did.
This cricket feels like your forte you know;
Was your talent for croquet deeply hid?
I’d use ‘epic‘ but have been beaten to the draw; I’ll settle for \'a great piece of narrative\'. Well writ, Sir!
August 27th, 2022 08:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Vitaï Lampada and you are the go:
Play up and play the game - and you did.
This cricket feels like your forte you know;
Was your talent for croquet deeply hid?
I’d use ‘epic‘ but have been beaten to the draw; I’ll settle for \'a great piece of narrative\'. Well writ, Sir!
August 27th, 2022 08:12
The Final Over.
sorenbarrett said:
I know very little of cricket but this poem brought back memories of Casey at the bat by Ernest Thayer.An old favorite poem of mine.
August 27th, 2022 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
I know very little of cricket but this poem brought back memories of Casey at the bat by Ernest Thayer.An old favorite poem of mine.
August 27th, 2022 07:48
The Final Over.
dusk arising said:
Never having been a cricket fan, this surprised me for its pace and intrigue. Nice one - owzat?
August 27th, 2022 04:57
dusk arising said:
Never having been a cricket fan, this surprised me for its pace and intrigue. Nice one - owzat?
August 27th, 2022 04:57
The Final Over.
Neville said:
Owzat .. there are some things one never forgets .. I bet you were bowled over Andy ...... this is epic :)
August 27th, 2022 03:03
Neville said:
Owzat .. there are some things one never forgets .. I bet you were bowled over Andy ...... this is epic :)
August 27th, 2022 03:03
Three Things.
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot – you talking to me?
Just shut up and let it be -
Let the world be a kinder place
Without my contribution in this space.
Should I get your words tattooed to my ……….. as a reminder, Andy? 🙂
August 26th, 2022 08:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot – you talking to me?
Just shut up and let it be -
Let the world be a kinder place
Without my contribution in this space.
Should I get your words tattooed to my ……….. as a reminder, Andy? 🙂
August 26th, 2022 08:17
Three Things.
Fay Slimm. said:
You verse life\'s journey so well with time showing us what we cannot recover - -- thank you for this wise reminder dear Andy.
August 26th, 2022 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
You verse life\'s journey so well with time showing us what we cannot recover - -- thank you for this wise reminder dear Andy.
August 26th, 2022 02:51
Three Things.
arqios said:
Wow! Just read that, taking my time to go with the music. A perfect combination that swelled in the reading with the crescendo! Sublime Andy. Thanks.
August 26th, 2022 02:46
arqios said:
Wow! Just read that, taking my time to go with the music. A perfect combination that swelled in the reading with the crescendo! Sublime Andy. Thanks.
August 26th, 2022 02:46
Three Things.
Neville said:
quite simply perfect in the clarity of its profoundness ......... bravo sir :)
August 26th, 2022 02:33
Neville said:
quite simply perfect in the clarity of its profoundness ......... bravo sir :)
August 26th, 2022 02:33
Three Things.
dusk arising said:
So wisely true Andy. At a slower pace maybe we can all become gentler with each other as we learn the meaning of prescious.
August 26th, 2022 01:55
dusk arising said:
So wisely true Andy. At a slower pace maybe we can all become gentler with each other as we learn the meaning of prescious.
August 26th, 2022 01:55
Three Things.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
In my case, they wish I had never said - or sung - the words. Or so-called singing! lol.
August 26th, 2022 01:43
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
In my case, they wish I had never said - or sung - the words. Or so-called singing! lol.
August 26th, 2022 01:43
How Did That Happen?
Rocky Lagou said:
I can totally relate to this sporadic sentimentality.
Hope you\'re doing well dear poet!
I used to be in my school\'s orchestra for a good 3 years, so I now how it feels to play that \"final encore.\"
August 25th, 2022 10:35
Rocky Lagou said:
I can totally relate to this sporadic sentimentality.
Hope you\'re doing well dear poet!
I used to be in my school\'s orchestra for a good 3 years, so I now how it feels to play that \"final encore.\"
August 25th, 2022 10:35
How Did That Happen?
arqios said:
Many, far too many things of a now apparently bygone era are bowing out in droves. It is palpable how walking dinosaurs feel like. Perhaps the passing of the baton skipped a generation or so. But there are many old souls among the young out there. And together we can make the good old days fresh and springing forth a day at a time.
August 25th, 2022 03:32
arqios said:
Many, far too many things of a now apparently bygone era are bowing out in droves. It is palpable how walking dinosaurs feel like. Perhaps the passing of the baton skipped a generation or so. But there are many old souls among the young out there. And together we can make the good old days fresh and springing forth a day at a time.
August 25th, 2022 03:32
Creating Memories.
jazzwa30 said:
Yes I miss being little no responsibilities good read
August 24th, 2022 18:43
jazzwa30 said:
Yes I miss being little no responsibilities good read
August 24th, 2022 18:43
Creating Memories.
MendedFences27 said:
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great memories. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2022 10:29
MendedFences27 said:
The by-gone days of youth memorialized. Yeah, those were some great memories. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2022 10:29
Creating Memories.
Ternic73 said:
Was a lifetime ago life was simple and I loved it. Awesome poem
August 24th, 2022 08:41
Ternic73 said:
Was a lifetime ago life was simple and I loved it. Awesome poem
August 24th, 2022 08:41
Creating Memories.
sorenbarrett said:
We rarely think of the memories that we are creating. But as we look back each brick we put in that wall makes it larger and sets its form.
August 24th, 2022 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
We rarely think of the memories that we are creating. But as we look back each brick we put in that wall makes it larger and sets its form.
August 24th, 2022 07:27
Creating Memories.
Doggerel Dave said:
Echoes from our past -
Hope all can relish.
For some all fun passed
Them by; just hellish.
Apologies Andy – I certainly enjoy good memories of much (if not all) of my childhood. Occasionally I must remind myself that others maybe didn’t. I admire the focus of your reminder though.
August 24th, 2022 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Echoes from our past -
Hope all can relish.
For some all fun passed
Them by; just hellish.
Apologies Andy – I certainly enjoy good memories of much (if not all) of my childhood. Occasionally I must remind myself that others maybe didn’t. I admire the focus of your reminder though.
August 24th, 2022 07:23
Creating Memories.
Aradhya said:
such heartfelt words andy! indeed the moments we spent laughing and playing unburdened, growing up are the most beautiful memories in life that accompanies us through out. loved this piece!
August 24th, 2022 06:30
Aradhya said:
such heartfelt words andy! indeed the moments we spent laughing and playing unburdened, growing up are the most beautiful memories in life that accompanies us through out. loved this piece!
August 24th, 2022 06:30
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