Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Infinite Travel.
L. B. Mek said:
\'When I sat by her side
As her last breath flowed
And the Light of her world
Left her body,
Left my body.\'
heart wrenchingly relatable, I have read your words more than 3 times now, each time I paused for a few minutes before restarting...
I shall remember the Joyce you introduced to me with your kind words, as I toast all the good still remaining in our lives...
let your inked words soak-up all that pain you bare so bravely,
a wonderful dedication Andy and a brilliant read!
December 31st, 2020 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'When I sat by her side
As her last breath flowed
And the Light of her world
Left her body,
Left my body.\'
heart wrenchingly relatable, I have read your words more than 3 times now, each time I paused for a few minutes before restarting...
I shall remember the Joyce you introduced to me with your kind words, as I toast all the good still remaining in our lives...
let your inked words soak-up all that pain you bare so bravely,
a wonderful dedication Andy and a brilliant read!
December 31st, 2020 04:42
Tomorrow\'s New Day.
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes always two sides the happening as the old year draws to is close - thank you dear Andy for the positive outlook as the new year comes into view. May your postings continue to delight and upbuild us all.
December 31st, 2020 04:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes always two sides the happening as the old year draws to is close - thank you dear Andy for the positive outlook as the new year comes into view. May your postings continue to delight and upbuild us all.
December 31st, 2020 04:33
Tomorrow\'s New Day.
Neville said:
this is spot on my friend .... and back at ya ..... Happy New Year sir ...
December 31st, 2020 03:22
Neville said:
this is spot on my friend .... and back at ya ..... Happy New Year sir ...
December 31st, 2020 03:22
Tomorrow\'s New Day.
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
Happy New Year\'s Eve,
A wonderful write for the last day of 2020.
Wow, what a year.
You are right we are still here and we should look forward to the New Year that lies ahead.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 02:28
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
Happy New Year\'s Eve,
A wonderful write for the last day of 2020.
Wow, what a year.
You are right we are still here and we should look forward to the New Year that lies ahead.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 31st, 2020 02:28
Infinite Travel.
Jerry Reynolds said:
A more powerful first eight lines I have not read this day. Sorry for your loss Goldfinch.
December 30th, 2020 17:25
Jerry Reynolds said:
A more powerful first eight lines I have not read this day. Sorry for your loss Goldfinch.
December 30th, 2020 17:25
Infinite Travel.
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
A lovely tribute to Joyce.
Thank you.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 30th, 2020 16:23
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
A lovely tribute to Joyce.
Thank you.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 30th, 2020 16:23
Infinite Travel.
Neville said:
I knew when it came there would just have too be a lump in my throat ...
Seriously heartfelt Andy and stand alone beautiful sir ......................
December 30th, 2020 03:32
Neville said:
I knew when it came there would just have too be a lump in my throat ...
Seriously heartfelt Andy and stand alone beautiful sir ......................
December 30th, 2020 03:32
Infinite Travel.
Samer Amin said:
I do not think I will be exaggerating, if I say that the unity of sorrowfulness and the unshakable belief in these lines, if it is truly felt and understood, will be able to shake Heaven and Earth.
December 30th, 2020 03:09
Samer Amin said:
I do not think I will be exaggerating, if I say that the unity of sorrowfulness and the unshakable belief in these lines, if it is truly felt and understood, will be able to shake Heaven and Earth.
December 30th, 2020 03:09
Infinite Travel.
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
Meanwhile - a fabulous year for some - no singing allowed in some places. Hooray, they say, we won\'t hear ya! Doh!
December 30th, 2020 02:57
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
Meanwhile - a fabulous year for some - no singing allowed in some places. Hooray, they say, we won\'t hear ya! Doh!
December 30th, 2020 02:57
Infinite Travel.
dusk arising said:
Well, what a year 2020 has thrown at you Goldfinch. Along with your sad loss you\'ve had to put up with such restrictions on social contact which can\'t have been easy for you are an outgoing soul. You were establishing yourself in croquet circles till pandemic put the brakes on that. Yes, it will re-start I\'m sure, meanwhile - music, the river, people watching poetry, appreciation of bad drivers, and what else.... oh yes, you no longer have to worry about brexit and those remoaners.... a weight lifted from us all.
Wishing you a safe and healthy new year and plenty more to follow.
December 30th, 2020 02:28
dusk arising said:
Well, what a year 2020 has thrown at you Goldfinch. Along with your sad loss you\'ve had to put up with such restrictions on social contact which can\'t have been easy for you are an outgoing soul. You were establishing yourself in croquet circles till pandemic put the brakes on that. Yes, it will re-start I\'m sure, meanwhile - music, the river, people watching poetry, appreciation of bad drivers, and what else.... oh yes, you no longer have to worry about brexit and those remoaners.... a weight lifted from us all.
Wishing you a safe and healthy new year and plenty more to follow.
December 30th, 2020 02:28
Snow Happy Family.
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
A enchanting write.
Wembley is a bit warm for snow im afraid.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 10:28
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
A enchanting write.
Wembley is a bit warm for snow im afraid.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 29th, 2020 10:28
Snow Happy Family.
dusk arising said:
Yes, life goes on, and this is a super realisation of enjoying other peoples pleasure. I too am enjoying thoughts of my distant grandchildren out there playing in the snow. I know their dad will be building a snowman with them.
This poem shows your heartfelt love of life Goldfinch.... long may that light twinkle in you.
December 29th, 2020 09:02
dusk arising said:
Yes, life goes on, and this is a super realisation of enjoying other peoples pleasure. I too am enjoying thoughts of my distant grandchildren out there playing in the snow. I know their dad will be building a snowman with them.
This poem shows your heartfelt love of life Goldfinch.... long may that light twinkle in you.
December 29th, 2020 09:02
Snow Happy Family.
Suresh said:
When you see someone smile, you can\'t help but smile as well,
And such is with your words today.
December 29th, 2020 06:29
Suresh said:
When you see someone smile, you can\'t help but smile as well,
And such is with your words today.
December 29th, 2020 06:29
Treasured Moments.
L. B. Mek said:
may I be deemed worthy - enough, to be bestowed with even a modicum of that wisdom you\'ve gleaned,
brilliant message, especially in the context of what must be such a difficult time in your life...
keep the faith my friend, \'she\' must be so proud!
December 29th, 2020 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
may I be deemed worthy - enough, to be bestowed with even a modicum of that wisdom you\'ve gleaned,
brilliant message, especially in the context of what must be such a difficult time in your life...
keep the faith my friend, \'she\' must be so proud!
December 29th, 2020 05:11
Snow Happy Family.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I saw a dog running around with two other dogs, enjoying life, whatever the season.
December 29th, 2020 02:36
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I saw a dog running around with two other dogs, enjoying life, whatever the season.
December 29th, 2020 02:36
Treasured Moments.
Jerry Reynolds said:
A Fine shared feeling Andy. Stay Safe and Happy New Year.
December 28th, 2020 18:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
A Fine shared feeling Andy. Stay Safe and Happy New Year.
December 28th, 2020 18:32
Treasured Moments.
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
A good write capturing the spirit of this unforgettable year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:55
FineB said:
Hi Andy,
A good write capturing the spirit of this unforgettable year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 28th, 2020 11:55
Treasured Moments.
dusk arising said:
YEAH! Well said Goldfinch. Thats exactly how i feel. Us oldies can hopefully look back at 2020 with all its strangeness as a short interlude in an enjoyable existence.
December 28th, 2020 08:38
dusk arising said:
YEAH! Well said Goldfinch. Thats exactly how i feel. Us oldies can hopefully look back at 2020 with all its strangeness as a short interlude in an enjoyable existence.
December 28th, 2020 08:38
Treasured Moments.
Fay Slimm. said:
May you have countless moments left to enjoy dear Andy. A lovely read and an unforgettable number.
December 28th, 2020 06:39
Fay Slimm. said:
May you have countless moments left to enjoy dear Andy. A lovely read and an unforgettable number.
December 28th, 2020 06:39
Treasured Moments.
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s not goodbye from him. Or from me.
December 28th, 2020 06:00
Michael Edwards said:
And it\'s not goodbye from him. Or from me.
December 28th, 2020 06:00
Treasured Moments.
orchidee said:
You staying? Ah good! Yep, that\'s a lot of years for us two, and any other poets that were at Hastings.
Aww, they wish I would say \'goodbye\', or at least say goodbye to my singing! lol.
December 28th, 2020 03:10
orchidee said:
You staying? Ah good! Yep, that\'s a lot of years for us two, and any other poets that were at Hastings.
Aww, they wish I would say \'goodbye\', or at least say goodbye to my singing! lol.
December 28th, 2020 03:10
As I Sit Here Thinking.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good poem Goldfinch. Happy New Year.
December 27th, 2020 16:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good poem Goldfinch. Happy New Year.
December 27th, 2020 16:12
As I Sit Here Thinking.
Samer Amin said:
Your touching words were able to shake the deepest point of my psyche to unprecedented degree.
I will keep praying for all of us that we could reunite with our beloved ones forever and ever.
December 27th, 2020 11:03
Samer Amin said:
Your touching words were able to shake the deepest point of my psyche to unprecedented degree.
I will keep praying for all of us that we could reunite with our beloved ones forever and ever.
December 27th, 2020 11:03
Some Things In Life.
Neville said:
there aint many universal truths, but this is several of em and truly true too ..........
December 27th, 2020 05:25
Neville said:
there aint many universal truths, but this is several of em and truly true too ..........
December 27th, 2020 05:25
As I Sit Here Thinking.
Michael Edwards said:
A touching write dear friend.
December 27th, 2020 04:43
Michael Edwards said:
A touching write dear friend.
December 27th, 2020 04:43
As I Sit Here Thinking.
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
In my \'meanwhile\' (dafter) times: \'Thinking? Oooh, it can be dangerous\'. Well, it was when I had a thought in 1066. lol.
Did we turn up for the Dedication of Westminster Abbey, in December 1065? Did I sing a solo, and they all ran away?
December 27th, 2020 03:10
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
In my \'meanwhile\' (dafter) times: \'Thinking? Oooh, it can be dangerous\'. Well, it was when I had a thought in 1066. lol.
Did we turn up for the Dedication of Westminster Abbey, in December 1065? Did I sing a solo, and they all ran away?
December 27th, 2020 03:10
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