Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Raining In My Heart.
SureshG said:
She wants you to gather a few more stories to share for when you are together again, as you do with us of your memories
December 30th, 2021 10:28
SureshG said:
She wants you to gather a few more stories to share for when you are together again, as you do with us of your memories
December 30th, 2021 10:28
Raining In My Heart.
dusk arising said:
It\'s with great courage you soldier on bolstered by your beliefs and strongly held faith. Giving so generously of yourself. You are indeed a remarkable human being and we are lucky to be blessed with your words and attention here on mps.... soincerely meant.
December 30th, 2021 05:37
dusk arising said:
It\'s with great courage you soldier on bolstered by your beliefs and strongly held faith. Giving so generously of yourself. You are indeed a remarkable human being and we are lucky to be blessed with your words and attention here on mps.... soincerely meant.
December 30th, 2021 05:37
Raining In My Heart.
Neville said:
I remember that day my golden friend .. and my thoughts are with you today sir
December 30th, 2021 04:57
Neville said:
I remember that day my golden friend .. and my thoughts are with you today sir
December 30th, 2021 04:57
Raining In My Heart.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Gold , that was really really heart wrenching to read. Tough moments to part from our loved one.
But yes, we have memories to cherish the time spent with her. Those are a treasure and a booster dose to move ahead in such situations. Well written and really touching !!
December 30th, 2021 04:09
Vamsi Sudha said:
Gold , that was really really heart wrenching to read. Tough moments to part from our loved one.
But yes, we have memories to cherish the time spent with her. Those are a treasure and a booster dose to move ahead in such situations. Well written and really touching !!
December 30th, 2021 04:09
Raining In My Heart.
spilleronsheet said:
Very emotional write dear Andy
I always wonder how she was
And then through your poetry i can actually feel the presence of her
She was a lovely lady
And your love is eternal
One day you shall reunite again
But for now mps shall stall you for sometime to hear the wonderful tales and experiences of your life
Felt teary after reading this poetry
But could feel true love
December 30th, 2021 03:14
spilleronsheet said:
Very emotional write dear Andy
I always wonder how she was
And then through your poetry i can actually feel the presence of her
She was a lovely lady
And your love is eternal
One day you shall reunite again
But for now mps shall stall you for sometime to hear the wonderful tales and experiences of your life
Felt teary after reading this poetry
But could feel true love
December 30th, 2021 03:14
Raining In My Heart.
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
Time went slowly then, maybe. Then fast perhaps - two years already.
December 30th, 2021 03:02
orchidee said:
A poignant write Gold.
Time went slowly then, maybe. Then fast perhaps - two years already.
December 30th, 2021 03:02
Raining In My Heart.
Michael Edwards said:
I well remember you parting with the sad news - a poem written with such feeling - may she rest in peace.
December 30th, 2021 02:40
Michael Edwards said:
I well remember you parting with the sad news - a poem written with such feeling - may she rest in peace.
December 30th, 2021 02:40
Raining In My Heart.
Rozina said:
This is very sad. I am sorry to hear of your loss.
December 30th, 2021 02:13
Rozina said:
This is very sad. I am sorry to hear of your loss.
December 30th, 2021 02:13
Singing In The Bar.
Rozina said:
Sounds like great times! An enjoyable read.
December 30th, 2021 02:11
Rozina said:
Sounds like great times! An enjoyable read.
December 30th, 2021 02:11
Singing In The Bar.
Neville said:
Quite write too sir .. Not lost and neither are they forgotten ......... N
December 29th, 2021 05:11
Neville said:
Quite write too sir .. Not lost and neither are they forgotten ......... N
December 29th, 2021 05:11
Singing In The Bar.
dusk arising said:
Like medals on our chest, our memories as we age are the reward for a life \'lived\'...... a possession we can reach out and grasp, hold dearly and know, it is something which makes us who we are.
December 29th, 2021 04:42
dusk arising said:
Like medals on our chest, our memories as we age are the reward for a life \'lived\'...... a possession we can reach out and grasp, hold dearly and know, it is something which makes us who we are.
December 29th, 2021 04:42
Singing In The Bar.
spilleronsheet said:
It’s never too late to revisit the memory lanes
Cheers to those pictures you made
Beautiful lines my dear friend
December 29th, 2021 04:08
spilleronsheet said:
It’s never too late to revisit the memory lanes
Cheers to those pictures you made
Beautiful lines my dear friend
December 29th, 2021 04:08
Singing In The Bar.
Fay Slimm. said:
Those were the days my friend - - and they never end in the memories they left - - a night with good friends brought its own tonic. A lovely read Andy and a very good number by Tom
December 29th, 2021 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Those were the days my friend - - and they never end in the memories they left - - a night with good friends brought its own tonic. A lovely read Andy and a very good number by Tom
December 29th, 2021 04:02
Singing In The Bar.
woundedheart said:
Ah those heady younger days when life seemed so full of fun and promise and we made our own entertainment for free. A time made even more special if like yourself we had good friends to share it with. Beautiful words my friend. ☺🍻
December 29th, 2021 02:14
woundedheart said:
Ah those heady younger days when life seemed so full of fun and promise and we made our own entertainment for free. A time made even more special if like yourself we had good friends to share it with. Beautiful words my friend. ☺🍻
December 29th, 2021 02:14
Such A Lucky Man.
Rozina said:
You are indeed surrounded by beautiful gifts. In these days this is a great fortune indeed. Lovely.
December 29th, 2021 01:42
Rozina said:
You are indeed surrounded by beautiful gifts. In these days this is a great fortune indeed. Lovely.
December 29th, 2021 01:42
Such A Lucky Man.
dusk arising said:
You are a lucky man because you see the positive and the beauty all around you. With a different mindset you could equally see the negatives and consider yourself the unlucky one but that is not you, not the way your mind works.
I share much of the same outlook as you.
It\'s plain to see on MPS we have writers of both ilks.
December 28th, 2021 07:42
dusk arising said:
You are a lucky man because you see the positive and the beauty all around you. With a different mindset you could equally see the negatives and consider yourself the unlucky one but that is not you, not the way your mind works.
I share much of the same outlook as you.
It\'s plain to see on MPS we have writers of both ilks.
December 28th, 2021 07:42
Such A Lucky Man.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Though I don\'t go along with \'luck\' really.
December 28th, 2021 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Though I don\'t go along with \'luck\' really.
December 28th, 2021 02:58
Such A Lucky Man.
woundedheart said:
Nature\'s bounty displayed freely in art and music two of men\'s better creations yet the world did it first. Lovely descriptive poetry my friend. ☺
December 28th, 2021 02:57
woundedheart said:
Nature\'s bounty displayed freely in art and music two of men\'s better creations yet the world did it first. Lovely descriptive poetry my friend. ☺
December 28th, 2021 02:57
Such A Lucky Man.
Fay Slimm. said:
You phrase your life in such grateful words Andy and we can all follow your fine example of looking at the gifts of Nature and enjoying our days more by appreciation - - lovely thoughts and thank you for sharing them.
December 28th, 2021 02:46
Fay Slimm. said:
You phrase your life in such grateful words Andy and we can all follow your fine example of looking at the gifts of Nature and enjoying our days more by appreciation - - lovely thoughts and thank you for sharing them.
December 28th, 2021 02:46
Trials Of Life.
woundedheart said:
You can\'t know joy if you\'ve never suffered pain we need light and dark to appreciate the good times, beautifully penned. ☺
December 27th, 2021 18:04
woundedheart said:
You can\'t know joy if you\'ve never suffered pain we need light and dark to appreciate the good times, beautifully penned. ☺
December 27th, 2021 18:04
Trials Of Life.
spilleronsheet said:
Positive words and a true retrospection makes a man rise from fall again
Those are powerful words
The essence of life
Loved the ending
So well stringed together
“ If there was not a price to pay in our lives for those trials,
We would not know that we learned something through them.”
December 27th, 2021 11:03
spilleronsheet said:
Positive words and a true retrospection makes a man rise from fall again
Those are powerful words
The essence of life
Loved the ending
So well stringed together
“ If there was not a price to pay in our lives for those trials,
We would not know that we learned something through them.”
December 27th, 2021 11:03
Trials Of Life.
Michael Edwards said:
Great reflective write Andy. Thankfully Jeanne\'s problems seem to be being addressed and we have hope for my son whose business is in dire straits thanks to covid but on reflection I do believe we will all pull through. Currently listening to some erdhu music - so relaxing and a great way to calm the mind.
December 27th, 2021 03:53
Michael Edwards said:
Great reflective write Andy. Thankfully Jeanne\'s problems seem to be being addressed and we have hope for my son whose business is in dire straits thanks to covid but on reflection I do believe we will all pull through. Currently listening to some erdhu music - so relaxing and a great way to calm the mind.
December 27th, 2021 03:53
Trials Of Life.
Rozina said:
Very true. Sometimes it\'s 1 step forward and 2 steps back. But bit by bit we will overcome. Thank you.
December 27th, 2021 03:48
Rozina said:
Very true. Sometimes it\'s 1 step forward and 2 steps back. But bit by bit we will overcome. Thank you.
December 27th, 2021 03:48
Trials Of Life.
Poetic Dan said:
Sad it can take so long to see... so very true and a big thank you..
December 27th, 2021 03:40
Poetic Dan said:
Sad it can take so long to see... so very true and a big thank you..
December 27th, 2021 03:40
Trials Of Life.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
But meanwhile - what about me singing \'trials\'? They\'re a trial to me tutor. I\'ve learnt nothing through them. Not learnt how to sing better anyway! lol.
Why tutor say to me: \'If at first, or after a thousand times, you don\'t succeed - give up!\' heehee.
December 27th, 2021 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
But meanwhile - what about me singing \'trials\'? They\'re a trial to me tutor. I\'ve learnt nothing through them. Not learnt how to sing better anyway! lol.
Why tutor say to me: \'If at first, or after a thousand times, you don\'t succeed - give up!\' heehee.
December 27th, 2021 03:05
Trials Of Life.
dusk arising said:
Had a real hammer blow long time ago which made me e-evaluate everything. Turning upside down a lot of things i thought i had the measure of. Am I the better for it... I think so, but I am biased after all.
I think it has made me more resilient and able take things life throws at me in a more measured manner. I count my blessings as being fortunate for the way i live, think and communicate and most of all I am thankful for having a positive outlook.
Excellent writing from you today Andy..... very thought provoking especially fot those hoping to change a few things as the approaching new year seems to create a milestone from which to start in a lot of minds. Start gently would be my advice and don\'t be put off by things if you trip-up, just get up, dust yourself down and start again on your path.
December 27th, 2021 02:52
dusk arising said:
Had a real hammer blow long time ago which made me e-evaluate everything. Turning upside down a lot of things i thought i had the measure of. Am I the better for it... I think so, but I am biased after all.
I think it has made me more resilient and able take things life throws at me in a more measured manner. I count my blessings as being fortunate for the way i live, think and communicate and most of all I am thankful for having a positive outlook.
Excellent writing from you today Andy..... very thought provoking especially fot those hoping to change a few things as the approaching new year seems to create a milestone from which to start in a lot of minds. Start gently would be my advice and don\'t be put off by things if you trip-up, just get up, dust yourself down and start again on your path.
December 27th, 2021 02:52
Christmas Senryu.
Neville said:
This little gem just made my eyes water involuntarily … I am seriously senryued sir … 💕❣️👍❤️ Neville
December 26th, 2021 16:53
Neville said:
This little gem just made my eyes water involuntarily … I am seriously senryued sir … 💕❣️👍❤️ Neville
December 26th, 2021 16:53
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