Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Jacob Rees-Smogg. (sic).
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on - when I heard the \'light weight\' comment I immediately thought: Yes light weight and muscular with none of the PMs blubber.
January 14th, 2022 04:40
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on - when I heard the \'light weight\' comment I immediately thought: Yes light weight and muscular with none of the PMs blubber.
January 14th, 2022 04:40
Jacob Rees-Smogg. (sic).
woundedheart said:
Love this guy have you watched the be bop guy he\'s amazing too. Great Poem and I agree do any leaders truly know what they are doing or worse still even care about their mistakes ☺
January 14th, 2022 03:17
woundedheart said:
Love this guy have you watched the be bop guy he\'s amazing too. Great Poem and I agree do any leaders truly know what they are doing or worse still even care about their mistakes ☺
January 14th, 2022 03:17
Jacob Rees-Smogg. (sic).
orchidee said:
Let\'s \'Vote for cabbages!\' then, as Teddy says.
January 14th, 2022 03:02
orchidee said:
Let\'s \'Vote for cabbages!\' then, as Teddy says.
January 14th, 2022 03:02
Leading To That Place.
dusk arising said:
So if i have made loads of mistakes (stepping up stones) does that put me on higher ground than you? LOL... am I climbing for a mighty big fall.
On another note, is there something in the water... why do we seem to be losing poets from mps at this time.... also lack of posts from regulars (including myself)
January 13th, 2022 08:24
dusk arising said:
So if i have made loads of mistakes (stepping up stones) does that put me on higher ground than you? LOL... am I climbing for a mighty big fall.
On another note, is there something in the water... why do we seem to be losing poets from mps at this time.... also lack of posts from regulars (including myself)
January 13th, 2022 08:24
Leading To That Place.
John Prophet said:
Experience at play. Too many carry these stones instead of walking on them. Great insightful ✍️ write.
January 13th, 2022 07:37
John Prophet said:
Experience at play. Too many carry these stones instead of walking on them. Great insightful ✍️ write.
January 13th, 2022 07:37
Leading To That Place.
woundedheart said:
Our mistakes help shape us if we are wise enough to learn from them, beautiful message poem my friend ☺
January 13th, 2022 07:13
woundedheart said:
Our mistakes help shape us if we are wise enough to learn from them, beautiful message poem my friend ☺
January 13th, 2022 07:13
Leading To That Place.
Rozina said:
Learning from our mistakes, sometimes bitterly. But we move on. Positive message thank you.
January 13th, 2022 04:11
Rozina said:
Learning from our mistakes, sometimes bitterly. But we move on. Positive message thank you.
January 13th, 2022 04:11
Leading To That Place.
Saxon Crow said:
So basically, there are no mistakes... Or am I mistaken?
January 13th, 2022 03:48
Saxon Crow said:
So basically, there are no mistakes... Or am I mistaken?
January 13th, 2022 03:48
Leading To That Place.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Aww, why they say I need to go.... you know it .... over the hills and far away?! lol.
January 13th, 2022 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Aww, why they say I need to go.... you know it .... over the hills and far away?! lol.
January 13th, 2022 03:23
Leading To That Place.
Caring dove said:
Just thought of the wizard of oz then and the yellow brick road ..
Nice writing , Andy ))
January 13th, 2022 02:56
Caring dove said:
Just thought of the wizard of oz then and the yellow brick road ..
Nice writing , Andy ))
January 13th, 2022 02:56
Leading To That Place.
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful words shining like sun
Armouring the fallen soul
Thank you so much for the wonderful poetry and the beautiful message
A reminder to success
January 13th, 2022 02:32
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful words shining like sun
Armouring the fallen soul
Thank you so much for the wonderful poetry and the beautiful message
A reminder to success
January 13th, 2022 02:32
Paul.
Michael Edwards said:
I love our language which is why I like poetry. As such I do recoil when I see bad grammar and spelling in poetry (where it\'s not used purposely and could be altered without detriment to the poem) and sadly there are regular examples of this here on MPS on a daily basis - not so yours I hasten to add.
January 12th, 2022 08:42
Michael Edwards said:
I love our language which is why I like poetry. As such I do recoil when I see bad grammar and spelling in poetry (where it\'s not used purposely and could be altered without detriment to the poem) and sadly there are regular examples of this here on MPS on a daily basis - not so yours I hasten to add.
January 12th, 2022 08:42
Paul.
Paul Bell said:
Isn\'t it so annoying, the whole of Europe speaks better English than us.
Actually, with some regional accents, it could be double Dutch.
January 12th, 2022 06:27
Paul Bell said:
Isn\'t it so annoying, the whole of Europe speaks better English than us.
Actually, with some regional accents, it could be double Dutch.
January 12th, 2022 06:27
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written poetic question here Andy, and I agree with your answer at the end.
Though I do consider myself a son of Dionysus on a regular basis, whilst I\'m at the pub, there is always some poetry in my bag to read, and there\'s always music in the air.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 12th, 2022 06:05
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written poetic question here Andy, and I agree with your answer at the end.
Though I do consider myself a son of Dionysus on a regular basis, whilst I\'m at the pub, there is always some poetry in my bag to read, and there\'s always music in the air.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 12th, 2022 06:05
Paul.
spilleronsheet said:
This poetry was very refreshing
It’s true that words sound different just the way language changes across regions
Good one dear Andy
January 12th, 2022 05:07
spilleronsheet said:
This poetry was very refreshing
It’s true that words sound different just the way language changes across regions
Good one dear Andy
January 12th, 2022 05:07
Paul.
Rozina said:
Absolutely. English words spelt so differently with different meanings but sounding the same, spelt similarly but different meanings entirely, so funny but not really funny. You know what I mean. Thanks for this.
January 12th, 2022 04:09
Rozina said:
Absolutely. English words spelt so differently with different meanings but sounding the same, spelt similarly but different meanings entirely, so funny but not really funny. You know what I mean. Thanks for this.
January 12th, 2022 04:09
Paul.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol.
Doing good to one person per day will cancel out my bad deed of singing to them! heehee.
January 12th, 2022 03:03
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. lol.
Doing good to one person per day will cancel out my bad deed of singing to them! heehee.
January 12th, 2022 03:03
Paul.
dusk arising said:
A wandering wonderer, a muse living in a mews with a cat which mews, A whore in the hoare frost, the rider rode down the road, who changed the colour with a dye to die for, she wrote about the reed which was a good read.
On and on. Yes our language is a funny old thing but i love it. Just as well really because it\'s kind of essential for a poet.
Great subject Sir!
January 12th, 2022 02:56
dusk arising said:
A wandering wonderer, a muse living in a mews with a cat which mews, A whore in the hoare frost, the rider rode down the road, who changed the colour with a dye to die for, she wrote about the reed which was a good read.
On and on. Yes our language is a funny old thing but i love it. Just as well really because it\'s kind of essential for a poet.
Great subject Sir!
January 12th, 2022 02:56
Paul.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
English is my second language. I can relate to your poem so well. Learning English was difficult. Your poem addresses some of the difficulties in learning English. The easiest thing for me to have learned in the English language were the verbs as opposed to learning the verbs in the Italian language…so many tenses to learn.
Laura 🌻
January 12th, 2022 02:37
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
English is my second language. I can relate to your poem so well. Learning English was difficult. Your poem addresses some of the difficulties in learning English. The easiest thing for me to have learned in the English language were the verbs as opposed to learning the verbs in the Italian language…so many tenses to learn.
Laura 🌻
January 12th, 2022 02:37
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
woundedheart said:
You do so love your music and introducing us all to your favourites a pleasure each day to find a new song and a new poem awaiting . Beautiful words as a tea total I\'ll take the music every time 😊
January 11th, 2022 17:27
woundedheart said:
You do so love your music and introducing us all to your favourites a pleasure each day to find a new song and a new poem awaiting . Beautiful words as a tea total I\'ll take the music every time 😊
January 11th, 2022 17:27
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
L. B. Mek said:
well maybe
we could consider it, this way
would it be too, absurd
to suggest
the \'tinkling of glasses\'
may produce a melodic, ding
that\'s worthy of inclusion
as part of music\'s
sheer, randomly diverse
entropy...
(well, admittedly
I did stretched it far
but there\'s, room enough
to tie some semblance
of connectivity
however absurd, my theory)
lol
thanks Andy
January 11th, 2022 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
well maybe
we could consider it, this way
would it be too, absurd
to suggest
the \'tinkling of glasses\'
may produce a melodic, ding
that\'s worthy of inclusion
as part of music\'s
sheer, randomly diverse
entropy...
(well, admittedly
I did stretched it far
but there\'s, room enough
to tie some semblance
of connectivity
however absurd, my theory)
lol
thanks Andy
January 11th, 2022 06:34
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
dusk arising said:
I dont listen to so much music these days, oh but when i do.... i am lifted. Many things colour my thoughts listening to music and of course it contains one of my greatest \'what ifs\'.
Music has become a very emotional vehicle in these recent years.
January 11th, 2022 05:46
dusk arising said:
I dont listen to so much music these days, oh but when i do.... i am lifted. Many things colour my thoughts listening to music and of course it contains one of my greatest \'what ifs\'.
Music has become a very emotional vehicle in these recent years.
January 11th, 2022 05:46
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
Rozina said:
Definitely music. For sadness, happiness, love, anger, so many varieties for so many emotions. For healing.
January 11th, 2022 03:46
Rozina said:
Definitely music. For sadness, happiness, love, anger, so many varieties for so many emotions. For healing.
January 11th, 2022 03:46
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
spilleronsheet said:
I truly agree
Music is healing
And those tinkering and tinkling is just escaping
A good one dear poet
January 11th, 2022 03:04
spilleronsheet said:
I truly agree
Music is healing
And those tinkering and tinkling is just escaping
A good one dear poet
January 11th, 2022 03:04
For The Tinkling Of Glasses.
orchidee said:
It\'s me tinkling, or tinkering, with the glasses, and adding water! heehee.
January 11th, 2022 02:54
orchidee said:
It\'s me tinkling, or tinkering, with the glasses, and adding water! heehee.
January 11th, 2022 02:54
What If......?
dusk arising said:
We\'ve all played the what iff\'s game a lot. I think as we get older it\'s a fun passtime and we can enjoy daydreaming over the possible outcomes whether they be blissful or catastrophic. But, just like you state, I wouldn\'t change much (with one exception, my daughters mental and physical wellbeing) because life has brought me to here. A place i am content to be.
January 10th, 2022 11:27
dusk arising said:
We\'ve all played the what iff\'s game a lot. I think as we get older it\'s a fun passtime and we can enjoy daydreaming over the possible outcomes whether they be blissful or catastrophic. But, just like you state, I wouldn\'t change much (with one exception, my daughters mental and physical wellbeing) because life has brought me to here. A place i am content to be.
January 10th, 2022 11:27
What If......?
woundedheart said:
Love the final stanza and today\'s choice of crooner, you always write with such feeling ☺
January 10th, 2022 11:10
woundedheart said:
Love the final stanza and today\'s choice of crooner, you always write with such feeling ☺
January 10th, 2022 11:10
What If......?
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful, Andy
and I totally agree
although, it\'s hard for us to see
when travelling, through
those bleak corridor\'s, of what must-be
before we land
at that oasis, of our awaiting: destiny...
January 10th, 2022 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful, Andy
and I totally agree
although, it\'s hard for us to see
when travelling, through
those bleak corridor\'s, of what must-be
before we land
at that oasis, of our awaiting: destiny...
January 10th, 2022 07:06
What If......?
Paul Bell said:
Totally agree, what if ,is just a waste of thinking. It probably sends people insane. Though, I could have been a contender.
January 10th, 2022 04:55
Paul Bell said:
Totally agree, what if ,is just a waste of thinking. It probably sends people insane. Though, I could have been a contender.
January 10th, 2022 04:55
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