Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Moonlight.
Thekkinkkattil said:
Moon light is so pleasant and soothing. Your poem also has that soothing effect
September 21st, 2021 02:27
Thekkinkkattil said:
Moon light is so pleasant and soothing. Your poem also has that soothing effect
September 21st, 2021 02:27
Moonlight.
dusk arising said:
The light IS with you Andy. And you share it with us all. You bring a zest for life and spiritual generousity to all who read your words. Not bullshit, it shines.
September 21st, 2021 02:19
dusk arising said:
The light IS with you Andy. And you share it with us all. You bring a zest for life and spiritual generousity to all who read your words. Not bullshit, it shines.
September 21st, 2021 02:19
Moonlight.
orchidee said:
A pleasant light and write Gold.
I was woken by flashing lights of a breakdown truck near midnight, parked in middle of our road for about 20 minutes. Goodness knows what was going on, but I nearly had a funny turn with it, but I\'m not epileptic.
September 21st, 2021 02:01
orchidee said:
A pleasant light and write Gold.
I was woken by flashing lights of a breakdown truck near midnight, parked in middle of our road for about 20 minutes. Goodness knows what was going on, but I nearly had a funny turn with it, but I\'m not epileptic.
September 21st, 2021 02:01
Moonlight.
Caring dove said:
It’s lovely . Light should be in our lives ... the moon looks kind of peaceful .
A good poem )
September 21st, 2021 01:37
Caring dove said:
It’s lovely . Light should be in our lives ... the moon looks kind of peaceful .
A good poem )
September 21st, 2021 01:37
Woodpigeon And Me.
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s not to devour
your emotive Poetry coupled with my love for Pigeon\'s
\'Nature\'s birds of Royalty\'..
(\'She\' came to visit again
I see, what a loyal Muse
fate, so fit
to gift you my friend)
beautiful wording, as-ever Andy
thank you!
September 20th, 2021 06:53
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s not to devour
your emotive Poetry coupled with my love for Pigeon\'s
\'Nature\'s birds of Royalty\'..
(\'She\' came to visit again
I see, what a loyal Muse
fate, so fit
to gift you my friend)
beautiful wording, as-ever Andy
thank you!
September 20th, 2021 06:53
Woodpigeon And Me.
dusk arising said:
It ain\'t over till the fat lady sings m8. There\'s plenty life left in you yet.
September 20th, 2021 03:31
dusk arising said:
It ain\'t over till the fat lady sings m8. There\'s plenty life left in you yet.
September 20th, 2021 03:31
Woodpigeon And Me.
Neville said:
it saddens me to like this so very much ......................................... N
September 20th, 2021 01:56
Neville said:
it saddens me to like this so very much ......................................... N
September 20th, 2021 01:56
Woodpigeon And Me.
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , Andy 🙂 birds are beautiful and I think pigeons always look friendly ...
September 20th, 2021 00:35
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing , Andy 🙂 birds are beautiful and I think pigeons always look friendly ...
September 20th, 2021 00:35
Who Dunnit?
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t fully understand the activity, Andy - but it\'s obvious you spent an evening having a good time,
The bigger mystery is how you fit it all in. To suggest you lead a full life would be an understatement: A poem a day plus the support you give to others here, croquet, choir, men\'s group - I\'m sure I\'ve forgotten something....
September 19th, 2021 20:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t fully understand the activity, Andy - but it\'s obvious you spent an evening having a good time,
The bigger mystery is how you fit it all in. To suggest you lead a full life would be an understatement: A poem a day plus the support you give to others here, croquet, choir, men\'s group - I\'m sure I\'ve forgotten something....
September 19th, 2021 20:17
Yesterday, Tomorrow, Today.
Jennifer Martin said:
Beautiful, optimistic message! Lovely, touching poem!
September 19th, 2021 13:53
Jennifer Martin said:
Beautiful, optimistic message! Lovely, touching poem!
September 19th, 2021 13:53
Who Dunnit?
Accidental Poet said:
But I thought Orchi took FiFi for a walk so he could sing to her. 🤔
September 19th, 2021 10:37
Accidental Poet said:
But I thought Orchi took FiFi for a walk so he could sing to her. 🤔
September 19th, 2021 10:37
Who Dunnit?
Michael Edwards said:
Never trust a fifi - like her name she\'s double trouble.
September 19th, 2021 07:56
Michael Edwards said:
Never trust a fifi - like her name she\'s double trouble.
September 19th, 2021 07:56
Who Dunnit?
Neville said:
Looks like Fifi was framed to me ... don\'t ya just love stockings tho eh\' .. :)
September 19th, 2021 01:37
Neville said:
Looks like Fifi was framed to me ... don\'t ya just love stockings tho eh\' .. :)
September 19th, 2021 01:37
Who Dunnit?
dusk arising said:
Oh that no good Fifi..... she was a pooey poodle when i encountered her. Not to be trusted on yer lap, she\'d nibble ya buttons off and if ya chastised her there\'d be a dampness with it\'s regrettable lingering dog-pee uniqueness.
Much rather Col Mustard the bulldog who slept in the Cellar by the Lead Pipes.... you knew where you were with him.
September 19th, 2021 01:15
dusk arising said:
Oh that no good Fifi..... she was a pooey poodle when i encountered her. Not to be trusted on yer lap, she\'d nibble ya buttons off and if ya chastised her there\'d be a dampness with it\'s regrettable lingering dog-pee uniqueness.
Much rather Col Mustard the bulldog who slept in the Cellar by the Lead Pipes.... you knew where you were with him.
September 19th, 2021 01:15
The Gravyard.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy.
Yep the world and the grave is full of the self right.
September 18th, 2021 16:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy.
Yep the world and the grave is full of the self right.
September 18th, 2021 16:12
The Gravyard.
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least it wasn\'t \'My Way\', Andy....
But beyond that , since oldsters have stuffed life , the climate, the whole damn thing up, It\'s high time another generation had a go....Much more complicated than that, I know - but tonight that\'s where I\'m leaving it.
It is a good write, too...
September 18th, 2021 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Well at least it wasn\'t \'My Way\', Andy....
But beyond that , since oldsters have stuffed life , the climate, the whole damn thing up, It\'s high time another generation had a go....Much more complicated than that, I know - but tonight that\'s where I\'m leaving it.
It is a good write, too...
September 18th, 2021 05:50
The Gravyard.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
If it was a joking matter - I will come and wake the dead - I will sing!
September 18th, 2021 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
If it was a joking matter - I will come and wake the dead - I will sing!
September 18th, 2021 02:05
The Gravyard.
dusk arising said:
Nobody writes \'em like you do though Andy.
Have you decided on an epitaph? My ex told me a couple of years back that she wanted a certain song to be played at her funeral \"be cool\" by Joni Mitchell. I am envious of her choice. Joni\'s lyrics are to die for.
As a young man, waiting for dead man\'s shoes job promotion wasn\'t good enough for me and took me onto adventures where i swiftly rose to my own level of incompetence. Where I comfortably remain .... I know my place LOL
September 18th, 2021 01:25
dusk arising said:
Nobody writes \'em like you do though Andy.
Have you decided on an epitaph? My ex told me a couple of years back that she wanted a certain song to be played at her funeral \"be cool\" by Joni Mitchell. I am envious of her choice. Joni\'s lyrics are to die for.
As a young man, waiting for dead man\'s shoes job promotion wasn\'t good enough for me and took me onto adventures where i swiftly rose to my own level of incompetence. Where I comfortably remain .... I know my place LOL
September 18th, 2021 01:25
Shark Cloud.
Accidental Poet said:
Clouds, like watching a campfire can be very hypnotic and inspirational. Great write Andy. 👍
September 17th, 2021 05:36
Accidental Poet said:
Clouds, like watching a campfire can be very hypnotic and inspirational. Great write Andy. 👍
September 17th, 2021 05:36
Shark Cloud.
L. B. Mek said:
lots of sharks around us, at all times
some symbolic
most, very real
but sharks are attracted to weakness, to blood..
so its important, we strive to keep ourselves safe, at all times
we shouldn\'t rely on the sympathy of others,
but still offer sympathy to others when we can,
that\'s the only, we get a shot
at looking up and admiring the blue sky\'s, in our lives
even, if only once in a while...
(a wonderfully emotive quality to your poem today, inspired me to scribble a little reply, thanks Andy
hope you have a great weekend)
September 17th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
lots of sharks around us, at all times
some symbolic
most, very real
but sharks are attracted to weakness, to blood..
so its important, we strive to keep ourselves safe, at all times
we shouldn\'t rely on the sympathy of others,
but still offer sympathy to others when we can,
that\'s the only, we get a shot
at looking up and admiring the blue sky\'s, in our lives
even, if only once in a while...
(a wonderfully emotive quality to your poem today, inspired me to scribble a little reply, thanks Andy
hope you have a great weekend)
September 17th, 2021 04:57
Shark Cloud.
Fay Slimm. said:
yes clouds can have many faces that change with the breeze or wind - a good metaphor ending in a brilliant last line - thanks too dear Andy for the number I had not heard in years - Paul still had the appeal of perfect tone and audible linguistics..
September 17th, 2021 03:37
Fay Slimm. said:
yes clouds can have many faces that change with the breeze or wind - a good metaphor ending in a brilliant last line - thanks too dear Andy for the number I had not heard in years - Paul still had the appeal of perfect tone and audible linguistics..
September 17th, 2021 03:37
Shark Cloud.
dusk arising said:
On a blue sky day with cotton wool clouds, where do the clouds go?
Clouds really enhance the visual effects of any landscape/seascape effecting our inner feelings and how we relate to the world around us at that time.
A shark is an analogy which got me thinking.
September 17th, 2021 03:03
dusk arising said:
On a blue sky day with cotton wool clouds, where do the clouds go?
Clouds really enhance the visual effects of any landscape/seascape effecting our inner feelings and how we relate to the world around us at that time.
A shark is an analogy which got me thinking.
September 17th, 2021 03:03
Technology Passed.
Accidental Poet said:
I think I saw the same story (didn\'t read it though). The photo looked like the carrier in the Avengers movie. I doubt it\'ll ever become a reality. Well penned my friend.
September 16th, 2021 19:06
Accidental Poet said:
I think I saw the same story (didn\'t read it though). The photo looked like the carrier in the Avengers movie. I doubt it\'ll ever become a reality. Well penned my friend.
September 16th, 2021 19:06
Technology Passed.
Accidental Poet said:
I think I saw the same story (didn\'t read it though). The photo looked like the carrier in the Avengers movie. I doubt it\'ll ever become a reality. Well penned my friend.
September 16th, 2021 19:06
Accidental Poet said:
I think I saw the same story (didn\'t read it though). The photo looked like the carrier in the Avengers movie. I doubt it\'ll ever become a reality. Well penned my friend.
September 16th, 2021 19:06
Technology Passed.
dusk arising said:
Electric cars bug me at the moment Andy. It\'s so fkkn middle class. You need a driveway to charge the damn thing up overnight..... If u live in terraced housing and/or only have on street parking (how many millions of car owners have to rely on \'on street parking\') - how you going to charge your car up overnight when it\'s parked round the corner etc.
I love your poem and the mind boggles at wind powered carrier (blown out of the water by a nuclear sub, having been becalmed for months at sea ).
Fishermens Friends the lozenge. Always reminds me of when the very gay Julian Clary\'s voice suddenly became very hoarse and he quipped \" I think i shall have to go into the wings and suck a fishermans friend\".
September 16th, 2021 14:30
dusk arising said:
Electric cars bug me at the moment Andy. It\'s so fkkn middle class. You need a driveway to charge the damn thing up overnight..... If u live in terraced housing and/or only have on street parking (how many millions of car owners have to rely on \'on street parking\') - how you going to charge your car up overnight when it\'s parked round the corner etc.
I love your poem and the mind boggles at wind powered carrier (blown out of the water by a nuclear sub, having been becalmed for months at sea ).
Fishermens Friends the lozenge. Always reminds me of when the very gay Julian Clary\'s voice suddenly became very hoarse and he quipped \" I think i shall have to go into the wings and suck a fishermans friend\".
September 16th, 2021 14:30
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