Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



To The Right Place.
Michael Edwards said:

We can\'t ask more than that in life - I also have ended in a good place but it doesn\'t happen by accident - we all have to work at it - enjoyed the write.

August 7th, 2019 03:15

To The Right Place.
orchidee said:

Well, there\'s many trees in the woods, we know, but I may mean some trees bigger than others. Doh!

August 7th, 2019 01:38

To The Right Place.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. It\'s tricky taking a path at a fork, if we\'ve not been along it before. Sometimes we may just head in a \'general direction\', e.g. in woods - look for the big tree; or group of 3 trees; or the holly bush, etc. as sign-posts.

August 7th, 2019 01:38

Reuben had a Brother.
Christina8 said:

Seriously, there is nothing better or more cherished than a poem for a new baby! (or anybody!) Great job Andy!

August 6th, 2019 17:29

Reuben had a Brother.
Fay Slimm. said:

They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful thought wrapped in a kind poem.

August 6th, 2019 05:05

Reuben had a Brother.
dusk arising said:

Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one another,
He and Seth will Surely look up,
When they\'re standing tall and fully grown up.
To the cleverest dad and most wonderful mother.

well i just had to join in on hearing wonderful news.... welcome to this life baby Seth.

August 6th, 2019 05:04

Reuben had a Brother.
Neville said:

what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those of us who visit this page.... Neville

August 6th, 2019 03:33

Reuben had a Brother.
orchidee said:

A lovely tribute Gold.

August 6th, 2019 01:27

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Christina8 said:

An acrostic well done, sir! wonderful read.

August 5th, 2019 21:27

Dreamworld Acrostic.
dusk arising said:

You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective, rejuvenated (?) a stroll in dreamland... let it take you where it will....
.... where\'s the harm in it - but don\'t fall in the river.

August 5th, 2019 12:42

Dreamworld Acrostic.
PoeticBiscuit said:

Sometimes we just have to disappear into our own dreamworld just to get away for a bit!

August 5th, 2019 11:41

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Suresh said:

I often get lost in my dreamworlds, and wish to never return, but reality is a b****.
Thnx for taking me on this ride

August 5th, 2019 10:51

Dreamworld Acrostic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY (Brian here) we all seem to be Dreaming today ! You in to Dreamland ~ Katie into Neverland ~ Fay into Loveland ~ Christina into Autumnland and US into Tenderland ! Still in our experience People who cease to Dream ~ also cease to Live ! Thanks for sharing BACH great Piece great Pianist ! Very smooth seamless ACROSTIC ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

August 5th, 2019 09:11

Dreamworld Acrostic.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch60,

Thanks for this great mystical write into Dreamworld!

Keep writing
FineB


August 5th, 2019 08:22

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Fay Slimm. said:

Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.

August 5th, 2019 02:31

Dreamworld Acrostic.
Neville said:

these dont get any better sir... well bloomin done ........ N

August 5th, 2019 02:23

Dreamworld Acrostic.
orchidee said:

I suspect it\'s only partly a dreamworld, and you\'re near to God still, seeing His works in His creation - and He near to you too :).

August 5th, 2019 01:34

Health and Stupidity.
Christina8 said:

I know. It\'s about as bright as listing the nutritional contents on a bottle of water. They think we\'re stupid.

August 4th, 2019 13:57

Health and Stupidity.
dusk arising said:

And on the side of a bus it said \"may contain people\".
But the funniest one i heard about was - at the top of an Irish ladder it says \"stop\".
HASAWA health and safety at work act. I once declined the opportunity to employ an apprentice after he told me his dad was a health and safety inspector and thats true.

August 4th, 2019 08:09

Health and Stupidity.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing UNCLE ANDY - Angela here ! Loved the Pavoroti Clip very droll ! Brian is a very ample Man - Well proportioned and I like that in a MAN ! Loved the POEM and I agree we have gone H & S Mad. Things are a bit more normal in NZ. When I am massaging I need my bare hand because the Patients Texture speaks to my Fingers - Plastic gloves have NO TOUCH SENSORS ! When I was doing Biochemical Lab Work - There was a 10 page H & S document on H2O ! C\'est La Vie d\'H & S !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

August 4th, 2019 04:02

Health and Stupidity.
Neville said:

Funny old world and infuriating at times.....

I know exactly where you are coming from with this my friend

..................................... N :)


August 4th, 2019 03:30

Health and Stupidity.
Michael Edwards said:

Loved this one. Had an experience at a dinner in our village hall recently. Digressing a bit but we started stacking the tables onto the trolleys as I\'ve been doing for over 10 years. . There are two types of tables and each have their own trolley BUT any table fits any trolley - the important thing is to put them away at the end of the function. I was putting them on the trolleys when someone came to me and very officiously told me I was doing it wrong and it really matters to get them right as they were designed to hold specific tables. I\'m afraid I responded by saying it really doesn\'t matter unless you suffer from OCD. A real jobs-worth.

August 4th, 2019 02:35

Health and Stupidity.
orchidee said:

There was a fun column in a paper, entitled \'DBO\' - \'Department of the B******* Obvious!\' (rhymes with \'seeding\').

August 4th, 2019 01:46

Health and Stupidity.
orchidee said:

Oohh, did it contain nuts, or fish? Maybe not, as it said \'MAY contain.....\'?! Best to be sure about these things. lol.
I run a whisky-making factory. The labels say \'may contain water\'. Actually, they do contain 95% water! heehee.

August 4th, 2019 01:44

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Suresh said:

The lamb was still on training wheels!

August 3rd, 2019 19:16

At One With Nature.
FineB said:

Hello Goldfinch60.

A great write.

The beauty of nature has truly been captured by you.

Keep writing FineB



August 3rd, 2019 10:43

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
dusk arising said:

Mary had another lamb
I thought i\'d keep this random
And everywhere that Mary went
It joined her on her tandem

Good to have a bit of fun on here my freind.

August 3rd, 2019 07:06

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Poetic Dan said:

Little giggle indeed! Thank you

August 3rd, 2019 04:00

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Oooooo UNCLE ANDY - ANGELA here (9pm Saturday another great day sailing in the Bay !) For me this was a triple whammy ! My fave Singer (NKC) Comedian (CC) and Language (Portugese - so so romantic !) Loved the Ditty too ! We have many Poems about Lambs in NZ !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

August 3rd, 2019 03:58

Mary Had a Little Lamb 12
Michael Edwards said:

I don\'t ride a bike - well not these days - you wouldn\'t get me wearing one of those silly looking helmets - I prefer the ones I wore in 1066.

August 3rd, 2019 03:01



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