Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu
dusk arising said:
Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of the 109, but i wouldnt understand german verse anyway.... especially the second line.
October 12th, 2018 09:06
dusk arising said:
Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of the 109, but i wouldnt understand german verse anyway.... especially the second line.
October 12th, 2018 09:06
She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Harony G
Pure Harmony
I Liked it
October 12th, 2018 08:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Harony G
Pure Harmony
I Liked it
October 12th, 2018 08:21
She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu
orchidee said:
Fine writes Gold. You off to the wedding today?! See you there?!
October 12th, 2018 02:18
orchidee said:
Fine writes Gold. You off to the wedding today?! See you there?!
October 12th, 2018 02:18
She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu
Michael Edwards said:
Both excellent Andy
October 12th, 2018 02:08
Michael Edwards said:
Both excellent Andy
October 12th, 2018 02:08
Listen or Hear?
Christina8 said:
Yes, there is definitely a difference. You must listen to the music. Great write!
October 11th, 2018 20:44
Christina8 said:
Yes, there is definitely a difference. You must listen to the music. Great write!
October 11th, 2018 20:44
Listen or Hear?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring ~ UNCLE ANDY. Love the riff on MISTER B ! Your poem highlights a 21st C attitude Listening (& Reading) BUT NEVER marking
~learning and inwardly digesting ! This is why (when we dont heed advice) others can turn to us (when we are up to our necks in merde) and say I TOLD YOU SO ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Blessings & Love to Yourself & Joyce ~ BRIAN😎 & ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 11th, 2018 17:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring ~ UNCLE ANDY. Love the riff on MISTER B ! Your poem highlights a 21st C attitude Listening (& Reading) BUT NEVER marking
~learning and inwardly digesting ! This is why (when we dont heed advice) others can turn to us (when we are up to our necks in merde) and say I TOLD YOU SO ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Blessings & Love to Yourself & Joyce ~ BRIAN😎 & ANGELA 🧡🧡
October 11th, 2018 17:26
Listen or Hear?
kevin browne said:
Ah, the lyrics of life written by the poets that grace before us in writing such wonderful and meaningful spirited songs.
October 11th, 2018 11:06
kevin browne said:
Ah, the lyrics of life written by the poets that grace before us in writing such wonderful and meaningful spirited songs.
October 11th, 2018 11:06
Listen or Hear?
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearing is so different from listening as this wise poem states - - thanks for the needed reminder dear Goldi.
October 11th, 2018 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Hearing is so different from listening as this wise poem states - - thanks for the needed reminder dear Goldi.
October 11th, 2018 06:23
Listen or Hear?
dusk arising said:
Somehow this reminds me of the native americans in those old westerns we used to watch \"white man looks but does not see\".
Pearl of wisdom from you today.
October 11th, 2018 05:25
dusk arising said:
Somehow this reminds me of the native americans in those old westerns we used to watch \"white man looks but does not see\".
Pearl of wisdom from you today.
October 11th, 2018 05:25
Listen or Hear?
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m terrible - I can\'t stand small talk so although I may nod I often don\'t take in what is being said . Fine write
October 11th, 2018 02:43
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m terrible - I can\'t stand small talk so although I may nod I often don\'t take in what is being said . Fine write
October 11th, 2018 02:43
Listen or Hear?
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. There\'s similar Bible verses:
\'Hear (keep on hearing), but do not understand;
See (keep on seeing), but do not perceive\'. (Isaiah 6 v.9,10).
I read that it\'s a Jewish idiom, where the outcome is expressed as if it was the intention, for those who continued to only hear God\'s words but did not listen, and so did not do the words, did not put them into action.
October 11th, 2018 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. There\'s similar Bible verses:
\'Hear (keep on hearing), but do not understand;
See (keep on seeing), but do not perceive\'. (Isaiah 6 v.9,10).
I read that it\'s a Jewish idiom, where the outcome is expressed as if it was the intention, for those who continued to only hear God\'s words but did not listen, and so did not do the words, did not put them into action.
October 11th, 2018 01:48
Birthday Poem.
w c said:
Our birthday cards are so special, though the poem is divine.
October 10th, 2018 21:46
w c said:
Our birthday cards are so special, though the poem is divine.
October 10th, 2018 21:46
Birthday Poem.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ We both love Oscar P ~ nice touch on the IVORIES ! Love your message ! Angela & I in a small way both consider ourselves Poets ~ and for a BIRTHDAY or CHRISTMAS etc the most precious gift we can receive is a Personal Poem and we always send each other one ~ I will publish our Christmas Ones after the 25th December ~ OK. Angela\'s Poem today both Rhymes & Scans BIRDS IN FLIGHT ~ Please Check ~ Blessing & Love to Joyce & Yourself ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 10th, 2018 11:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ We both love Oscar P ~ nice touch on the IVORIES ! Love your message ! Angela & I in a small way both consider ourselves Poets ~ and for a BIRTHDAY or CHRISTMAS etc the most precious gift we can receive is a Personal Poem and we always send each other one ~ I will publish our Christmas Ones after the 25th December ~ OK. Angela\'s Poem today both Rhymes & Scans BIRDS IN FLIGHT ~ Please Check ~ Blessing & Love to Joyce & Yourself ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 10th, 2018 11:34
Birthday Poem.
FineB said:
A super touching write Goldfinch60.
Many happy returns of the day!
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 06:01
FineB said:
A super touching write Goldfinch60.
Many happy returns of the day!
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 06:01
Birthday Poem.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I could be more evangelistic! Write poem stanzas in my Christmas cards. I better start now then (October)!
How\'s the 1066 prep going? We\'ll see my brother and his girlfriend there. We\'ll let relatives in specially, though they were not there in person in 1066.
October 10th, 2018 01:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I could be more evangelistic! Write poem stanzas in my Christmas cards. I better start now then (October)!
How\'s the 1066 prep going? We\'ll see my brother and his girlfriend there. We\'ll let relatives in specially, though they were not there in person in 1066.
October 10th, 2018 01:58
Birthday Poem.
Michael Edwards said:
How lovely and a great tribute to the thought behind it.
October 10th, 2018 01:51
Michael Edwards said:
How lovely and a great tribute to the thought behind it.
October 10th, 2018 01:51
Modern Business.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
How right you are! Well-written poem featuring what has become of earth\'s inhabitants.
It is very rare to see a face-to-face conversation anymore. Loved your poem. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:05
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
How right you are! Well-written poem featuring what has become of earth\'s inhabitants.
It is very rare to see a face-to-face conversation anymore. Loved your poem. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:05
Modern Business.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Spot on with your message! I first witnessed what you’ve masterfully described years ago in San Francisco in a Starbucks coffee house...and years later in my home! So we, as a family, had to set up some rules concerning these modern devices!
Thank you for sharing the awesome video! Freddie Mercury and his collaborations...Iconic to say the least!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 08:07
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Spot on with your message! I first witnessed what you’ve masterfully described years ago in San Francisco in a Starbucks coffee house...and years later in my home! So we, as a family, had to set up some rules concerning these modern devices!
Thank you for sharing the awesome video! Freddie Mercury and his collaborations...Iconic to say the least!
My love to Joyce and to you!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 08:07
Modern Business.
Michael Edwards said:
Bring back the art of interaction - these damn devices seem to rule lives. Fine write and what a sad loss they both are.
October 9th, 2018 06:04
Michael Edwards said:
Bring back the art of interaction - these damn devices seem to rule lives. Fine write and what a sad loss they both are.
October 9th, 2018 06:04
Modern Business.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The coffee shop... Is it the new golf course?
I suppose even golf takes too long for the young business person
Great write G
October 9th, 2018 03:59
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The coffee shop... Is it the new golf course?
I suppose even golf takes too long for the young business person
Great write G
October 9th, 2018 03:59
Modern Business.
kevin browne said:
two of the greatest singers ever to grace the stage. Every performance to perfection. Nicely done, Goldfinch60.
October 9th, 2018 01:52
kevin browne said:
two of the greatest singers ever to grace the stage. Every performance to perfection. Nicely done, Goldfinch60.
October 9th, 2018 01:52
Modern Business.
orchidee said:
Seems so Gold. How much of it is necessary? A fine write.
October 9th, 2018 01:27
orchidee said:
Seems so Gold. How much of it is necessary? A fine write.
October 9th, 2018 01:27
New Family.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What a beautiful little girl Tilly is. I know your are proud of your family because you penned such a wonderful tribute to them.
Blessings on all of you and thank you for sharing. :)
October 8th, 2018 16:53
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
What a beautiful little girl Tilly is. I know your are proud of your family because you penned such a wonderful tribute to them.
Blessings on all of you and thank you for sharing. :)
October 8th, 2018 16:53
New Family.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Congrats on Grandduaghter and birthday just pased...
If a poem has ever been upstaged by a photo...
There it is then.
Doesn\'t life just get better and better???
October 8th, 2018 07:18
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Congrats on Grandduaghter and birthday just pased...
If a poem has ever been upstaged by a photo...
There it is then.
Doesn\'t life just get better and better???
October 8th, 2018 07:18
New Family.
orchidee said:
Ahh, lovely pic and write Gold. I get Handel\'s Water Music mixed up with this piece of the Queen of Sheba!
October 8th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
Ahh, lovely pic and write Gold. I get Handel\'s Water Music mixed up with this piece of the Queen of Sheba!
October 8th, 2018 07:15
New Family.
orchidee said:
Ahh, lovely pic and write Gold. I get Handel\'s Water Music mixed up with this piece of the Queen of Sheba!
October 8th, 2018 07:15
orchidee said:
Ahh, lovely pic and write Gold. I get Handel\'s Water Music mixed up with this piece of the Queen of Sheba!
October 8th, 2018 07:15
New Family.
Christina8 said:
So happy for you Andy!! She is so beautiful!! You must be very proud!
October 8th, 2018 06:58
Christina8 said:
So happy for you Andy!! She is so beautiful!! You must be very proud!
October 8th, 2018 06:58
New Family.
onepauly said:
what a beautiful baby.
among other things
you must be proud.
October 8th, 2018 04:01
onepauly said:
what a beautiful baby.
among other things
you must be proud.
October 8th, 2018 04:01
New Family.
Michael Edwards said:
What a gorgeous photo - she is a real charmer. So pleased for you Andy.
October 8th, 2018 03:49
Michael Edwards said:
What a gorgeous photo - she is a real charmer. So pleased for you Andy.
October 8th, 2018 03:49
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