Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Lost To Reality.
Michael Edwards said:
This such a wrenching read - I have known dementia in my direct family so I can understand a little of what you are going through and my heart goes out to you and your wife.
April 7th, 2017 02:27
Michael Edwards said:
This such a wrenching read - I have known dementia in my direct family so I can understand a little of what you are going through and my heart goes out to you and your wife.
April 7th, 2017 02:27
Infinity.
rrodriguez said:
Wow, this is really good stuff. Infinity is so transcendent that to phantom it is to enter into wisdom. Great write!
April 6th, 2017 16:37
rrodriguez said:
Wow, this is really good stuff. Infinity is so transcendent that to phantom it is to enter into wisdom. Great write!
April 6th, 2017 16:37
Infinity.
Jarid said:
Love the flow of this with a perfect ending to it. Superb.
April 6th, 2017 10:13
Jarid said:
Love the flow of this with a perfect ending to it. Superb.
April 6th, 2017 10:13
Infinity.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BROTHER ~ ART ~ MUSIC ~ POETRY etc are all part of beauty and inspiration in pictures ~ rhapsodies and words the music of the spheres. Michael\'s poems are a great blessing to MPS and they do indeed stir the muse. This one reminded me of the beautiful Hubble Telescopes images in deep space and the sentiments of ethereal infinity mentioned in your poem. Thanks for caring enough to share ! BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 08:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BROTHER ~ ART ~ MUSIC ~ POETRY etc are all part of beauty and inspiration in pictures ~ rhapsodies and words the music of the spheres. Michael\'s poems are a great blessing to MPS and they do indeed stir the muse. This one reminded me of the beautiful Hubble Telescopes images in deep space and the sentiments of ethereal infinity mentioned in your poem. Thanks for caring enough to share ! BRIAN
April 6th, 2017 08:15
Infinity.
willyweed said:
a deep dive inward, and that painting is still looking at me? nice goldie. ww
April 6th, 2017 07:01
willyweed said:
a deep dive inward, and that painting is still looking at me? nice goldie. ww
April 6th, 2017 07:01
Infinity.
orchidee said:
I\'m careful with the humour about \'brain cells\' on holiday. I wouldn\'t mean it in any offensive way - people with mind problems, etc. But my mind may have always been a blank. No change there then?! heehee.
April 6th, 2017 03:30
orchidee said:
I\'m careful with the humour about \'brain cells\' on holiday. I wouldn\'t mean it in any offensive way - people with mind problems, etc. But my mind may have always been a blank. No change there then?! heehee.
April 6th, 2017 03:30
Infinity.
Michael Edwards said:
I am so touched by this - it just has to go into my favourites - what a fine write - thank you so much for the dedication Goldfinch.
April 6th, 2017 02:43
Michael Edwards said:
I am so touched by this - it just has to go into my favourites - what a fine write - thank you so much for the dedication Goldfinch.
April 6th, 2017 02:43
Infinity.
Fay Slimm. said:
A well expressed journey into the mind\'s unknown and fine tribute to Michael\'s wonderful art-work - your words express the depth which we as souls have available if only we cast doubt aside and enter infinity\'s void. A most compelling read G.F.
April 6th, 2017 02:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A well expressed journey into the mind\'s unknown and fine tribute to Michael\'s wonderful art-work - your words express the depth which we as souls have available if only we cast doubt aside and enter infinity\'s void. A most compelling read G.F.
April 6th, 2017 02:20
Infinity.
orchidee said:
A fine write G. I looked into my mind, and found an infinity..... of nothing! Well, maybe one or two ideas. The rest were on holiday!
April 6th, 2017 02:00
orchidee said:
A fine write G. I looked into my mind, and found an infinity..... of nothing! Well, maybe one or two ideas. The rest were on holiday!
April 6th, 2017 02:00
\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BROTHER for creating humour out of the frailty of increasing age ! Love the concept of the EPITAPH ! \"Here lies Mrs Jick ~ no longer shouting ~ Honey where\'s my stick. She\'s Heaven bound and there no walking sticks or Zimmer frames are found \". We all have a foible and a \"cri de coeur\" Where\'s my Glasses ~ Wallet ~ Keys ~ Handbag ~ False teeth ~ Wig ~ Umbrella etc ! The list is endless ! Thanks for scaring ! BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BROTHER for creating humour out of the frailty of increasing age ! Love the concept of the EPITAPH ! \"Here lies Mrs Jick ~ no longer shouting ~ Honey where\'s my stick. She\'s Heaven bound and there no walking sticks or Zimmer frames are found \". We all have a foible and a \"cri de coeur\" Where\'s my Glasses ~ Wallet ~ Keys ~ Handbag ~ False teeth ~ Wig ~ Umbrella etc ! The list is endless ! Thanks for scaring ! BRIAN
April 5th, 2017 12:41
\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
rrodriguez said:
The experiences we share with our loved ones are so unique. That\'s what keeps us together sharing this uniqueness to the grave. Nicely done my friend.
April 5th, 2017 06:36
rrodriguez said:
The experiences we share with our loved ones are so unique. That\'s what keeps us together sharing this uniqueness to the grave. Nicely done my friend.
April 5th, 2017 06:36
\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
willyweed said:
she needs a bracelet to attach her to her stick? or GPS devise, love this fun piece. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:49
willyweed said:
she needs a bracelet to attach her to her stick? or GPS devise, love this fun piece. ww
April 5th, 2017 05:49
\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
Michael Edwards said:
I love this simply written but so effective poem with its gentle humour - it sounds a bit like my wife with her \'Have you seen my glasses\'
April 5th, 2017 02:24
Michael Edwards said:
I love this simply written but so effective poem with its gentle humour - it sounds a bit like my wife with her \'Have you seen my glasses\'
April 5th, 2017 02:24
\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
orchidee said:
You got that stick? You found it yet?! Good write. heehee.
April 5th, 2017 01:35
orchidee said:
You got that stick? You found it yet?! Good write. heehee.
April 5th, 2017 01:35
Saved By A Robin.
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, nice one. A dream gone astray, or like you said , maybe a rescue, or maybe there are herds of gentle horses. I always await the return of robins to the trees, I then know spring has arrived and I can put away the shovel, and bring out the garden tools. You got me thinking spring thoughts. Thank you. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 20:50
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, nice one. A dream gone astray, or like you said , maybe a rescue, or maybe there are herds of gentle horses. I always await the return of robins to the trees, I then know spring has arrived and I can put away the shovel, and bring out the garden tools. You got me thinking spring thoughts. Thank you. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 20:50
Saved By A Robin.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Christina. It is a great way to wake up.
April 4th, 2017 16:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Christina. It is a great way to wake up.
April 4th, 2017 16:56
Saved By A Robin.
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write. And a nice way to wake up and start your day--with a chorus of a robins song to listen to.
April 4th, 2017 13:07
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write. And a nice way to wake up and start your day--with a chorus of a robins song to listen to.
April 4th, 2017 13:07
Saved By A Robin.
Philip said:
The robin\'s song is a glorious sound I am glad it started your day so positively and you were able to portray it so well. Phil.G
April 4th, 2017 11:52
Philip said:
The robin\'s song is a glorious sound I am glad it started your day so positively and you were able to portray it so well. Phil.G
April 4th, 2017 11:52
Saved By A Robin.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Brian. Did not know that about a robin.
April 4th, 2017 08:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Brian. Did not know that about a robin.
April 4th, 2017 08:38
Saved By A Robin.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BROTHER ~ Horses in dreams represent energy and the image can be positive or negative ! If they are charging at you ~ they can indicate \"trouble ahead\". Robins are symbols of faithfulness and calm ~ it indicates that someone (or an Angel) is watching over you ! Thanks for sharing ~ so graphically ! BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 08:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BROTHER ~ Horses in dreams represent energy and the image can be positive or negative ! If they are charging at you ~ they can indicate \"trouble ahead\". Robins are symbols of faithfulness and calm ~ it indicates that someone (or an Angel) is watching over you ! Thanks for sharing ~ so graphically ! BRIAN
April 4th, 2017 08:27
Saved By A Robin.
willyweed said:
wild horses? was you listening to the stones before bed? the birds wake me every morning, unless the dog starts barking first? enjoyed this nightmare goldfinch
April 4th, 2017 07:17
willyweed said:
wild horses? was you listening to the stones before bed? the birds wake me every morning, unless the dog starts barking first? enjoyed this nightmare goldfinch
April 4th, 2017 07:17
Saved By A Robin.
orchidee said:
Doh! A guy was less sympathetic. He said \'I will ******** kill that dawn chorus, keep waking me up!\' oohh.
April 4th, 2017 02:42
orchidee said:
Doh! A guy was less sympathetic. He said \'I will ******** kill that dawn chorus, keep waking me up!\' oohh.
April 4th, 2017 02:42
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