Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Heather T said:

Lovely piece about the agreement that happens between fertile minds and their chosen mediums. I think it is born from the same places, just birthed through varying filters. Enjoyed both your words and Michael\'s artistry.

August 7th, 2017 18:33

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
malubotelho said:

Bright writing. Love the purple on the painting. Something about raw jewel stone.

August 7th, 2017 14:09

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Brian. I likrpe Kadinsky\'s work.

August 7th, 2017 11:33

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ In ART ~ there is a symbiosis between Literature ~ Visual Art & Music \' KADINSKY showed it between Visual art & Music and in Maori Art there is always a lot of Y WORDS Incorporated into the Painting to supplement the imagery. All cartoons & comics are a blend of words & visual art. Loved the picture ! My title to MICHAEL was a sack of Cement or Mortar or Flour etc in Liverpool \"Falling off the back of the proverbial Lorry\" Love the poem ~ Yours BRIAN

August 7th, 2017 09:56

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
WriteBeLight said:

Love the beginning, in particular.

August 7th, 2017 09:26

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
ShannonXx said:

Very imaginative write

August 7th, 2017 08:26

Sitting at Heavens Door.
malubotelho said:

I always say that one can live in heaven or hell. You just have to tune to one or other station. Nice writing. Awesome

August 7th, 2017 06:40

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks for putting this on the site - feel flattered that you should use my painting - and it\'s a darn good poem to go with it.

August 7th, 2017 02:09

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
orchidee said:

A fine write Goldie. But I can\'t say Scion-wotsit after a few sherries. Also *gets out dictionary to look it up*.

August 7th, 2017 01:36

Sitting at Heavens Door.
myself and me said:

It is the kind of heaven for me. Shall create my own. Like your poem.

August 6th, 2017 15:03

Sitting at Heavens Door.
FredPeyer said:

You said it so well, Goldfinch. What else could be there to make us happy? Maybe female companionship!

August 6th, 2017 14:47

Sitting at Heavens Door.
orchidee said:

A fine write G. Glimpses, moments (lasting several moments) of heaven! Erm, \'Elvis\' is at our church - has all his records. He don\'t look like him though, but he is known in town as \'Elvis\'.

August 6th, 2017 09:43

Sitting at Heavens Door.
rrodriguez said:

So, instead of listening to love songs, which I do when I write, jazx is where is at... Enjoyed it...

August 6th, 2017 09:24

Sitting at Heavens Door.
Louis Gibbs said:

I, too, was a big fan of jazz in the fifties, and loved Gerry Mulligan. I was right there at the table digging it with you, Goldie!

August 6th, 2017 08:00

Sitting at Heavens Door.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Brian, absolute bliss.

August 6th, 2017 04:47

Sitting at Heavens Door.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

MORNIN\' ANDY ~ \"If music be the Food of Love ~ play on !\" The SAX has a heavenly sound ~ shunned by stiff starchy classical orchestras ~ but the are so many great SAXOPHONISTS in Heaven now ~ that they must out number the Harpists. Sax and Harp Jazz duo in a Pub in Lanelli (S Wales) now there\'s heaven ! Love the CD love the Poem ~ \"Lazin\' on a Sunday Afternoon in Birdland AMEN !\" Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN

August 6th, 2017 03:33

Sitting at Heavens Door.
Michael Edwards said:

Your poem sounds like an ideal piece of heaven - must get more into jazz - see what you\'re doing G!! :)

August 6th, 2017 02:26

Sitting at Heavens Door.
burning-embers said:

As a sax player you can guess I\'m a fan of jazz too. This 50\'s era is actually my favorite period and i have several jerry and chet recordings. More into Sonny Rollins of that era tho. I can harmonise with your blissful description of this relaxing time. A very evocative write. Thank you.

August 6th, 2017 02:11

Cleansing Rain.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ It is the abundance of water ~ billions & billions of gallons ~ that makes Planet Earth a Living Planet ~ the only one discovered so far ! The water Cycle powered by the Sun purifies the water and even though H~O~H is a small molecule it is all retained by the Earths Gravity ! W can waste pure (potable) water ~ but in the end it\'s all recycled. God touched the clouds ~ made the rain ~ from the rain formed the sea ~ from sea formed the clouds to give us life abundantly ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN

August 5th, 2017 14:32

Cleansing Rain.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you b-e much appreciated.

August 5th, 2017 13:35

Cleansing Rain.
burning-embers said:

I wish it would hurry up and cleanse my soul. We\'ve had oodles of it lately and i\'ve still got the blues in my bones. Great write Goldfinch, i like the way you include that repetative cycle.

August 5th, 2017 11:30

Cleansing Rain.
WriteBeLight said:

I would agree! Very cleansing Goldfinch!

August 5th, 2017 09:11

Cleansing Rain.
malubotelho said:

Beautiful picture and poem. I will try a cleansing like this next rainfall.

August 5th, 2017 08:19

Cleansing Rain.
Night Owl said:

Lovely Goldfinch! I could almost smell the rainfall-- Beautiful wording...

August 5th, 2017 07:09

Cleansing Rain.
Accidental Poet said:

Always good to have a cleansing rain. I like this.

August 5th, 2017 05:49

Cleansing Rain.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, such a nice metaphor that rain washes away our worries. I think it also washes away our sins. Beautiful writing!

August 5th, 2017 02:58

Cleansing Rain.
orchidee said:

Good write G/F. We may moan - too hot, too cold, too wet, etc. Yet clouds can create an atmospheric feeling - dark clouds, white clouds, etc. You singin\' in the rain there? And can ya hear me singin\' in it? Meowwoo! lol.

August 5th, 2017 01:54

Cleansing Rain.
Michael Edwards said:

Super stuff and I love the picture - might even copy the idea in acrylic ink - if it works I\'ll post it later.

August 5th, 2017 01:48

The Undarkened House.
FredPeyer said:

Great poem Goldfinch, I sometimes wonder how much electricity we squander with all these lights on.

August 4th, 2017 13:03

The Undarkened House.
Fay Slimm. said:

Morning will never be dull or dark in your house my friend - can imagine all those extra lights to show the way to making an early morning cuppa eh

August 4th, 2017 05:00



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