Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you WBL romance is never far away in our lives.
April 13th, 2017 07:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you WBL romance is never far away in our lives.
April 13th, 2017 07:04
From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
WriteBeLight said:
Very romantic write Goldfinch :)
April 13th, 2017 06:30
WriteBeLight said:
Very romantic write Goldfinch :)
April 13th, 2017 06:30
From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece - you have encouraged me - I\'ve made a note of the form and will try it out sometime.
April 13th, 2017 02:09
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece - you have encouraged me - I\'ve made a note of the form and will try it out sometime.
April 13th, 2017 02:09
From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Garry said:
Very neatly done. Cleverly constructed and flows well. Great ideas.
But, i mean really... A poem structured on the Fibonacci sequence. Jeez I thought I was wierd .
April 13th, 2017 01:52
Garry said:
Very neatly done. Cleverly constructed and flows well. Great ideas.
But, i mean really... A poem structured on the Fibonacci sequence. Jeez I thought I was wierd .
April 13th, 2017 01:52
From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
orchidee said:
Good write, and those syllables thought out. Erm.... and then it rained?! No, Porchi, rain is not in this poem! heehee.
April 13th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
Good write, and those syllables thought out. Erm.... and then it rained?! No, Porchi, rain is not in this poem! heehee.
April 13th, 2017 01:45
Neighbour Watching
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks Phil, coffee of course is also important. Many is the time when I have sat on the top of a hill watching natures glory around me drinking coffee.
April 12th, 2017 12:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks Phil, coffee of course is also important. Many is the time when I have sat on the top of a hill watching natures glory around me drinking coffee.
April 12th, 2017 12:44
Neighbour Watching
MendedFences27 said:
Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of communication. I\'ve seen my Millennials all four of them sitting on the sofas texting one another, not a sound of verbal utterance. My wife and I sat out today and watched the hawks hunting, so much more interesting than life with the Kardashians. Cell phones and all the other et ceteras of electronics, are murdering the language and the culture. I must admit, though, the wife and I did have our coffees. Nice one, this. Loved it.- Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:41
MendedFences27 said:
Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of communication. I\'ve seen my Millennials all four of them sitting on the sofas texting one another, not a sound of verbal utterance. My wife and I sat out today and watched the hawks hunting, so much more interesting than life with the Kardashians. Cell phones and all the other et ceteras of electronics, are murdering the language and the culture. I must admit, though, the wife and I did have our coffees. Nice one, this. Loved it.- Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:41
Neighbour Watching
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY ~ I refuse to have one they are very antisocial and intrusive ! There is nothing worse than the Foible Moan of the Mobile Phone ! That\'s a Spoonerism for you ! Yours BRIAN
April 12th, 2017 08:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY ~ I refuse to have one they are very antisocial and intrusive ! There is nothing worse than the Foible Moan of the Mobile Phone ! That\'s a Spoonerism for you ! Yours BRIAN
April 12th, 2017 08:47
Neighbour Watching
willyweed said:
smart phones make for stupid people
Goobers on parade!
April 12th, 2017 07:54
willyweed said:
smart phones make for stupid people
Goobers on parade!
April 12th, 2017 07:54
Neighbour Watching
WriteBeLight said:
They are missing out! I have seen that so much, in particular, with the youngsters. They are just plain missing out on the wonders of being outside in the great weather. Great write.
April 12th, 2017 06:11
WriteBeLight said:
They are missing out! I have seen that so much, in particular, with the youngsters. They are just plain missing out on the wonders of being outside in the great weather. Great write.
April 12th, 2017 06:11
Neighbour Watching
Frank Prem said:
Pretty annoying. The malaise if the modern.
April 12th, 2017 03:18
Frank Prem said:
Pretty annoying. The malaise if the modern.
April 12th, 2017 03:18
Neighbour Watching
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Fay, it is seen everywhere nowadays even when I am walking with nature there are people plugged into their mobiles. They miss the sound of nature completely!
April 12th, 2017 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Fay, it is seen everywhere nowadays even when I am walking with nature there are people plugged into their mobiles. They miss the sound of nature completely!
April 12th, 2017 03:01
Neighbour Watching
Fay Slimm. said:
There is a time and a place for these electronic devices - natural beauty has to take central stage to bequeath its wonderful benefits . Thanks for this good reminder my friend.
April 12th, 2017 02:53
Fay Slimm. said:
There is a time and a place for these electronic devices - natural beauty has to take central stage to bequeath its wonderful benefits . Thanks for this good reminder my friend.
April 12th, 2017 02:53
Neighbour Watching
Michael Edwards said:
So few actually enjoy the environment and the beauty of nature and their lives are so much poorer for it - if only they realised.
April 12th, 2017 02:04
Michael Edwards said:
So few actually enjoy the environment and the beauty of nature and their lives are so much poorer for it - if only they realised.
April 12th, 2017 02:04
Neighbour Watching
orchidee said:
Good write. Maybe it\'s necessary in this technological age - but not all the time! It may be a sort of companion for them.
April 12th, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write. Maybe it\'s necessary in this technological age - but not all the time! It may be a sort of companion for them.
April 12th, 2017 01:58
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O for the wings ~ For the wings of a Dove ~ Far far away would I fly ! We all long to join the birds BROTHER ! Nettles can be a bit touchy ~ BUT ~ Daffs in the Nettle Patch also causes me joy ! Thanks for caring BRIAN.
April 11th, 2017 08:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O for the wings ~ For the wings of a Dove ~ Far far away would I fly ! We all long to join the birds BROTHER ! Nettles can be a bit touchy ~ BUT ~ Daffs in the Nettle Patch also causes me joy ! Thanks for caring BRIAN.
April 11th, 2017 08:04
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write, true beauty can be found in some of the oddest places
April 11th, 2017 07:37
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write, true beauty can be found in some of the oddest places
April 11th, 2017 07:37
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
lovelydarkanddeep said:
Beautifully worded and uplifting.
April 11th, 2017 07:11
lovelydarkanddeep said:
Beautifully worded and uplifting.
April 11th, 2017 07:11
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
willyweed said:
I love a good dream poem just like this one. well done sir!
April 11th, 2017 06:58
willyweed said:
I love a good dream poem just like this one. well done sir!
April 11th, 2017 06:58
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
WriteBeLight said:
Very beautiful walk Goldfinch!
April 11th, 2017 06:12
WriteBeLight said:
Very beautiful walk Goldfinch!
April 11th, 2017 06:12
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
P.H.Rose said:
Really lovely poem
Those where you
Think I\'m them
I find really remarkable
I\'ve woke up with poem
in my head from that
Type of dream...
Well done GF60
April 11th, 2017 05:19
P.H.Rose said:
Really lovely poem
Those where you
Think I\'m them
I find really remarkable
I\'ve woke up with poem
in my head from that
Type of dream...
Well done GF60
April 11th, 2017 05:19
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
Michael Edwards said:
Great positive message. Not only in nature but also in cities - I love to look up and see the brilliant architecture we have - and then when I look down and see everyone else walking along looking blankly straight ahead or even down at the ground quite oblivious of what is there.
April 11th, 2017 05:15
Michael Edwards said:
Great positive message. Not only in nature but also in cities - I love to look up and see the brilliant architecture we have - and then when I look down and see everyone else walking along looking blankly straight ahead or even down at the ground quite oblivious of what is there.
April 11th, 2017 05:15
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.
April 11th, 2017 04:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.
April 11th, 2017 04:35
Unexpected Beauty and Dreams.
orchidee said:
Good write. I saw a daffodil growing in a compost heap. Not a huge heap of manure, as it was in our garden!
April 11th, 2017 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write. I saw a daffodil growing in a compost heap. Not a huge heap of manure, as it was in our garden!
April 11th, 2017 02:05
My Nemesis.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem BROTHER ~ in the 21st C we all have tangible NEMESIS not the unseen mystic 20th C ones ! Mine is my mothers ornamental pond in general and the waterfall pump in particular ! I get soaked getting it out to clean ! My DAD\'s alergic to water ! For a few days it\'s like NIAGARA people pay 50p just to see it ! Then it gets slower and slower ~ a drizzle then it stops ! Mum is on the phone ~ BRIAN its the pump and I I\'m entertaining the Ladies from the Guild on Thursday for a Garden Party ~ so i drop everything and set out (for the third time this month) to CLEAN THE BL** DY PUMP ~ My NEMSIS ! I used to play a BASS PYROCANTHA in the School Orchestra ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
April 10th, 2017 15:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great poem BROTHER ~ in the 21st C we all have tangible NEMESIS not the unseen mystic 20th C ones ! Mine is my mothers ornamental pond in general and the waterfall pump in particular ! I get soaked getting it out to clean ! My DAD\'s alergic to water ! For a few days it\'s like NIAGARA people pay 50p just to see it ! Then it gets slower and slower ~ a drizzle then it stops ! Mum is on the phone ~ BRIAN its the pump and I I\'m entertaining the Ladies from the Guild on Thursday for a Garden Party ~ so i drop everything and set out (for the third time this month) to CLEAN THE BL** DY PUMP ~ My NEMSIS ! I used to play a BASS PYROCANTHA in the School Orchestra ! Thanks for scaring ~ Yours BRIAN
April 10th, 2017 15:58
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