Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Why Her, Why?
burning-embers said:
Goldfinch60 big sympathy m8 with this horrible affliction eating at the foundations of your relationship. Your words are those of a considerate loving partner. Anyone who\'s come into contact with this beast know only too well the truth of your words, especially those of last 5 lines. Its a well expressed piece from the heart.
July 13th, 2017 01:49
burning-embers said:
Goldfinch60 big sympathy m8 with this horrible affliction eating at the foundations of your relationship. Your words are those of a considerate loving partner. Anyone who\'s come into contact with this beast know only too well the truth of your words, especially those of last 5 lines. Its a well expressed piece from the heart.
July 13th, 2017 01:49
Words on a Page.
Heather T said:
Wishing you many blank pages, GF. Nicely done.
July 12th, 2017 20:06
Heather T said:
Wishing you many blank pages, GF. Nicely done.
July 12th, 2017 20:06
Words on a Page.
Louis Gibbs said:
The very definition of poetry, Sir. A precious way to capture part of our lives onto a page, indeed! Thank you for expressing it so well.
July 12th, 2017 09:20
Louis Gibbs said:
The very definition of poetry, Sir. A precious way to capture part of our lives onto a page, indeed! Thank you for expressing it so well.
July 12th, 2017 09:20
Words on a Page.
onepauly said:
English printed words in books, that\'s what I like to see. with my magnifying
vizor to help see them crystal clear.
July 12th, 2017 07:04
onepauly said:
English printed words in books, that\'s what I like to see. with my magnifying
vizor to help see them crystal clear.
July 12th, 2017 07:04
Words on a Page.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Of course, when on the sherry, every word of mine is meaningless! Just leave Orchi alone at those times, he means well, but he dunno what year it is when he\'s on the sherry - must be 1066, he says\'! heehee.
July 12th, 2017 03:43
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Of course, when on the sherry, every word of mine is meaningless! Just leave Orchi alone at those times, he means well, but he dunno what year it is when he\'s on the sherry - must be 1066, he says\'! heehee.
July 12th, 2017 03:43
Words on a Page.
Michael Edwards said:
Just words but it always amazes me what you can do with them as in this simple yet so effective piece
July 12th, 2017 02:33
Michael Edwards said:
Just words but it always amazes me what you can do with them as in this simple yet so effective piece
July 12th, 2017 02:33
Words on a Page.
burning-embers said:
Very true. Here i find a place to tell my stories, created fiction or life\'s adventures recounted. All a part of my life.
July 12th, 2017 02:26
burning-embers said:
Very true. Here i find a place to tell my stories, created fiction or life\'s adventures recounted. All a part of my life.
July 12th, 2017 02:26
PEACE? - Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
This makes the point so well - we seem to be going backward - will we ever learn?.
July 11th, 2017 08:27
Michael Edwards said:
This makes the point so well - we seem to be going backward - will we ever learn?.
July 11th, 2017 08:27
PEACE? - Acrostic.
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks Brian. Over the years I have written many acrostics.
I too would like to Give Peace a Chance.
July 11th, 2017 06:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks Brian. Over the years I have written many acrostics.
I too would like to Give Peace a Chance.
July 11th, 2017 06:29
PEACE? - Acrostic.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ You have broken the mould today ~ AN ACROSTIC and you didn\'t register it with me first ! Also a TRIBUTE to John Lennon ~ Liverpool\'s greatest SON and one of the WORLD\'S finest Sons ~ Forever Young ~ Forever preaching MAKE LOVE NOT WAR The sad fact is ANDY ~ MAN (& WOMAN) is nver satisfied and will always fight with HIS (HER) neighbour for a bit of land or high fence privacy ! Ever since ADAM fell out with EVE (over snakes & apples) there have been WARS & RUMOURS of WARS ~ So help us GOD ~ All I am saying is give PEACE a CHANCE ~ BRIAN
July 11th, 2017 06:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ You have broken the mould today ~ AN ACROSTIC and you didn\'t register it with me first ! Also a TRIBUTE to John Lennon ~ Liverpool\'s greatest SON and one of the WORLD\'S finest Sons ~ Forever Young ~ Forever preaching MAKE LOVE NOT WAR The sad fact is ANDY ~ MAN (& WOMAN) is nver satisfied and will always fight with HIS (HER) neighbour for a bit of land or high fence privacy ! Ever since ADAM fell out with EVE (over snakes & apples) there have been WARS & RUMOURS of WARS ~ So help us GOD ~ All I am saying is give PEACE a CHANCE ~ BRIAN
July 11th, 2017 06:06
PEACE? - Acrostic.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch you said a lot in these four lines. And John Lennon is one of my alltime heroes. Heck, at my age, I grew up with the Beatles!
And unfortunately as of now it is still a myth that the earth is calm. And I don\'t think it will change in my lifetime. But I do have hopes that one day somewhere in the future, that calm will prevail.
July 11th, 2017 02:30
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch you said a lot in these four lines. And John Lennon is one of my alltime heroes. Heck, at my age, I grew up with the Beatles!
And unfortunately as of now it is still a myth that the earth is calm. And I don\'t think it will change in my lifetime. But I do have hopes that one day somewhere in the future, that calm will prevail.
July 11th, 2017 02:30
PEACE? - Acrostic.
Nicholas Browning said:
Hatred is a cycle that has revolved as far back as time\'s first record. Now, it\'s almost as if we have to look out for ourselves in this dark and malicious place. I do what I can for other people, even though I know I can\'t break this cycle alone. Good message Finch. It is indeed the truth.
July 11th, 2017 02:27
Nicholas Browning said:
Hatred is a cycle that has revolved as far back as time\'s first record. Now, it\'s almost as if we have to look out for ourselves in this dark and malicious place. I do what I can for other people, even though I know I can\'t break this cycle alone. Good message Finch. It is indeed the truth.
July 11th, 2017 02:27
Dancing Like an Idiot.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
music,the universal language
July 10th, 2017 19:31
ron parrish aka wordman said:
music,the universal language
July 10th, 2017 19:31
Dancing Like an Idiot.
Michael Edwards said:
Monty Python - Always Look on the Bright Side - that\'ll do for me.
July 10th, 2017 09:56
Michael Edwards said:
Monty Python - Always Look on the Bright Side - that\'ll do for me.
July 10th, 2017 09:56
Dancing Like an Idiot.
burning-embers said:
It works for me my friend.Music has been my life. I\'m half deaf from playing loud but does it stop me what WHAT did u say? LOUDER!
July 10th, 2017 09:42
burning-embers said:
It works for me my friend.Music has been my life. I\'m half deaf from playing loud but does it stop me what WHAT did u say? LOUDER!
July 10th, 2017 09:42
Dancing Like an Idiot.
Augustus said:
You are giving me an idea. I\'m feeling a little lousy about now. Tried breakfast, coffee, now music! Don\'t leave soon.
July 10th, 2017 09:33
Augustus said:
You are giving me an idea. I\'m feeling a little lousy about now. Tried breakfast, coffee, now music! Don\'t leave soon.
July 10th, 2017 09:33
Dancing Like an Idiot.
S.louise said:
It is very true.. dancing and music in general can lift your moods.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
July 10th, 2017 09:29
S.louise said:
It is very true.. dancing and music in general can lift your moods.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
July 10th, 2017 09:29
Dancing Like an Idiot.
Louis Gibbs said:
I choose Beethoven\'s \"Ode To Joy\", (ninth symphony,) to be played at my service. I enjoyed this fine poem, Goldfinch.
July 10th, 2017 09:02
Louis Gibbs said:
I choose Beethoven\'s \"Ode To Joy\", (ninth symphony,) to be played at my service. I enjoyed this fine poem, Goldfinch.
July 10th, 2017 09:02
Dancing Like an Idiot.
orchidee said:
Music don\'t mend any souls. Well, music does, but not my singing! it makes folks worse! heehee.
July 10th, 2017 08:42
orchidee said:
Music don\'t mend any souls. Well, music does, but not my singing! it makes folks worse! heehee.
July 10th, 2017 08:42
Dancing Like an Idiot.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. I heard \'happy-clappy\' style, if in old church buildings, described as \'Dancing underneath architecture\'.
July 10th, 2017 08:41
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. I heard \'happy-clappy\' style, if in old church buildings, described as \'Dancing underneath architecture\'.
July 10th, 2017 08:41
Dancing Like an Idiot.
Nicholas Browning said:
I agree. A soul can be mended by many of things. Music is one of them.
July 10th, 2017 05:56
Nicholas Browning said:
I agree. A soul can be mended by many of things. Music is one of them.
July 10th, 2017 05:56
Dancing Like an Idiot.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch you are so right! I like what you said in your comment from author. Love your poem. Music can do all you wrote and much more.
As far as I am concerned, I don\'t even want a funeral. I just want them (the ones left behind) to have a party and celebrate my life, not my death. Great writing again!
July 10th, 2017 04:44
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch you are so right! I like what you said in your comment from author. Love your poem. Music can do all you wrote and much more.
As far as I am concerned, I don\'t even want a funeral. I just want them (the ones left behind) to have a party and celebrate my life, not my death. Great writing again!
July 10th, 2017 04:44
Dancing Like an Idiot.
Frank Prem said:
Irresistible title GF. YOu putting thought into preparations? Could do worse than The Comets.
July 10th, 2017 01:51
Frank Prem said:
Irresistible title GF. YOu putting thought into preparations? Could do worse than The Comets.
July 10th, 2017 01:51
Nature\'s Wondrous World.
Nicholas Browning said:
I felt as if I was there with you. Well done Finch.
July 9th, 2017 16:17
Nicholas Browning said:
I felt as if I was there with you. Well done Finch.
July 9th, 2017 16:17
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