Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Trust in Nature.
Heather T said:
What a serene encounter! Thanks for taking us there.
June 23rd, 2017 15:49
Heather T said:
What a serene encounter! Thanks for taking us there.
June 23rd, 2017 15:49
Trust in Nature.
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s the less flamboyant birds that often give the greatest pleasure - sparrows, blackbirds - love \'em
June 23rd, 2017 12:47
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s the less flamboyant birds that often give the greatest pleasure - sparrows, blackbirds - love \'em
June 23rd, 2017 12:47
Trust in Nature.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, a beautiful description of trust. Reminded me of the trust a toddler has towards his parents.
June 23rd, 2017 12:21
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, a beautiful description of trust. Reminded me of the trust a toddler has towards his parents.
June 23rd, 2017 12:21
Trust in Nature.
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine narrative, Goldfinch! I enjoyed experiencing it with you.
June 23rd, 2017 09:36
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine narrative, Goldfinch! I enjoyed experiencing it with you.
June 23rd, 2017 09:36
Trust in Nature.
Frank Prem said:
Excellent GF. Over here blackbirds are taking over at the expense of other native species, but I like them, nonetheless. It\'s been a while since I had an encounter with a young one. Lovely capture.
June 23rd, 2017 01:58
Frank Prem said:
Excellent GF. Over here blackbirds are taking over at the expense of other native species, but I like them, nonetheless. It\'s been a while since I had an encounter with a young one. Lovely capture.
June 23rd, 2017 01:58
Trust in Nature.
orchidee said:
Lovely write and picture G/F. Any birds around in 1066? I can\'t remember!
June 23rd, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Lovely write and picture G/F. Any birds around in 1066? I can\'t remember!
June 23rd, 2017 01:44
Lost Mum.
FredPeyer said:
You captured in a few words the whole sadness, despair, and pain dementia in a loved one will cause.
Thank you for sharing.
June 22nd, 2017 14:18
FredPeyer said:
You captured in a few words the whole sadness, despair, and pain dementia in a loved one will cause.
Thank you for sharing.
June 22nd, 2017 14:18
Lost Mum.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks fro CARING & SHARING ANDY. Dementia is very hard on the KIDS and we have some people in CHURCH whose MUMS (and in some cases DADS) have retreated into \"A WORLD OF THEIR OWN\" and no longer know them A poem like this makes me appreciated my MUM & DAD even more ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
June 22nd, 2017 10:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks fro CARING & SHARING ANDY. Dementia is very hard on the KIDS and we have some people in CHURCH whose MUMS (and in some cases DADS) have retreated into \"A WORLD OF THEIR OWN\" and no longer know them A poem like this makes me appreciated my MUM & DAD even more ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
June 22nd, 2017 10:57
Lost Mum.
P.H.Rose said:
GF60 this is for me
By far your best
Not so long but
Filled with emotion
I absolutely love it..
Another fav of mine..
June 22nd, 2017 03:36
P.H.Rose said:
GF60 this is for me
By far your best
Not so long but
Filled with emotion
I absolutely love it..
Another fav of mine..
June 22nd, 2017 03:36
Lost Mum.
Michael Edwards said:
I really feel for you - my father suffered from this and It wasn\'t until quite late in its development that we realised the strain it put on my mother. Your poem captures the despair of this awful problem.
June 22nd, 2017 02:35
Michael Edwards said:
I really feel for you - my father suffered from this and It wasn\'t until quite late in its development that we realised the strain it put on my mother. Your poem captures the despair of this awful problem.
June 22nd, 2017 02:35
Lost Mum.
orchidee said:
Sensitive write. Maybe we don\'t notice the contrast so much, if \'close-up\' and seeing it every day. Not that we don\'t see the contrast at all - because we do see it.
But it may seem sharper to someone who does not see a person or situation every day.
June 22nd, 2017 01:39
orchidee said:
Sensitive write. Maybe we don\'t notice the contrast so much, if \'close-up\' and seeing it every day. Not that we don\'t see the contrast at all - because we do see it.
But it may seem sharper to someone who does not see a person or situation every day.
June 22nd, 2017 01:39
God\'s Words.
FredPeyer said:
A very thoughtful poem. And you are right, all the words we write do come from within us. Do they come from god? Maybe...it all depends on the writer and his/her belief. For a buddhist, it may be different. But regardless, let\'s be thankful that we DO have words to pen.
June 21st, 2017 13:24
FredPeyer said:
A very thoughtful poem. And you are right, all the words we write do come from within us. Do they come from god? Maybe...it all depends on the writer and his/her belief. For a buddhist, it may be different. But regardless, let\'s be thankful that we DO have words to pen.
June 21st, 2017 13:24
God\'s Words.
orchidee said:
A fine, integrated and thoughtful write G/F.
But in me dafter moments - reading this first thing has given me headache. Well, I was \'thinking\' too much! heehee.
Can you never be \'deep\' Porchi? Must it always be porkies and sherries?! lol.
June 21st, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
A fine, integrated and thoughtful write G/F.
But in me dafter moments - reading this first thing has given me headache. Well, I was \'thinking\' too much! heehee.
Can you never be \'deep\' Porchi? Must it always be porkies and sherries?! lol.
June 21st, 2017 01:55
Grenfell Tower.
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem GF60
And absolutely
Spot on !!! Well done
June 20th, 2017 18:33
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem GF60
And absolutely
Spot on !!! Well done
June 20th, 2017 18:33
Grenfell Tower.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wonderful tribute poem, Goldfinch! Captures the raw truth of this world
June 20th, 2017 09:54
Louis Gibbs said:
Wonderful tribute poem, Goldfinch! Captures the raw truth of this world
June 20th, 2017 09:54
Grenfell Tower.
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t like to live any higher than about the 4th floor now. I would feel trapped, even before this sad event. Though when very young I used to live on a 14th floor.
June 20th, 2017 08:31
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t like to live any higher than about the 4th floor now. I would feel trapped, even before this sad event. Though when very young I used to live on a 14th floor.
June 20th, 2017 08:31
Grenfell Tower.
kevin browne said:
you have made another tear come to my eye with this wonderful write.
June 20th, 2017 03:05
kevin browne said:
you have made another tear come to my eye with this wonderful write.
June 20th, 2017 03:05
Grenfell Tower.
kevin browne said:
such sad news it bought tears to my eyes. so unfortunate, and most of the people in the block died. very few survivors and they can\'t even give us a list of names of who\'s missing.
June 20th, 2017 03:04
kevin browne said:
such sad news it bought tears to my eyes. so unfortunate, and most of the people in the block died. very few survivors and they can\'t even give us a list of names of who\'s missing.
June 20th, 2017 03:04
Each of My Days.
malubotelho said:
Wow! Your writing is sooo good. I\'m always very touched about poetry. Reading it inspire us to write more. My first language is portuguese and I can create good rhymes in Portuguese but my English is limited. I\'m excited because I\'ve found this community.
June 19th, 2017 09:06
malubotelho said:
Wow! Your writing is sooo good. I\'m always very touched about poetry. Reading it inspire us to write more. My first language is portuguese and I can create good rhymes in Portuguese but my English is limited. I\'m excited because I\'ve found this community.
June 19th, 2017 09:06
Each of My Days.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F.. Why do I spoil it and say \' And then it darkened over and rained\'!? heehee. Well we need rain too, I suppose, but that\'s not your point here!
Know what you mean - I see some little birds first thing some days. A big, but friendly, black cat, did not catch any, thankfully!
June 19th, 2017 08:24
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F.. Why do I spoil it and say \' And then it darkened over and rained\'!? heehee. Well we need rain too, I suppose, but that\'s not your point here!
Know what you mean - I see some little birds first thing some days. A big, but friendly, black cat, did not catch any, thankfully!
June 19th, 2017 08:24
\'Escaping from Life\'s Prison.
meno1972 said:
Lovely. It most definitely speaks volumes
June 19th, 2017 06:39
meno1972 said:
Lovely. It most definitely speaks volumes
June 19th, 2017 06:39
Each of My Days.
Frank Prem said:
Yes, enjoy them all GF. They\'re a wonderful show, daily.
June 19th, 2017 02:59
Frank Prem said:
Yes, enjoy them all GF. They\'re a wonderful show, daily.
June 19th, 2017 02:59
Each of My Days.
Renzi said:
I\'ve fallen in love with sunrise 💓 Discovering the beauty of each new day. Lovely poem x
June 19th, 2017 02:42
Renzi said:
I\'ve fallen in love with sunrise 💓 Discovering the beauty of each new day. Lovely poem x
June 19th, 2017 02:42
Each of My Days.
Jooles said:
Lovely poem.....im dusk kinda girl. ....so peaceful
June 19th, 2017 02:22
Jooles said:
Lovely poem.....im dusk kinda girl. ....so peaceful
June 19th, 2017 02:22
Time - Acrostic.
P.H.Rose said:
It is exactly how I live
My life GF60
Good write...
June 18th, 2017 16:36
P.H.Rose said:
It is exactly how I live
My life GF60
Good write...
June 18th, 2017 16:36
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