Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



My Nemesis.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you, the garden always needs something done to it.

April 10th, 2017 10:12

My Nemesis.
WriteBeLight said:

I thought you might be talking about the garden. HA HA clever!

April 10th, 2017 09:48

My Nemesis.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 10th, 2017 07:58

My Nemesis.
willyweed said:

And here I thought you killed the neighbor. good one!

April 10th, 2017 07:19

My Nemesis.
P.H.Rose said:

I knew it was a plant,
bush Or tree of some
Kind after the first
Few words....
I love this GF60
Really good write.
For me a poem where
The meaning is the
Last line, is the best kind

April 10th, 2017 07:12

My Nemesis.
Bibbeck said:

A very clever write! Starting evocatively and atmospheric... causing a surprise smile at the end.

April 10th, 2017 03:50

Acts of Kindness and Love.
Garry said:

Very good.

April 10th, 2017 03:06

My Nemesis.
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - clever verse with a sting in its tail - my own battle is with ivy - like Michael it grows where it should not but I still love the greens of the leaves. Good read my friend.

April 10th, 2017 02:37

My Nemesis.
Michael Edwards said:

I have battled with pyracantha many times in the past but don\'t have it in my present house. Instead I do battle with the ivy on the main wall - it is dry dusty and choking and needs at least three trims a year. So yes this great poem has much resonance in the Edwards household. .

April 10th, 2017 02:01

My Nemesis.
orchidee said:

Ahhh, I thought it might be a sinister blackberry bush! Did you hack through the bush?!

April 10th, 2017 01:44

Acts of Kindness and Love.
poetboy123 said:

This is very true. Keep it up Gold!

April 9th, 2017 20:04

Acts of Kindness and Love.
orchidee said:

Sensitive and thoughtful write.

April 9th, 2017 09:15

Acts of Kindness and Love.
willyweed said:

in the rat race we over look life?


April 9th, 2017 08:16

Acts of Kindness and Love.
WriteBeLight said:

Very great thought here Goldfinch. We all need to appreciate one another.

April 9th, 2017 07:05

Acts of Kindness and Love.
Michael Edwards said:

So simply expressed and so effective - just the littlest of acts can make a difference like smiling at someone no matter how miserable they appear (strangers, shop assistants etc) can help cheer them up a bit.

April 9th, 2017 03:36

Acts of Kindness and Love.
P.H.Rose said:

Love this GF60
Life and love
Between us
All like a jigsaw
Interconnecting
Us by the
Deeds we do

April 9th, 2017 02:47

No Money In Good.
willyweed said:

one man has a zillion
another sleeps under the bridge
more people worship money
then they do God
corporate greed rules this world. good point GF

April 8th, 2017 08:13

Lost in a Book.
wolf10 said:

A short and simple poem that every reader can relate too .

April 8th, 2017 06:58

No Money In Good.
WriteBeLight said:

There is a good side to money Goldfinch. But, I agree. What I see going on in the U.S., and they way some people spend their money is disgusting. I can see why some think of us as the Ugly Americans. Very thought provoking poem!

April 8th, 2017 06:36

No Money In Good.
Frank Prem said:

Amen Gf. Well said.

April 8th, 2017 04:03

No Money In Good.
Michael Edwards said:

Sadly democracy as we know it doesn\'t recognise the needs of the world - only of certain sections of the individual community. A sad world as reflected in this fine write.

April 8th, 2017 01:45

No Money In Good.
orchidee said:

It\'s terrible really. It\'s not as though the resources are not available - they are, Some will answer for it in the end. The story of the rich man and the beggar at his gate? That\'s the controversial verse omitted from \'All things bright and beautiful\' as it infers GOD allocated some rich and some poor, but it\'s MAN making some rich and some poor.

April 8th, 2017 01:40

No Money In Good.
orchidee said:

Good write and true. It\'s said that \'Money is THE root of ALL evil\' could also mean \'Money is A root of ALL KINDS of evil\'.

April 8th, 2017 01:37

Lost To Reality.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks BROTHER ~ for caring and sharing. Please value your space you really need it ! It is bad enough when one\'s G-Parents and other elderly relatives and friends disappear into their own inner world ~ but to ~ lose ones partner (of many years) in that way ~ must be a 24/7 burden ! Thinking of you both and praying for you ~ AMEN BRIAN

April 7th, 2017 10:16

Lost To Reality.
MendedFences27 said:

It takes a brave heart to deal with what you have to, and only a love eternal to inspire you through. Your poem reveasl what all who deal with this same condition go through on a daily basis. It is touching and disheartening. We all fear the same fate. God Bless you and your wife. - Phil A.

April 7th, 2017 09:39

Lost To Reality.
Goldfinch60 said:

Ww i do believe, I KNOW that we will go onto infinity together in our love,

April 7th, 2017 07:19

Lost To Reality.
willyweed said:

true love will prevail, one fine day in spirit she will say thank you my love my hero my soulmate...believe this is true! ww

April 7th, 2017 07:09

Lost To Reality.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WBL, thank you for your kind words. We will still have happy times.

April 7th, 2017 07:03

Lost To Reality.
WriteBeLight said:

I wish I had the power and words to make everything back like it was for you Goldfinch, to the happier times you mention here. Such a poignant and dear write.

April 7th, 2017 06:29

Lost To Reality.
Jooles said:

Awww you know I love your work anyway but my goodness how the need for your first couple of hours for your own sanity comes through then the rest is dedicated with love to your wife 😣

April 7th, 2017 04:18



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