Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Melancholy.
Nicholas Browning said:

Melancholy is one of my favorite things. It\'s become more of a habit at this point, but all the same.
Thanks for this Finch.

August 10th, 2017 01:12

Melancholy.
myself and me said:

The past sadness brewed with time is now melancholy.

August 9th, 2017 21:12

Melancholy.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 9th, 2017 14:30

Melancholy.
WriteBeLight said:

Time does heal Goldfinch!

August 9th, 2017 11:12

Melancholy.
orchidee said:

I was only trying to help! They may have been too inebriated to win the battle, if I had not added water to it. Have you seen the tree where we carved \'We Woz Ere\'?!

August 9th, 2017 09:10

Melancholy.
Louis Gibbs said:

\"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of melancholy! Well done, Goldie.

August 9th, 2017 05:00

Melancholy.
Brycycle said:

Quite liked this. Flashbacks do occur often (happy and sad).
Love the last line :)

August 9th, 2017 03:35

Melancholy.
orchidee said:

Good write G/F. Are whisky-watering days a melancholic memory from the past, or deep sadness of the present for you? The phantom strikes (me!). lol.

August 9th, 2017 02:11

Man in Orange.
Christina8 said:

Very nicely written. What a bright wake up call!

August 8th, 2017 18:56

Man in Orange.
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 8th, 2017 13:04

Man in Orange.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:

I find the little jingle intriguing. Nicely done. I had to \"Google\" the song and Lo and Behold..

August 8th, 2017 12:08

Man in Orange.
malubotelho said:

Maybe he was dressed to check the road to find any damages before trafic begin. Let him know he is poetry now.

August 8th, 2017 09:52

Man in Orange.
Louis Gibbs said:

Not something one sees every day. However, if I were walking down the middle of a road, I would choose to wearing orange too. Enjoyed this cute poem, Goldie!

August 8th, 2017 08:29

Man in Orange.
Goldfinch60 said:

I didn\'t know that eating oranges turned sight orange. Lol.

August 8th, 2017 08:24

Man in Orange.
WriteBeLight said:

Maybe he should cut out all of that orange juice! Very citrusy write Goldfinch!

August 8th, 2017 08:20

Man in Orange.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, a fine write G/F.

August 8th, 2017 08:09

Man in Orange.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

DON\'T YOU REALISE ANDY ~ THAT YOU HAVE BEEN TANGOED ! The future is ORANGE so get used to it ! It is the BRITISH capacity to ACT STUPID that is our greatest asset (We need Clown Boris) and that in the end wins us the most medals. Spike ~ Harry ~ Peter three Genii and everything the GOONS did proves the maxim ~ The whole is always greater than the sum of the parts ! Long after MO ZART (and His Rhythm Boys) are forgotten the YING TONG SONG will still play on ! Thanks for caring & sharing ANDY ~ Yours BRIAN

August 8th, 2017 04:39

Man in Orange.
Michael Edwards said:

Intriguing write and great to hear the Ying Tong Song again - what do our American friends make of it I wonder.

August 8th, 2017 02:07

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
WL Schuett said:

Good melding of the arts Very creative

August 7th, 2017 21:10

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Heather T said:

Lovely piece about the agreement that happens between fertile minds and their chosen mediums. I think it is born from the same places, just birthed through varying filters. Enjoyed both your words and Michael\'s artistry.

August 7th, 2017 18:33

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
malubotelho said:

Bright writing. Love the purple on the painting. Something about raw jewel stone.

August 7th, 2017 14:09

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Brian. I likrpe Kadinsky\'s work.

August 7th, 2017 11:33

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ In ART ~ there is a symbiosis between Literature ~ Visual Art & Music \' KADINSKY showed it between Visual art & Music and in Maori Art there is always a lot of Y WORDS Incorporated into the Painting to supplement the imagery. All cartoons & comics are a blend of words & visual art. Loved the picture ! My title to MICHAEL was a sack of Cement or Mortar or Flour etc in Liverpool \"Falling off the back of the proverbial Lorry\" Love the poem ~ Yours BRIAN

August 7th, 2017 09:56

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
WriteBeLight said:

Love the beginning, in particular.

August 7th, 2017 09:26

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
ShannonXx said:

Very imaginative write

August 7th, 2017 08:26

Sitting at Heavens Door.
malubotelho said:

I always say that one can live in heaven or hell. You just have to tune to one or other station. Nice writing. Awesome

August 7th, 2017 06:40

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
Michael Edwards said:

Thanks for putting this on the site - feel flattered that you should use my painting - and it\'s a darn good poem to go with it.

August 7th, 2017 02:09

Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating.
orchidee said:

A fine write Goldie. But I can\'t say Scion-wotsit after a few sherries. Also *gets out dictionary to look it up*.

August 7th, 2017 01:36

Sitting at Heavens Door.
myself and me said:

It is the kind of heaven for me. Shall create my own. Like your poem.

August 6th, 2017 15:03

Sitting at Heavens Door.
FredPeyer said:

You said it so well, Goldfinch. What else could be there to make us happy? Maybe female companionship!

August 6th, 2017 14:47



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