Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Jigsaw Of Life.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I did a \'musical jigsaw\' but all the pieces were blank. It was that 4\'33\" piece! LOL.
June 25th, 2025 02:39
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I did a \'musical jigsaw\' but all the pieces were blank. It was that 4\'33\" piece! LOL.
June 25th, 2025 02:39
Fine Croquet Day.
Doggerel Dave said:
After a game of YOUR croquet I always feel that there might be a time when all\'s well with the world, Andy.
June 24th, 2025 20:36
Doggerel Dave said:
After a game of YOUR croquet I always feel that there might be a time when all\'s well with the world, Andy.
June 24th, 2025 20:36
Fine Croquet Day.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. Croquet is a loving game. Perfect for good conversation and banter.
June 24th, 2025 06:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. Croquet is a loving game. Perfect for good conversation and banter.
June 24th, 2025 06:06
Fine Croquet Day.
David Wakeling said:
A great game,a great day and cake at the end.That\'s as good as it gets.Wonderful read.
June 24th, 2025 04:40
David Wakeling said:
A great game,a great day and cake at the end.That\'s as good as it gets.Wonderful read.
June 24th, 2025 04:40
Fine Croquet Day.
sorenbarrett said:
Got it Gold win or loose one has wone when having fun with one\'s mates. Well done
June 24th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Got it Gold win or loose one has wone when having fun with one\'s mates. Well done
June 24th, 2025 04:21
Fine Croquet Day.
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds me of when I used to play cricket, just a lovely team day out ending with a lovely tea, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 02:51
Poetic Licence said:
Reminds me of when I used to play cricket, just a lovely team day out ending with a lovely tea, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 02:51
The Village Ghost.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good one, Andy. I needed a laugh today.
June 23rd, 2025 05:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good one, Andy. I needed a laugh today.
June 23rd, 2025 05:45
The Village Ghost.
David Wakeling said:
A fun ghost tale. Well constructed and enjoyable to read.Great piece
June 23rd, 2025 04:29
David Wakeling said:
A fun ghost tale. Well constructed and enjoyable to read.Great piece
June 23rd, 2025 04:29
The Village Ghost.
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Andy this one was a lot of fun loved it
June 23rd, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Andy this one was a lot of fun loved it
June 23rd, 2025 04:14
The Village Ghost.
arqios said:
A marvellous entry in your growing anthology—a piece that rustles with hearth-warmth and ends with a clever shiver. That final question delivers a delightfully eerie twist, very much in keeping with the fireside folklore and relatable texture of tone: the ordinary laced with myth. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 03:04
arqios said:
A marvellous entry in your growing anthology—a piece that rustles with hearth-warmth and ends with a clever shiver. That final question delivers a delightfully eerie twist, very much in keeping with the fireside folklore and relatable texture of tone: the ordinary laced with myth. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 03:04
To Jail He Went.
Spencer Wilhelm said:
You had me, I was waiting for the solitary confinement, then I got the twist. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 16:38
Spencer Wilhelm said:
You had me, I was waiting for the solitary confinement, then I got the twist. Nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 16:38
To Jail He Went.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Still laughing, Andy. I think I snorted some coffee.
June 22nd, 2025 06:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
Still laughing, Andy. I think I snorted some coffee.
June 22nd, 2025 06:31
To Jail He Went.
Poetic Licence said:
That had me worried at first, entertaining read
June 22nd, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
That had me worried at first, entertaining read
June 22nd, 2025 05:13
To Jail He Went.
David Wakeling said:
Wow made me smile mi amigo.A fun story of a criminal who did not get to pass go and collect $200.Good fun read
June 22nd, 2025 04:46
David Wakeling said:
Wow made me smile mi amigo.A fun story of a criminal who did not get to pass go and collect $200.Good fun read
June 22nd, 2025 04:46
To Jail He Went.
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise endings are always great whether movies, books or poems. Only in life itself can they be problematic. A fun read Andy
June 22nd, 2025 03:26
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise endings are always great whether movies, books or poems. Only in life itself can they be problematic. A fun read Andy
June 22nd, 2025 03:26
To Jail He Went.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Monopoly\'s got silly now. they have skyscrapers too. if you land on one and have to pay up, that\'s it usually.
Doh! I thought I was playing monopoly, but it was a church asking for more money! Some get greedy.
June 22nd, 2025 02:02
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Monopoly\'s got silly now. they have skyscrapers too. if you land on one and have to pay up, that\'s it usually.
Doh! I thought I was playing monopoly, but it was a church asking for more money! Some get greedy.
June 22nd, 2025 02:02
The Longest Day Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up to your usual standard (v. high) but where I am we are suffering the winter solstice and Antarctica has visited us to celebrate.
Thanks for the memory of summers past, Andy.
June 21st, 2025 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up to your usual standard (v. high) but where I am we are suffering the winter solstice and Antarctica has visited us to celebrate.
Thanks for the memory of summers past, Andy.
June 21st, 2025 17:04
The Longest Day Sonnet.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! Andy. I loved it, a fine read.
June 21st, 2025 06:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow! Andy. I loved it, a fine read.
June 21st, 2025 06:08
The Longest Day Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful description of the longest day.From endless hues to evening breezes. Wonderfully written with rhyme.Well done amigo
June 21st, 2025 04:49
David Wakeling said:
This is a wonderful description of the longest day.From endless hues to evening breezes. Wonderfully written with rhyme.Well done amigo
June 21st, 2025 04:49
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