Comments received on poems by orchidee



Prominent Praise
Neville said:


I know the saying closer my god to thee.. or summat like.. but my idea of prominent praise is when I climbed to the top of Glastonbury Tor and danced a little embu or moving prayer in thanks of something very dear... and I dont mean expensive :)

Neville

August 13th, 2020 02:08

Prominent Praise
orchidee said:

I went out of sequence a bit - verse 3 slightly not rhyming. I realised I only had 7 lines per stanza, not 8 lines.
Also - Verse 4: What rhymes with \'strength\' and \'length\'? I have used \'praise\' instead here.

August 13th, 2020 02:00

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Michael Edwards said:

You are indeed dear Orchi. a good shepherd that is - or is Fido a Shepherd or a German - eeergh !

August 12th, 2020 16:22

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 1
Crowns4Christ said:

great job orchi can\'t wait for pt.2

August 12th, 2020 09:20

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Crowns4Christ said:

great write orchi,we all need to trust in the lord and believe that he always has our backs especially in our times of need

August 12th, 2020 09:10

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Neville said:


Ah\' the shepherd song... You sure that was not Dr. Doolittle Orchidee..

August 12th, 2020 04:10

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Orchi but as you know I am no longer a believer.

Andy

August 12th, 2020 02:21

Quenching Quest
Michael Edwards said:

You on the Corona again Orchi?

August 11th, 2020 11:04

Quenching Quest
Neville said:


a well crafted seasonal poem my friend.. and my thirst, second and third have all been dutifully quenched :)

August 11th, 2020 02:32

Quenching Quest
Fay Slimm. said:

A good use of words and texts here Orchi.

August 11th, 2020 02:32

Quenching Quest
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Orchi.

Andy

August 11th, 2020 02:23

Merry.............
dusk arising said:

Leave it out Fido.... I\'ve seen ya cock ya leg up and rattle the tinsel..... no wonder there\'s so many gifts of perfume under the tree each year.


August 10th, 2020 09:53

Salvation Sharings
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Monday Uncle Steve ~ Thnaks for another Great Hymn ~ Tune & Words ! AMEN Thnaks also of reminding us of the TRUTHS in Psalm 69 !

I will praise God\'s name in Song
And Gloriy him with Thanksgiving ~ AMEN

Blessings to You & Your Persecuted Pooch
Spirit Love ~ Brian & Angela & Smokey ! ! !
I am sending you a note re (CON) FUSIONS !
Can you please add a Poem on STYLE to
our Latest Fusion & I will tell you how to write one !

August 10th, 2020 09:46

Salvation Sharings
dusk arising said:

\"By his mercies i shall live\" well lucky you Orchidee, tell that to the children of famine, flood, disease, disability.... all of which are controlled by your omnipotent god.

August 10th, 2020 06:06

Salvation Sharings
Neville said:


Sharing is good for the soul .. and smiled upon by those who follow any faith... and even those of none....

well penned my friend :)

August 10th, 2020 04:06

Salvation Sharings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 10th, 2020 02:43

Merry.............
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

A & B & S ~ HERE ~ Uncle Steve ~ The *Down to Earth TRIO* who do our best to instill a bit of Love - Joy - Peace & Sanity into MPS in these uncertain times. I see *THE SILLY SEASON* has stared early for You & Canis Canis. Despite WW2 (dont mention ze Var !) we love the Rhine and the *All Year Christmas Shops* with Tannenbaum und Bratwurst und Kuken und Gluckwein usw usw ! Why not just declare every Year *Christmas Year* it is already so whats the difference. Its also a good opportunity to remind the skepticks that 25 December 2020 is Jesus\' 2020 Birthday ~ AMEN !
Love MAD DOG Videos ~ Smokey is in stiches. Dogs make CATS seem NORMAL !

MPS needs a MILLIGANESQUE Character !
Keep ringin* yer Bell outside Morrisons ! !
Blessings & Joy to YOU & Santa Snoopy
Spirit Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !

August 9th, 2020 11:57

Merry.............
Goldfinch60 said:

Sorry, this should have had the 18 clicked. YOU DO NOT MENTION THE C WORD BEFORE DECEMBER.
You never do heed my instructions, look what happened when you ignored me about pointing up in the sky in 1066.

WILL YOU NEVER LEARN. I knew you would be trouble when you were created back 44 billion years ago and immediately put water in my scotch, I still haven\'t forgiven you for that!

Godzilla

August 9th, 2020 03:56

Merry.............
Neville said:


I\'ll have a half measure of whatever you are on Orchidee...

or maybe just a pinch of whatever it was they slipped into ya Tizer :)

August 9th, 2020 02:41

Spiritual Sight
Goldfinch60 said:

good one Orchi.

August 9th, 2020 00:39

Spiritual Sight
FineB said:

Hi Orchidee,

A great write ✍

With God we can see things more clearly

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times
FineB

August 8th, 2020 18:22

Spiritual Sight
Michael Edwards said:

can\'t beat A&Bs response - I\'ll be succinct - great work O.

August 8th, 2020 15:38

Spiritual Sight
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

A & B HERE ~ Good Afternoon Uncle Steve ~ MPS seems deserted today ~ I guess its the weather. We have been to Southend for a Salmon & Salad al-fresco Lunch in the grounds of an uncrowded Hotel ! They are packed like SARDINES on the Beach and *Sand in the Sanwhiches* which we avoided ! Just enjoying a cold San Miguel in our Garden with Smokey ~ we brought him a portion of Salmon which the Chef let us have when we showed him a picture of Smokey ! Do you beg sauages for Fido ?
We enjoyed to Hymn Tune but had to source the WORDS ! Verses 3 & 4 about Communion are excellent !

An altar stands within the shrine
whereon once sacrificed
is set - immaculate - divine
the Lamb of God - the Christ !

Ther rich & poor - from countless lands
praise Christ in mystic mood
there Nations reach forth holy hands
to take Christ*s holy food !

This is sublime Truth & quality Poetry !

Thanks also for extracts form PSALM 119 - in which each of the 168 speaks so so positively of Gods Word the Bible ~ Thos who ridicule it and refuse to read it mss out on Great Blessings every single day ! The 8 verses you cite (PE) speak of the Bible as Gods Statutes ~ Precepts ~ Word ~ Commands ~ Decrees & Laws all spoken in His Soovereign Name ~ How awesome & assuring is that ! Thnaks for caring & sharing ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Joy to You & Your Praising Pup !
Spiritual Love Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛

August 8th, 2020 11:23

Spiritual Sight
Neville said:


I used to have spiritual sight, but since I cut write back, and on a good day, I can almost see for yards....... :)

August 8th, 2020 11:01

Positively Prospering
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 8th, 2020 00:15

Positively Prospering
Neville said:


in a world of predominant want.. I do question who at the end of the day does prosper..... nice one tho my friend :)

August 7th, 2020 03:30

Quota Of Qualities
L. B. Mek said:

as spine-tingling, smooth and powerful: as Aretha\'s voice

August 7th, 2020 03:17

Quota Of Qualities
Neville said:


Hey, this is one helluva hymn poem with a kinda her factor built in, innit .... :)

August 6th, 2020 08:54

Quota Of Qualities
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi


August 6th, 2020 04:20

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 1
Michael Edwards said:

Keep writing - Miss Berles wants to know who Don is .

August 5th, 2020 15:18



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