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Praise Proclaiming
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Blessed Sunday Orchi
Thanks for the post

June 23rd, 2019 07:34

Praise Proclaiming
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE STEVE : ANGELA here (11:30 pm in NZ almost time for bed !) I guess BRIAN is in CHURCH ! Love the Hymn - Choir & Orchestra : AWESOME ! Psalm 68 a great Psalm for the evil days in which we live !

We long for the time when GOD
Will take over our Cities
When wickedness shall be suppressed
And selfishness subdued
When Poeple will care for each other again !

Blessings for YOU & FIDO
Love in the SP!RIT ANGELA & BRIAN XOX
Please check our Collboration : HELIUM

June 23rd, 2019 05:41

Praise Proclaiming
Michael Edwards said:

Good work O

June 23rd, 2019 03:17

Praise Proclaiming
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

A great tune is this one.

June 23rd, 2019 01:38

Space For Grace
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi, but is he there?

June 23rd, 2019 00:26

Space For Grace
dusk arising said:

re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.... ?


June 22nd, 2019 18:05

Space For Grace
FineB said:

Hello Orchidee.

A lovely poem and so true.

Tis always the challenge of every Christian to find time for God every dau especially with our busy lives.

Keep writing FineB

June 22nd, 2019 16:03

Space For Grace
dusk arising said:

re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.... ?


June 22nd, 2019 14:38

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Suresh said:

Well we got wheat for the bread and fruits for jam, what else do we need....

June 22nd, 2019 07:44

Space For Grace
Michael Edwards said:

Fine work but is \'thorough\' the right word in the last line?

June 22nd, 2019 01:57

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
dusk arising said:

Where is this above place then?

June 21st, 2019 12:06

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Michael Edwards said:

Well done Faith but a funny name for her son.

June 21st, 2019 07:42

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

Faith can certainly turn into wise ways of dealing with life\'s challenges Orchi - thank you for sharing the need for humility to see good results

June 21st, 2019 03:49

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

May that wisdom fill everyone with the Peace of the World.

June 21st, 2019 03:08

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Neville said:

tis certainly wise if we are talking fruits, to have your five a day.... N

June 21st, 2019 02:33

Remembrance Recollections
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening ANGELA HERE ! Thanks UNCLE STEVE for sharing another GREAT HYMN ! *I am trusting Thee Lord Jesus* : Morning or Evening (Its 8am Friday here !). Sorry you didnt get more takers for your EUCHARIST ! In the Churches in NZ the Communion Services are the same as in SPAIN - THE UK and everywhere in the World (variations with DENOMINATION) : The Catholic Eucharists are identical in the Tridentine (Latin) Mass and very very similar in all languages. Wherever we are in the WORLD : Brian & I attend COMMUNION (even when we are not familiar with the Vernacular) and we are always made very very welcome ! We consider it is very important to *Celebrate the Lords Supper* at least once per week to keep us NEAR THE CROSS : AMEN. It was instituted in order that : when we do it : We focus on JESUS and his ATONEMENT on the CROSS. Please keep up the GOOD WORK of sharing JESUS on MPS every single DAY : AMEN
In BRIANS CHURCH (Evangelical) they have a Portable Communion Set and the Elders (and Decons) can take it out to *Shut Ins* Brian & I have been involved in this Ministry : It is very very humbling !

Blessing & Joy for YOU & FIDOMO !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 20th, 2019 14:07

Remembrance Recollections
Suresh said:

Well no seat at the table for me again -



June 20th, 2019 12:33

Remembrance Recollections
Michael Edwards said:

Well writ O

June 20th, 2019 09:12

Remembrance Recollections
dusk arising said:

Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?

June 20th, 2019 07:56

Remembrance Recollections
Neville said:

I always make a point of remembering the fallen on Remembrance Sunday.. everything else, I regret, I forget..... tis not an age thing....... I respect the message you get across here tho.... Neville

June 20th, 2019 03:10

Remembrance Recollections
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Orchi but as you know my faith in the Christian church has gone so I will not be at that table.

June 20th, 2019 02:37

Peaceful Providence
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Love the HYMN and video ! BRIAN tells me Good Poeming requires an infinite vocabulary ! repetition of a line is GOOD but not of a WORD ! I would suggest DECREASE for the last WORD in V 5. You could delete AND to preserve the METRE : OK By removing CEASE in line 4 you can now leave CEASE in line 2 : which i like because it creates Internal Rhyme which ameliorates FLOW. I have been attending a Poetry Class here (dont tell Brian !) where they instruct us in the fine art of POETIC STRUCTURE ! This is why BRIAN & I produce so many PANTOUMS etc etc. I love BRIANS POEM today It is a masterpiece of 15 Rhyming Couplets : awesome !

Thanks for caring & sharing & uplifting !
Blessings for YOU & HOUND DOG
Yours Tout Suite ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 19th, 2019 03:37

Peaceful Providence
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

June 19th, 2019 02:57

Peaceful Providence
Neville said:

what about..... desist

I enjoyed this poem and the challenge


June 19th, 2019 02:16

Peaceful Providence
orchidee said:

Can you help? In verse 5 I have use \'cease\' twice. I need another word for \'noise stopping\' (in line 2).
I have already used \'stills\' in line 1.
Suppose I could use \'stops\' as one option.

June 19th, 2019 01:53

Fret Not To Do Evil
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one once more Orchi.

June 19th, 2019 00:14

Fret Not To Do Evil
dusk arising said:

You know what, i wish it would happen.

June 18th, 2019 12:44

Fret Not To Do Evil
Suresh said:

Your belief is your strength

June 18th, 2019 11:09

Fret Not To Do Evil
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE STEVE ~ Great Hymn ~ Great Tune ~ Great Poem all about Seeking ~ Choosing ~ Being Guided & Witnessing ~ LOVE IT ~ AMEN ! Please check Our BALANCED DIET ~ Thanks

Blessings & Joy to YOU & FIDO
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 18th, 2019 10:52

Fret Not To Do Evil
Neville said:

there is a green hill far away he sat and watched from his ancient wobbly throne....

June 18th, 2019 04:06



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