Comments received on poems by orchidee



Jump From Temple Top?
Neville said:


I think I\'ll just give this one a miss for now and just watch how you and your fellow lemmings get on .. πŸ€πŸ€πŸ­πŸ

March 6th, 2023 04:18

Jump From Temple Top?
Doggerel Dave said:

So is this from where the middle ages\' test for a witch was conceived, orchi?

March 6th, 2023 03:53

Helpful Hope
sorenbarrett said:

Orchidee your second and fourth stanzas really hit me. This was a wonderful prayer, song, poem of hope.

March 5th, 2023 07:38

Helpful Hope
Doggerel Dave said:

The body of the poem is far too technical for my sinple mind, orchi - thus I will confine myself to your title and ask is hope helpful, and does it always bring home the goods, or at least a bone for Fido....?πŸ˜‡!!!

March 5th, 2023 06:59

Helpful Hope
Neville said:


it always helps if there is a little hope left over at the end of another long day ............. πŸ€πŸ€

March 5th, 2023 03:32

Stones To Bread?
Goldfinch60 said:

God one Orchi.

March 5th, 2023 03:00

Stones To Bread?
Bella Shepard said:

A lovely Lenten poem dear Orchi!

March 4th, 2023 13:14

Stones To Bread?
orchidee said:

N - this sounds a bit like:
There was an old trout named KP..
I can\'t finish the limerick - I will swoon! lol.

March 4th, 2023 05:17

Stones To Bread?
Neville said:


while standing tall
indeed erect
he called out loud
gawd flippin heck ..
if I am to eat another stone
I\'ll end up dead
I need summat else instead
so please just gimmi bread ..
While kneelin down
and fit to bust
he whispered low
and low he cussed ..
I\'m not starvin
but when needs must
I might just munch upon a few locusts .... πŸͺ³πŸͺ²πŸ•·οΈπŸ¦ŸπŸ§πŸ˜Ž


March 4th, 2023 04:40

Stones To Bread?
Doggerel Dave said:

The tempter needs to be bought into line.
With you and KP it should be a breeze;
But KP and the tempter both align,
While you spend too much time on your knees… πŸ˜‡



March 4th, 2023 04:21

Lasting Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

March 4th, 2023 03:01

Lasting Love
Bella Shepard said:

Ah, the quality of mercy, and love. May it always be. Good write.

March 3rd, 2023 16:17

Lasting Love
Neville said:



its a great concept .. but sadly few get to realise it for one reason or another ..

March 3rd, 2023 08:42

Lasting Love
arqios said:

The love that lasts outlasts the latest love in our endless series of loves.

March 3rd, 2023 08:30

Lasting Love
Christina8 said:

A wonderful hymn about a loving God...Christina

March 3rd, 2023 07:02

Lasting Love
sorenbarrett said:

He certainly must have a great deal of patience (except for some like Sodom and Gomorrah)

March 3rd, 2023 06:22

Lasting Love
Doggerel Dave said:

I wonder why God hasn\'t suffered a nervous breakdown by now..... πŸ˜‡

March 3rd, 2023 03:49

Going On In Grace
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

March 3rd, 2023 02:52

Going On In Grace
BlessedbyGod said:

Great piece Steven, going on in grace perfectly said my friend

March 2nd, 2023 12:09

Going On In Grace
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Grace is the great first movement to conversion - Today, may many people be stirred by His mysterious grace.

March 2nd, 2023 11:17

Going On In Grace
tommytoons said:

Beautifully spiritual words.

March 2nd, 2023 10:09

Going On In Grace
arqios said:

Going on in new Grace
Onward with a freshness true
Its fullness perfected eternally
Newness reasserting self
Growing all the while giving!

March 2nd, 2023 06:16

Going On In Grace
Doggerel Dave said:

That Spirit is a \'he\'? \'Strengthen, renew\'? Apologies, but it all sounds a bit sus to me, orchi... LOL

March 2nd, 2023 04:39

Going On In Grace
Neville said:


what would Fido say if he knew you were going on like that in Grace .. and what would her husband and kids think of you both ........... 🦨🦨🐧

March 2nd, 2023 03:20

Going On In Grace
Michael Edwards said:

You keep them coming O - Miss B will be proud of you.


March 2nd, 2023 02:42

Forgiveness Fullness
Bella Shepard said:

Beautifully written dear Orchi, acknowledging our sins is a biggie.

March 1st, 2023 12:17

Forgiveness Fullness
Doggerel Dave said:

You are just evil, orchi - all those sins piled up to be forgiven................. πŸ˜‡

March 1st, 2023 06:03

Forgiveness Fullness
Christina8 said:

Wonderful hymn Steve!

March 1st, 2023 05:51

Forgiveness Fullness
Neville said:


I am sure this is a fine hymn poem Steven, if not a very fine hymn poem

March 1st, 2023 03:30

Through Troubles
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

March 1st, 2023 03:00



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