Comments received on poems by Gavin



Under the same Sun
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin.

October 10th, 2020 02:17

The Shadow of His Wings
orchidee said:

A fine write Gavin. I\'ve felt inspired to do a Series on Isaiah (ongoing). Not all of it! Erm, the \'good bits\' I admit!

October 5th, 2020 05:33

Me too hypocrites
Unsub said:

Gavin,

you should read Cathy O\'Brien\'s, Trance-Formation of America. What you speak of goes much further than Hollywood.

MKultra is the seed that is causing this.

The book is frightening & will make you look at the world in a completely different way!

Brave poem that sadly only scratches the surface.

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September 26th, 2020 04:46

The Flowers of Zion
orchidee said:

A fine write Gavin.

September 25th, 2020 10:47

Adonai
orchidee said:

Yes, good write. Maybe we don\'t often think of \'What are God\'s names\'?

September 25th, 2020 02:00

Adonai
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening GAVIN ~ ADONAI ~ Means *Sovereign Lord^ in Hebrew and is an importssnt NAME for GOD. Thanks for highlighting so mnay important attributes of GOD ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey šŸ’›šŸ’›šŸ’›

September 24th, 2020 15:59

Abraham\'s tent
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin. The OT people are not fairy tales. Let\'s hope these peace deals won\'t be.
Though are some saying \'Hmm, can we trust someone with such a dodgy barnet?\' Looking on the outward appearances there! Oops!

September 16th, 2020 10:22

Abraham\'s tent
dusk arising said:

Nice fairy tale with great reference to fairy tale characters.

September 16th, 2020 04:17

Dichotomy
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin.

September 15th, 2020 15:11

Dichotomy
Fay Slimm. said:

A compelling read Gavin - - as your well balanced stanzas show self-control pays precious dividends - an ancient and wise path indeed is the one that leads above.

September 15th, 2020 13:41

Our Lord redeems
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin.

August 27th, 2020 09:33

Battle of the Somme
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words and tribute to a time that we hope will never arise again.

Andy

August 25th, 2020 00:35

Battle of the Somme
jarcher54 said:

Yes, whenever we turn our back on war, we must not turn our back on the warriors. Volunteer or draftee, general or private, brave or cowering, Dusk is right, those in the field are seldom the war mongers themselves. I will take to heart your beautifully expressed entreaty: Forgive them that talk in pride...

August 24th, 2020 08:27

Battle of the Somme
dusk arising said:

Lest we forget those who will not age.

We all should be reminded of the hideous thing war is. How war mongers are not those whose blood and bones splatter the soil. How words need to be sought to ease troubles.

Fine words from you in a noble cause. I know how disturbing it is to write such pieces from the heart.

August 24th, 2020 07:44

Battle of the Somme
Audax said:

We salute those who lay their life on the battlefield and fight for honor. A nicely penned tribute with perfectly laid out words. Be proud of the work you presented!

August 24th, 2020 04:21

Battle of the Somme
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
Brilliantly worded,
I shall never tire of works penned in honour of those who sacrifice(d) their lives in the name of duty or loyalty, long may we remember them and cherish the sanctity of their bravery

August 24th, 2020 04:18

God\'s strength in man
Audax said:

Thank you for sharing a spiritual piece that bring a sense of peace and solace!

August 24th, 2020 03:10

Travail
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin.
On a daft note: \'It\'s this inquietousness that\'s the trouble, ya know!\' I only said that, cos I likes long words! heehee.

August 23rd, 2020 06:35

Travail
Unsub said:

Interesting view that you are free but still carrying that baggage of God in your sails. Bet you move faster without the extra weight.

Can we not be free & at one with this wonderful world without false deities?

No offence, just my opinion,

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August 23rd, 2020 06:24

Abase him who is high
Audax said:

Iā€™m truly impressed with this poem, and I like the rhyme scheme you got going! You explore the concept of how people abuse their power and only propagate evil and corruption in the world. But there will always be good in the world and evil will never triumph. Thank you for sharing. Your words are powerful!

Please check out my newest poems! I would greatly appreciate it!

August 20th, 2020 14:13

Abase him who is high
orchidee said:

A fine write Gavin. I sense you believe in the triumph of light over dark, without, as some may say, there has to be dark for light to be seen.
I think there could be light without necessarily having dark, or in some cases - symbolically and literally.


August 20th, 2020 10:01

God\'s strength in man
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin.

August 12th, 2020 09:07

The want of nothing
Unsub said:

Gavin,

the controlled by want is a clever line. Programmed minds forced into ruin by the \'controllers.\'

This is a much deeper write than it first appears on the surface.

Intelligent piece that MPS cries out for.

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June 21st, 2020 06:53

Bankers collapse
dusk arising said:

When i read your title \'bankers collapse\' i wondered if it was a new dance.

Do you know who\'s got more money than your banker? The roman catholic church. The wealthiest organisation on the planet according to google (interesting reading btw). A whore? Well whore\'s dont have to apologise for peadophilia in their houses. Who\'s worse?

June 17th, 2020 05:53

State of Affairs
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Gavin, may that peace and harmony in which many of us exist come to the fore to those in power.

Andy

June 14th, 2020 23:52

State of Affairs
AwHec8 said:

Great Poem about a reflection of not only life lived out on this Earth now, but also a critique of those in power and or religious piety.

June 14th, 2020 08:03

State of Affairs
dusk arising said:

For a moment there i thought this was a piss take of the roman cathoilic church (or should we call it the roman catholic bank inc.)

June 14th, 2020 04:50

Sound the Trumpet
orchidee said:

Good write Gavin. I can\'t see the clip - there is an error message.

June 1st, 2020 02:45

Lackies
FredPeyer said:

Well said, Gavin!

April 15th, 2020 12:41

North star
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 4th, 2017 08:38