Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Babel
swingline said:
I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your efforts to reach the levels of an unobtainable love as you would always be beneath . And after all your best efforts you are dashed to the ground like a flower whose petals have all been plucked and you no longer are needed .
May 7th, 2017 09:53
swingline said:
I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your efforts to reach the levels of an unobtainable love as you would always be beneath . And after all your best efforts you are dashed to the ground like a flower whose petals have all been plucked and you no longer are needed .
May 7th, 2017 09:53
Scratching
swingline said:
Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked seagulls , the vagabond street people of the sky . Most annoying animals that steal my frozen shrimp then fly . I had my personal tower of Babel . It rose high and obstructed my view of the sky . I dismantled it brick by brick . And now around me a wall does lie .
May 7th, 2017 06:21
swingline said:
Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked seagulls , the vagabond street people of the sky . Most annoying animals that steal my frozen shrimp then fly . I had my personal tower of Babel . It rose high and obstructed my view of the sky . I dismantled it brick by brick . And now around me a wall does lie .
May 7th, 2017 06:21
Joy Unshared
swingline said:
I\'m left wondering about the circumstances of this poem . There must be some kind of conflict between you and an unknown disident . But the results cannot be disputed .
May 5th, 2017 18:25
swingline said:
I\'m left wondering about the circumstances of this poem . There must be some kind of conflict between you and an unknown disident . But the results cannot be disputed .
May 5th, 2017 18:25
Chrysalis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, it is so sad when love is lost.
April 27th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, it is so sad when love is lost.
April 27th, 2017 08:01
Chrysalis
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah sensational n soo creatively put. From beauty into ugliness !! This is an amazingly unique sarcastic lament. I\'m here to admire it\'s great poetics and style. Fantastic presentation. Love turned ingrate and ugly in the form of a woman. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 27th, 2017 05:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah sensational n soo creatively put. From beauty into ugliness !! This is an amazingly unique sarcastic lament. I\'m here to admire it\'s great poetics and style. Fantastic presentation. Love turned ingrate and ugly in the form of a woman. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 27th, 2017 05:59
Lament
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking crap in the pub obviously works. A good write came from it.
April 25th, 2017 08:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking crap in the pub obviously works. A good write came from it.
April 25th, 2017 08:21
Sketch: Defiance
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we must always keep getting up and moving on no matter what puts us down.
April 24th, 2017 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we must always keep getting up and moving on no matter what puts us down.
April 24th, 2017 08:00
Invisible Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, may your kids bring much joy to your life.
April 22nd, 2017 03:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, may your kids bring much joy to your life.
April 22nd, 2017 03:40
Old Worship
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Maybe the hippies had it right, I believe so. Make love not war.
April 18th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Maybe the hippies had it right, I believe so. Make love not war.
April 18th, 2017 08:03
... as a Friend
Jabberwocky said:
Well, thanks. I guess I can\'t make up my mind these days :)
April 17th, 2017 03:36
Jabberwocky said:
Well, thanks. I guess I can\'t make up my mind these days :)
April 17th, 2017 03:36
Rhinestones
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, diamonds in our life do not need to be expensive we just need to be aware that they are there.
April 16th, 2017 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, diamonds in our life do not need to be expensive we just need to be aware that they are there.
April 16th, 2017 00:08
Blessings
Goldfinch60 said:
Our kids can fill us with delight, grandchildren too.
April 15th, 2017 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Our kids can fill us with delight, grandchildren too.
April 15th, 2017 00:17
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