Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky



Babel
Garry said:

The right words in the right order. Powerful images. beautifully written.
I\'d love to know what you think it means.

April 2nd, 2017 04:54

Date Request
Garry said:

Very good. Starkly beaufiful. And, as usual, no wasted words. Well done-again

April 1st, 2017 10:24

Straw Man
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed in a short poem

March 31st, 2017 07:49

Straw Man
Jabberwocky said:

Thanks. I\'m glad you got it. I aimed for density and no redundant possible meanings.

March 31st, 2017 05:09

Straw Man
Garry said:

Stark. So much said in so few words. Excellent.

March 31st, 2017 04:13

Tick Tock
Jabberwocky said:

Thank you Tony, you are always very kind :)

March 30th, 2017 08:51

Tick Tock
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write


March 30th, 2017 07:34

Dead Birds
Jabberwocky said:

Guess I am dark and disturbed!
Give it a month or so yet and I\'ll post some limericks.

March 29th, 2017 14:36

Dead Birds
Garry said:

Dark and disturbing. Love it.

March 29th, 2017 12:13

Dead Birds
Jabberwocky said:

Thanks. Slightly ironic to write a poem about the powerlessness of words, but sometimes they are unfortunately.

March 29th, 2017 09:55

Afterwards
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 28th, 2017 02:46

To a Slut on Mothers Day
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 27th, 2017 08:05

To a Slut on Mothers Day
Garry said:

Wow, heavy stuff gently expressed.

March 27th, 2017 05:15

To a Slut on Mothers Day
Jabberwocky said:

Yeah well, she did that, she is that, she\'ll be sorry, it\'ll be too late. She\'s in the \"forever after\" she made.
That\'s pretty much the story.
Thanks for your comment.

March 27th, 2017 03:28

To a Slut on Mothers Day
orchidee said:

Sorry that was your experience. I know - it\'s usually \'nice\' loving, etc poems for mothers, with many of us blessed to have them (or have had them).

March 27th, 2017 02:36

Alice by the Window
Jabberwocky said:

Thank you. It\'s Lewis Carrolls birthday today, so this seemed appropriate to post.


March 26th, 2017 13:15

Alice by the Window
Garry said:

Well done. Particularly like the opening and closing verses.

March 26th, 2017 12:47

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