Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky



Sketch: Defiance
Tony36 said:

Strong and wonderfully written

April 24th, 2017 10:58

Sketch: Defiance
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, we must always keep getting up and moving on no matter what puts us down.

April 24th, 2017 08:00

Sketch: Defiance
Garry said:

Very strong 4 liner. Well done

April 24th, 2017 07:52

Invisible Life
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write, may your kids bring much joy to your life.

April 22nd, 2017 03:40

Despair
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed great write

April 21st, 2017 10:26

Despair
willyweed said:

good poem, yes in the end its only you

April 21st, 2017 08:44

Despair
Garry said:

Very bleak. Good.

April 21st, 2017 08:15

Despair
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, glad things are better.

April 21st, 2017 08:09

Old Worship
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Maybe the hippies had it right, I believe so. Make love not war.

April 18th, 2017 08:03

... as a Friend
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 17th, 2017 07:44

... as a Friend
Michael Edwards said:

A sort of sad smile

April 17th, 2017 05:13

... as a Friend
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

April 17th, 2017 04:42

... as a Friend
Jabberwocky said:

Well, thanks. I guess I can\'t make up my mind these days :)

April 17th, 2017 03:36

... as a Friend
Garry said:

Very sad.
I like it a lot

April 17th, 2017 03:27

Rhinestones
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, diamonds in our life do not need to be expensive we just need to be aware that they are there.

April 16th, 2017 00:08

Rhinestones
Garry said:

Hm. Interesting.

April 15th, 2017 08:32

Blessings
Goldfinch60 said:

Our kids can fill us with delight, grandchildren too.

April 15th, 2017 00:17

Blessings
Tony36 said:

Wonderful tribute to your kids

April 14th, 2017 07:38

Blessings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for caring \"J\" \"Children are a blessing from the LORD and blessed is He that hath his quiver full\" That\' FIVE by the way ~ BUT ~ Two Yin & Yang ~ is a DOUBLE BLESSING ! Yours BRIAN

April 14th, 2017 03:55

The Broken Past
vvnrose said:

I agree with goldfinch...thought provoking

April 13th, 2017 12:30

The Broken Past
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good thought provoking write.

April 13th, 2017 07:49

There was a young lady (Limerick)
Michael Edwards said:

Only warts? Oh well - yup great limerick.

April 12th, 2017 11:20

There was a young lady (Limerick)
Garry said:

Ha, ha. Won\'t get this into the Penguin book of Children\'s limericks !

April 12th, 2017 03:33

There was a young lady (Limerick)
Frank Prem said:

EEEuuuwww!

Sport can be soooo over-rated.

April 12th, 2017 03:17

Sketch: Arrogance
willyweed said:

all my Italian friends are like this. lol

April 11th, 2017 06:47

Sketch: Arrogance
Garry said:

5 feet great.
Excellent . Technically not quite the limerick we were promised. But definitely excellent.
I might be inspired to post one of mine but this makes them look a bit silly.

April 11th, 2017 03:25

Sketch: The Player
Garry said:

Too many long poems around. Short and taut. Excellent

April 10th, 2017 15:20

Sketch: The Player
Tony36 said:

Short but Awesome write

April 10th, 2017 08:05

Sketch: The Player
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 10th, 2017 07:53

Sketch: The Player
Frank Prem said:

Tightly writ.

April 10th, 2017 05:20



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