Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Feeding Frenzy
Fay Slimm. said:
Cleverly worded this terse observation on dull company. Good write.
May 21st, 2017 08:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Cleverly worded this terse observation on dull company. Good write.
May 21st, 2017 08:07
Voter
Goldfinch60 said:
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Good write.
May 21st, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Good write.
May 21st, 2017 00:55
Voter
Garry said:
Nicely written. Love the underlying message of the stupidity of holding opinions unthinkingly just because that\'s what you\'ve always thought. Especially when it\'s hidden under a convincing abd widely belief about politics and politicians.
Short but very deep. Can\'t do better than well turned out classic or 4 or 6 liner
May 20th, 2017 14:11
Garry said:
Nicely written. Love the underlying message of the stupidity of holding opinions unthinkingly just because that\'s what you\'ve always thought. Especially when it\'s hidden under a convincing abd widely belief about politics and politicians.
Short but very deep. Can\'t do better than well turned out classic or 4 or 6 liner
May 20th, 2017 14:11
The Queen of Sheba
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes all you want to do is feed the ducks.
May 18th, 2017 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes all you want to do is feed the ducks.
May 18th, 2017 02:27
Jungle
swingline said:
Every time I go to the Jungle I get jungle rot in my shoe , monkey butt , jock itch and a rash that someone said was claps or Ebola from someone\'s honeydews .
May 17th, 2017 07:00
swingline said:
Every time I go to the Jungle I get jungle rot in my shoe , monkey butt , jock itch and a rash that someone said was claps or Ebola from someone\'s honeydews .
May 17th, 2017 07:00
Jungle
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many jungles in life, I try to avoid all of them.
Good write.
May 17th, 2017 04:58
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many jungles in life, I try to avoid all of them.
Good write.
May 17th, 2017 04:58
Derelict
Garry said:
Very good. Loved these 4 lines t
\"Let\'s grind al.........
...... we had love before\"
May 17th, 2017 01:11
Garry said:
Very good. Loved these 4 lines t
\"Let\'s grind al.........
...... we had love before\"
May 17th, 2017 01:11
Crossroads
Goldfinch60 said:
May your life in poetry be as pleasurable as this write.
May 16th, 2017 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May your life in poetry be as pleasurable as this write.
May 16th, 2017 07:55
Cowgirl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
COWGIRL 99 is a fave position for ladies with fat husbands ! In my experience \"horsey girls\" also love to be in the saddle riding Cowgirl 99 ~ they always wore a hard had so they didn\'t get pregnant ! BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 09:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
COWGIRL 99 is a fave position for ladies with fat husbands ! In my experience \"horsey girls\" also love to be in the saddle riding Cowgirl 99 ~ they always wore a hard had so they didn\'t get pregnant ! BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 09:21
Cowgirl
Goldfinch60 said:
That scar has been with her a long, long time. Good write.
May 15th, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That scar has been with her a long, long time. Good write.
May 15th, 2017 01:58
Derelict
Jooles said:
Short but great. I\'m not far from Glasgow...familiar with Buckfast and I\'ve seen it\'s effects 🙈
May 12th, 2017 04:19
Jooles said:
Short but great. I\'m not far from Glasgow...familiar with Buckfast and I\'ve seen it\'s effects 🙈
May 12th, 2017 04:19
Derelict
Michael Edwards said:
Really moving - much enjoyed - thanks for posting it.
May 12th, 2017 03:51
Michael Edwards said:
Really moving - much enjoyed - thanks for posting it.
May 12th, 2017 03:51
Golden Fly
swingline said:
It\'s not about cat-ching the bird that is important . Just like catching a fish is not what fishing is about .
May 11th, 2017 02:30
swingline said:
It\'s not about cat-ching the bird that is important . Just like catching a fish is not what fishing is about .
May 11th, 2017 02:30
Babel
swingline said:
I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your efforts to reach the levels of an unobtainable love as you would always be beneath . And after all your best efforts you are dashed to the ground like a flower whose petals have all been plucked and you no longer are needed .
May 7th, 2017 09:53
swingline said:
I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your efforts to reach the levels of an unobtainable love as you would always be beneath . And after all your best efforts you are dashed to the ground like a flower whose petals have all been plucked and you no longer are needed .
May 7th, 2017 09:53
Scratching
swingline said:
Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked seagulls , the vagabond street people of the sky . Most annoying animals that steal my frozen shrimp then fly . I had my personal tower of Babel . It rose high and obstructed my view of the sky . I dismantled it brick by brick . And now around me a wall does lie .
May 7th, 2017 06:21
swingline said:
Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked seagulls , the vagabond street people of the sky . Most annoying animals that steal my frozen shrimp then fly . I had my personal tower of Babel . It rose high and obstructed my view of the sky . I dismantled it brick by brick . And now around me a wall does lie .
May 7th, 2017 06:21
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