Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Jungle
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many jungles in life, I try to avoid all of them.
Good write.
May 17th, 2017 04:58
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many jungles in life, I try to avoid all of them.
Good write.
May 17th, 2017 04:58
Derelict
Garry said:
Very good. Loved these 4 lines t
\"Let\'s grind al.........
...... we had love before\"
May 17th, 2017 01:11
Garry said:
Very good. Loved these 4 lines t
\"Let\'s grind al.........
...... we had love before\"
May 17th, 2017 01:11
Crossroads
Goldfinch60 said:
May your life in poetry be as pleasurable as this write.
May 16th, 2017 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May your life in poetry be as pleasurable as this write.
May 16th, 2017 07:55
Cowgirl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
COWGIRL 99 is a fave position for ladies with fat husbands ! In my experience \"horsey girls\" also love to be in the saddle riding Cowgirl 99 ~ they always wore a hard had so they didn\'t get pregnant ! BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 09:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
COWGIRL 99 is a fave position for ladies with fat husbands ! In my experience \"horsey girls\" also love to be in the saddle riding Cowgirl 99 ~ they always wore a hard had so they didn\'t get pregnant ! BRIAN
May 15th, 2017 09:21
Cowgirl
Goldfinch60 said:
That scar has been with her a long, long time. Good write.
May 15th, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That scar has been with her a long, long time. Good write.
May 15th, 2017 01:58
Derelict
Jooles said:
Short but great. I\'m not far from Glasgow...familiar with Buckfast and I\'ve seen it\'s effects 🙈
May 12th, 2017 04:19
Jooles said:
Short but great. I\'m not far from Glasgow...familiar with Buckfast and I\'ve seen it\'s effects 🙈
May 12th, 2017 04:19
Derelict
Michael Edwards said:
Really moving - much enjoyed - thanks for posting it.
May 12th, 2017 03:51
Michael Edwards said:
Really moving - much enjoyed - thanks for posting it.
May 12th, 2017 03:51
Golden Fly
swingline said:
It\'s not about cat-ching the bird that is important . Just like catching a fish is not what fishing is about .
May 11th, 2017 02:30
swingline said:
It\'s not about cat-ching the bird that is important . Just like catching a fish is not what fishing is about .
May 11th, 2017 02:30
Babel
swingline said:
I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your efforts to reach the levels of an unobtainable love as you would always be beneath . And after all your best efforts you are dashed to the ground like a flower whose petals have all been plucked and you no longer are needed .
May 7th, 2017 09:53
swingline said:
I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your efforts to reach the levels of an unobtainable love as you would always be beneath . And after all your best efforts you are dashed to the ground like a flower whose petals have all been plucked and you no longer are needed .
May 7th, 2017 09:53
Scratching
swingline said:
Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked seagulls , the vagabond street people of the sky . Most annoying animals that steal my frozen shrimp then fly . I had my personal tower of Babel . It rose high and obstructed my view of the sky . I dismantled it brick by brick . And now around me a wall does lie .
May 7th, 2017 06:21
swingline said:
Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked seagulls , the vagabond street people of the sky . Most annoying animals that steal my frozen shrimp then fly . I had my personal tower of Babel . It rose high and obstructed my view of the sky . I dismantled it brick by brick . And now around me a wall does lie .
May 7th, 2017 06:21
Joy Unshared
swingline said:
I\'m left wondering about the circumstances of this poem . There must be some kind of conflict between you and an unknown disident . But the results cannot be disputed .
May 5th, 2017 18:25
swingline said:
I\'m left wondering about the circumstances of this poem . There must be some kind of conflict between you and an unknown disident . But the results cannot be disputed .
May 5th, 2017 18:25
Chrysalis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, it is so sad when love is lost.
April 27th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, it is so sad when love is lost.
April 27th, 2017 08:01
Chrysalis
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah sensational n soo creatively put. From beauty into ugliness !! This is an amazingly unique sarcastic lament. I\'m here to admire it\'s great poetics and style. Fantastic presentation. Love turned ingrate and ugly in the form of a woman. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 27th, 2017 05:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah sensational n soo creatively put. From beauty into ugliness !! This is an amazingly unique sarcastic lament. I\'m here to admire it\'s great poetics and style. Fantastic presentation. Love turned ingrate and ugly in the form of a woman. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 27th, 2017 05:59
Lament
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking crap in the pub obviously works. A good write came from it.
April 25th, 2017 08:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Talking crap in the pub obviously works. A good write came from it.
April 25th, 2017 08:21
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