Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Night Fright
Goldfinch60 said:
Well done Dad another monster conquered for your loved one.
June 12th, 2017 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Well done Dad another monster conquered for your loved one.
June 12th, 2017 08:04
My Last Fledgling
Louis Gibbs said:
Powerful last line! Well done poem, Jabberwocky.
June 7th, 2017 10:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Powerful last line! Well done poem, Jabberwocky.
June 7th, 2017 10:41
Tree
Augustus said:
Definitely not self deprecation . You have live rich and full. Love the attitude.
June 2nd, 2017 07:19
Augustus said:
Definitely not self deprecation . You have live rich and full. Love the attitude.
June 2nd, 2017 07:19
Dating Plan
Augustus said:
I have just the gal for you. Heh, heh. Thanks for,the laugh. Yet a bit on the self deprecating side.
June 1st, 2017 12:15
Augustus said:
I have just the gal for you. Heh, heh. Thanks for,the laugh. Yet a bit on the self deprecating side.
June 1st, 2017 12:15
Soul River
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul may have sank but it will rise again and you will move forward. Good write.
June 1st, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Your soul may have sank but it will rise again and you will move forward. Good write.
June 1st, 2017 00:43
Soul River
Augustus said:
Sorry, was that the one I walked on when I was out fishing, washed up on the bank. It responded to fresh water and a hug promising to return.
Nicely done.
May 31st, 2017 12:15
Augustus said:
Sorry, was that the one I walked on when I was out fishing, washed up on the bank. It responded to fresh water and a hug promising to return.
Nicely done.
May 31st, 2017 12:15
Romeo is Dead
Augustus said:
Perhaps Romeo needs a rest to return for true love consummated in the moonlight.
May 30th, 2017 10:36
Augustus said:
Perhaps Romeo needs a rest to return for true love consummated in the moonlight.
May 30th, 2017 10:36
Romeo is Dead
Goldfinch60 said:
The moon will always be there for you, it may darken during each month but it will always rise and show you the light and the way.
May 30th, 2017 03:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The moon will always be there for you, it may darken during each month but it will always rise and show you the light and the way.
May 30th, 2017 03:36
Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
A weed is any flower in the wrong place, that last flower is meaningful to you so cannot be a weed. Good write.
May 29th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
A weed is any flower in the wrong place, that last flower is meaningful to you so cannot be a weed. Good write.
May 29th, 2017 00:39
Garden
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, have had a couple of gardens trampled, Jabberwocky. it is no fun, but an important life lesson. From mine we were able to salvage friendship, so not a total loss. Love your poem!
May 28th, 2017 10:42
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, have had a couple of gardens trampled, Jabberwocky. it is no fun, but an important life lesson. From mine we were able to salvage friendship, so not a total loss. Love your poem!
May 28th, 2017 10:42
Awesome
Goldfinch60 said:
Some days we all feel awesome, it\'s a pity they don\'t come more often.
May 25th, 2017 08:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Some days we all feel awesome, it\'s a pity they don\'t come more often.
May 25th, 2017 08:09
Resignation
Fay Slimm. said:
A soulful refection on love now gone - a verse which pours lonely from every line yet ends with forgiveness -
- the jewel in the hard crown of love being the trait to venerate exceeds all other beauty - such a moving read.
May 23rd, 2017 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A soulful refection on love now gone - a verse which pours lonely from every line yet ends with forgiveness -
- the jewel in the hard crown of love being the trait to venerate exceeds all other beauty - such a moving read.
May 23rd, 2017 02:45
Resignation
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful emotive write. Thank you for sharing.
May 23rd, 2017 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful emotive write. Thank you for sharing.
May 23rd, 2017 02:44
Courtship after Love
Fay Slimm. said:
Adeptly crafted this yearning to show and be shown intimacy again grabs the floor in engaging attention from the first line. A finely written sensuous verse.
May 22nd, 2017 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Adeptly crafted this yearning to show and be shown intimacy again grabs the floor in engaging attention from the first line. A finely written sensuous verse.
May 22nd, 2017 04:58
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