Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Different Gods
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Gary showing how love can be split and sadness can dwell but the love of the children stays strong.
Andy
September 12th, 2026 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Gary showing how love can be split and sadness can dwell but the love of the children stays strong.
Andy
September 12th, 2026 01:08
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Donteatmecows said:
children deserve the very best, all the safety, love, and blessings adults can possibly give them, I believe
September 11th, 2026 14:29
Donteatmecows said:
children deserve the very best, all the safety, love, and blessings adults can possibly give them, I believe
September 11th, 2026 14:29
Different Gods
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is devastating. Love becomes betrayal, but fatherhood keeps you standing when everything else has collapsed. The contrast between who she was and who she became cuts incredibly deep. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend...this is devastating. Love becomes betrayal, but fatherhood keeps you standing when everything else has collapsed. The contrast between who she was and who she became cuts incredibly deep. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2026 09:10
Different Gods
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece, it has sadness and pain and a powerful statement about a broken relationship where values differ. Nicely written it evokes emotion from the reader. Well done.
September 11th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece, it has sadness and pain and a powerful statement about a broken relationship where values differ. Nicely written it evokes emotion from the reader. Well done.
September 11th, 2026 04:24
Fools Mate (2)
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s funny how when young we\'re all Smooth and clear Skinned. Then end-up like a 10 by 4 of Dorian Gray.
Good Write.
September 9th, 2026 19:30
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s funny how when young we\'re all Smooth and clear Skinned. Then end-up like a 10 by 4 of Dorian Gray.
Good Write.
September 9th, 2026 19:30
Fools Mate (2)
Paul Bell said:
This feels like an ex- footballer whose best years are behind him.
From rich to poor which happens to a lot of them.
September 9th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
This feels like an ex- footballer whose best years are behind him.
From rich to poor which happens to a lot of them.
September 9th, 2026 11:30
Fools Mate (2)
sorenbarrett said:
This carries the flavor of a past era but still applies. Lovely rhyming and meter make it almost musical. Nicely done
September 9th, 2026 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
This carries the flavor of a past era but still applies. Lovely rhyming and meter make it almost musical. Nicely done
September 9th, 2026 08:32
Fools Mate (2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is one cutting piece. The chess imagery carries the speaker’s bitterness toward an ending that feels less like victory than mutual defeat. Dark, uncomfortable, and certainly provocative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is one cutting piece. The chess imagery carries the speaker’s bitterness toward an ending that feels less like victory than mutual defeat. Dark, uncomfortable, and certainly provocative, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:26
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Gary, the passing of children is so horrendous in any way they pass.
Andy
September 9th, 2026 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Gary, the passing of children is so horrendous in any way they pass.
Andy
September 9th, 2026 00:59
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Paul Bell said:
Not sure if this is highlighted by the trial in America, or mistrial as it turns out.
You seem to hear about this more and more, and you always hope they get hung if they\'re not insane.
September 8th, 2026 13:25
Paul Bell said:
Not sure if this is highlighted by the trial in America, or mistrial as it turns out.
You seem to hear about this more and more, and you always hope they get hung if they\'re not insane.
September 8th, 2026 13:25
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Jabberwocky. The innocence of the children, the trust they still carry, and the sheer betrayal at the center of it all make this brutally hard to read...and that is exactly why it lands so deeply. Haunting work, my friend. Yeah, no dry eyes here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a devastating poem, Jabberwocky. The innocence of the children, the trust they still carry, and the sheer betrayal at the center of it all make this brutally hard to read...and that is exactly why it lands so deeply. Haunting work, my friend. Yeah, no dry eyes here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 10:40
Where are we going Mommy? (WARNING this may be very upsetting)
sorenbarrett said:
There are tragedies hard for the average person to understand. Why a mother would kill her children but then like other things we don\'t understand all things have their causes and far be it to me to judge. I have known men that have killed infants and young children and they have very troubled minds, some pathetic and others not knowing what they are doing. Very well written it is haunting and chilling as well as heart rending.
September 8th, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
There are tragedies hard for the average person to understand. Why a mother would kill her children but then like other things we don\'t understand all things have their causes and far be it to me to judge. I have known men that have killed infants and young children and they have very troubled minds, some pathetic and others not knowing what they are doing. Very well written it is haunting and chilling as well as heart rending.
September 8th, 2026 09:34
Genital Whats?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is wickedly funny. The whole thing has that dry, dismissive bite where the politeness somehow makes it even nastier. 😂 Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is wickedly funny. The whole thing has that dry, dismissive bite where the politeness somehow makes it even nastier. 😂 Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 08:16
Genital Whats?
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a picture to start the morning. A fun read about a not too fun thought. Well done with rhyme my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a picture to start the morning. A fun read about a not too fun thought. Well done with rhyme my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:05
Racist? Moi?
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements made in situations which might affect me directly feel perfectly valid. Judgements in any other direction I would have to examine. Neat clear write though without ambiguity.
September 6th, 2026 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements made in situations which might affect me directly feel perfectly valid. Judgements in any other direction I would have to examine. Neat clear write though without ambiguity.
September 6th, 2026 20:44
Racist? Moi?
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand what you\'re saying. But we have a Weak Government. One empty suit replaced another. Eunuchs all.
September 6th, 2026 20:34
Kevin Hulme said:
I understand what you\'re saying. But we have a Weak Government. One empty suit replaced another. Eunuchs all.
September 6th, 2026 20:34
Racist? Moi?
sorenbarrett said:
Used to be conservative until my daughters were wed then went rogue a liberal rebel saw the erros of my ways became an anarchist till I saw it didn\'t work so now just an old cynic a political atheist.
September 6th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Used to be conservative until my daughters were wed then went rogue a liberal rebel saw the erros of my ways became an anarchist till I saw it didn\'t work so now just an old cynic a political atheist.
September 6th, 2026 08:00
Gardener
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Gary leading to a very sad end, I hope that you can find her.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Gary leading to a very sad end, I hope that you can find her.
Andy
September 6th, 2026 01:58
Gardener
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful and quietly brutal piece, Jabberwocky. The garden feels full of love, intimacy, and family…then the final turn changes the entire landscape without needing to raise its voice. Excellent poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful and quietly brutal piece, Jabberwocky. The garden feels full of love, intimacy, and family…then the final turn changes the entire landscape without needing to raise its voice. Excellent poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:35
Gardener
sorenbarrett said:
The twist in this one made me think and that is what poetry is supposed to do as well as feel. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
The twist in this one made me think and that is what poetry is supposed to do as well as feel. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:21
Fortza poesia ! (Go Poetry!)
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Gary, I write every day.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Gary, I write every day.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 01:03
Favourite Cup
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things that we bek can bring us such wonderful memories Gary.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Those things that we bek can bring us such wonderful memories Gary.
Andy
September 5th, 2026 00:58
Fortza poesia ! (Go Poetry!)
Doggerel Dave said:
A poem on poetry is by no means my favourite kind. However, in your case I\'ll make an exception here...
September 4th, 2026 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A poem on poetry is by no means my favourite kind. However, in your case I\'ll make an exception here...
September 4th, 2026 16:31
Fortza poesia ! (Go Poetry!)
sorenbarrett said:
Works for me my friend. Good advice set to rhyme. Nicely done my friend.
September 4th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Works for me my friend. Good advice set to rhyme. Nicely done my friend.
September 4th, 2026 03:54
Favourite Cup
Doggerel Dave said:
Some glue, a shelf. Toothbrush holder. I have the exact article.
At least your wife could provide a soft landing for your cup pieces should you change your mind...
September 3rd, 2026 18:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Some glue, a shelf. Toothbrush holder. I have the exact article.
At least your wife could provide a soft landing for your cup pieces should you change your mind...
September 3rd, 2026 18:18
Favourite Cup
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a riot, Jabberwocky! You turn a shattered household treasure into a tender memorial, then casually dispose of the marriage in the closing seconds...warm, wicked, and perfectly timed. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a riot, Jabberwocky! You turn a shattered household treasure into a tender memorial, then casually dispose of the marriage in the closing seconds...warm, wicked, and perfectly timed. Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:24
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