Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Toast and Jam
Doggerel Dave said:
Eat? Please ensure they are very gentle nibbles.
August 26th, 2026 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Eat? Please ensure they are very gentle nibbles.
August 26th, 2026 07:30
Toast and Jam
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is delightfully cheeky! The innocent rhythm makes the innuendo even funnier...romance and appetite become wonderfully indistinguishable. I may never look at the morning meal quite the same way again! Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is delightfully cheeky! The innocent rhythm makes the innuendo even funnier...romance and appetite become wonderfully indistinguishable. I may never look at the morning meal quite the same way again! Great fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:48
Toast and Jam
sorenbarrett said:
There is a hungry passion in this write. Nicely written in good taste.
August 25th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is a hungry passion in this write. Nicely written in good taste.
August 25th, 2026 04:43
Glass
NafisaSB said:
look at it as more than half full after having shouldered the responsibility of bringing up the kids...salute you
August 25th, 2026 00:13
NafisaSB said:
look at it as more than half full after having shouldered the responsibility of bringing up the kids...salute you
August 25th, 2026 00:13
Visitors
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and adorable, a lovely write of tenderness toward animals. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and adorable, a lovely write of tenderness toward animals. Well done
August 24th, 2026 04:39
Barter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one has teeth! Sharp, clever, and painfully true about two people expecting entirely different exchanges. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one has teeth! Sharp, clever, and painfully true about two people expecting entirely different exchanges. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:54
Barter
Doggerel Dave said:
The enigma of a misplaced relationship and likely much more besides.
Neat fit in the writing.
August 23rd, 2026 03:36
Doggerel Dave said:
The enigma of a misplaced relationship and likely much more besides.
Neat fit in the writing.
August 23rd, 2026 03:36
Lie in
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This cracked me up, my friend. A questionable forecast, a comfortable alternative, and suddenly staying put becomes the only rational decision. Brilliant little write! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This cracked me up, my friend. A questionable forecast, a comfortable alternative, and suddenly staying put becomes the only rational decision. Brilliant little write! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:03
Lie in
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is usually the truth unless one has a bad roof. A fun read that many, including myself, can identify with. Well done
August 22nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is usually the truth unless one has a bad roof. A fun read that many, including myself, can identify with. Well done
August 22nd, 2026 04:06
Worship
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Jabberwocky...four lines, and every one of them lands. Dark, sharp, and painfully honest. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Jabberwocky...four lines, and every one of them lands. Dark, sharp, and painfully honest. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:42
Glass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a tender and honest piece, Jabberwocky. Abandonment has narrowed the speaker’s world, but fatherhood has also filled it with purpose, love, and responsibility. The title captures that mixture of loss and gratitude perfectly. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a tender and honest piece, Jabberwocky. Abandonment has narrowed the speaker’s world, but fatherhood has also filled it with purpose, love, and responsibility. The title captures that mixture of loss and gratitude perfectly. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:47
Glass
Doggerel Dave said:
The plight (no, situation) of the single parent. A situation of cohesion rather thn desperation which I found warming. Many two parent families do not achieve that.
August 20th, 2026 17:56
Doggerel Dave said:
The plight (no, situation) of the single parent. A situation of cohesion rather thn desperation which I found warming. Many two parent families do not achieve that.
August 20th, 2026 17:56
Glass
sorenbarrett said:
What a tale within such few words. Nicely rhymed and with good meter and flow. Honorable father taking care of what he created. I loved the part that says he looked like her and her like you such a nice way of saying all are one. Well done my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
What a tale within such few words. Nicely rhymed and with good meter and flow. Honorable father taking care of what he created. I loved the part that says he looked like her and her like you such a nice way of saying all are one. Well done my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:54
Dragon
Doggerel Dave said:
“Oh stuff it now, I’ll do it myself;
No more maidens awaiting a knight.
And If he turns up I’ll have him too -
This here maiden is ready to bite.”
The missing verse?
Two apologies due: (a) for the above and (b) for not having crossed your path before.
August 19th, 2026 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
“Oh stuff it now, I’ll do it myself;
No more maidens awaiting a knight.
And If he turns up I’ll have him too -
This here maiden is ready to bite.”
The missing verse?
Two apologies due: (a) for the above and (b) for not having crossed your path before.
August 19th, 2026 19:00
All Father
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Jabberwocky. The speaker still recognizes suffering and feels the impulse to intervene, but too many betrayals have turned compassion into self-protection. Passing the responsibility onward feels weary rather than cruel…and terribly human. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Jabberwocky. The speaker still recognizes suffering and feels the impulse to intervene, but too many betrayals have turned compassion into self-protection. Passing the responsibility onward feels weary rather than cruel…and terribly human. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2026 18:26
All Father
sorenbarrett said:
We all make judgements and interventions as if we were a god yet how fallible we are and in fact so are the gods. Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings to me.
August 19th, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all make judgements and interventions as if we were a god yet how fallible we are and in fact so are the gods. Very nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings to me.
August 19th, 2026 08:07
Short and Neat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the final turn gives this little piece tremendous weight. Poetry becomes a way of surviving what cannot be changed. Excellent write, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the final turn gives this little piece tremendous weight. Poetry becomes a way of surviving what cannot be changed. Excellent write, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:58
Rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the strange fear that peace might quiet the very darkness that once fed the poetry. This captures that tension beautifully. Great work, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 17:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the strange fear that peace might quiet the very darkness that once fed the poetry. This captures that tension beautifully. Great work, Jabberwocky. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 17:44
Short and Neat
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree. Clever wording in good rhyme.
August 17th, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree. Clever wording in good rhyme.
August 17th, 2026 07:57
Rain
Thomas W Case said:
There’s something tender and damn sad about reaching peace in the poem while your own mood can’t quite follow you there. I like how the rain washes everything clean, yet somehow leaves the memory of pain behind.
August 16th, 2026 08:02
Thomas W Case said:
There’s something tender and damn sad about reaching peace in the poem while your own mood can’t quite follow you there. I like how the rain washes everything clean, yet somehow leaves the memory of pain behind.
August 16th, 2026 08:02
Rain
sorenbarrett said:
To forgive but not forget comes to mind with this poem. Pain may remain but anger is gone. Well written
August 16th, 2026 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
To forgive but not forget comes to mind with this poem. Pain may remain but anger is gone. Well written
August 16th, 2026 07:56
Endless
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise these words of frustration
penned succinctly poetic by you
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(sometimes, it seems our world
is full \'of lover\'s without love\'
and \'humanist peace seekers
devoid of a night\'s decent rest\'
as if
in our very questing for the calm rivers
in existence\'s chaotic seas
fate paths a far more ominous journey
for us to earn the wisdom, we seek.)
October 24th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
I recognise these words of frustration
penned succinctly poetic by you
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(sometimes, it seems our world
is full \'of lover\'s without love\'
and \'humanist peace seekers
devoid of a night\'s decent rest\'
as if
in our very questing for the calm rivers
in existence\'s chaotic seas
fate paths a far more ominous journey
for us to earn the wisdom, we seek.)
October 24th, 2022 03:45
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