Comments received on poems by Jabberwocky
Spider for Tea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, I fear you\'ve invented a whole new category of fine dining! Somewhere, a Michelin inspector is quietly reconsidering his career choices! HAHAHA! 🕷️🍲😂🙏
October 24th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, I fear you\'ve invented a whole new category of fine dining! Somewhere, a Michelin inspector is quietly reconsidering his career choices! HAHAHA! 🕷️🍲😂🙏
October 24th, 2026 10:51
Spider for Tea
sorenbarrett said:
Whimsical and fanciful a fun read. The pickings are a bit lean and those legs won\'t render much meat but they say spiders are like crabs and I guess you would go about eating them the same way as crab legs. I know as a child I almost ate one by mistake, could feel it crawling around in my mouth and pulled it out. Gave me the shivers. Loved the poem and its rhyme it fits well the season of Halloween with its witches caldrons and spiders. Written in good rhyme as well that gave it a spell feel.
October 24th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Whimsical and fanciful a fun read. The pickings are a bit lean and those legs won\'t render much meat but they say spiders are like crabs and I guess you would go about eating them the same way as crab legs. I know as a child I almost ate one by mistake, could feel it crawling around in my mouth and pulled it out. Gave me the shivers. Loved the poem and its rhyme it fits well the season of Halloween with its witches caldrons and spiders. Written in good rhyme as well that gave it a spell feel.
October 24th, 2026 05:23
Tsundoku Arithmetic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, I’m going to plead the fifth on this one...especially if anyone asks about my Kindle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 16:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, I’m going to plead the fifth on this one...especially if anyone asks about my Kindle. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2026 16:29
Racist? Moi?
Paul Bell said:
Tories, Labour, Liberal, Greens, utterly clueless.
I don\'t understand why the British public aren\'t suing the Government if they get attacked, raped, murdered.
Towns and cities up and down the country ruined.
The biggest laugh from this government is their conscription debacle.
I don\'t see kids lining up, do you.
October 23rd, 2026 06:32
Paul Bell said:
Tories, Labour, Liberal, Greens, utterly clueless.
I don\'t understand why the British public aren\'t suing the Government if they get attacked, raped, murdered.
Towns and cities up and down the country ruined.
The biggest laugh from this government is their conscription debacle.
I don\'t see kids lining up, do you.
October 23rd, 2026 06:32
A.I.
Paul Bell said:
Only man could create his own downfall, and AI definitely will be that downfall.
Sadly, the genie is out the bottle and it aint going back in.
Sure the animals will be glad to see the back of us.
October 23rd, 2026 06:19
Paul Bell said:
Only man could create his own downfall, and AI definitely will be that downfall.
Sadly, the genie is out the bottle and it aint going back in.
Sure the animals will be glad to see the back of us.
October 23rd, 2026 06:19
Tsundoku Arithmetic
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks for the offer Gary but I have enough books to read.
Andy
October 23rd, 2026 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Thanks for the offer Gary but I have enough books to read.
Andy
October 23rd, 2026 01:44
Tsundoku Arithmetic
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that I had at one time but have since given up on. Thanks but I have more books than I can handle now. A most identifiable read my friend
October 22nd, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that I had at one time but have since given up on. Thanks but I have more books than I can handle now. A most identifiable read my friend
October 22nd, 2026 12:44
Evening Garden
Paul Bell said:
Nature\'s telling us, it\'s time to hibernate, or get to warmer clims.
Mind you, storm austin comes tonight, batten down the hatches.
October 22nd, 2026 07:42
Paul Bell said:
Nature\'s telling us, it\'s time to hibernate, or get to warmer clims.
Mind you, storm austin comes tonight, batten down the hatches.
October 22nd, 2026 07:42
Evening Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful description of the coming of autumn, my favourite time of the year as Nature is so beautiful in this time.
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful description of the coming of autumn, my favourite time of the year as Nature is so beautiful in this time.
Andy
October 21st, 2026 01:09
Evening Garden
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, I absolutely loved this! Had me smiling the whole way through. I could almost picture myself sitting out there with a cup of coffee, taking it all in. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 15:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, I absolutely loved this! Had me smiling the whole way through. I could almost picture myself sitting out there with a cup of coffee, taking it all in. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 20th, 2026 15:57
Evening Garden
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful scene you have painted in words. It feels relaxing despite all the company, cozy even outdoors, scenic with the surrounding area it encompasses nature and that is always reassuring. Very nicely done my friend
October 20th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful scene you have painted in words. It feels relaxing despite all the company, cozy even outdoors, scenic with the surrounding area it encompasses nature and that is always reassuring. Very nicely done my friend
October 20th, 2026 04:03
Wee Huff
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Jabberwocky! LOL! I reckon Minnie has the whole weekend planned, and you\'ve only been informed of the bits you\'re allowed to know! Better practice those dance steps before Sunday! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Jabberwocky! LOL! I reckon Minnie has the whole weekend planned, and you\'ve only been informed of the bits you\'re allowed to know! Better practice those dance steps before Sunday! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 19th, 2026 00:57
Wee Huff
sorenbarrett said:
I love poetry set in colloquial language and the Scottish is one of my favorites. This one felt charming and old school in a way like from another time. Short but light hearted. Very nice my friend.
October 18th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
I love poetry set in colloquial language and the Scottish is one of my favorites. This one felt charming and old school in a way like from another time. Short but light hearted. Very nice my friend.
October 18th, 2026 04:43
The Rabbit and The Leprechaun
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep up the challenges if they result in cheerful little rhymers like that.
October 16th, 2026 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep up the challenges if they result in cheerful little rhymers like that.
October 16th, 2026 17:21
The Rabbit and The Leprechaun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Wonderful fun, Jabberwocky! 😂 I can just imagine the leprechaun trying to negotiate with a rabbit who couldn\'t care less about his fortune. Perhaps he should invest in a carrot farm instead! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 16th, 2026 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Wonderful fun, Jabberwocky! 😂 I can just imagine the leprechaun trying to negotiate with a rabbit who couldn\'t care less about his fortune. Perhaps he should invest in a carrot farm instead! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 16th, 2026 11:09
Quiet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Jabberwocky, this really moved me. I know how difficult it can be to get beyond certain experiences, and I sincerely hope you\'re finding some peace. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 16th, 2026 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Jabberwocky, this really moved me. I know how difficult it can be to get beyond certain experiences, and I sincerely hope you\'re finding some peace. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 16th, 2026 10:41
The Rabbit and The Leprechaun
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun this fanciful poem sets a light tone melding legend with reality and with good rhyme a light feel of mirth. Very nice my friend. Poems often taken too serious need a little more of this type for seasoning. Loved it keep up the good work
October 16th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and fun this fanciful poem sets a light tone melding legend with reality and with good rhyme a light feel of mirth. Very nice my friend. Poems often taken too serious need a little more of this type for seasoning. Loved it keep up the good work
October 16th, 2026 03:47
Quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A sad but at the same time hopeful poem where poetry is based upon a sad past that now seems forgotten. The power of pain lost and so its words as well. Emotion drives the poets windmills and when the breeze stops so do they. I have worked with dementia patients that have forgotten their past and pain and in some ways that is a blessing but the concomitant loss makes them not the same. In this conflict if given the choice I would choose the pain for in it there is a sweetness. Here is wishing the muse\'s return.
October 15th, 2026 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A sad but at the same time hopeful poem where poetry is based upon a sad past that now seems forgotten. The power of pain lost and so its words as well. Emotion drives the poets windmills and when the breeze stops so do they. I have worked with dementia patients that have forgotten their past and pain and in some ways that is a blessing but the concomitant loss makes them not the same. In this conflict if given the choice I would choose the pain for in it there is a sweetness. Here is wishing the muse\'s return.
October 15th, 2026 09:23
Sigma Envy
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe dressing as The Fonz might do it for me.
A good Write.
October 5th, 2026 18:24
Kevin Hulme said:
Maybe dressing as The Fonz might do it for me.
A good Write.
October 5th, 2026 18:24
Sigma Envy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😂 Well, Jabberwocky...there\'s always reincarnation, apparently. Better luck with the genetic lottery next time around! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
😂 Well, Jabberwocky...there\'s always reincarnation, apparently. Better luck with the genetic lottery next time around! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2026 08:45
Sigma Envy
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about a symptom many have of wishing we were something else. Although genetics has something to do with this so does environment and desire. We must take responsibility for ourselves. Loved the rhyme and meter in this short poem.
October 5th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about a symptom many have of wishing we were something else. Although genetics has something to do with this so does environment and desire. We must take responsibility for ourselves. Loved the rhyme and meter in this short poem.
October 5th, 2026 04:40
Metre and Rhyme and Irony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is gloriously cheeky. You set up metre and rhyme, then immediately start poking holes in your own rules. Loved that. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, this is gloriously cheeky. You set up metre and rhyme, then immediately start poking holes in your own rules. Loved that. 😂 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2026 08:59
Metre and Rhyme and Irony
sorenbarrett said:
A man after my own heart. A fun read.
September 30th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
A man after my own heart. A fun read.
September 30th, 2026 04:19
Muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, yep…that realization stings. Sometimes what keeps us writing is not love itself but the hurt left behind after it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 29th, 2026 20:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Jabberwocky, yep…that realization stings. Sometimes what keeps us writing is not love itself but the hurt left behind after it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 29th, 2026 20:24
Muse
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Jabberwocky,
A very well composed poem. Our muses have many moods or perhaps our moods have many muses, that said, I enjoyed this poem, especially so, the use of language, a hint of quaintness found me.
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 19:07
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Jabberwocky,
A very well composed poem. Our muses have many moods or perhaps our moods have many muses, that said, I enjoyed this poem, especially so, the use of language, a hint of quaintness found me.
Kind regards,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 19:07
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