Comments on community poems by burning-embers
- Don\'t Look At Me (Tia Davis/テイア)
I like this a lot but you\'ve confused me. Lines 3, 4 and 5 imply you dont...
July 13th, 2017 01:42 - Just A Job (Short Story) (FredPeyer)
You devious devil, nice one, nice twist. Easy relaxing read. just read...
July 13th, 2017 01:21 - The Time Gone By (Julzradams98)
Julz wow! I love this story and so easy to read, such a pleasure. More...
July 13th, 2017 01:12 - Bleeding Acceptance of Desiderata Disintegration (Whisperingquill)
I love it, a smack in the face for your reader. Strong, powerful, potent...
July 13th, 2017 01:00 - Escape (Bagel)
I feel your angst. I\'m going to ask you to think about something, an old...
July 13th, 2017 00:34 - THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful. Love and peace. All the better for the final verse. Ten times...
July 13th, 2017 00:25 - Together (MissileOfUncertainty)
You are right and i have said it many times. A short poem is a punchy...
July 12th, 2017 22:59 - Relax (Adam)
Short and sweet = impact! Great choice of words. Canopies, grass and...
July 12th, 2017 22:51 - Love\\\\\\\'s Hunger Needs (HEIDIKINS)
OOOh you romantic you. This is as good as any passionate declaration of...
July 12th, 2017 22:42 - Wife (Bagel)
As a teenager i used to hate that people said girls are way more grown up...
July 12th, 2017 22:38 - Gone (Tay1234)
A very good first Tay. The best work i do is the work which comes thru my...
July 12th, 2017 22:12 - letter burning (Heather T)
Passion, anguish, pain and fear cry out from your writing. Beautifully...
July 12th, 2017 21:59 - I hate you (Angel-baby28)
I think you say it all and with such clarity and obvious motherly love....
July 12th, 2017 21:54 - My Addiction (BrittA)
Down to earth, has gritty realism and pathos. Definately well written....
July 12th, 2017 20:43 - Outgrown (Baylee)
Nice punchy stuff. Succinct verse usually is more powerful. You do it
July 12th, 2017 18:56
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