Comments on community poems by burning-embers

• Time For Battle. (Goldfinch60) And may qualcast be your armour and stanley be your aid.
  February 22nd, 2018 04:30
• TRUE HISTORY (Michael Edwards) Ah the lies of history. In text books it truly lies, then lies on the lips...
  February 22nd, 2018 04:27
• Weight Lifting (Tony36) The hardship and pain give us the abilty to put feeling into our words.
  August 22nd, 2017 16:49
• Naked (Malubotelho) \"Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the...
  August 22nd, 2017 14:44
• Dark Spirits (Invisible Scars) Dark writing from your brave soul. Thought provoking stuff.
  August 22nd, 2017 14:15
• Read Rightly. (Fay Slimm.) So much spilled blood wasted and ruined lifes and for what? What was...
  August 22nd, 2017 14:13
• FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU (BRIAN & ANGELA) Hate you!! I\'m on a diet. I know you\'re right tho..... oh my...
  August 22nd, 2017 14:07
• Insignificance. (Goldfinch60) Oh no.... you\'re one of gods chosen sir and blessed with a voice we need...
  August 22nd, 2017 13:59
• Birthday (FredPeyer) As years roll by its conspiracy have you notced the children dressed as...
  August 22nd, 2017 12:21
• () There were images of vermilion bloomed roses where your lips left them....
  August 22nd, 2017 12:18
• STRIKE OUT COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) What have you started??? this such fun. i like it very much indeed
  August 22nd, 2017 12:11
• The Truest Act of Bravery (Jordyn) Mothers are hero\'s. This is twice tonite i\'ve written it. It\'s part of...
  August 21st, 2017 22:53
• Dream in the Dark of the Day (IRonnie) Turn your cravings into words which reach the eye or ears of this special...
  August 21st, 2017 22:50
• Mental illness (Lost-but-not-broken17) Hi l-b-n-b good to see your writings again. Wish i could give you some...
  August 21st, 2017 22:45
• HEART (Julianogollo) And it reaches out into another as theirs reaches out into you. Then you...
  August 21st, 2017 22:28
• A S p a c e (A__pott) Aaaah relationships. Don\'tcha just love \'em. Gone is ya freedom and...
  August 21st, 2017 22:23
• Friendship. (Docstorm) You are some story teller sir! That was definately a gooddun and i guess...
  August 21st, 2017 22:20
• Dreaming A Beautiful Nightmare (Hidden) This is stunning! Suspense is thrilling. Excellent writing.
  August 21st, 2017 22:13
• Demons (Disrespectfully nice) i want to see it. I told you before youre a new voice i havent heard and...
  August 21st, 2017 22:11
• Fun Bags (WriteBeLight) Oh i do so appreciate a lovely pair of rhymes. So many possibilities to...
  August 21st, 2017 21:58
• the poetry in me (Clark) Wonderful writing. Reminds me of a certain poet on here who\'s every curve...
  August 21st, 2017 21:51
• The Colorless (Mugsdaddy) Yes agreed wholeheartedly with your sentiment and its beyond shame that...
  August 21st, 2017 21:47
• AS A GIRL (Diane) This is quite lovely. The finale is harsh yes and contrasts beautifully....
  August 21st, 2017 21:41
• Golden Hill (Surucipe) Lovely writing. I love the notion of a golden hill which you have...
  August 21st, 2017 21:31
• MY FATHER’S HANDS (Lasergraph) A bold and wonderful piece of writing. Great tribute to your father. A...
  August 21st, 2017 21:28
• fake beauty (CrissDavies) Laughing out loud at this one. How do you think men feel about heavily...
  August 21st, 2017 21:22
• Old Man (LukeCoomer) Nice writing. Pleasure to read
  August 21st, 2017 21:19
• Trans (Invisible Scars) You are no danger to me, and that which you are you have every right to...
  August 21st, 2017 21:08
• FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Clever stuff
  August 21st, 2017 20:48
• Untitled (Sara Storkson) Today i am old. I was young, im still young inside. When i was young...
  August 21st, 2017 19:58
• The Sad Clown (Tony36) From one jester to another. Nice one. Well written
  August 21st, 2017 18:36
• Perspective (Baylee) Provokative! love it.
  August 21st, 2017 18:26
• Mixed mind (Malubotelho) Malu you artist. Wonderful picture. But your words - have you read my mind...
  August 21st, 2017 18:22
• As I was writing out checks, i realized... (Avigail) Its really refreshing to hear you like writing checks. I hope you have a...
  August 21st, 2017 18:16
• Hard Day (FredPeyer) The demon drink. A good warning write.
  August 21st, 2017 12:22
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Breeze (Aa Harvey) Lovely words, truth.
  August 21st, 2017 12:12
• Chance. (Fay Slimm.) Destiny\'s chance for romance. Marvelous thought. Really enjoyed this.
  August 21st, 2017 12:07
• Panic Over. (Goldfinch60) Im thinking this metal bird had slipped from the memory of your good lady...
  August 21st, 2017 11:58
• if the window breaks (Emmarunway) Beautiful. Such awful damage men have done. Gentle men are here...
  August 21st, 2017 11:52
• JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards) LOved my journey through your words here sir. Excellent writing.
  August 21st, 2017 11:25
• Not For (Baylee) Learned words for sure! Nice one
  August 21st, 2017 11:22
• thistle (Emmarunway) All true, nicely observed and written about. Quite a fresh angle of...
  August 20th, 2017 19:51
• . .. alone (🌧️🌙) Sat amongst strangers who make you feel so try radiating love of their...
  August 20th, 2017 19:48
• Vs. Nature (A__pott) Join the club. There has to be a better way for us to occupy our beautiful...
  August 20th, 2017 19:41
• Loser Love Songs #2 (The 2 A.M Writer) Sad reflection on how your situation feels. Right now its no consolation...
  August 20th, 2017 19:17
• Bonfire At The Gate (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent sir. This was the scenario i had when i chose my nom de plume.
  August 20th, 2017 19:11
• A Summer Afternoon (Myself and me) Simple pleasures. Simply a smiling pleasure to read too.
  August 20th, 2017 19:10
• You were never mine to keep (Drowninginkalopsia) Yes i know this complex feeling and you express it well here. Falling for...
  August 20th, 2017 19:07
• Unnoticed (Jay\'s Mind) Thats beautiful thought and beautiful writing poet. It just doesn\'t get...
  August 20th, 2017 19:00
• Boundaries (Mona) We are all as one but we are all apart. And then, we are all on our own...
  August 20th, 2017 18:56
• Crashing Storm (E.J. Waling) The clock is ticking. A good and clever write.
  August 20th, 2017 11:25
• With Everything In Me (Brie) Good stuff. Strong.
  August 20th, 2017 11:23
• A Dogs Life (Diane) Cute! Sharing is believing eh? Nice work
  August 20th, 2017 11:22
• He made her (Malubotelho) You write beautifully malubotelho. What a fine lover your subject has, how...
  August 20th, 2017 09:19
• Are you there? (Surucipe) Aint nobody here but us chickens (music) . Nice one
  August 20th, 2017 05:14
• My elegy (Aa Harvey) There are those amongst us for whom they happen every day. I\'m in your...
  August 20th, 2017 05:13
• Together. (Fay Slimm.) Nice work. Great theme.
  August 20th, 2017 03:47
• Music (Disrespectfully nice) Keep doing the music thing, your poetry is good do you write lyrics...
  August 20th, 2017 03:20
• Superstition! (Sue.evans) I guess that damn song on a childrens TV program got to us all. I do the...
  August 20th, 2017 02:36
• New Times. (Goldfinch60) Amen, i echo your plea in my recent piece. Once again excellent writing...
  August 20th, 2017 02:32
• REALITY OR DREAM (Julianogollo) Yep, Thats what love will do my friend.Good writing.
  August 20th, 2017 00:58
• My apology (Notsad101) This IS the place to let your heart write your pain. This is god writing...
  August 20th, 2017 00:43
• The Moment When (Lonelybird19) Ouch! But you\'re a poet. And an expressive one at that. So lets hear...
  August 19th, 2017 23:08
• Is It Necessary (Harsbars12281953) Pmsl at arrogance here. Three verses about whats wrong with usa then u say...
  August 19th, 2017 22:43
• Sides (Poetboy123) How can you pick a side when your world is shattered. Good write
  August 19th, 2017 22:41
• Gut feeling (Jailynn✨) Wonderfully written. Irresistably loving into disaster and heartbreak. A ...
  August 19th, 2017 22:39
• Burial Of The Self. (Camille) Very sad write but so well written and with mystery too.... As pets we...
  August 19th, 2017 22:32
• Your Little Truths (Clark) We do all drift or fade is it me or is it you...... begs the...
  August 19th, 2017 22:12
• Enchantment (Shakerite) Cor! She sounds lovely. Nice writing sir. Such finesse and femininity...
  August 19th, 2017 22:03
• Prepare for war (LoneWolf1) Aaaah the transvestite. How bold a statement, how brave. How
  August 19th, 2017 22:00
• Politicians (Myself and me) Yeah \'orrible aint they.
  August 19th, 2017 21:58
• Past (Baylee) Aaaaah somebody magic crossed your path. What a lovely way to write about...
  August 19th, 2017 21:57
• Salt Tears (ElenaGrace) Grins and Giggles ..... what about the groans? I\'m kiddin you. You...
  August 19th, 2017 21:47
• Attentiveness 2.0 (Avigail) I am mindful of my confusion but attend i did.
  August 19th, 2017 20:16
• The choice is yours (Aa Harvey) You are a poet and as much as your writing is therapy it is also a...
  August 19th, 2017 18:58
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) Oh dear lol he mised the communion wine that day. Nice one
  August 19th, 2017 14:48
• Perfect Guy (Jennylynn0324) Nice one. Tell it like it is. Good to see self worth arising and...
  August 18th, 2017 19:39
• Shadows of the mind (Drowninginkalopsia) So true and well written
  August 18th, 2017 15:22
• Life Of A Nurse (Ternic73) Oh to be in a hospital where poets nurse my thoughts, my aching heart is...
  August 18th, 2017 15:21
• I Wish (Simple-Man87) I gave you marital treason? Very strong line i think is the hingepiece...
  August 18th, 2017 14:03
• Thirst (Malubotelho) I know that feeling, you could have written this just for me right...
  August 18th, 2017 13:53
• The shapes of my life! (Sue.evans) Excellent geometry.... theres one bit you haven\'t mentioned in your...
  August 18th, 2017 13:24
• Expectations (FredPeyer) So very true, we both disappoint and are disappointed in this life. I...
  August 18th, 2017 05:49
• Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the...
  August 18th, 2017 05:43
• 11:00 pm (The 2 A.M Writer) Deep evocative depressing blues. A good write.
  August 18th, 2017 05:38
• Bongo Drum (Tony36) I know how self expression via music releases and pleases . I\'m well out...
  August 18th, 2017 05:34
• Same place (Dulcinea91) Just keep sitting there and let events take their course.
  August 17th, 2017 12:35
• no means no (AAA) Methinks you have someone in mind. Be careful not to overstate such...
  August 17th, 2017 12:34
• Show Me. (Fay Slimm.) Its all about love really isn\'t it. But learning to love and what love is...
  August 17th, 2017 05:10
• Yeah, I Said Those Things (Jabberwocky) Tell it like it is and if they cant handle it.......
  August 17th, 2017 04:55
• LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards) He couldnt decide the best browsers, so he kept two or three in his...
  August 17th, 2017 03:54
• Ill (Nicholas Browning) I must have lost my mind and then.... well questioning every line of a...
  August 17th, 2017 03:50
• Tinnitus (FredPeyer) Yep, sometimes benign you dont notice it, other times like a massive...
  August 17th, 2017 00:19
• Just Waiting (Rj1way) Good writing, your heart in words.
  August 17th, 2017 00:01
• It\'s Time (Baylee) When it is time, bite the bullett. It\'s NEVER an ending, it is a new...
  August 16th, 2017 23:47
• True love (Angel-baby28) Lovely writing, lovely to read. You lucky person.
  August 16th, 2017 23:25
• DON\'T (Kaychee) Written for someone who disgusts you? Strong stuff.
  August 16th, 2017 23:18
• Do it (LoneWolf1) Oh the animal that awaits u in woman..... release her and the rewards...
  August 16th, 2017 23:15
• You are the only one (Tanvir H) Keep this poem throughout your life young man. Cherish its sincerity as...
  August 16th, 2017 22:51
• counting sighs (Heather T) Pain and futility of remaining alive after such loss scream from your...
  August 16th, 2017 19:47