Comments on community poems by Reivax Camlost
- Leave not the robin in the road (Reivax Camlost)
Thanks for your praise, to which I will humbly give my thanks, and thank...
January 18th, 2017 08:22 - Days Of Torment Past (SabreLi)
We all live in the past sometimes... I would say that it\'s one of my...
December 24th, 2016 21:14 - Burn Eternal (SabreLi)
A mourning ray of sunshine glimmers
There, with warming light in...
December 23rd, 2016 13:09 - Wind And Tide (SabreLi)
Your meter and rhyme scheme are consistent, so much as any I have seen on...
December 22nd, 2016 19:40 - Wind And Tide (SabreLi)
This is reminiscent of song lyrics. It fades away into the background,...
December 22nd, 2016 19:37 - Stuck (Tris Eaton)
This was nice. What ifs are my greatest fear, other than fire, and I...
December 19th, 2016 13:46 - Battlefield (Niye)
I have written several poems about a battlefield, and a couple about my...
December 19th, 2016 13:41 - Frosted Moor (Reivax Camlost)
November 14th, 2016 09:34 - DONKEY OR ELEPHANT ~ THE CHOICE IS YOURS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I try not to be political online, because of the grief it can fetch for...
November 1st, 2016 10:23 - The Garden\'s Colors Tend to Fade (John Snowdon)
Great meter, and rhyme. Those two together are great, but when you add in...
November 1st, 2016 10:19 - The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Lots of good imagery; I could see a great hall, filled with the men and...
October 26th, 2016 07:10 - FOOD OF THE MONTH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah, thy cream doth dollop nicely \'pon my mashed potato heap, and so would...
October 25th, 2016 19:05 - The Sleep of Reason Produces Monsters (Lysistrata)
The lament of one wishing for sleep to come, and bestow the mercy of...
September 4th, 2016 08:57 - 12 Roses (Tony36)
I imagine this to:
"Canon and Gigue in D major: I. Canon"
Listen,...
September 1st, 2016 18:23 - 12 Roses (Tony36)
Sad story.
That could be me up there...
one last rose for M, my...
September 1st, 2016 18:19
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