Comments on community poems by Reivax Camlost

• In the dark and silent hours (Reivax Camlost) This is a little different than what I wrote before. I’m a little...
  October 26th, 2023 01:30
• O\' human heart (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) It\'s been a fair while since this was written, but I do recall you once...
  November 19th, 2019 12:39
• A Wonderful Evening (Goldfinch60) An evening spent in thankfulness; a song upon my breath, whose argent...
  November 18th, 2019 19:01
• In bocca al lupo (Reivax Camlost) Points to anyone who can recognize the metrical allusion here...
  October 30th, 2019 13:00
• Human hues (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) A work of emotional ultraviolet, methinks. Bright; exciting. It glows....
  October 30th, 2019 09:43
• 14 September 2017 (Reivax Camlost) This poem has been reconstructed, after I lost it because the UI is
  September 14th, 2017 13:23
• Modern day Heros (Jennas) A storybook story...
  April 12th, 2017 19:40
• 7 April 2017 (Reivax Camlost) Hey, this is Severus Alexander. Accidentally published this on Reivax\'s...
  April 7th, 2017 16:56
• Candle (Caden_Mercer10) Wonderful! Candles are a common theme in my writing, but most of my candle...
  March 21st, 2017 12:56
• In Collaboration With Severus Alexander (Reivax Camlost) I mean, I disagree with severus
  March 9th, 2017 12:41
• 27 February 2017 (Severus Alexander) Hey, it\'s February 28...
  February 28th, 2017 10:46
• LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I would enquire as to what exact style of sonnet you speak of. I know...
  February 27th, 2017 07:42
• Opinions (Tris Eaton) This is very true. I often realize, right before I say something cruel /...
  February 25th, 2017 16:13
• Pisces counterpart (AudreyB) You paint a beautiful picture of yourself and your boyfriend relaxing at...
  February 25th, 2017 16:11
• Better Yourself (Brooklyn6timesplus) A good message. What you feel comes from within is an old buddhist saying....
  February 25th, 2017 14:18
• A Spark of Hope (Marie Braden) A poet sees a glimmer in the dark, and writing in his urgent way, as if...
  February 25th, 2017 13:58
• Acquainted with Much Pain (Rrodriguez) The perfect amount of literary device- repetition and rhyme add an...
  February 25th, 2017 13:56
• Time-out (Vvnrose) Amen! My phone has been dead for three days and I am in heaven! It\'s...
  February 25th, 2017 13:54
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) Also, I am a huge fan of creating one\'s own word combos to represent...
  February 25th, 2017 13:50
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) This one was thought out. Poetry should not be like a paper-mill, it...
  February 25th, 2017 13:45
• Celebration Certainties (Orchidee) This... is powerful. Kudos for being so thorough in your adaptation of the...
  February 25th, 2017 13:42
• Just Smell the Flowers (Iamwoman) There is a line from a poem, \"Everything I do I rush through so I can do...
  February 25th, 2017 13:40
• Fly away (Crow.) Incidentally, have you heard the Frank Sinatra song \"Come fly with me\"?...
  February 25th, 2017 13:37
• Fly away (Crow.) This sort of stream-of-consciousness writing reminds me of journaling....
  February 25th, 2017 13:34
• Mister “Know-It-All” (Notapoet) Holy crap- This kinda describes Me a couple years ago. Maybe less long...
  February 25th, 2017 13:31
• An Apple For The Teacher (Augustus) I hesitate to contemplate what I believe the message is here...
  February 25th, 2017 13:18
• Carpe Diem (Philip) Love it. Too often, I lay about in bed getting up the motivation to start...
  February 25th, 2017 13:15
• Sleeping Dogs Lie (SabreLi) Sleeping dogs will lie, and lying dogs will sleep forever, but only...
  February 18th, 2017 16:11
• Death\'s door / Repentance Dear (Reivax Camlost) Thanks for the feedback, and you\'re absolutely right about the...
  January 20th, 2017 08:07
• Narragansett (Forbetteror4verse) I feel the winds of cold, chilly Rhode Island. Well done.
  January 19th, 2017 19:41
• Leave not the robin in the road (Reivax Camlost) Thanks for your praise, to which I will humbly give my thanks, and thank...
  January 18th, 2017 08:22
• Days Of Torment Past (SabreLi) We all live in the past sometimes... I would say that it\'s one of my...
  December 24th, 2016 21:14
• Burn Eternal (SabreLi) A mourning ray of sunshine glimmers There, with warming light in...
  December 23rd, 2016 13:09
• Wind And Tide (SabreLi) Your meter and rhyme scheme are consistent, so much as any I have seen on...
  December 22nd, 2016 19:40
• Wind And Tide (SabreLi) This is reminiscent of song lyrics. It fades away into the background,...
  December 22nd, 2016 19:37
• Stuck (Tris Eaton) This was nice. What ifs are my greatest fear, other than fire, and I...
  December 19th, 2016 13:46
• Battlefield (Niye) I have written several poems about a battlefield, and a couple about my...
  December 19th, 2016 13:41
• Frosted Moor (Reivax Camlost)
  November 14th, 2016 09:34
• DONKEY OR ELEPHANT ~ THE CHOICE IS YOURS (BRIAN & ANGELA) I try not to be political online, because of the grief it can fetch for...
  November 1st, 2016 10:23
• The Garden\'s Colors Tend to Fade (John Snowdon) Great meter, and rhyme. Those two together are great, but when you add in...
  November 1st, 2016 10:19
• The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Lots of good imagery; I could see a great hall, filled with the men and...
  October 26th, 2016 07:10
• FOOD OF THE MONTH (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah, thy cream doth dollop nicely \'pon my mashed potato heap, and so would...
  October 25th, 2016 19:05
• The Sleep of Reason Produces Monsters (Lysistrata) The lament of one wishing for sleep to come, and bestow the mercy of...
  September 4th, 2016 08:57
• 12 Roses (Tony36) I imagine this to: "Canon and Gigue in D major: I. Canon" Listen,...
  September 1st, 2016 18:23
• 12 Roses (Tony36) Sad story. That could be me up there... one last rose for M, my...
  September 1st, 2016 18:19
• Rubik\'s Heart (Ejvazquez17) A good piece of writing- Fast paced, short breath, emotion, clarity. I...
  August 20th, 2016 10:45
• You Can’t hold me down (Tony36) I get knocked down But I get up again You're never gonna keep me down I...
  July 14th, 2016 19:05
• You Can’t hold me down (Tony36) Never let the elevator Take you down Oh no lets go
  July 14th, 2016 19:04
• Fever Dream (Reivax Camlost) There were some mistakes in the second verse of part the first... Violet...
  July 9th, 2016 21:54
• GUNS \'N ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I agree. When I saw the title of the poem, I thought of the book The Dark...
  July 9th, 2016 14:07
• A Cynics Visitation (Seeker) It's obvious that a lot of work went into this. Lots of allusion, and it...
  June 16th, 2016 14:43
• Like a Ghost Passing Through the Night (Moontigerntn) This should be a song...
  June 16th, 2016 14:34
• WISCONSIN - TRUMP TRUMPED AND CLINTON JUMPED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) awesome! I love politics, I love poetry, and political poetry is awesome!
  April 6th, 2016 11:52