Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Bully (Tony36)
The average bully would cringe when hearing this read my friend....
January 18th, 2017 13:51 - Eye of The Beholder (Augustus)
Strong points made in this verse re. the demise of all for nothing alive...
January 18th, 2017 13:47 - A Work In Progress (Garryd85)
Keeping faith although a challenge is all it takes - - - a great first...
January 18th, 2017 11:08 - deluged in epiphany (Janetaylor)
Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined...
January 18th, 2017 11:04 - Leave not the robin in the road (Reivax Camlost)
Enjoyed the archaic form and strong message in this short fable - the...
January 18th, 2017 00:23 - I\'m Falling In Love With You (Jarid)
An honest confession of love portrayed in this tender romantic verse - ...
January 18th, 2017 00:17 - Silence (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good flow to this verse which echoes the image and number you chose ...
January 18th, 2017 00:14 - My Mind is My Poetic Side (Pintu Mahakul)
Clever title and lovely poem dear Pintu - a warm welcome to this friendly...
January 17th, 2017 13:09 - Asleep In Your Arms (Sefrin)
Riddles with loss yet filled with beautiful love this lament shows just...
January 17th, 2017 09:48 - A Stolen Heart (Sefrin)
Yes - your words ask why when love is so fragile the end should come as...
January 17th, 2017 09:45 - Immortal Love (Sefrin)
Some wonderful lines of comfort to remember here for those who have loved...
January 17th, 2017 09:40 - I have seen it all (Aa Harvey)
Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.
January 16th, 2017 10:04 - Her guardian (Ks24)
A finely expressed appeal in this positive verse. Welcome to this friendly...
January 16th, 2017 10:02 - Cart (Tony36)
Much to think on in this metaphor Tony - good read.
January 16th, 2017 09:59 - Booze Hound (WriteBeLight)
Oh - love both the fun-poem and image to match. The booze-hound I take...
January 16th, 2017 09:58
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