Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Undeniably Piqued (Neville)
Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared...
May 19th, 2023 13:42 - Sans Echo’s (Neville)
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage...
May 18th, 2023 02:53 - Celsius Rising (Neville)
Gurt stuff agen Nev. -Am feeling the boiling point of this short-lived...
May 16th, 2023 07:43 - I Do Now. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful ;memory of meeting your true love and one you will never...
May 15th, 2023 13:17 - Mantis Praying (Neville)
A haunt of a read Nev but a good reminder that not all smiles are meant to...
May 15th, 2023 01:38 - The Loss Of Family? (Goldfinch60)
Good to see you back again Andy - have missed your fine postings - I do...
May 14th, 2023 11:08 - The Tears of a Crowd Forming (Neville)
That horror resurrected in prosaic clarity will bring shudders and more ...
May 13th, 2023 04:00 - Just a Series of What ifs And a Maybe (Neville)
Oh YES my dear friend - -- such a wonderful world that would be and as ...
May 12th, 2023 06:04 - bygones gone by (Arqios)
Such a clever switch - --- your forceful message comes over not only in...
May 11th, 2023 07:07 - Livestock Holiday (Neville)
Your personal comment after the poem creased me up even more than the tale...
May 11th, 2023 02:01 - Still Some Way to Go (Neville)
An unfinished poem needs a completion and you have scribed an arresting...
May 10th, 2023 05:17 - Duplicity (Neville)
Wording the end of a failing affair couldn\'t be better penned dear Nev. -...
May 9th, 2023 07:05 - Another Day Started. (Goldfinch60)
May your every day start and end good my friend.
May 5th, 2023 15:08 - TRAVELS (Bobby O)
Win or not that writing contest I enjoyed the format and the message...
May 5th, 2023 04:44 - HAIKUS ARE EASY (Michael Edwards)
So good to see you penning again Mike --- loving the cork art-work cork...
May 5th, 2023 04:41 - Echoes Seldom Lie These Days (Neville)
Long-lasting relationships deserve a tribute and this is surely one of the...
May 5th, 2023 04:39 - Five Seconds Into An Encounter (Neville)
What an engaging opener that sets the mind rolling - The start of a...
May 4th, 2023 06:41 - The Month Of May. (Goldfinch60)
A very unique view of why the name May and a pleasure to read - - thank...
May 3rd, 2023 13:10 - Are We Nearly There Yet (Neville)
A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after...
May 3rd, 2023 09:52 - Mark Well the Purpose of Night (Neville)
Nights of love dancing with happiness will always be times we look back...
May 2nd, 2023 15:33 - Biggest Mistake. (Goldfinch60)
Yes now is the only sure thing we have Andy - - the moment is what is...
May 2nd, 2023 15:19 - I Have A Dream. (Goldfinch60)
May your dream one day become a reality dear caring friend.
April 22nd, 2023 05:40 - Midnight Flight (Parisab)
You express the dream of life most vividly with this engagingly good...
April 22nd, 2023 03:23 - Bucket List (Neville)
Life approached full on whatever the state or the passing of years is my...
April 16th, 2023 05:59 - Q & A Upon Leaving (MendedFences27)
This touches the core of many a break-up Phil and will be sure to waken...
April 15th, 2023 01:11 - Still Calm, Safe and Free (Neville)
A tender look back to a special year when, from your delicately chosen...
April 14th, 2023 02:49 - Timeless (Lorna)
I love your first line - Birthday Unknown - - - You capture agelessness...
April 13th, 2023 15:08 - Under No Misconception (Neville)
How busy in bed - or out- that old fella and his gal must have been -- Wow...
April 13th, 2023 03:59 - Beneath Her Pretty Dress (Neville)
Dear Sir Grandpop - - Meant to state that July is a proper girt month in...
April 12th, 2023 13:39 - Nature\'s Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
Reaching for Nature\'s fresh beauty - what could be better ar this time...
April 12th, 2023 12:44 - Beneath Her Pretty Dress (Neville)
Such a bundle of penned love for an as yet unborn but specially welcome ...
April 12th, 2023 06:52 - Morning Moon (Lorna)
Just reading this compelling tribute I feel already breathless at the...
April 12th, 2023 06:38 - Suspended Between Mirrors (Neville)
A hunger for romantic antics to catch beauty unclothed can lead to a...
April 11th, 2023 11:47 - Secret (Lorna)
A masterpiece of short-line poetry - such a penned truth for most of us...
April 11th, 2023 09:39 - Woodland Rendezvous (Neville)
That moment of surrender to bewitchment where a ghostly woman appears to...
April 10th, 2023 07:30 - Knowing (Lorna)
What a romantic verse of assurance and who could want more than that dear...
April 10th, 2023 05:18 - Walking From The Mist. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely tribute to nature\'s ability to surprise and delight us on such...
April 9th, 2023 02:31 - Back In The Sixties. (Goldfinch60)
Those were the days dear friend - - we thought they never would end - - -...
April 9th, 2023 02:27 - Upon Wanting to Die (Neville)
Oh Nev - a title to ponder and then read on. - -If ever seeing a...
April 8th, 2023 04:41 - When They Would Lose Their Shadows (Neville)
Some of those statues have a lot to answer for mi amigo - - love the way...
April 7th, 2023 06:18 - Slàinte Mhath. (Goldfinch60)
A finely written tribute to your friend on reaching the grand age of...
April 6th, 2023 13:16 - Sharing Supper (Orchidee)
Sharing is so vital to living a worthwhile life and many are the ways we...
April 6th, 2023 13:12 - Plans (Lorna)
Thanks for this intriguing verse Lorna along with the well chosen and...
April 6th, 2023 03:54 - When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay (Neville)
Those fine lines can become apt reminders mon ami that white lies can...
April 6th, 2023 03:46 - But Where Has The Time Gone? (Goldfinch60)
A good question my friend but where love is concerned there is no time...
April 4th, 2023 08:17 - Folly (Neville)
Methinks when perfection appears out of nowhere folly is often forgotten...
April 4th, 2023 04:48 - Huntress (Neville)
Scary but true - Whatever the gender human predators show indiscriminate...
March 31st, 2023 14:01 - battle and dream (Arqios)
Methinks this is a reflection of early experience - A long-ago memory of...
March 30th, 2023 12:24 - My System (Doggerel Dave)
Snap for me too Dave - - pays to look at contributions and ;comments on...
March 30th, 2023 12:21 - The Marks on Our Ceiling (Neville)
Ooooh -- could be old blood or tomato sauce maybe - why not ask one of...
March 30th, 2023 05:56 - What City? (Goldfinch60)
Wow - - - no wonder the laughs - hope he or she does not get sacked for...
March 29th, 2023 07:39 - Upon Learning to Fly (Neville)
Still smiling at your lateral views here on the meaning of free-flying....
March 29th, 2023 05:20 - Dear Mrs. Christie (Bella Shepard)
I have to say SNAP after viewing this verse dear Bella - - so clearly...
March 28th, 2023 04:43 - A Question of Waste (Neville)
Good and needed point made mon ami. A question that should be put and...
March 28th, 2023 04:36 - In a Moment of Poetry (Neville)
Your poetic moments are always so readable - I loved absorbing this bit...
March 27th, 2023 06:40 - It died (2781)
Ah - I love the surprise finalé to this engaging word- use - -- thanks...
March 26th, 2023 06:15 - These Men Of Wales. (Goldfinch60)
A thrilling read of those singing Welsh voices dear Andy - a pleasure to...
March 26th, 2023 04:10 - Upon the Very Cusp of Spring (Neville)
Am smiling with you dear poet as Spring births this verse to first cusp of...
March 26th, 2023 04:08 - No Reason Required (Neville)
Parting they say is always sweet sorrow - The vision you pen is so easy...
March 25th, 2023 11:56 - ODDS AND SAUSAGES (3 ) (Michael Edwards)
So good to see you keeping your hand in and sharing your art work as well...
March 25th, 2023 11:52 - Storked (Neville)
Welcome back Nev. The sight of white storks and their fat offspring makes...
March 25th, 2023 04:40 - The Good Life, (Goldfinch60)
How upbuilding to read your lovely verses of daily gratitude to life dear...
March 19th, 2023 04:19 - If Music Be.... (Goldfinch60)
A very moving number to go with your appealing words dear Andy - - nothing...
March 14th, 2023 02:25 - Little Things. (Goldfinch60)
How true that the little things in life are the most important - thank you...
March 11th, 2023 02:23 - With Both Eyes Closed (Neville)
Closed eyes see more than we could imagine when all around groping in near...
March 8th, 2023 11:07 - In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye (Neville)
Am glad the time it took to note the lilt in this lively ode giving me...
March 7th, 2023 14:33 - The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Am lost same as you Andy in that thrilling world of jazz and the cleverly...
March 6th, 2023 05:27 - In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps (Neville)
Full of appealing metaphor this verse of lament for more time than a...
March 6th, 2023 04:54 - Forget the Name Remember the Taste (Neville)
There\'s something special about a meal with a lover and the flavour stays...
March 5th, 2023 16:30 - Underdog Days (Neville)
Ah - PERHAPS That very last word shows natural confusion as questions...
March 4th, 2023 17:05 - A Necessary Evil (Bella Shepard)
What a clever and very meaningful metaphor Bella which on first read...
March 4th, 2023 16:24 - Almost Without Purpose (Neville)
Ah - -- natural questions Nev. - - the mystery of Purpose so simply and...
March 3rd, 2023 04:09 - Just in Case it Still Matters (Neville)
The comfort of receiving these words would surely make a difference to...
February 27th, 2023 03:10 - Circle Of Life (Bella Shepard)
We are all thought to be part of the field of pure Potential so choices...
February 23rd, 2023 13:11 - Checking In (Neville)
Indeed let departures be brief for those who checking in find love waiting...
February 22nd, 2023 05:35 - Taken From a Diary Found (Neville)
Ah yes - - she be the one to remember as writ in a time back when and now...
February 21st, 2023 03:47 - Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee)
Very good write dear Orchi
February 20th, 2023 14:42 - Love Into Your Life. (Goldfinch60)
So good to read of your lady who has appeared to make both your loves so...
February 20th, 2023 14:41 - It Should Never Happen To a Vet (Neville)
Vets of any war are often forgotten - -- shame on the system that uses and...
February 20th, 2023 04:59 - Better Is There. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - - Frank singing the truth on how to live and your wise words to add...
February 19th, 2023 12:20 - cursors and curses (Arqios)
I truly admire the use of word=play in this telling write Rik. Cursed...
February 19th, 2023 12:18 - Two Odd Numbers (Neville)
A five and a seven might not agree but position for lovers according to K....
February 19th, 2023 10:27 - Redundant Crows (Neville)
Very good question Nev - -what a natural learning curve are wonderous...
February 18th, 2023 11:08 - Barmy Birthday! (Orchidee)
Happy Birthday dear friend - -hope they make your special day loaded...
February 18th, 2023 05:09 - Tomorrows Smile. (Goldfinch60)
Sound words of advice - thank you dear Andy.
February 17th, 2023 06:05 - Amen (Sorenbarrett)
Dear soren - A beautifully rhymed and perceptive piece of wisdom - -...
February 17th, 2023 05:49 - One Day Perhaps (Neville)
This tenderest of writes will raise a soft sigh from more than this...
February 17th, 2023 04:39 - Untitled (BarefootDeb)
An emotive write with a really fine first-line metaphor as in \"the hours...
February 16th, 2023 12:14 - For Everfriends Everywhere (Neville)
A case of \"say what you mean but mean what you say\" methinks -- maybe...
February 16th, 2023 05:29 - A Time for Everything (Neville)
Ooooh - -so very romantic this well chosen \"Time for Everything\" - - ...
February 15th, 2023 06:27 - Valentine\'s Woe (Orchidee)
An appealing write dear Orchi
February 14th, 2023 11:04 - Precisely As it Did Not Happen (Neville)
Right on the button this piece of summing up action Nev. - - - Events...
February 14th, 2023 06:04 - Beautiful Person. (Goldfinch60)
Expressing the truth of what love sees to be beautiful is a Valentine\'s...
February 14th, 2023 04:57 - Afterthoughts Don’t Count (Neville)
Hah -- that\'s the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short...
February 13th, 2023 04:09 - Distilled Time (Neville)
The way your words seem to highlight the intimate moment is always so...
February 12th, 2023 13:33 - R.I.P little buddy (Poetic Dan)
A gift indeed was your lovely Jack and you write his goodbye time so...
February 11th, 2023 07:20 - THE ROOF OF THE MOUTH (Michael Edwards)
Great to see your poetic mouth scribing again here dear Mike - - please...
February 9th, 2023 11:10 - Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip (Neville)
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just...
February 9th, 2023 06:08 - Come Late July (Neville)
No news could beat that news dear Nev. and all good wishes for that...
February 8th, 2023 04:17 - Icy Tundra (Christina8)
A compelling peep into Icy Tundra. So realistic those sparkling cold ...
February 7th, 2023 11:30
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