Comments on community poems by Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)
- Love (Jay123)
some very strong messages in this poem .. i love how you have spoken of...
January 22nd, 2018 04:01 - Explaining Anxiety (Naeners)
the reference to the monster is a very good idea to describe anxiety it...
January 21st, 2018 13:14 - Explaining Anxiety (Naeners)
wow .. very well said ! i like how the poem starts with less intensity and...
January 21st, 2018 13:13 - Hold The Sun Up (Naeners)
i really like this .. you make it sound as if you are like a bird in the...
January 21st, 2018 13:09 - Unfit (Naeners)
very very good :-) i love the ending , referring to ice cream . i love how...
January 21st, 2018 13:03 - Tense (Naeners)
hello .. this is very expressive, i lke the reference to your chest...
January 21st, 2018 12:57 - Dreams (Naeners)
hello .. i like the way you have worded this piece, i like the way you...
January 21st, 2018 12:53 - Rhythm (Mottakeenur Rehman)
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line...
January 21st, 2018 10:32 - The Luit of Dreamy Land (Mottakeenur Rehman)
you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely
January 21st, 2018 10:25 - We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time (Mottakeenur Rehman)
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and...
January 21st, 2018 10:23 - Superstition! (Sue.evans)
haha lol i love the ending ! \'\' damn magpies- always causing a flap-...
January 21st, 2018 09:01 - 😂My Thought Shower😂 (Sue.evans)
brilliant piece of writing ! really nice :-) and a good beat to this...
January 21st, 2018 08:57 - Black Angel (Lostinthisworld)
abuse is such a terrible thing ... very well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:55 - I am Beautiful (Lostinthisworld)
dark but well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:54 - Beauty Is Not For Me (Syd)
very descriptive.. very interesting piece of writing ... i love your...
January 21st, 2018 08:50
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