Fragile Heart
jay-money said:

Wow very good

November 15th, 2017 09:19

Plattsburgh is my Boston
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ve always lived southeast of Boston and have always loved it in the area. But I can relate to your words here very well. I think we all need to get away from the familiar surroundings every now and then for all the reasons you mention here. Great write.

October 25th, 2017 18:42

Quotes #4
Saima said:

Very interesting keep it up well done x

October 12th, 2017 07:35

Father Almighty
chinaaliciarivera said:

I love this. It is always good to seek and talk to God. You are on a good path. 💗 💕 ❤ 😊

October 4th, 2017 16:22

Quotes #3
orchidee said:

A fine write W.
I got a couple:
\'If at first you don\'t succeed.... give up!\' heehee.
\'When one door opens, another one slams in your face\'.
Erm, I not quite got the hang of doing quotes. lol.

October 2nd, 2017 11:39

Quotes #2
chinaaliciarivera said:

There is a lot of pain here i feel. But, i think one can always pick up the broken pieces of their heart and find a way to mend it again and make it whole. For me, remembering that God loves me, my family, or a true friend or even a good associate, or a pet can help mend a broken heart. And sometimes just going to the beach and staring over the water and maybe even the sun beaming from the clouds, it helps you think about how life is a beautiful gift and there is so much to enjoy other then the affections of another. Sometimes people get really lonely and falling to the deepest depths of despair, but it\'s good to remember there are people out there that care. Sometimes when you feel no one loves you change the hearts and minds of others that may feel just as sad as you do by sharing, giving, and loving unconditionally. Sometimes just the act of service, or working a job that has meaning can mend many a broken heart, yours and others. Good write! Just try to organize the words and lines of the sentences better would be my only tip for the appearance of the poem. It was a little hard to read with the lines the way they are. But other than that. Interesting write. 😊❤💕

September 26th, 2017 12:54

Regret
Rose_xo said:

I can totally relate, this is well written.

September 19th, 2017 12:18

Im Used To It
Crow. said:

No one deserves to go through what you did. No one should get use to all of the things that have happened to you. This experience may have caused some damage, but you will be stronger in the end. This is beautifully written. Well done.

September 18th, 2017 11:30

Fire and Gasoline
dusk arising said:

She set fire to my heart and threw me some matches..... \'in case you go out later!\'......
Nice writing about the mess people get themselves into at the end of relationships. We\'ve all been there i guess but after a while wisdom on both sides alllows you to say \'lets part as friends\'.

September 15th, 2017 21:08

Fallen Angel
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 14th, 2017 11:28

Falling Into Insanity
Writings From The Unknown13 said:

i am so glad that i will be posting poems again on my poetic side!!!

September 13th, 2017 07:34

Strangers
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write.

June 14th, 2017 02:32

My Goodbyes...
Writings From The Unknown13 said:

this is my last poem until further notice

June 12th, 2017 08:57

I Dont Matter...
Poetic Dan said:

Powerful! The tear that I could not contain was my pain. I have no answer but know your words just matterd.

Thank you for helping me on my journey.
Be who you are, remember everything is change, now I\'m talking to myself and your still helping me write what I feel.


June 9th, 2017 18:04

Ignore
Saima said:

Beautiful writing:)

June 6th, 2017 16:45