Comments received on poems by Writings From The Unknown13
My 18th Birthday
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Happy Birthday and welcome to the real world.
Yes, it\'s difficult being an adult, but the operative word that will keep you focused and grounded is \"Responsibility.\"
During my life when challenged with a variety of things to be accomplished, in a small amount of time, I kept the following phrase in mind: \"You can\'t finish unless you start.\" If you follow those words you will be a success.
With that in mind, welcome to the adult world. Enjoy life! :-)
November 30th, 2018 16:21
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Happy Birthday and welcome to the real world.
Yes, it\'s difficult being an adult, but the operative word that will keep you focused and grounded is \"Responsibility.\"
During my life when challenged with a variety of things to be accomplished, in a small amount of time, I kept the following phrase in mind: \"You can\'t finish unless you start.\" If you follow those words you will be a success.
With that in mind, welcome to the adult world. Enjoy life! :-)
November 30th, 2018 16:21
Im Scared To Grow Up
M. E. said:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
You\'ll be okay. Just like your thoughts and feelings and plans all changed from 9th grade to now, you\'ll adapt and grow into next year and beyond.
You have lots of support and help if you need it, but honestly, I think you\'d do just fine on your own if you needed to.
Change can be scary, but it can also be amazing, and open so many new opportunities and experiences. Keep at it; you\'ll be fine!
November 28th, 2018 15:01
M. E. said:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
You\'ll be okay. Just like your thoughts and feelings and plans all changed from 9th grade to now, you\'ll adapt and grow into next year and beyond.
You have lots of support and help if you need it, but honestly, I think you\'d do just fine on your own if you needed to.
Change can be scary, but it can also be amazing, and open so many new opportunities and experiences. Keep at it; you\'ll be fine!
November 28th, 2018 15:01
Im Scared To Grow Up
Debsspot said:
Expressed well. There is no instruction manual to life so it can be pretty scary. You have a great attitude though in the way that you appreciate the help you are being given and are eager to make your own way in life. Thats a great start. I wish you every sucess.
November 26th, 2018 16:05
Debsspot said:
Expressed well. There is no instruction manual to life so it can be pretty scary. You have a great attitude though in the way that you appreciate the help you are being given and are eager to make your own way in life. Thats a great start. I wish you every sucess.
November 26th, 2018 16:05
A Writers Rough Patch
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely written and similar to a blank canvas that is hungry for the colors of the visual spectrum.
The world is at your fingertips and you can choose one specialty to write about or a multitude of things. You\'re the poet.
Enjoy writing. :-)
November 20th, 2018 13:23
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely written and similar to a blank canvas that is hungry for the colors of the visual spectrum.
The world is at your fingertips and you can choose one specialty to write about or a multitude of things. You\'re the poet.
Enjoy writing. :-)
November 20th, 2018 13:23
A Writers Rough Patch
M. E. said:
I always enjoy reading your poems. Today, you took a feeling of unoriginality and turned it into a work you can be proud of. That\'s pretty creative all on its own.
You don\'t always have to look into the past and search through your darkest memories to find inspiration. The present, and your future, can offer ideas too.
I\'m glad that you found a way to make that work today. Thanks for sharing :)
November 20th, 2018 12:08
M. E. said:
I always enjoy reading your poems. Today, you took a feeling of unoriginality and turned it into a work you can be proud of. That\'s pretty creative all on its own.
You don\'t always have to look into the past and search through your darkest memories to find inspiration. The present, and your future, can offer ideas too.
I\'m glad that you found a way to make that work today. Thanks for sharing :)
November 20th, 2018 12:08
Please Live To See The Next Day
M. E. said:
Thank you for sharing.
There\'s a lesson I learned pretty late; only after all this shit had passed and life had calmed down, and I didn\'t need the lesson so much any more.
The lesson is: nobody\'s opinion matters except your own. You should listen, and learn from others, and let people in... but in the end, your decisions about your life and your self worth should only come from you.
There will come a time when you can choose to pack up and leave at any moment. You\'ll be able to choose who you associate with, and when. You\'ll be able to reinvent yourself and become someone completely new on a whim... and nobody will be able to stop you. And that time isn\'t very far away.
Most of the people who insult you are projecting their insecurities. But it doesn\'t matter. Who gives a fuck about them? Focus on yourself, and ignore anyone else\'s opinions, and do whatever the fuck you want with your life. Because in the end, no one will live with the consequences of your decisions but you. So make sure those decisions are ones that make you happy. They don\'t need to make anyone else happy but you.
I\'m glad that you got through that. You\'ll get through this too. Life is going to change a lot for you soon, and you\'ll adapt to it quickly and find so many things about the world that you absolutely love. Just wait for it; it\'ll come.
Thanks for the poem.
October 30th, 2018 10:57
M. E. said:
Thank you for sharing.
There\'s a lesson I learned pretty late; only after all this shit had passed and life had calmed down, and I didn\'t need the lesson so much any more.
The lesson is: nobody\'s opinion matters except your own. You should listen, and learn from others, and let people in... but in the end, your decisions about your life and your self worth should only come from you.
There will come a time when you can choose to pack up and leave at any moment. You\'ll be able to choose who you associate with, and when. You\'ll be able to reinvent yourself and become someone completely new on a whim... and nobody will be able to stop you. And that time isn\'t very far away.
Most of the people who insult you are projecting their insecurities. But it doesn\'t matter. Who gives a fuck about them? Focus on yourself, and ignore anyone else\'s opinions, and do whatever the fuck you want with your life. Because in the end, no one will live with the consequences of your decisions but you. So make sure those decisions are ones that make you happy. They don\'t need to make anyone else happy but you.
I\'m glad that you got through that. You\'ll get through this too. Life is going to change a lot for you soon, and you\'ll adapt to it quickly and find so many things about the world that you absolutely love. Just wait for it; it\'ll come.
Thanks for the poem.
October 30th, 2018 10:57
High School Senior Quotes
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
update on my senior quote..... i chose .....\"you will never be brave if you dont get hurt, you will never learn if you dont make mistakes and you will never be successful if you dont encounter failure.\"
October 24th, 2018 08:52
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
update on my senior quote..... i chose .....\"you will never be brave if you dont get hurt, you will never learn if you dont make mistakes and you will never be successful if you dont encounter failure.\"
October 24th, 2018 08:52
My Depression
M. E. said:
It\'s fucked up that the part of you that most defines who you are can also be so self destructive and beyond your control. This stage of your life is emotional and traumatic for anyone, and you\'ve had no extra advantages. Part of you is fighting to keep you down at every turn, and that\'s more difficult a challenge than some people ever face in their entire lives. Lucky you, you get to fight that battle now, when there\'s so much else on your plate, fighting for your undivided attention.
Strength isn\'t a lack of obstacles, it\'s struggling and falling and picking yourself back up, and finding a way through all the shit and mud to be exactly who you dream of despite everything holding you back. It\'s dirty and plagued with guilt and failure sometimes... if it wasn\'t, it wouldn\'t require so much strength.
You\'re an incredibly strong woman, and you\'ve overcome so much in such a short time. Thank you for sharing; you\'re absolutely not alone.
September 17th, 2018 09:18
M. E. said:
It\'s fucked up that the part of you that most defines who you are can also be so self destructive and beyond your control. This stage of your life is emotional and traumatic for anyone, and you\'ve had no extra advantages. Part of you is fighting to keep you down at every turn, and that\'s more difficult a challenge than some people ever face in their entire lives. Lucky you, you get to fight that battle now, when there\'s so much else on your plate, fighting for your undivided attention.
Strength isn\'t a lack of obstacles, it\'s struggling and falling and picking yourself back up, and finding a way through all the shit and mud to be exactly who you dream of despite everything holding you back. It\'s dirty and plagued with guilt and failure sometimes... if it wasn\'t, it wouldn\'t require so much strength.
You\'re an incredibly strong woman, and you\'ve overcome so much in such a short time. Thank you for sharing; you\'re absolutely not alone.
September 17th, 2018 09:18
A Goodbye For Her and A Goodbye For Him
GON said:
This reads like you\'re insane.
June 7th, 2018 10:39
GON said:
This reads like you\'re insane.
June 7th, 2018 10:39
My Moms Grave
blank_voice said:
Very powerful. Love it though lots of passion. These feeling feel very familiar and it\'s nice to know I am not the only one that feels these things.
May 30th, 2018 19:09
blank_voice said:
Very powerful. Love it though lots of passion. These feeling feel very familiar and it\'s nice to know I am not the only one that feels these things.
May 30th, 2018 19:09
My Moms Grave
HangingbyaHalo said:
This is painfully captivating. I\'m so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing
May 25th, 2018 16:11
HangingbyaHalo said:
This is painfully captivating. I\'m so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing
May 25th, 2018 16:11
College
onepauly said:
i\'m 62 years old.
and I would love to be 17 again.
with a clear open mind.
April 27th, 2018 10:20
onepauly said:
i\'m 62 years old.
and I would love to be 17 again.
with a clear open mind.
April 27th, 2018 10:20
The Demon In Me
onepauly said:
I too have huge anxiety attacks.
my thoughts go to fast. I\'m crippled because of it. I wish you well.
April 23rd, 2018 14:42
onepauly said:
I too have huge anxiety attacks.
my thoughts go to fast. I\'m crippled because of it. I wish you well.
April 23rd, 2018 14:42
Something To Catch Your Eye
Nuana said:
Your poems are not bad. They catch my eyes and feelings. Keep writing and keep doing you don\'t stop because of views and other people. X
April 22nd, 2018 09:34
Nuana said:
Your poems are not bad. They catch my eyes and feelings. Keep writing and keep doing you don\'t stop because of views and other people. X
April 22nd, 2018 09:34
My Psychic Visions
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i told you i would keep you posted so i am it happened i became friends with one of my ex boyfriends girlfriend but it wasn\'t my ex from 9th grade i am friends with my ex boyfriends girlfriend the one i went to semi prom with i have never mentioned him in any of my poems because he never did me wrong and he\'s still my best friend
April 18th, 2018 07:24
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i told you i would keep you posted so i am it happened i became friends with one of my ex boyfriends girlfriend but it wasn\'t my ex from 9th grade i am friends with my ex boyfriends girlfriend the one i went to semi prom with i have never mentioned him in any of my poems because he never did me wrong and he\'s still my best friend
April 18th, 2018 07:24
The World - Me = No More Problems
Nuana said:
I really do feel you! Sometimes its good to have a breakdown and let all your emotions out. x
April 16th, 2018 12:09
Nuana said:
I really do feel you! Sometimes its good to have a breakdown and let all your emotions out. x
April 16th, 2018 12:09
Me, Her, Old Her and New her
swyndell said:
This is just...amazing. Such heart felt pain, such anger expressed in calm collected thoughts. Excellent job and amazing read. (In line 45 there\'s a spelling error [ yo -> to])
February 26th, 2018 13:15
swyndell said:
This is just...amazing. Such heart felt pain, such anger expressed in calm collected thoughts. Excellent job and amazing read. (In line 45 there\'s a spelling error [ yo -> to])
February 26th, 2018 13:15
A Matter Of Seconds
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is one of the few poems I\'ve read where centering it really aided the message and flow. Well writ.
January 29th, 2018 13:42
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is one of the few poems I\'ve read where centering it really aided the message and flow. Well writ.
January 29th, 2018 13:42
A Matter Of Seconds
dusk arising said:
I love this piece. My word you covered a lot of ground and i lived every bit of it in your words.
Really excellent and goes into my fav\'s. (please have a look at some of my older stuff, love poems and fantasy from last year\\).
January 29th, 2018 13:29
dusk arising said:
I love this piece. My word you covered a lot of ground and i lived every bit of it in your words.
Really excellent and goes into my fav\'s. (please have a look at some of my older stuff, love poems and fantasy from last year\\).
January 29th, 2018 13:29
Its My Birthday
orchidee said:
Oohh yes, happy birthday there! Of course, people never get older than 21. Any age over that, they say \'I\'m 21 again, don\'t you know?!\' lol.
December 1st, 2017 10:33
orchidee said:
Oohh yes, happy birthday there! Of course, people never get older than 21. Any age over that, they say \'I\'m 21 again, don\'t you know?!\' lol.
December 1st, 2017 10:33
Fragile Heart
Christina8 said:
This write is very heartfelt and it\'s so relatable (so long ago for me!) But such a good description of a fragile heart. Great job!
November 15th, 2017 13:21
Christina8 said:
This write is very heartfelt and it\'s so relatable (so long ago for me!) But such a good description of a fragile heart. Great job!
November 15th, 2017 13:21
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