Comments received on poems by Writings From The Unknown13
I Am The Rose
RDS said:
A lovely read thanks Writings From The Unknown13 yes you didn\'t waste creativity and used that 20 minutes superbly to craft this beautifully flowing allegory.
November 27th, 2020 19:43
RDS said:
A lovely read thanks Writings From The Unknown13 yes you didn\'t waste creativity and used that 20 minutes superbly to craft this beautifully flowing allegory.
November 27th, 2020 19:43
Will I Be Forgotten?
orchidee said:
Erm, short answer, no! Though there\'s some bullies at school that I don\'t want to remember. If I don\'t see them in 100 years it will be OK! lol.
April 4th, 2019 10:06
orchidee said:
Erm, short answer, no! Though there\'s some bullies at school that I don\'t want to remember. If I don\'t see them in 100 years it will be OK! lol.
April 4th, 2019 10:06
Will I Be Forgotten?
Poetic Dan said:
So sadly and beautifully done, I left school at 14 and my home. Within a few months everyone had gone, yes they were very difficult times.
Things always change, a few may remain but the beauty is.. Waiting for you to set sail!
No one knows what may lay ahead, but it will most definitely be worth it!
Thank you for sharing this
April 4th, 2019 07:57
Poetic Dan said:
So sadly and beautifully done, I left school at 14 and my home. Within a few months everyone had gone, yes they were very difficult times.
Things always change, a few may remain but the beauty is.. Waiting for you to set sail!
No one knows what may lay ahead, but it will most definitely be worth it!
Thank you for sharing this
April 4th, 2019 07:57
I Fucking Love You
this_girl said:
Your pain is real. I\'m glad you can feel that -- hold onto the fact that you can feel it. Message me if you need someone to chat to.
April 2nd, 2019 21:36
this_girl said:
Your pain is real. I\'m glad you can feel that -- hold onto the fact that you can feel it. Message me if you need someone to chat to.
April 2nd, 2019 21:36
Im No Longer Important To Anyone Anymore
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ Thanks for a very POWERFUL POEM. For Angela ~ 30 (Physiotherapist) and Myself ~ 35 (Lecturer in applied Sceince) Self respect & Self awareness is very important as we both have \"hands-on\" jobs. Angela need respect from her Clients & Colleagues and I need the respect of my Students & Staff. It was more difficult when we were students because technically we had no self worth and could only earn our worth when we were in EMPLOYMENT. I think everyone feels \"worthless\" at some time during their Teens ~ But the World of Work (and when people get married & start a Family etc ~ Angela & I are engaged) give increased IDENTITY and self & community respect ! I hope this helps ~ Yours through poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA !
March 7th, 2019 10:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ Thanks for a very POWERFUL POEM. For Angela ~ 30 (Physiotherapist) and Myself ~ 35 (Lecturer in applied Sceince) Self respect & Self awareness is very important as we both have \"hands-on\" jobs. Angela need respect from her Clients & Colleagues and I need the respect of my Students & Staff. It was more difficult when we were students because technically we had no self worth and could only earn our worth when we were in EMPLOYMENT. I think everyone feels \"worthless\" at some time during their Teens ~ But the World of Work (and when people get married & start a Family etc ~ Angela & I are engaged) give increased IDENTITY and self & community respect ! I hope this helps ~ Yours through poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA !
March 7th, 2019 10:12
4 Year Anniversary Of My Moms Passing
EliDagger said:
I relate to this sense of loss so much, well done for being so strong to put it into words. An amazing piece of writing. Favourited.
March 6th, 2019 13:40
EliDagger said:
I relate to this sense of loss so much, well done for being so strong to put it into words. An amazing piece of writing. Favourited.
March 6th, 2019 13:40
I Fucking Love You
psychofemale said:
it will get better, i promise, i have been where you are and you can overcome the darkness, but if you give in it will take you in and swallow you whole.....don\'t give in
February 7th, 2019 20:24
psychofemale said:
it will get better, i promise, i have been where you are and you can overcome the darkness, but if you give in it will take you in and swallow you whole.....don\'t give in
February 7th, 2019 20:24
December 7th @4:45 pm...I Was In A Car Accident
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
update: the car is totaled
January 16th, 2019 09:39
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
update: the car is totaled
January 16th, 2019 09:39
I\'ve Come A Long Way
psychofemale said:
nice reflection, i think everyone can relate....maybe not to all of it, but some, if not they are clearly not human. lol
January 8th, 2019 17:16
psychofemale said:
nice reflection, i think everyone can relate....maybe not to all of it, but some, if not they are clearly not human. lol
January 8th, 2019 17:16
Trauma and Anxiety quotes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely written. You poem is a commentary on the effects of depression. Yes, you are correct, stress is the causal factor for the release of cortisol and, as a result, will increase blood pressure and contribute to many ailments. You can google them.
Supposedly, weight bearing exercises, sleep and an anti-inflammatory diet will help control cortisol levels.
Even though your poem was heart-wrenching, your words ring true. Thanks for sharing and concentrate on less stressful things in life. :-)
January 2nd, 2019 12:08
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely written. You poem is a commentary on the effects of depression. Yes, you are correct, stress is the causal factor for the release of cortisol and, as a result, will increase blood pressure and contribute to many ailments. You can google them.
Supposedly, weight bearing exercises, sleep and an anti-inflammatory diet will help control cortisol levels.
Even though your poem was heart-wrenching, your words ring true. Thanks for sharing and concentrate on less stressful things in life. :-)
January 2nd, 2019 12:08
Please Live To See The Next Day
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
im a hypocrite i should be taking my own advice when it comes to trying to live to see the next day
December 6th, 2018 11:20
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
im a hypocrite i should be taking my own advice when it comes to trying to live to see the next day
December 6th, 2018 11:20
My Depression
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i wanted to cut so bad last night and this morning but i held my shit together and kept saying its not worth it it wouldnt do me any good but that doesnt mean i still didnt think about it
December 6th, 2018 11:20
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i wanted to cut so bad last night and this morning but i held my shit together and kept saying its not worth it it wouldnt do me any good but that doesnt mean i still didnt think about it
December 6th, 2018 11:20
My Scars
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i wish i could die for how ever long i wanted and then wake up the next morning or week
December 6th, 2018 11:18
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i wish i could die for how ever long i wanted and then wake up the next morning or week
December 6th, 2018 11:18
College
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
ive applied to college and i got in the same day i applied and then found out im on the honor roll for 12th grade
December 6th, 2018 11:16
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
ive applied to college and i got in the same day i applied and then found out im on the honor roll for 12th grade
December 6th, 2018 11:16
A Matter Of Seconds
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
it shouldve taken me 3 seconds to say goodbye
December 6th, 2018 11:13
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
it shouldve taken me 3 seconds to say goodbye
December 6th, 2018 11:13
The Past Repeats
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
why did i even text him back? (stupid bitch)
December 6th, 2018 11:12
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
why did i even text him back? (stupid bitch)
December 6th, 2018 11:12
Again
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
wasting my breath? fuck that shit more like wasting a year and a half of my life on that dipshit
December 6th, 2018 11:11
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
wasting my breath? fuck that shit more like wasting a year and a half of my life on that dipshit
December 6th, 2018 11:11
Never Ending
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i shouldve never sent that text...smh(shaking myhead)
December 6th, 2018 11:08
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i shouldve never sent that text...smh(shaking myhead)
December 6th, 2018 11:08
Fragile Heart
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
\"unwanted goodbye\" ha! goodbye is what i actually needed to finally move on with my life ...little did i know then(stupid me)
December 6th, 2018 11:07
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
\"unwanted goodbye\" ha! goodbye is what i actually needed to finally move on with my life ...little did i know then(stupid me)
December 6th, 2018 11:07
Death of a Friend
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
a year and a half later....hes still alive... but thank goodness we let the friendship die
December 6th, 2018 11:05
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
a year and a half later....hes still alive... but thank goodness we let the friendship die
December 6th, 2018 11:05
Im Used To It
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i shouldnt have been used to it i shouldnt have built a tolerance to the pain i shouldve been able to say \"thats fucking enough\" waaayyy earlier than i did
December 6th, 2018 11:02
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i shouldnt have been used to it i shouldnt have built a tolerance to the pain i shouldve been able to say \"thats fucking enough\" waaayyy earlier than i did
December 6th, 2018 11:02
Falling Into Insanity
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i cant believe i once loved him...(stupid me) he was a piece of shit
December 6th, 2018 10:59
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i cant believe i once loved him...(stupid me) he was a piece of shit
December 6th, 2018 10:59
My Goodbyes...
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
here i am a year and a half later wishing i never met him...but everything happens for a reason right? well part of the reason why is so i wouldnt repeat certain actions like he did now that im 18 i guess not really sure exactly why he was ever a part of my life it just gave me more hurt in the process of trying to live my everyday life after saying goodbye
December 6th, 2018 10:57
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
here i am a year and a half later wishing i never met him...but everything happens for a reason right? well part of the reason why is so i wouldnt repeat certain actions like he did now that im 18 i guess not really sure exactly why he was ever a part of my life it just gave me more hurt in the process of trying to live my everyday life after saying goodbye
December 6th, 2018 10:57
LAST TIME
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
wow i cant believe i ever thought that would be the last time after i wrote this..(stupid me) but im glad hes out of my life im alot happier now without him
December 6th, 2018 07:59
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
wow i cant believe i ever thought that would be the last time after i wrote this..(stupid me) but im glad hes out of my life im alot happier now without him
December 6th, 2018 07:59
Never Ending
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
ha! \"wishing i had said goodnight sooner\" ha! i wish i said fuck you bye sooner
December 5th, 2018 08:31
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
ha! \"wishing i had said goodnight sooner\" ha! i wish i said fuck you bye sooner
December 5th, 2018 08:31
Again
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
damn cant believe how stupid i was to keep talking to him after all this shit
December 5th, 2018 08:30
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
damn cant believe how stupid i was to keep talking to him after all this shit
December 5th, 2018 08:30
Crumble
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
here i am... a year later... and i havent talked to him since this past february...wow a year later and here i am havent spoken a word to him in months ive seen his face multiple times in public but nothing was said and here we are a year later and not even talking to each other anymore i dont know if its sad and brings up all the memories or am i fucking thankful for not talking anymore... well still brings up all the memories and i think thats what makes it sad is all the memories other than that fuck you ex!!
December 5th, 2018 08:25
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
here i am... a year later... and i havent talked to him since this past february...wow a year later and here i am havent spoken a word to him in months ive seen his face multiple times in public but nothing was said and here we are a year later and not even talking to each other anymore i dont know if its sad and brings up all the memories or am i fucking thankful for not talking anymore... well still brings up all the memories and i think thats what makes it sad is all the memories other than that fuck you ex!!
December 5th, 2018 08:25
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